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Sir Thomass

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PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 4:55 pm


Ethan and Hurricane
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By quietsnooze

Exerpt:
"A hurricane upon the land,
less of water, more mud and leaves.
Wiping the land of travel marks,
the persuers, this dearly greaves.

Lightning like spears, thrown to the Earth,
to shake the air, and shatter tress.
This mighty force, could naught e'er do,
to bring this messenger to knees.

Borne on the wings, of howling squal,
information seeks the needy.
Hero answers the beck and call,
sperred by the plight, of yonder city."
PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 5:09 pm


The Form

In process, since I entered a semi-custom contest.
extra colors: #CC9966
Forgotten's Name: Ethan
Forgotten's Gender: Male
Daemon's Name: Hurricane (Hurr for short)
Daemon's Species: Eastern Dragon

Forgotten's Appearance (Physical):
Sturdy shirt, pants and boots in earth tones and functional cut are what he wears. He looks like a normal except for a slight point to his ears. He also has windblown brown hair, sky blues eyes and a lean build.

His outfit and look will change as he grows. A combination of monk and samurai really explains it best. Coming images will show what I mean, but he wears a monk like outfit with an overcoat like a samurai. His shoes are a strange work too.

Forgotten's Appearance (Traits):
Though odd now and then, he seems to be a simple little boy who loves to play and have fun. Sometimes he can comes across as sweet, or protective, but mostly a carefree boy out to enjoy life with his friend. On occation he will play jokes, but everyone will be laughing in the end, ussually.

As he grows, his intellect becomes more appearent. Skill and knowledge betraying some of what he he hides from most of the world.

Daemon's Appearance (Physical):
Hurricane has scales of varying shades of grey depending on the light and angle you look at them. Along with the horns common to asian dragons, she has a white patch of hair at the back and top of her head.

Daemon's Appearance (Traits):
She's always watching out for Ethan. Nice and willing to interact, but she's not as social as Ethan, who just likes to be around others sometimes. She's very much the "older sister" type.

When they are Young:
When Ethan and Hurricane are very small, they have a few quirks. The fisrt is that they prefer wide open places, even if it's just a large room. They are not claustraphobic, but they really rather be outside. When indoors they prefer to have the windows open, and obviously to be in rooms with windows. The second is that they don't seem to be bothered by hot or cold weather that much. The third, and last, is that storms of almost any kind make them bubble over with cheer, gigles, and happy dragon noises instead of scaring them.
(*Cringes.* I can see Ethan singing "Dancing in the Rain" with Hurr tagging along, while both dance in the rain.)

Forgotten's Personality:
Though he seems simple, that's just the outside. Inside, Ethan shows a quick mind and high intelligence. He is adaptable and not easily angered. He is respectful so long as the rules or people deserve it. Even if he doesn't like the person, he will respect the postision or rank.

He loves to know. That is he loves to know about nature, magic and science. He doesn't want to know any gossip or other such things. It goes against his code of ethics. He's like a scholarly monk(Fighting kind). Being helpless may well be his biggest fear.

Daemon's Personality:
Hurricane is not the most outgoing individual, prefering natural settings. She gets up tight and nervous about things while Ethan takes the philisophical view that if he has no control over it, worrying won't help. The other side of this is that Hurricane will notice things that Ethan missed.
As a result of her ability to sense spirits and magical creatures, plus the fact that she has small limbs, the idea of her and Ethan facing a large monster with no spirit or magical atributes haunts her nightmares. She is also sacastic at times.

Excerpt:
"A hurricane upon the land,
'less of water, more mud and leaves.
Wiping the land of travel marks,
the persuers, this dearly greaves.

Lightning like spears, thrown to the Earth,
to shake the air, and shatter tress.
This mighty force, could naught e'er do,
to bring this messenger to knees.

Borne on the wings, of howling squal,
information seeks the needy.
Hero answers the beck and call,
sperred by the plight, of yonder city."


How does the excerpt affect the pair?:
The excerpt describes who and what they are. Ethan is the one who runs from place to place helping people with what he knows, and Hurricane is the personification of a storm in many ways. They are a cross between eastern and western mythologies. Wizards, elves, elemental sprites, dragons, and some other stuff.

What does it reveal about..
    .. their past?: [Was this an event that happened in their "story", perhaps? etc.]
    .. how they are now that they are "reborn" as a Forgotten? [For example, do they take the words to heart, or do they believe they write their own path? etc.]
    .. their future?: [Is it a prophecy? etc.]


