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~~elegant gothic girl and boy

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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 3:56 pm

Yes, I realize half of it is dark, and I blame my scanner. >>;

Anyways, please comment and critique. biggrin

Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 3:40 am

It's a nice picture with some mood in it.
I'd like to see it colored. blaugh

Is that a flower in the middle of them?

I feel the boy should have more detail in his clothes. The girl has wrinkles and folds in her clothes, but the boy looks so flat.

And are they supposed to be young? If not, their heads are a bit too big, and hands too small.

And yeah.. sweatdrop That's all I have.

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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 4:00 pm

I'd like to see it colored, too. DDD: But it's really hard...
...What you think are folds are me going "SCRIBBLE WHEEEE!"

Yeah.. they're pretty young. And that's a flower. biggrin And I wanted to boy's clothes to look really stiff.

Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 2:25 pm

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It looks rather nice, good job...
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 2:19 pm

Very nice. ^_^
I just think you should work more on the boy. Needs a bit more detail. ^_^

Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:45 am

Wow, that's brilliant, could do with a bit more detail but it's still good.

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Little Miss Lunacy

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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 2:27 pm

It's definately cute <3 I actually think the dark sid eof it adds a cool effect... However, the guy is a little stiff-looking... But the girl is adorable!

Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 5:02 am

That's cute! heart
They both look so dolly-like with their heads being a bit bigger than the rest of the body. I like your concept and the girls expression and position is very nice. Very gosurori like. Too bad I can't fully see the boy since half of it is kind of dark.

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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 2:47 pm

it's pretty...thou it's very dark

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