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Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 9:15 pm

Hello,

My friends and I are coming up with a manga composed of short storys. I have done some character sceches and a few story oul lines that I hope you all will comment on!! heart

Story one: No TITTLE YET!
story typ: fantasy/ Dark
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THe girl is the lead character and the boy is a main character but has no reall part in the story yet. (( no writing has been done yet but we're getting to it.))
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There are Two other characters we have not done yet but we will get to it soon cuz their really big.... sweatdrop

Story two: Fairy waters
story typ: sad/ fatasy/ Romance... (sorrta...)
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Story Three: N/A
Type: Fantasy/ Romance/ acction
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Story four:
Fox Red
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I like the fox on the lined papaer better then the other ones but that ok I guess....

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Story five:
The Fox, that Cat and the Alchemist

The one with the buns is baised off of my avi!! 3nodding

Please tell me what you think and what you think I should work on!

Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 7:14 pm

Those are pretty good. ^-^

Neko`

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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 7:22 pm

thank you! heart

Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:33 pm

It's very nice! However, I think the eyes are too close together.

Pann-yu

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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:53 pm

Oh, are they? .... I never saw that....hummm..

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 3:10 pm

you could try drawing the other eye, but if you character was ment to have one eye showing, then thats fine, but you are really good at drawing clothing! eek

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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 3:25 pm

Dude! It took me forever to get lern how to do ruffles! Now I can't stop using them. xd And yeah shes suposed to have one eye. I really don't want to post the story out lines on the forum but if you would like me to tell you then PM me. 3nodding

Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 4:43 pm

Wow! The clothes are really good, but i would suggest that you would stay consistant when it comes with the coloring (some parts are colored and some parts aren't) . I think your pictures look better without color anyways.

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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 3:06 pm

I posted the first two pages of the fox story in my journal! 3nodding

Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 9:02 pm

Well, the eyes are suppose to be one eye length apart, but they're usually closer or further apart depending on the style...I think your style is very nice and half the time I can't tell...but sometimes, they do look just a tad bit too close... sweatdrop

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Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 6:30 pm

I love the way you draw the ruffles of the dress 3nodding
but for some reason in the second and the third picture the girls' eyes feels kind of to big

Posted: Sat May 20, 2006 9:18 am

Yeah, I notes that now.. sweatdrop Thanks for the coment. 3nodding

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