The excerpt is really a description of the two. In their past they were like that, working to gether against all opposition to help others. Now they are still working together, helping each other and often others, so it tells them what they already know. As for the future, they shall always work well together. Ethan cares for others, and Hurricane cares for him. It may be that the events told of in the passage have happened or shall happen, but currently it is not known.

Their Reactions to teh Excerpt:
Hurricane takes it as even more reason to watch out for Ethan. She is the one with the powers, a dragon's form and the ability to fly. He can bairly get a tiny breeze going to cool himself on hot days. (This is before they go on the adventures resulting in items and the creation of a particular item.)

Ethan would tell anyone who asks that it doesn't tell him anything he didn't already know. He wants to help poeple and will try to, while Hurricane helps him. He has no doughts about this, or Hurricanes devotion/loyalty.

Powers, talents, special traits?: [They're not a vegetable, XD.]
Ethan is like a warrior mage. Cross a wind sprite with an elf and you should get the idea. He has three types of powers; elemental, spirit and magic.
--Elemental sad Due to the link between himself and Hurricane.)
His main element is wind, but he has access to all the elements due to how wind interacts with the others, but to a lesser degree. At first, all he can do are things like tiny breezes, and changing direction of a breeze. Later, items will be gained that increase his(their) powers.
--Spirit sad Due to being a bit like an elf.)
Dryads, sylphs, brownies, fairies, undine and many more creatures that seem to live in a variation of reality are able to be comunicated with at the start. Calling the fa'e like things comes with a little practice. The harder skills are summonings, bindings and going into the slightly altered reality.
--Magic:
It's really a combination/offshoot of the first two. Minor wizard would be a good way to describe it. Favors with elemental beings/spirits and his elemental abilities are used most of the time, but he sometimes uses actual magic. Shields, scrying and other little things to be figured out that fit. It should be noted that this is more what he can do useing the first two powers, not another power.

Special traits are what Ethan uses most since he has very little energy to use the powers. Elf like agility and speed due to his affinity to wind/air and his natural agility. Training builds his durability and agility.

Hurricane is the one with the powers, but through their link Ethan gets some. She has elemental abilties, some spirit powers and can fly.
--Elemental sad Storm dragon, duh.)
Wind is her most powerful, but after that comes water and lightning. Unlike Ethan, she doesn't really have access to the other elements. If there's dust and sand, she could make small sand storms, but she has to work with what's already there. The only exceptions are mist and clouds. She can breathe out either of them. In this way she can, given enough time, make a storm cloud.
--Spirit sad Eastern dragon, duh.)
She can, as a mystical/magical creature herself, call and comunicate with those that Ethan can. Since she is closer to being one, she can also sense or feel them when they are near. Bindings and summonings and soforth are not really within her ability like Ethan does it, but she can pit her will against that of the creatures to get them to come or stop them.
--Flight:
She is an eastern dragon. She can fly.

Other important qualities:

Ethan and Hurricane can work with each other to increase their powers. The combinations result in things like Hurr's elemental power as a shield merged with a spirit shield, or Hurr's will suplimenting Ethans spirit binding/summoning.

Other important concept details:

They will not have much if I don't get a few things to happen later on, but I'm not telling right now.

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Sir Thomass

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PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 5:47 pm


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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 10:55 am


Oh wow. I'll have to clean that up someitme. I never realized how many mistakes and typos were in that, and I had fixed a bunch before submitting it.

Sir Thomass

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Sir Thomass

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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 10:57 am


Rogue Dragon:
He is a half-elf of indeterminable age. Looking to be about mid twenties, he is a skilled mage and fighter. Inside his head are two different beings, or atleast as far as they know they are. One of the two is the one who was born in the body. The other is a being who travels from reality to reality living many lives. The transreality being is the one usually at the helm, but over time the two seem to be merging. This is what raises the question of whether the half-elf born with the body was a part of the transreality being. The transreality magic is not fully understood by the transreality being, so nobody realy knows the answer.

Hoshiryuu:
The dragon is the result of a mistake. While entering a reality, the transreality being abosrbed two stars that were colliding. When his body was being formed, there was too much power, so based on the rules of thereality and the beings personality, Hoshiryuu was born a part of him and yet seperate.
(I've had this background since 2003. The similarity to Feedees and there Daemon's bond with the whole literature based pet was what really caught my interset.)

Cho:
A porecelain. She is about 2'2" and resolute.

Diamond & Emerald:
These two are Cho's pets.

Gwen:
She is a mountainous behemoth.

