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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:18 pm
The Grim Mistakes  The Grim mistakes. Deaths servents. The reapers of souls. They are the ones who come when it is your time. With enhanced strenth the power to fly and the abilty to create portals to anywhere they chose. Their serveice to Death lasts for 1,000 years then they can only ascend to heaven when they find someone near death willing to become a mistake. Only souls going to heaven can become Mistakes and it's not a pleasent job as you deal with all types of death and it's commen to see a mistake still serveing after 1,000 years becouse they can not find someone to take there place. They don't take the side of good or evil offically but they belive in the balance of life and death, they only fight those who disrupt that balance...
The world has been ruined by the hand of Chaos and most living creatures have been killed off or wishing they had been. There are a few cities left but most of them are akin to a Mad Maxx stlye community. Right now the story is in one of the larger citys, something like bosten or NewYork and i only has mabey a hundred humans left, all scroungeing around for food and water.
So... will you take the cold hand of Death and serve your time? Becouse Great things are comeing... and you will be a part of them if you do. Key: 1.) Rules 2.) Creators 3.) Chacters ___a. Mistakes ___b. Corrections ___c. Doom Guard ___d. Others 4.)Thread Stories ___a. The Grim Mistakes ___b. The Clock of Ages ___c. Thrice Dammed 5.) Updates 6.)Stuff I forgot.....
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:27 pm
RULES 1.) Umm... follow the guild rules... 2.) The doom Guard is pretty much for eveyone, but by no means should the leaders EVER be beaten with less then three posts or something.... 3.) Use your commen sence...
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:32 pm
Creators
Creators In charge of the story and what goes on in the thread at all times, people who have created story elements and ideas on a large scale
Jan_Tanner (go figure rolleyes )
Frostbite-W (good RPer and Gaian, I recconmend invite)
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:34 pm
Characters CHARACTER Gaia Name: (your name) Character Name: (your character name) Side: (mistake, Correction, Other) Age: (what age is your character) Time of death: (year and date) Dis.: (A discription of your character) History: (your characters past) Powers: (what abilities you have) NOTE: these are just guidelines
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:35 pm
THE GRIM MISTAKES The Mistakes are the helpers of Death, made by souls willing to stay on earth to take the lives of people who's time has run out. You chose to become one at the time of your death and you must serve for 1,000 then finding another to take your place... there are some who chose not to go to heaven, liveing there sudo life, watching the world move from the shadows. *NOTE: There are only 10 Mistakes at any one time. **NOTE: Also please give a time frame of when you died (1800rds, 2004, 104 BC rolleyes ) and how you died as well ***NOTE: If your a mistake then your entitled to a exceptinally strong sub-power ****NOTE: All mistakes come standard with Robe and sythe if you chose. Grimreaper: 1.)player name- Jan_Tanner Name: Ian Fayearth Age: 650 Time of Death: 1350 App.-  Wepons: Touch of death, Ian has the touch of death and can control it's power quite well, he can dilute it to the point where it's just a blast of force or he can add more power to it so that anyone hit with it not only dies but ages to dust as well. This power combined with his hand to hand combat skill makes him a dangrous foe to face. Twin Sythes: Ian has a pair of twinsythes that are used it each hand and are connected by a chain that expands and retracts with will of the user. These are powerful weapons in the hands of a skilled user Bio: If you'ed execpect Ian to be morbid and depressed after his 630 years of being a reapers mistake than you'ed be wrong. Ian has a hopelessly cheerful and optimistic attatude that so out of place with his job and look many people don't realize who he is until it's too late. His death was as un-intresting as you could come across, he tripped over his cat, and to this day he can't seem to get over the irony of it. Ians past is not something that you would want to be a part of, he was a hunter of magical and mystryous things in the world and there was a time when people trembled at his name. His Mistake power is an extreamly powerful form called the True mistake, in this form he becomes a liveing embodyment of death himself and his power is nearly unrivaled. This form can only be obtained by asorbeing souls in there purest form, a idea Ian does not like to think about. 2.) 3.) 4.) 5.) 6.) 7.) 8.) 9.) 10.)
