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da blu moose
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PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 6:45 pm


"untitled"

I lie to others, yeah I'm okay

Just let me go my own way

I'll just go on this stupid path

One day you'll feel my wrath

When you do, please don't yell

I'll show you my own personal Hell

It's this * you put me through

These things you make me do

The blood, the gore

Oh, what's in store?

You'll soon see

Just let me be

Maybe tomorrow, maybe soon

Maybe at night, under the moon

You'll all die

Will you cry?

I can't wait, don't wanna

I'm gonna kill ya, yeah I'm gonna

It scares you huh? You don't wanna die

Well guess what? I didn't want ot cry

But you made me, forced me

So now you shall see

All my pain, all my hurt

When you're underneath the dirt

Good-bye for now, good-bye forever

Your neck I'm gonna sever

I hate myself, hate you all

Soon death shall call

When he does, please don't cry

It'll be quick and painless, or at least I'll try

Good-bye all, good-bye self

My life is next, on Fate's shelf
PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:22 am


wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it

Vincent Valetino


Vincent Valetino

PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:24 am


green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it
i got a poem too: here i sit all broken hearted
tried to poo and only farted
PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:38 pm


green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


*pokes* Shush! It's cool...

Nyokai


da blu moose
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PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:41 pm


Nyokai
green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


*pokes* Shush! It's cool...
redface
thank you
PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 11:09 pm


da blu moose
Nyokai
green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


*pokes* Shush! It's cool...
redface
thank you


No problem dear... smile it's true...

Nyokai


Vincent Valetino

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 3:03 am


here i sit in stinky vapor
because some jerk stole the toilet papaer
shall i lie or shall i linger?
i shall be forced to use my finger
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 3:04 am


the other day i dreamed i was eating choclate pudding. when i awoke i had a spoon up my butt. eeeewwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!

Vincent Valetino


Vincent Valetino

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 3:05 am


Nyokai
da blu moose
Nyokai
green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


*pokes* Shush! It's cool...
redface
thank you


No problem dear... smile it's true...
oooohh moosey and nyokai sitting in a tree and i have lost all sense of sanity. plus i am hiding in the bushes watching
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 4:25 am


green llama
Nyokai
da blu moose
Nyokai
green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


*pokes* Shush! It's cool...
redface
thank you


No problem dear... smile it's true...
oooohh moosey and nyokai sitting in a tree and i have lost all sense of sanity. plus i am hiding in the bushes watching


*throws rocks at you* ... I'm a lesbian, you loonie!!! scream

Nyokai


da blu moose
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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 4:45 am


Nyokai
green llama
Nyokai
da blu moose
Nyokai
green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


*pokes* Shush! It's cool...
redface
thank you


No problem dear... smile it's true...
oooohh moosey and nyokai sitting in a tree and i have lost all sense of sanity. plus i am hiding in the bushes watching


*throws rocks at you* ... I'm a lesbian, you loonie!!! scream
rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 8:12 am


green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


confused sad Can you call and make the appointment for him? *worried...bites her lip.*

Mommi
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Vincent Valetino

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:42 am


Nyokai
green llama
Nyokai
da blu moose
Nyokai
green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


*pokes* Shush! It's cool...
redface
thank you


No problem dear... smile it's true...
oooohh moosey and nyokai sitting in a tree and i have lost all sense of sanity. plus i am hiding in the bushes watching


*throws rocks at you* ... I'm a lesbian, you loonie!!! scream
well the moose acts like a girl sometimes. wait wait lesbian! wow i am so in love with you its not funny
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:43 am


Mommi
green llama
wow brother you gots issues. i know the number of a good psychiatrist if you want it


confused sad Can you call and make the appointment for him? *worried...bites her lip.*
dont worry i m his real life brother i keep him straightened out

Vincent Valetino


Mykellex

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 6:19 pm


da blu moose
"untitled"

I lie to others, yeah I'm okay

Just let me go my own way

I'll just go on this stupid path

One day you'll feel my wrath

When you do, please don't yell

I'll show you my own personal Hell

It's this * you put me through

These things you make me do

The blood, the gore

Oh, what's in store?

You'll soon see

Just let me be

Maybe tomorrow, maybe soon

Maybe at night, under the moon

You'll all die

Will you cry?

I can't wait, don't wanna

I'm gonna kill ya, yeah I'm gonna

It scares you huh? You don't wanna die

Well guess what? I didn't want ot cry

But you made me, forced me

So now you shall see

All my pain, all my hurt

When you're underneath the dirt

Good-bye for now, good-bye forever

Your neck I'm gonna sever

I hate myself, hate you all

Soon death shall call

When he does, please don't cry

It'll be quick and painless, or at least I'll try

Good-bye all, good-bye self

My life is next, on Fate's shelf

I think it would have been cooler if it was more dark and wasn't rhyming.
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