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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 9:47 pm
A'ight, this is my ToS story... it starts after when Lloyd and Sheena were talking in Flainoir. (im a big fan of Sheelloyd and Zelette and dislike Colloyd and Kraine ((SheenaxLloyd and ZelosxColette, ColettexLloyd, KratosxRaine))....anyways, gotta stop rambling and write a fic. Most of my fics will be Oneshots, i havent ever written a ToS fic, just Zelda, so no flames, and please comment...Man, i need to stop rambling and write.....Disclaimor: Tales of Symphonia is owned by NAMCO. If it were owned by me, Kratos would be the hero. anyways, here it is, the end of my rambling....NOTE: anybody want to suggest a title? its a Sheena and Lloyd, so make it at least slightly connected to that...UPDATE: ive decided its not a oneshot, but a long story, and heres Chap. 1!:
"Misunderstood Emotions"
Chapter 1: Confession 'Idiot...' Sheena thought, over and over and over. 'Idiot, idiot, idiot...' She had just spoken to Lloyd, and came close to confessing her feelings to him, until he said: '"Yeah! We can be great friends!"' It was over for her, she had loved him, and he had seemed to love her back. But now, her dreams and hopes were evaporating...That was it. She would kill herself at dawn, whenever she knew nobody would be up. It would ease her pain... KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK! "Sheena, is something wrong?" 'Oh no,' thought Sheena sadly. 'It's Lloyd...' "Go away, Lloyd. I don't want to talk right now, I'm not feeling well. Come back tomorrow, after I've had some rest." 'And gone...' Thought Sheena, still more sad. "You're not well?! Let me in to see you! Please!" cried Lloyd, sounding anxious now, instead of his usual cheery voice that always raised her spirits. Sheena was in tears now. "I'm sorry, Lloyd, but no, I won't. Just go back to your room!" She sobbed quietly, hoping he wouldnt hear her. "Then I'll wait here for you, Sheena. I'll wait as long as it takes!" And wait he did. After Sheena heard his breathing stop, she assumed he had left, and silently cursed herself for leaving the dagger out in the lobby in her trunk. She opened the door, only to see Lloyd, asleep against the wall. Sleeping without snores. That's a first. Wait.....What was the red stuff all over the floor?! Sheena took a closer look. No, it couldn't be. Not right here. Lloyd was against the wall, with a knife in his back. Sheena ran up to him, and hugged him close, dispite the blood. "Shee...na...I....Wait...ed...for...you..." came a small voice from his head. "Lloyd?! Are you okay?! wait here, I'll go get-" but even as she said this, Lloyd's heartbeat began slowing and he grew cold. 'No...' thought Sheena, tears in her eyes. 'Lloyd, I won't let you go...' and cried until she fell asleep, still clutching Lloyd like She'd never let go.
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 9:49 pm
Don't hate me for this.
"The Ninja and the Dumbass."
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 9:53 pm
[Ran-Chan] Don't hate me for this. "The Ninja and the Dumbass." actually, you might have a point. that is my first suggestion thanks. [not a big lloyd fan], i just look like him, only with glasses]
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 1:08 am
Chapter 2: Never Letting Go Sheena awoke with Lloyd still clutched tightly in her arms, and she could no longel feel a heartbeat. "Purgatory Seal!" She cried, attempting to heal him. It was to no avail. "Lloyd...no...you cant die... I love you too much for you to die..." Sheena heard a shrill sqeak from behind, and saw Colette, eyes wide to the truth that she wasn't the only one with love for Lloyd. She began to cry, not because of Lloyd's death, which she knew naught of, but because Lloyd might choose Sheena instead of her. She heard Sheena confess her love, and she saw Sheena gripping Lloyd without moving. Sheena was terrified but relived at the same time. "Colette! Go get Raine!" She cried, half smiling half crying. Colette replied with a hearty shake of her head. "Colette! Don't you realize that Lloyd might be dead?!" She shifted Lloyd to show the knife. "Do you want him to die?!" Colette replied quietly, and then ran away. her reply took a minute to sink in. 'She thinks I killed Lloyd when i was holding him...' That would mean the entire group would be on her. She had to do something. She did it. She let go. Lloyd slouched down back against the wall, and Sheena ran as fast as she could to get Raine. Hopefully she would belive her. She would belive her, right?? She did not belive her. What's more, when Colette dashed in and exclaimed her whole version in one breath, Raine, Zelos, Genis, Presea, Regal, and Colette cornered her. What could she do? They wouldn't belive her, they had known Colette much longer than her. So she did the one thing she could. She ran. Grabbing Lloyd along the way, Sheena ran and ran and ran, no stopping till she reached Mizuho. Three more days of constant running, and she made it. Mizuho. Or at least the ruins of Mizuho. Someone had attacked and burned down the villiage. Who would do it? Who COULD do it? No...It couldn't be..