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:37 pm
THE CORRECTIONS This Group is the rivals to the Mistakes, only souls willing to go to heaven can become a mistake, but someone out there is defying the will of heaven and earth and allowing souls that were doomed to hell to become them. What are there goals, who is controling them, and what role will they play in the future? *NOTE: There are only 10 Corrections at any one time. **NOTE: Also please give a time frame of when you died (1800rds, 2004, 104 BC rolleyes ) and how you died as well. *** The Corrections are the mortal enemies of the mistakes, if you become one you should make every attempt to kill off the Mistakes (but don't God-mod it, check with your opponent) Leader: 1.)Gaia Name: Bristi Character Name: Jude Cariteaux(Care-ih-toe) Side: Correction Age: 28 years older than each year that passes.(So..whatever year it is..that's how old he is plus about 28 or so.) Time of death: 1 day before Anno Domini began. Des.: About 6'1", thin, though not scrawny..more muscular. Face is clean-shaven and he doesn't look older than about twenty-five or so. His black leather jacket has the sleeves torn off, he wears a white-ish tank top, and faded blue jeans. He looks pretty normal, all but his eyes. Due to the circumstances under which he died, the iris are blood-red and seem to be pits of despair. His right ear is pierced, once..and the earring is actually made out of a coin, an ancient coin. Usually waers a pair of sunglasses. History: There was absolutely no doubt that he was going to hell when he died...though Judas knew it even before he killed himself. What he didn't know was that he would be given a second chance..though not to correct his life's mistake. He continued through the ages, doing as he was told, first changing his name. Judas certainly wasn't common, not after his little escapade... Anyway..he did as he was told, never leaving the earth, never tiring of his job on it. He's now coming out of hiding, after the dark days of Chaos, there's much to be done. Powers: Some say he's killed with his eyes...the pools of despair...and it's probably true. After his death he was gifted with the power of the plagues, a special gift to a special servant. His power will poison the mortal body uponcontact, though the death afterward is slow and agonizing. More....resistant bodies, such as the Mistakes, have been killed with it before...though it took quite a bit more effort. Jude nearly died after such a battle, the strain was so great. Through the ages, Jude has learned many techniques and styles of fighting..though his latest favorite has been the guns of the New Age. Amazing mechanisms indeed. 2.) 3.) 4.) 5.) 6.) 7.) 8.) 9.) 10.)
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:38 pm
THE DOOM GUARD The warriors created from the shadowy force behind the Corrections. They are ruthless, untireing, and compleatly evil. There numbers are infinate but they can not enter our world all at once. There leader has yet to come to his full power but when he does the world as we know it... will be doomed. ((note: these are monsters that you can chose to fight, you don't have to use them and your not forced to make them uber cool (unless stated otherwise) so just fight them if your bored and need to post)) Flayer Its entire purpose is to kill and kill in the most grusme way possible. They stand up to about the waist of an avrage person and cand attack alone or in groups. There fast, one of the fastest Doom Guard you'll find, and they are not to be takeing lightly...  Sniper These demons are much weaker then most, prefering to support there fellows or take out there target from a distance, There bullets are pure charged demonic enegry and when they hit they not only burn like hell, but they start to infect and corrupt the parts of the body, and only pure water can heal the infection.  Bomb Weak, slow and excptinally volitile. These things make TNT look like candles.  Brawler The heavywights of the Doom Guard, These demons pack a nasty punch and lift even the heavyest object with reletive ease. Thankfully they aren't too swift, but to make up for it they have exptinal toughness. be careful Learders gifted with the power of speech and strenght these fighters will punish any one stupid enough of under estamateing them. Be careful of them... otherwise you will be defeated... ((Note: it's preferable that you have another RPer willing to take control of these guys when fighting them so the battle doesn't get stupid and they become underpowerd)) Psiona low level leader but none the less a difficult foe to face. His body can warp and stretch when fighting and he can create a siren capable of stunning anyone too close to him. His body is pure enegry and can asorbe and drain the enegries of opponents so the longer you fight him the harder it becomes....  Egg What it's purpose is has yet to be reviled.... 
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:44 pm
OTHERS There are always going to be more then just the Mistakes and Corrections, forces acting of there own will and with there own agenda,who will help and who will hinder? *There can be any number of other classes, just follow the rules for them and make sure they have a past and bio. Good 1.) 2.) 3.) 4.) 5.) Evil 1.)Name= Milliatent (what people call him) Crit' Click' Tick' (Spider)  Story= Milliatent was first a spider of massive size and power, until the Mistakes killed him and it was sent to hell. If there was ever a milcious creature in the world Milliatent would be it. It was a being without remorse and mercy and it was evil to the core. When the Mistakes finally sent it to the underworld it only made matters worse. Down there Milliatent was like a plague, sweeping throught and eating, asorbeing and takeing sinners souls and demons powers. It moved through growing and growing in power until one day when it gained it's freedom from hell. Once again free to terrioze the world it's rampage was stopped by the one of the corrections, Ichimaru Jin, Who bound Milliatent to work for them. Now with its orders Milliatent will destroy its murdurers and bring it's vengance onto the corrections as soon as their guard is down. Bio= Milliatent can not speak but it's smart enough to understand humans. It's evil to the core and very much enjoys tortureing his opponents and toying with them as well. If it was up to it, Milliatent would devour everyone on the face of the earth becouse each soul and body it digest only makes it stronger. Powers= Millitent's entire body is filled with a horrid mixture of blood, acid and poison which makes it even more dangrous when wounded. It can change into some of the more evil creatures it's eaten and can also spit acid as well as create spiderlings when its a spider. Never fight Milliatent in it's webs becouse you WILL lose ((AKA don't go into it's nest, RPers be warned )) Dispite it's many forms Milliatent prefers it's original form. Reciently Milliatent has begun to use it's spawn, and enchanceing there powers to become even more dangrous then ever. 2.) 3.) 4.) 5.) Others 1.) 2.) 3.) 4.) 5.)
