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 Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 4:56 pm
This is a thread about my new story Perfect Enemies. If you haven't read my story,please do so or if you haven't read it and you want to comment,don't. If you haven't read it you don't have a say in it. Now,here is where you,the public,can tell me how to improve or give me praise or whatever. I appriciate it and thanks!
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Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 8:07 pm
Well,damn,Hiyo! You are a great writter! I knew you had it all along. Told you since before Rika believed you that you were gonna go far. You kick a** girl! Anyways,the only thing I think you need to improve on is your spelling,besides that I think that series could sell for some cash baby!
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Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 6:24 pm
It was fun, but I made the mistake of commenting in the story place. Sorry! sweatdrop Anyways, I think it's great except you need to make spaces between commas/periods and the following word. Makes it a bit more appealing. Anyways, great job and keep it up.
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Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 8:55 pm
You and grammer Alex. I swear you piss me off.
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Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 1:54 am
It's alright. You can make it into a book after you go back and fix grammer mixtakes and yada yada.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 4:37 pm
god i need more!!!! O-O im obsessed with your story now!!!! make a book now > sad
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