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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 11:44 am
Forgotten's Name: Seraphine Forgotten's Gender: Female Daemon's Name: Seduire Daemon's Species: Brolga crane
Forgotten's Appearance (Physical): This green - #BCEE68Hair color: Light Goldenrod 1 - #FFEC8BHair style: Up in a big bun with springy curls framing her face. Like this. Big hair~ There's also a few small bird feathers hanging from her hair (Three lovebird feathers) Clothing: The outfit would get more elegant as she grew, but basically a ruffly prom dress. Kind of like this one PRETTI! 8D She also always wears dance slippers~ There are more references for her style dress here. Accessories: Sera's a girly girl, so she loves jewelry. She wears three rings (Silver ring, Rainbow ring, Confetti ring), four silver bangles, this ankle bracelet and a silver heart locket with small pink jewels. Forgotten's Appearance (Traits): Confident and graceful when dancing, but modest and quiet when not. Daemon's Appearance (Physical): Two cranes, Flyin high, face. Daemon's Appearance (Traits): Protective and fatherly, but still an attention whore.
Forgotten's Personality: Seraphine doesn't go around boasting about her dancing ability, but she doesn't try to hide it either...she's just modest. She's confident and all, she just can't get over being shy about compliments! Most of the time Sera's quiet, focusing mainly on her oboe playing and her dancing, so she's not so fabulous at making new friends. She's modest and blushes a lot when she's told any sort of compliment; she has a problem with being ridiculed--so that would explain why she's shy--she's afraid she'll say or do something wrong and people will scold her for it. Despite that she'll still sidle up to someone with her oboe and play a little something for anyone she sees being depressed, shy or just looks interesting, looking like a much more confident person when doing so. Sera looks happiest when dancing, it allows her to express herself in a way words can't, the same goes for her oboe. As she grows older she'll learn to love writing her own opuses and perhaps even develop better people skills. Daemon's Personality: Seduire considers himself Seraphine's right-hand...crane, and cares for Seraphine like she's his own little girl. He's constantly nudging his girl closer to other Forgottens to make more friends, knowing full well she can't just dance and play the oboe all the time! He's chatty and social, and always encouraging Seraphine to try new things and take chances. When it comes to dancing, Seduire is her always willing partner when she's dancing alone, but when she's dancing with someone else he stands on the sidelines and keeps a watchful eye like any father-figure would.
Despite all that, when there's a huge crowd watching the two of them dance, Seduire tends to get a bit...over-enthusiastic. He starts singing (Bird calls of course) and flapping his wings, shakin' that tail feather and stealing as much attention as he can. Needless to say he earns himself a silent treatment for a day or two.
Excerpt: Elle avait la grace d'un cygne, et la passion d'un professionnel, se deplacant comme l'eau par elle fait equipe des bras; la facon ses hanches oscillees et ses pieds deplaces, elle transmet et arme le demenagement avec la musique enchantait et seduire. La musique etait etrangere, probablement latin de quelque genre, mais cela n'a pas eu d'importance. C'etait comme si je regardais une sirene dansant au lieu de chanter; je l'ai voulue, j'ai voulu la tenir, la toucher, sentir sa peau douce contre le mien. Et alors elle m'a regarde... Translation: She had the grace of a swan, and the passion of a professional, moving like water through her partners arms; the way her hips swayed and her feet moved, her hands and arms moving along with the music was enchanting and alluring. The music was foreign, probably Latin of some kind, but that didn't matter. It was as if I was watching a siren dancing instead of singing; I wanted her, I wanted to hold her, to touch her, to feel her soft skin against mine. And then she looked at me... How does the excerpt affect the pair?: Seduire knows of Seraphine's past somehow, and so it brings the two together because of his desire to protect Seraphine but keep her happy at the same time. At times Seduire even seems afraid of Seraphine. What does it reveal about..
.. their past?: Seraphine in a previous life was a professional dancer who once fell in love with someone, then something tragic happened. Whether it was a man or a woman is unknown at this point in time. .. how they are now that they are "reborn" as a Forgotten? She constantly reads a copy of her excerpt Claudine wrote down for her, and (although she doesn't realize she shouldn't) hopes that one day she can trigger the feelings for someone else that the narrator describes for themself. .. their future?: History may repeat itself. She might not become a professional dancer, but disaster will strike if she falls in love again.
Powers, talents, special traits?: Although she won't be able to do complicated routines as a child, Seraphine is a spectacular dancer. She also plays the oboe (Her most prized possession) so she can get other people to dance as well. Seraphine is able to summon either dancing fairies or wisps of smoke shaped like people to dance along with her or entice others to dance along. Also, when she plays a certain tune on her oboe it can force things (or people) to dance
Other important qualities: Claudine teaches Seraphine French as well as English, so many times she will be speaking either one or the other or just switch out in the same sentence until she develops better speaking skills. Other important concept details: Ask and thou shalt receive.