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:46 pm
STORY All previous storylines can be found at these links
THE GRIM MISTAKES  The grim mistakes was the original storyline, created by Frostbite-W. It told the tale of Death's mistakes and there battle agenst the strangers. The strangers were an order devoted to defying death and achiveing immortalty. They felt that by killing death, a feat not easily accomplished, they would rid the world of evil. After several close shaves, and near death captures, the Mistakes began an offensive agenst the strangers. Two of the mistakes, Ian and Scarlett, followed a lead that brought them face to face with one of the strongest Strangers they had ever seen. No one knows what his real name is, but everyone called him bookworm for the massive tombe he carried around. Apon finding him, both Ian and Scarlett began the battle in ernest. But even with there powers it was to no avail as the were almost overwhelmed but Bookworms magical powers. It was with luck and the timely arriveal of Frost that they were able to defeat him. With bookworm defeated Ian and Scarlett learned of a chilling fact, nearly all of the mistakes, and death himself, had been killed and only those three were the only ones left keeping the power of death held back. The only positive side was that the defeated bookworm left his book behind to allow them to lean of the leader of the Strangers, A woman called Kaela. With this information Frost began to plan for the attack on the Strangers, while Ian and Scarlett went to the city of the Sightless, to give the massively powerful tombe to Tren, a close friend and powerful arch mage of Ian. This done Ian and Scarlett both returned to the home of the Mistakes to see someone new there a young girl who seemed to be the newest mistake, in reality she was Kaela trying to destroy the Mistakes from the inside. She failed but not before letting them know that Frost was captured and the ultamate weapon agenst death was soon to be there's. Without any furthur delay both Ian and Scarlett began the attack on the Strangers, only to be trapped along with Frost. The only thing that saved them was the sythe of Death, chooseing it's new master... Frost. With it he was able to unlock his ultamate power, the requiem of the dead, and save everyone from distruction. But unfortunatly Kaela got away in the mist of battle and the strangers are still about... but considerably weaker. The clock of Ages]http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=10065891UPDATES -Wed Mar 01, 2006 3:41 pm Milliatent, a massive spider who works for the Corrections goes rouge and starts to breed and amass an army in the nearby forest.
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 5:38 am
Ian sighed and looked about. It had been over a year since he had seen any of the other mistakes... let alone corrections. He sat on top of one of the few structurely sound buildings left after the chaos battle and most of the world was just like this city... runined and nearly deserted. There were a few humans left to reap, leaveing him with his job, but he knew that wouldn't last long without a death....
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 6:27 pm
Ian layed back on the roof and sighed again. Suddenly there was a pulse from a corner of the city and Ian sat up. "Time to work...." standing up he streched and opend a portal towards where the pulse came from. Walking though he walked into an old derilict home. "ok... now where are you?"
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Posted: Mon May 01, 2006 5:45 am
Ian walked though the portal and into waht semed to be the livingroom of the house. The walls creeked and there were puddles of water formed on the floor. The celing dripped with the rain that was outside and Ian knew that soon the house wouldn't continue to stand without some serious effort. Sighing he walked downstairs and into the basement of the home and saw his objective. The man was hunched over the last flickering bits of a fire and shivering. Normally Ian would talk to the person, let him know whats happeing, but this time he just walked over and rested his hand on his sholder, feeling the life drain from him. "night... old timer..." Walking back upstairs he opened a portal and headed into it.
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Posted: Mon May 01, 2006 1:42 pm
Ian sighed as he stepped thought the portal and back to his roof. Sighing again he leaned on a TV antenna station. "man... I have never sighed this many times in one day...." Ian looked around at the cloudly sky and watied for the next pulce of death.
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Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 6:50 pm
Gaia Name: Bristi Character Name: Jude Cariteaux(Care-ih-toe) Side: Correction Age: 28 years older than each year that passes.(So..whatever year it is..that's how old he is plus about 28 or so.) Time of death: 1 day before Anno Domini began. Des.: About 6'1", thin, though not scrawny..more muscular. Face is clean-shaven and he doesn't look older than about twenty-five or so. His black leather jacket has the sleeves torn off, he wears a white-ish tank top, and faded blue jeans. He looks pretty normal, all but his eyes. Due to the circumstances under which he died, the iris are blood-red and seem to be pits of despair. His right ear is pierced, once..and the earring is actually made out of a coin, an ancient coin. Usually waers a pair of sunglasses. History: There was absolutely no doubt that he was going to hell when he died...though Judas knew it even before he killed himself. What he didn't know was that he would be given a second chance..though not to correct his life's mistake. He continued through the ages, doing as he was told, first changing his name. Judas certainly wasn't common, not after his little escapade... Anyway..he did as he was told, never leaving the earth, never tiring of his job on it. He's now coming out of hiding, after the dark days of Chaos, there's much to be done. Powers: Some say he's killed with his eyes...the pools of despair...and it's probably true. After his death he was gifted with the power of the plagues, a special gift to a special servant. His power will poison the mortal body uponcontact, though the death afterward is slow and agonizing. More....resistant bodies, such as the Mistakes, have been killed with it before...though it took quite a bit more effort. Jude nearly died after such a battle, the strain was so great. Through the ages, Jude has learned many techniques and styles of fighting..though his latest favorite has been the guns of the New Age. Amazing mechanisms indeed.
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