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Kuro Neko-Chan

PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 6:06 pm


http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=2746318

Fanfic I am working on, was wondering what other people think, its only the first chapter but I am going to work on more of it this weekend, specialy when I have my 3 hour layover in Atlanta.

^-^
Plot line isn't well developed yet, I know, but it will be a while before it is.
PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 9:15 pm


I dunno about anyone else, but I'm having a hell of a time trying to get the damn thing to work. It won't even load. SOOO, yeah. I'm going to try again, and see if I can even bring it up.

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PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 9:33 pm


Hmmmm... now that the thing is FINALLY working.

Not bad. Though, your information at the top is wrong. The OVAs WERE written by Watase sama. The FIRST OVA may not have been, but the other two were. The first one was meant only as a bridge between the end of the TV series and the second OVA.

Well, other than a few spelling errors(minor), it seems interesting. I wonder where you are going with it. What I'm curious about is if Lei in the story is the same Lei from the RP. I have a distinct feeling it is, since not once does the mother refer to Lei as her "son," only her "child."
PostPosted: Sat May 13, 2006 4:35 pm


Since you know the RP you know Lei's secret. You'll have fun, this one isn't insane, and knows he is a she, just dosen't like to dress like it.

Kuro Neko-Chan


Michiyo_Saruwatari

PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:34 pm


Actually, I don't THINK the third OVA was written by Watase. It was a novelist, but she did the artwork. ^^ Though I could be wrong.

Also, if anyone's interested. Fist chapter of my re-written 20+ chapter fanfic. Tasuki one. Here's the link.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2932231/1/

That should be it... >_> Anyways... Hope ya like it!
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