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Mission 1: NIGHT RAID ON DEVON
Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Devon Corporation and steal 50 PokeNAVs. But you must not be seen be anyone. Beware there are 10 guards in the building. You must enter the building. Then make your way to level 3 were the PokeNAVs are. But get them quickly and return back. All the PokeNAVs are in one box.
Pokemon you may run into on the mission (you may only run into one):
Zigzagoon
Voltorb
Duskull
Funds upon completion: 1000
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It was my first day at Team Aqua and I was anticipating going on my first mission! So as soon as I had my first two pokemon, (My rebellious Carvanha and lovable Spheal)I rushed over to the Message Board and read about an exciting new mission: Night Raid on Devon. It was perfect! I remembered my days back as a youngster, stealing anything I could find to eat and realized this mission would be a breeze! I could never be more wrong�
I ran outside and hopped on my shiny new Mach Bike and headed toward Rustboro. It was a quick trip and I encountered no problems. I spent my afternoon and evening in town, browsing the local stores and trying to act unsuspicious. At around midnight, when everyone was tucked carefully in bed, I made my way to the Devon Corporation Entrance. I noticed the night guard at his post (luckily half-asleep) and slipped cautiously passed him. The entrance was blocked, so I quietly made my way to the side of the building.
I looked up the side of the building and notice a 5� by 5� Window. It would be a tight fit, but I knew I would be able to make it. I began thinking of a way to climb up, when I heard a noise from the bushes beside me. I turned sharply and saw two small zigzagoons crawl out of the bushes.
�Here we go,� I said, reaching for my pokeballs. A battle was about to ensue�
Me: All right, not only is this my first Team Aqua battle, but it is also my first 2 on 2! Go, Carvanha! You too, Spheal!
Carvanha: Ga-gaarrr!
Spheal: Spheal!
C: *Bite*
Z1: 35-10=25HP
S: *Water gun*
Z1: 25-7=18HP
Me: Good job guys! Now raise your defenses, there about to attack!
Z1: *Tackle*
S: 43-6=37HP
Z2: *Tackle*
C: 36-5=31HP
Me: Good work! Now lets take out that small one, before he gets a chance to attack again!
C: *Bite*
Z1: 18-12=6HP
S: *Water gun*
Z1: *Faints*
Me: All right! Now it�s 2 against one!
Z2: *Tackle*
S: *Dodges*
Me: EXCELLENT!
C: *Bite*
Z2: *Dodges*
S: *Ice ball* Critical Hit!
Z2: 32-24=8HP
Me: Okay, just survive this round guys!
Z2: *Tackle*
C: 31-5=26HP
Me: Now finish him off!
C: *Bite*
Z2: *Faints*
Me: Great job guys! Uh-oh someone�s coming!
The battle had ended but the mission had just begun! A flashlight came from around the corner and I heard the sound of footsteps. I returned Carvanha and Spheal hastily, then jumped into the bushes from which the Zigzagoons had sprung. The guard waved his flash light around sleepily. Then left with a yawn. The coast was clear.
�That was a close one,� I whispered to my self, crawling out of the bushes. I now had a new challenge; Finding a way to scale the wall. The window was on the second floor and I was definitely not tall enough to reach it. I had to find something to step on�That�s when I saw it; An empty crate that had been carelessly tossed aside. I quietly positioned the crate under the window and climbed on it. I still was a few feet short. So, I peered around the corner of the building, only to find a hedge of bushes and some ivy vines..IVY VINES! I knew exactly what to do!
I climbed up the side of the building, holding the vines tightly. It seemed like hours, Until I finally made it to the second story ledge. I then edged my way around the corner and made it to the window. Luckily for me, it was unlocked and I slipped in quietly.
Once inside, I found myself in a laboratory. Full of beakers, test tubes, machinery, and strange looking books. I tiptoed to the open door and took a look outside. Two guards were positioned at one side of the hallway, right in front of the stairs. I would have to take the other route and find an elevator. So, I got on my belly and army crawled into the shadows. It took along time but I made it to the end of the hallway and went around the corner. No guards here, luckily.
I got back on my feet and walked to the end of the hall. To my despair, there was an out of order sign posted on the Elevator door. I looked up. The only way to the third floor was to get through the ceiling. I began thinking up plans to get up when I heard a door knob turn.
I ran into another door, avoiding being caught and shut it quickly. I looked around the room and noticed a very tall book shelf. So tall it almost touched the ceiling! I began studying the ceiling and realized it was made up of aluminum panels that could be easily lifted. So I scaled the bookshelf and once on the top shelf, I pushed my head up. For a split second, I thought the panel was too heavy, but within seconds it popped up and my head was in the third floor.
I pulled my arms up and eventually was able to pull myself up. I gathered my surroundings and realized where I was at�The safe that held all of Devon�s most valuable inventions! I had hit the jackpot, but I knew I couldn�t take everything, only what I came for. I picked up boxes, read labels, rummaged through crates, and even broke some larger inventions, to see if the PokeNAVs were hidden inside. But none were to be found, until I saw the one thing I had overlooked for the past hour. When I had popped up the ceiling panel to get inside, I had knocked over a box. The box had yipped over and its contents spilled out. The contents were 50 PokeNAVs. I gathered the NAVs and placed them all in my sack to carry away. I lowered the bag down the hole into the second floor and was just about to jump down, when I saw something out of the corner of my eye.
There was a Duskull, floating just above the empty PokeNAV box.
Me: So y-you wanna f-fight, huh? Well, th-then lets g-go.
Carvanah: Garoo!
Spheal: Spheal! Spheal!
Me: Wait! Only one of you can fight this time! Go Spheal!
S: *Ice ball* Critical Hit!
D: 38-18=20HP
Me: Nice! Keep up the good work, Spheal!
D: *Night Shade*
S: 37-11=26HP
Me: Woah, he�s tougher than I thought! Spheal, give it all you got!
S: *Ice ball*
D: 20-9=11HP
Me: I have an idea! Spheal just hang in there buddy!
D: *Night shade*
S: 26-13=13HP
Me: All right Spheal, take a break. Pokeball go!
The next few second were intense. Would Duskull be my first caught pokemon? If not, would my Spheal be doomed? Would I get out of the Devon Building before-The pokeball stopped shaking.
�YES!� I shouted, not realizing how loud I was. �I mean, yes.� I said in a whisper.
After Duskull was caught, the mission went smoothly. I picked up my pokeball (now housing Duskull) and jumped down to the second floor. I grabbed my sack, headed back out to the hall way, and made my way back carefully (and quietly) to the room that held my escape. I stepped out of the open window and closed, feeling accomplished. After climbing back down the ivy, I tiptoed back to my mach bike, making sure not to wake the still sleeping guard. As I rode off that night, I reflected back upon the night and smiled to myself
�Team aqua is lucky to have a guy like me,� I said, laughing to myself. I then sped back to HQ under the moonlight, grinning all the way.
Pokemon caught: Duskull
Pokemon Defeated: Zigzagoon, Zigzagoon
Mission: Completed
What I originally wrote. (Note I modified the mission, so some stuff doesn't apply)
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Pass Great mission especially for your first. My only comments are I would of preffered it if you included the whole mission briefing thing, not just the title, and made the battle with the Zigzagoons d a little more damage in comparison to Pok�mon, but congrats keep the money and the Duskull. smile