Garven:
He is Gwen's guardian. This raccoon follows her around and tries to help out. This sometimes results in aurguments about what Garven and Gwen each think is helpfull.
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:00 am


Ideas for Later:
Chuck-staff:
Okay I came across one idea I loved when I first read it, and the other is just combinding a couple designs. When the two ideas are put together, my beloved chuck-staff is created.

1)A staff with the ends incased in steel. About one foot at each end.

2)A chuck-staff is a large nunchuck that can be put together into a staff. I've figured out the design, it works.

So the result is a staff with steel ends that can come apart in the middle. The two halves are connected with a chain. That's a set of nunchucks like Selphie uses in FF8.

Sir Thomass

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Sir Thomass

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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:21 am


Round One:
Scenerio 7:

There?s a lot of unexplored territory out behind the House! This is a likely choice for those with lighter, innocent concepts, as well as those Forgotten and daemons with wild imaginations. Will the back fields and forest become a jungle needing to be explored? Will the flowery fields tickle the fancy of a Forgotten and daemon or two? It?s up to you!

Age: Child, preteen
Maximum participants: 5

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Ethan and Hurricane were given a day off from study and training. Normally they might have gone to visit with the fairies that lived in the forests surrounding the mountain fortress they called home. This time they chose to visit the old house containing the Library to possibly meet other feedee and their daemon, or just see what the house might do.

They arrived via the woods behind the house. Running along the edge of the trees, Ethan decided to take a break. While they rested in a tree, a girl and an ostrich found them. Friendly and peaceful, the four quickly became friends. The girl tried to climb up into the tree and stopped at the lowest branch. Apearently she wasn't much of a tree climber. Hurricane found the ostrich daemon's personality odd, but sweet.

After a bit of talking Ethan was rested and their new friends had said something about exploring the woods. Both Ethan and Hurricane liked the idea and joined them on their merry journey. Going faster than their new friends, Ethan and Hurricane met Alex and a girl with a unicorn. They talked about a legion of angry elven warriors waiting to attack and other things. Another girl showed up with a little furry daemon. Later they found out that they were playing a game.

As the game ended the others told Ethan about trying to find a fairy. A few of the otherchildren left with their daemon and Ethan planned to tell Alex that he would try to find a fairy so he could show it to the girl with the unicorn.
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:40 am


Other Possible Names:
Gandalf (Wand Elf)
Ailill (Elf)
Alfred (Elf Counsel)

Sir Thomass

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Sir Thomass

nuGen Staff Member

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:43 am


Challenge #3

!!MINI-CHALLENGES!!

This section is for the majority of the people not participating in the auction, for reason of lack of Gaian funds or lack of creative energy to bid on the creative auction.

Responses to these should not be posted in this thread; this thread is only for bids! You can, instead, respond to these mini-challenges in your quest thread.


*DESIGN YOUR FORGOTTEN'S SHOES

    I wasn't able to draw up templates for shoes, but this is just a fun idea to help flesh out your Forgotten. Draw or find a photo and customize it to look like the shoes your Forgotten would wear. Include a reason why those shoes!



As a toddler and child he wears durable leather boots. As a teenager he starts to wear japanese style sosks and sandels like a samurai used to. He actually wears the socks made to go with the snadels and a boot version of the socks that is very flexible. The sandels are to compensaate for the bottoms of the botts being less durible, so they are more flexible.


*FORGOTTEN PERSONALS

    Aww, everyone needs a little lovin'! Your Forgotten has decided to advertise their self in a newspaper "personals ad". Write up something witty and hilarious! They should be short and sweet since adspace is pretty expensive.



"I didn't do this! Who put an ad in the personals about me?!" Ethan goes looking for a prankster who placed the ad. Hurricane follows, wanting to watch what Ethan would do to the prankster. He is just so creative.


The Ad

A young face, healthy body and free spirit. I enjoy nature hikes, sleeping beneath the stars and long conversations lasting late into the night. I even have a dragon to keep unwanted intrusions away.

I'm looking for a girl who likes nature and plenty of personal time.


Hurricane chuckles to herself. This would be good.
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:47 am


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Sir Thomass

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Sir Thomass

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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:53 am


Challenge 4:
Aplication form:
Username: Rogue Dragon (RD for short.)
Quest Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=2926803
Timezone: PST
Top 3 Choices:
1. Tia
2. Raife
3. RikProwley
Why them?
1. Well done journal thread, neat feedee (and all things having to do with it), and finally not an overly chosen Guardian.
2. Same as with Tia.
3. I like the way he RPs, and he's not overly picked.
Any.. final words? ninja :
I hope this is painless.