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 11:46 am
The guardian Name: Claudine Voisin Font Color: Light Sky Blue 2 - #A4D3EE Age: Can't even remember anymore. Birthday: Uh...give me a couple minutes to remember... Race: Vampire Height: Too lazy to measure. Weight: Not tellin'! Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: White Skin Tone: Very pale Weapons of choice: Jewelry: This necklace always found around her neck, this poison ring (Whether it has poison in it or not is the question), this necklace worn on a shorter chain than the rose necklace.
Personality: TBA (It'll all sum up to she's crazy though)
History: When Claudine was a living human she was the daughter of a local lord in a Medieval era in a town called Tiracona. She was in love with a man then, and was secretly engaged to him, when one night a group of vampires suddenly attacked the entire village and killed everyone...well almost everyone. Lord Voisin and Claudine escaped to another town. There were dozens of rumors about her, like how the love of her life had been turned into one of those vampires attacking the area.
It was true, yet he and Claudine were still very much in love. She snuck him into her room every night for a week before that town was also attacked...only this time Claudine was turned and her father was killed, her lover was nowhere to be seen. For three-hundred years she lived with her sire and was forced to follow his teachings, and after a time she was permitted to leave to survive on her own.
She took this chance to search for her old lover...and she found him after another sixty years of searching. When she found him he was sleeping with another woman, and Claudine discovered that he never even attempted to search for her. Naturally she wasn't pleased, and ended up decapitating both him and the other woman.
So now she lives on her own, or rather in a mansion with human servants and now her own charge. It's a shame she hates birds though.
Likes: Women, night time, blood, bats, cats, dresses, Dislikes: Men, daylight, birds, death, overly happy people
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 11:47 am
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 11:48 am
Sera's Shoes! Lovely white dance slippers: White goes with everything, so she can wear it with any of her pretty little dance costumes. Also, she's a dancer, so why wouldn't she wear dance shoes?
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 11:49 am
Personals!
 First Name: Seraphine Age: 21 Gender: 100% woman Marital status: Single and obviously looking Body Type: Thin yet fit, dancer body...just think of that. Height: A whopping 5' 6" Eyes: Light green Hair: Naturally blonde, currently dyed brown. Ethnicity: Caucasian (Tanned now) Social Setting: Shy and quiet, but I warm up easily. Smoking: No! Drinking: Only at weddings and other special events. Living Situation: With mother in Durem. Big mansion, hard to miss. Have Kids: Not right now. Want (more) kids: It'd be nice to...one day.
Education: High school diploma; attending college. Employment Status: Employed. Occupation: Dancer and oboe player at Durem theater; student.
Religion: N/A Attend Services: N/A Astrology: You can use it as a pick up line to find out. Languages: English, French.
Likes: Oboe, dancing, books, daffodils and tulips (Together in one bouquet), pink things, birds (I have one I can't stray far from, so you must love birds), fluffy things, hugs, cuddling, kisses, clothes, shoes. Dislikes: Smoking, drinking, excessive cursing, men who are too dominant, being controlled, people who claim to be 'gothic' or 'emo' and really aren't, men who spend entire dates on their cell phones (Yes, it actually happens), horror movies, blonde jokes (Although I'll tolerate the good ones).
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 5:06 pm
Sera's music! The World Was Dancing - Songs for a New World LyricsHear Me - Kelly Clarkson LyricsBreathe - Michelle Branch Lyrics'Til I Get Over You - Michelle Branch Lyrics
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 4:04 pm
I love the excerpt you chose! Partly becuase I can read French, but because it has so much potential! I love the future explanation~. So much left open!
And and, just out of curiosity, do you speak French? x3 I would assume it's a yes, but hey!
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 4:08 pm
No, I used a translator. Sometimes those things can mess up the text though, did it all come out accurately? XD
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 4:11 pm
Haha, that I can't tell you mad d. I'm an English-gone-French girl. So I'm definitely not one to judge grammar. Sorry D:!
AND! I so forgot to mention. I love Chantel's quietness in real life but strength as she dances. So prettyful =D!
And you, missy, still owe me some feedback mad d. *noogies*
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 5:24 pm
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 5:32 pm
Nice concept! Brief but with the right ammount of info. imho! *thumbs up.* ^____^
I like the pretteh dress. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 5:34 pm
Brief because I like surprises~ Thanks. n.n
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 5:54 pm
I don't know. I think it would be more interesting if she weren't so shy. Dancers tend to be confident, as far as I've seen, because their abilities give them confidence. This doesn't mean she has to be arrogant or haughty or anything like that, but a woman who is self-confident and moves gracefully and stuff...very alluring. Much more likely to attract the sort of attention that would be garnered in that excerpt than a clingy, self-conscious woman.
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 6:02 pm
Hm, that's true. But I wanted her to seem like a completely different person when dancing, and I have SO many happy and bubbly characters under my wing I wanted to try and deviate from that.
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 6:04 pm
She can be unhappy and unbubbly and still confident. ^^ Maybe she's a little anti-social. She is confident in her abilities and her body, but not so good with the people skills? Maybe she's a workaholic and devotes so much time to her dancing that she doesn't really bother with others? And possibly neglects her own needs and pushes herself too far?
She could just glow on stage, be a lot more personable and attracting others and all that jazz.
I don't know. Just a thought. ^_^
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