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 12:28 pm
Ahh, that's sad! crying
I love Lloyd!
That's a good story KTA!!!!!
Lots of Drama!!!
As for a title, how about... Misunderstood Emotions???
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 12:55 pm
Sora_Starrkiller Ahh, that's sad! crying I love Lloyd! That's a good story KTA!!!!! Lots of Drama!!! As for a title, how about... Misunderstood Emotions??? I think that would do it. Thanks, Sora!
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:38 am
Chapter 3: Acceptance It couldn't be... Kuchinawa wouldn't do that to Mizuho...It was his own villiage...His own people... He always seemed a traitor, but Sheena didn't think he would ever betray his people...He had burned the villiage to the ground, and....Wait! The knife in Lloyd's back! The initial K was engraved on the blade! That traitor had stabbed Lloyd, yet.....thump, thump, thump...Lloyds heartbeat! Lloyd was alive! But how...? "I see your friend here is recovering from the venom in the knife. I am personally amazed that neither the knife nor poison would kill him. He just won't die, will he, Sheena?" Said an icy voice behind her. "Kuchinawa! But why...? Why would you stab Lloyd, and betray Mizuho?!" Sheena glared while she said this, once again being put to her emotional limits. "The villiage was just a reminder of my previous life. Did you expect me to just let it torment me until I die?! And that boy over there," he points to Lloyd, "is starting to realize he loves you," Sheena stared in awe at Lloyd for this comment, "and I can't let you be loved, Sheena. You just aren't meant to be. I challenge you yo a showdown on the Isle of Decision. Just be thankful that I don't kill you now, wretch." And even as Sheena charged, Kuchinawa disappeared.
--------Authors notes-------- Yeah, mostly dialouge, and yeah, i twisted the storyline. So sue me, just 'cause I like being original.
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 12:09 pm
Chapter 4: Lloyd Awakens The next day, Lloyd began to stir. Sheena had stayed with him the entire night, crying into his shoulder, and eventually fell asleep. When Lloyd awoke, his stomach growled loudly, and he was about to get up and eat something, when he realized Sheena was laying on the ground, head on his shoulder, fast asleep. There were still traces of tears, and she was muttering something under her breath. "Lloyd...don't go...no..." was barely audible. 'She's worried about me?!' thought Lloyd, wide-eyed. 'She was acting like she hated me at the inn... Wait, where am-' Suddenly, pain shot up his back. He checked the knife wound, and realized he was in Mizuho. Or, at least, Mizuho's ruins."What happened here?!" Lloyd exclaimed. This woke Sheena, who retained her sad state, until she saw Lloyd, who she then tackled and hugged so hard, she saw his eyes pop. "Sheena! Okay, okay, I get it! You're happy to see me." Lloyd choked out as he laughed. Sheena began to blush, and told him all about what had happened since Flanoir. "...And now Kuchinawa has declared that we have a battle on the Isle of Decision." She finished, about to cry again. "What's that?" Asked Lloyd quizzicaly. Sheena replied matter-of-factly: "It's where people in my villiage go for duels of honor." Lloyd decided to make the best of their day. He and Sheena walked around Mizuho, talking and laughing more than they had this entire journey. 'Wow, Sheena might actually like me back...maybe I'll confess today...' He rubbed the back of his head thoughtfully. This was gonna be a short day...
