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Uncle Touchy

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Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 10:58 pm

I've started writing a gay romance novel. The writing is terrible, the plot is dry and transparent, and there is tonnes of superflouis sex scenes.

Everything a true romance novel could ever hope to have.

I'm currently working on the first chapter... let me know what yo think!

(first draft, btw)

http://theywerespies.livejournal.com/306.html

Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:50 pm

I like it. Much better than what i could ever do. I wasnt expecting spies at first. but i like. a gay spy... sexxi lol

~scarred-and-diseased~

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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:09 pm

You didn't expect spies? But, but... look at the link!

http://theywerespies.livejournal.com/306.html

Gaah! *runs into wall* gonk

Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 5:37 pm

Ooh good! Keep it up!

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Culumacilinte

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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 3:16 pm

Not bad, though you've got quite a few spelling errors which seriously take away from the quality of the writing. The premise you've established is interesting, but the writing itself reads like a mediocre fanfiction. Not bad, certainly, but a good beta might be extremely helpful for you.

Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 11:51 am

Aaaaaaaaaaaah! I loved it!
send me more when you write more please!

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