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 Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 8:08 pm
Thesis:
Even thought the Hitler masaquered the Jews and Bin Laden was behind the single
largest terrosit attack on the US. As we look at the Violence Rates Across the
World the Uniteds provokes more violence than any ohter Nation, Due to the
American Ego created by popular culture, the Diversity in Ethnicy, and the
Degradation of Family values due to Adultry and sex in the Media.
1. American Ego.
Caused by the popular cultrue that sends a message to the youth of America that
i am invencible. I can do what ever I want and I will have no consequences EX..
The little boy that just killed his parents in there sleep.
2.Diversty in Ethnicy, and religion
this naturaly makes people bring up racial boundries such as street Gangs in
inner citys. It causes Pride and prejudice which all factors into Violence such
as drive by shootings, hate crimes and such things as that
3. American Family Values have Degraded
Family values no longer exist they way they used to. Divorce, Which is caused
most times by Domestic Abuse and Adultry, Ex. cheating on wife because influence
of sexual urges brough on by Porn or the Inuwindow's of Popular Culture. Parents
Turn back on children. children feel parents turn back on them so they turn
there back on the world which leads to Deppression and things such as Teenage
Pregnancy, Suicide, and School Shootings
Arguements Against
1. Germany WWII
Hitler Killed hundres of thousands of Jews in WWII.. Hate Crimes and it was one
of the largest human masaqueres in the world if anybody promoted violence it was
the Nazi Regiem
Counter: The United States Killed more people than WWII combined throught the
Bombing of Nagosaki and Hiroshima. People in those towns still feel the effects
of those two bombs that where dropped today.
2. Bin Laden was supported by Afganastan in the terrorist attacks. Which was the
largest Terrorist attack In history
Counter: It was the United States in 1981 that orginally trained Bin Laden in
how to conduct Terrorist attacks. They trained him to conduct terrrorist attacks
against Russia from Afganhastan..
Also United States Trained Saddam Hussain to fight and Kill Iranians.
(The US is responsibel for both of these occurances with is inevitabley the
reson why United States is more Violent than Any other Nation in the world)
Okay like i gave this to my LA 102 teacher as an outline for a Essay for the end of class and she just basically looked at me and laughed said it was to indepth for a freshman i said it was not she said it was a topic for a grad student in there last year i think i could have handled it i came up with it didnt I
Last minor note this is not neccessarly my opionion just a paper for school
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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 2:02 am
if you can pull it off, go for it! dont let anyone hold you back, and if you can shine, shine bright smile
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Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 9:02 pm
I have to say yes.. in this as just a paper from a thing in school kind of deal. Run with it. Gather your facts and let the pen or in this case the computer keys fly!
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 3:25 pm
[ - Lord Anubis - ] I have to say yes.. in this as just a paper from a thing in school kind of deal. Run with it. Gather your facts and let the pen or in this case the computer keys fly! hell yes
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Foghorn_Moonlight_Goddess Crew
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 5:19 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 5:00 pm
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Foghorn_Moonlight_Goddess Crew
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 5:13 pm
I could end up writing something like this... but that is because of all the bullshit going on in the world today you need to sit back and watch it all and then you can rant till your hearts desire.
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Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 10:09 pm
Yeah i ended up going with something else.. but things worked out all right.. I ended up do something on the Media or something like that
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Foghorn_Moonlight_Goddess Crew
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 9:18 am
This is in no way too hard for a freshman, if the freshman isn't too lazy. Let me help you fix some things though. original Thesis: Even thought the Hitler masaquered the Jews and Bin Laden was behind the single largest terrosit attack on the US. As we look at the Violence Rates Across the World the Uniteds provokes more violence than any ohter Nation, Due to the American Ego created by popular culture, the Diversity in Ethnicy, and the Degradation of Family values due to Adultry and sex in the Media. fixed! Thesis: Even though Adolf Hitler masaquered the Jews and Bin Laden was behind the single largest terrosit attack on the US. (This is interresting, but I don't think its necessary. If you want to put it in your opening paragraph that's fine but the thesis statement should be two to three sentences stating the main idea of your paper and what you plan on coveringIt should be decisive and to the point.) As we look at the rates of violence across the world the United States provokes more violence than any other Nation( That's a really grand statement and it would be very hard to prove. I would rather stick with something like The United States has more violent behavior then any other nation or something to that accord.) which stems from the grandiose ego and superiority complex that Americans have, created by (alright areful now, you're starting to get into a second topic, first being that americas a target because were so grand and the second being what caused us to be so grand. You don't need to work on both, just one, but for sakes of just correcting the grammar and spelling i'll leave it the original way.) popular culture and the degradation of family values, and the over saturation of sex in the Media. The idea was a bit big for a freshman, simply because you're dealing with 3-4 different topic that could all write a nice 4-8 page paper. Apparently my effort is all for naught becuase I just saw the last post in the thread saying that you went with something else, so i'll stop here and say cherri-O!
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 1:31 pm
virus73 This is in no way too hard for a freshman, if the freshman isn't too lazy. Let me help you fix some things though. original Thesis: Even thought the Hitler masaquered the Jews and Bin Laden was behind the single largest terrosit attack on the US. As we look at the Violence Rates Across the World the Uniteds provokes more violence than any ohter Nation, Due to the American Ego created by popular culture, the Diversity in Ethnicy, and the Degradation of Family values due to Adultry and sex in the Media. fixed! Thesis: Even though Adolf Hitler masaquered the Jews and Bin Laden was behind the single largest terrosit attack on the US. (This is interresting, but I don't think its necessary. If you want to put it in your opening paragraph that's fine but the thesis statement should be two to three sentences stating the main idea of your paper and what you plan on coveringIt should be decisive and to the point.) As we look at the rates of violence across the world the United States provokes more violence than any other Nation( That's a really grand statement and it would be very hard to prove. I would rather stick with something like The United States has more violent behavior then any other nation or something to that accord.) which stems from the grandiose ego and superiority complex that Americans have, created by (alright areful now, you're starting to get into a second topic, first being that americas a target because were so grand and the second being what caused us to be so grand. You don't need to work on both, just one, but for sakes of just correcting the grammar and spelling i'll leave it the original way.) popular culture and the degradation of family values, and the over saturation of sex in the Media. The idea was a bit big for a freshman, simply because you're dealing with 3-4 different topic that could all write a nice 4-8 page paper. Apparently my effort is all for naught becuase I just saw the last post in the thread saying that you went with something else, so i'll stop here and say cherri-O!
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