My Group:
Guardians: kamtrouble and TarnishedHalo
Other Contestents: Cheshire and Sizzla

The List:
1. Human Hand
2. Spider Venom
3. Wings from a Death's Head Moth

RP Intro Form:
Player Name: Rogue Dragon

FD Name: Ethan
Gender: Male
Age: 14-15
Eyes: Sky Blue
Hair: Short, Brown and looks like he was out in the wind ussually.
Other Notable Points about their Appearance: His ears are kinda pointy like an elf. Think LOTR elf ears.
Powers:
*Elemental:
He can make a small breeze, or similarly tiny elemental feats. He couldn't light a candle, but he could get the candle flame to burn a little hotter.

*Spirit:
He can comunicate with things like fairies, sylph and dryads through spirit. By a lake he could call out via this spirit telepathy and communicate with any water sprite or undine that choose to speak with him. That's all he can do at the moment with fairy beings.

*Magic:
He has yet to get far enough with the other two to learn anything in this category.
Personal Talents: He is fast and can do gymnastics. He is learning several martial arts.
Personality:
Inteligent and alert, he carefully makes his decissions. He tries to be like the "Grand Master" kind of person, relaxed but still alert. As such, he stays calm most of the time, and he tries not to let things bug him. Listening or speaking, he tries to be respectful to others. If you need help, and it's a good thing to help you, he will strive to help. This is because he tuely likes to help people and because it's the right thing to do. If you are veiwed as a threat to the bubble of peace and harmony he cultivates around him, he will warn you nicely. After that, you are choosing to cause trouble and will use what he can to stop you. This doesn't mean he dislikes confrontation. It's just that there should be something to gain from it, a good reason.

Daemon Name: Hurricane
Species and Physical Description: She is an eastern dragon. Hurricane has scales of varying shades of grey depending on the light and angle you look at them. Along with the horns common to asian dragons, she has a white patch of hair at the back and top of her head.
Size: About 9 inches in diameter and around 10 feet long.
Powers (if any):
*Elemental:
She can create a decent breeze, move water or shock someone, but that's it. She can do this a few times without a problem. Unlike Ethan, she is limited in the elements she can call on.

*Spirit:
As an asian dragon she can comunicate with and sense other spirit and/or fairie creatures. Distance limitation in normal surroundings is 300-500 feet. She cannot do anything else in this category.

*Flight:
As an eastern dragon she can fly. This is limited by the proximity rules of being a daemon.
Personality: (Because she is just as important.)
She takes on the protective oldersister approach, but is limited by Ethans way of acting. Hurricane is more careful and watches out more it seems, but actually is just more focused about it. As Ethan's companion she does her part, but let's Ethan take the lead.

She has more issues with being inside than Ethan does. Something like mild claustraphobia. Enclosed spaces restrict her movement and make her feel helpless.

Note:
All powers are at their natural level. To avoid confusion, Ethan will not have the staff he would have/get at this age that would amplify his, and Hurricanes powers. For more on this topic, check the "Quest for the Spirit Staff" RP/story in my quest thread. Whether he left it at home, or doesn't have it yet, doesn't make a difference, because not having the staff on his person, or Hurricane's, means it doesn't help them.
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Summery:

Ethan and Hurricane came out of the woods to find about what they expected. A few of the other feedees had shown up and they seemed to be on time. It didn't take long to see that the one running this whole thing wasn't going to talk much, but there were others willing to explan things. Once inside they met the last of those running this search.

As the others started heading off in different directions, Ethan and Hurricane offered to let the strange boy come along, but weren't going to wait up for him. Instead of reuniting with some of the others they found themselves in a halway. They had to choose a direction when they reached a fork, but later found a room holding many jars and various other containers. Ethan thought this was a great opritunity, Hurricane told him to be careful. Before much could happen a hunched spirit came through a wall waking things sealed in many of the jars and dressed like an old soldier, saber and all.


What I would post:

((Since those running this RP have not posted and time is almost up, I sent Phoo a PM with my intentions. I have not recieved anything back, but I will post this for the sake of showing what I can in this RP. If this oversteps bounds, I apologize. At the least this can show what could have happened.))

That's the OOC comment I was going to put at the top of the post, but didn't get around to writing it in the last couple days. What follows is the concept of what I was planning on typing up. Enjoy!

