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Nethilia

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 1:49 am


Saw this poem on an el-jay comm. Sharing it with y'all.


Right To Life

A woman is not a pear tree
thrusting her fruit in mindless fecundity
into the world. Even pear trees bear
heavily in one year and rest and grow the next.
An orchid gone wild drops few warm rotting
fruit in the grass but the trees stretch
high and wiry gifting the birds forty
feet up among inch long thorns
broken atavistically from the smooth wood.

A woman is not a basket you place
your buns in to keep them warm. Not a brood
hen you can slip duck eggs under.
Not the purse holding the coins of your
descendants till you spend them in wars.
Not a bank where your genes gather interest
and interesting mutations in the tainted
rain, any more than you are.

You plant corn and you harvest
it to eat or sell. You put the lamb
in the pasture to fatten and haul it in to
butcher for chops. You slice the mountain
in two for a road and gouge the high plains
for coal and the waters run muddy for
miles and years. Fish die but you do not
call them yours unless you wished to eat them.

Now you legislate mineral rights in a woman.
You lay claim to her pastures for grazing,
fields for growing babies like iceberg
lettuce. You value children so dearly
that none ever go hungry, none weep
with no one to tend them when mothers
work, none lack fresh fruit,
none chew lead or cough to death and your
orphanages are empty. Every noon the best
restaurants serve poor children steaks.
At this moment at nine o'clock a partera
is performing a table top abortion on an
unwed mother in Texas who can't get
Medicaid any longer. In five days she will die
of tetanus and her little daughter will cry
and be taken away. Next door a husband
and wife are sticking pins in the son
they did not want. They will explain
for hours how wicked he is,
how he wants discipline.

We are all born of woman, in the rose
of the womb we suckled our mother's blood
and every baby born has a right to love
like a seedling to sun. Every baby born
unloved, unwanted, is a bill that will come
due in twenty years with interest, an anger
that must find a target, a pain that will
beget pain. A decade downstream a child
screams, a woman falls, a synagogue is torched,
a firing squad is summoned, a button
is pushed and the world burns.

I will choose what enters me, what becomes
of my flesh. Without choice, no politics,
no ethics lives. I am not your cornfield,
not your uranium mine, not your calf
for fattening, not your cow for milking.
You may not use me as your factory.
Priests and legislators do not hold shares
in my womb or my mind.
This is my body. If I give it to you
I want it back. My life
is a non-negotiable demand.

-Marge Piercy
PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 6:59 am


...

*Slow clap*

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 7:03 am


That was too good for LJ material. Did a good job of handling the cliche metaphors, and summoned up some rather innovative imagery of its own. Emeril gives it 4/5 BAMs.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 7:05 am


It's wonderful. I like how you call it a pro-life poem, but clearly it's pro-women's lives.

Now if only pro-lifers could come up with something better than those dear mommy bull s**t "poems" that have as much literary value as a bag of dog s**t.

Talon-chan


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 9:33 am


Talon-chan
It's wonderful. I like how you call it a pro-life poem, but clearly it's pro-women's lives.

Now if only pro-lifers could come up with something better than those dear mommy bull s**t "poems" that have as much literary value as a bag of dog s**t.


but that would require them to have brains. And if they had those they wouldn't be pro-lifer. Ergo, it's is impossible for them to think and logic is far beyond their capabilities.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 6:36 am


Wow, I didn't even know good poetry existed on LJ. :O

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PhaedraMcSpiffy

PostPosted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 1:32 pm


.............


...Wow.
PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 10:07 pm


eek cry gonk crying cry smile It art teh poignant...I like how it is not overtly angry (unlike, I'm ashamed to say, many pro-choice poems I've read). There IS an undercurrent of quiet simmering anger throughout the entire thing, but the way she holds it back makes it all the more powerful. Its powerful imagery brings up many of the reasons why we are pro-choice AND has, IMHO, enough emotion (and, shall I say, sentiment) to nudge anti-abortionists a little closer to our side. 3nodding
heart Ntropi heart

ntropi


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PostPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 5:12 pm


Yeah!

I love the last stanza, about priests/etc.etc. not having a share of my body.
PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 6:30 pm


Luff... Pure luff... As I said.

The Velveteen Violinist


rhapsodyscacophony

PostPosted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 10:04 am


*claps and woots and kicks anyone who is not doing so*
PostPosted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:11 pm


I can assure you, I'm not kicked! heart

The Velveteen Violinist

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