-------Authors Note------- So, like it? next chapter's the big fight scene. I enjoy constructive critisism and/or comments, they help me write, so please, feel free to comment. Just no flames, please, this is my first Tales of Symphonia fanfiction... =3 anyways, hoped ya liked it, and tune in next time for Chapter 5: Isle of Decision!
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 2:05 pm
Not bad, not bad at all. 3nodding Very heart-wrenching, dare I say it. Especially the first couple of chapters.
But here's a question: It's been what, three days now? Where is the rest of the party? The characters of Tales of Symphonia usually are pretty fast to retaliate, and have a very low tolerance for betrayers, even if they don't know the whole truth. Don't be like me and say, "Well they're, um... somewhere else..." when actually you just don't have a place for them in the story.
Other than that, awesome story! mrgreen
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 2:15 pm
Goodie chappie!!!!!!
I'm likin' it so far KTA! Keep it up!!
And thanks for using my title! whee (HUGS!!!)
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 3:31 pm
Otaku_nyu Not bad, not bad at all. 3nodding Very heart-wrenching, dare I say it. Especially the first couple of chapters. But here's a question: It's been what, three days now? Where is the rest of the party? The characters of Tales of Symphonia usually are pretty fast to retaliate, and have a very low tolerance for betrayers, even if they don't know the whole truth. Don't be like me and say, "Well they're, um... somewhere else..." when actually you just don't have a place for them in the story. Other than that, awesome story! mrgreen Yeah, I have a place for them. It's in the later chapters, I already have an idea.
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 3:35 pm
Sora_Starrkiller Goodie chappie!!!!!! I'm likin' it so far KTA! Keep it up!! And thanks for using my title! whee (HUGS!!!) That was the best idea, sooooo.....yeah. Chap 5 is done! the big showdown!
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 3:38 pm
Chapter 5: Isle of Decision This was it. Sheena was to fight Kuchinawa today. Lloyd had argued with Sheena constantly, not wanting her to get hurt and win. Or die trying. Lloyd was to be the judge, (A/N: sorry, can't remember what they're called...) and would decide who is the victor. As Lloyd rowed the small canoe to the island, he was more scared then he ever had been. He really, truely, sincerely cared about Sheena more than he'd ever cared for anybody else before. And here she was, at a possible fight to the death, with him powerless to help. And as he pondered these things, Sheena got out of their canoe and prepared herself for a battle. POOF! Kuchinawa began to do the same. Almost instantly, both snapped up and began to circle one another, waiting for the opportune moment to strike the other down. Sheena saw hers first. As she charged towards her opponent, her cards drawn, she realized that it had been a trap. Kuchinawa jumped back, and shot thunder from his daggers. Sheena narrowly avoided this, and charged at Kuchinawa again, ready to attempt to seal his strength in a card for an easier battle. It went on for a while, trading blows, until Kuchinawa got her down. He stood back, aiming his dagger to throw at Sheena for the final blow, when Lloyd ran in front of the knife, and it stopped in his right shoulder, as he was facing Sheena. All he could do was yell, "You won your duel, Kuchinawa!" and mouth "I'm sorry..." at a horrified Sheena, before falling on his back, effectively digging the knife in deeper, and causing him to pass out. His last thought before losing counsiousness was, 'No... I never confessed...'
-------Authors Note------- Yay for big fights! Yaaaaaaay! now I'm having Writers block and can't think anymore... (I don't write it out first, I wing it and type what I think as I go...^_^;; ) So tune in next time for chapter 6!
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 5:51 pm
Oh, so valiant!!!
crying I'm getting all weepy!!! crying
Great chapter KTA, nice plot twists!!
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