Spirit:
It laughs and says that since they were just looking around, they had time to play. A game of riddles could be fun and so it suggests they ask each other riddles. The winner gets to choose a jar to open, and must, for what fun would the game be without choosing a jar to open.

Ethan & Hurr:
Hurr thinks Ethan has a bad plan and Ethan is going through with it. He agrees and says something about choosing a person to go first. He'd like to flip a coin, but he doesn't have one. He also says something about needing to be fair, after all they wouldn't want someone to cheat. If the specter will supply a coin he will flip it. Hurr is all the time liking the plan less and less.

Spirit:
He smiles and says that he can do just that. He thinks to himself that it is so nice when humans practicaly ask him to do what he wants. Reaching down he opens the heavy jar and pulls out an ancient coin. I believe this will work.

Ethan & Hurr:
Taking the coin he says for the Spirit to call it in the air, and flips the coin. He thought it was a neat old coin. They watched as the spirit won the coin toss. Huuricane thinks this is horrible. Ethan now starts the combat of riddles.

Spirit:
He chuckles and says something about just being lucky. Ethan doesn't really think so. Looking around the room the spirit makes a big show of choosing the first jar to be opened, saying horrible little things along the way. It is trying to mess with their heads. Eventually he chooses to open a simple little jar and backs off. Out of the jar comes a sprite in solid form.

Ethan & Hurr:
With the careful and watchful expressions on their faces the spector asked if they didn't want the jar opened, and the sprite took offense. After some rolling around, some bites and scratches Ethan shoved the sprite back in the jar with Hurr helping. The spector says that the sprite was fairly active. Ethan thinks for a moument and then comes up with a riddle about the Ageless Lady from an elven forest sealed from the normal physical world.

Narration:
Though the spirit lost the second riddle, he was happy. He knew that the children he was playing with could be put through harder things and give him more entertainment. Ethan realizes that he showed his inteligence by the riddle and the riddles get harder. After a few rounds it's the spirit's turn again. Three weak spirits/sprites had been released. Two faught then left and the third just left. The fourth container was a large one that contained some books. Only a few could still be read.

Ethan & Hurr:
By now it was taking a little bit of thinking to come up with riddles, so Ethan asked if he could look through the jar the coin had come from while he waited for the spirit. It didn't care. While looking through the jar he found a ring he liked the look of and put it on. It really didn't fit, but when the spirit asked his question ethan answered right away. Ethan and Hurr were startled and the spirit was yelling about cheating and that there was no way he could have known the answer to that riddle. Ethan said something about dumb luck and went straight to work choosing a jar.

Narration:
Another few rounds go by with more little sprites and they were starting to be bigger ones that the spector was choosing. Several times Ethan got close but he lost all these rounds. Hurr came out of the fights in better shape. Ethan had some scratches, cuts and bite marks.

Ethan & Hurr:
As another turn came Hurricane gave him a riddle to ask. Using the rules of the Elite Order of Dragon Knights to point to the Order, the riddle should be something the spirit didn't know. She was right. After loosing so many the spirit didn't mind this win much. This time Ethan took his time looking through the jars and looked in the area where Hurricane said the power was coming from. WHo knew, maybe he could find something that would go after the spirit instead of himself. It took several minuets to get down far enough into the pile. He finds the sealed pixie's jar and reads about the pixie and the gem, so he chooses that one.

Spirit:
It was serious by now and started unleashing the substantial creatures on the boy, but with the help of the dragon and pixie he made it through. Via Hurricane Ethan could get more counsel, but the spirit didn't know this. All it knew was the game was heating up and not going acording to plan. The boy had even gotten the last riddle right and told the released spirit that he would be glad of some help dealing with the spector, and it had attacked. Now this was going too far. NObody was supposed to do this well.

Ethan & Hurr:
He had collected a few more books and treasures from broken jars and opened ones. This time he used one of the Pixie's riddles to stump the Spector and chose the jar containing the moth. Having found the moth he wanted to leave, and said as much. The spirit was livid and said he couldn't go, but as things got worse Ethan grabbed the jar of rings and the Pixies jar, containing two of the books on magic, and Ran out the door. Hurricane held in her claws the jar containing the moth to keep it safe. After a few doors the spirit seemed to be gone. Ethan asked the Pixie if it could do something about the weight of the jars. With a lighter load they moved on. A few times they ran into the spirit and got away. In the end they reached the entry hall and waited for the others. Ethan asked the Pixie andfound out that only two or three rings or coins were magic. Then he remebered that he would get in trouble for putting on the rings without knowing anything about them.
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