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 Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 2:41 pm
I was thinking, and i know that theres not a lot of ppls going to this guild which suck a**. but hell i need feed back and ill be posting my Stories here for u fine peoples.
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Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 2:43 pm
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 9:28 pm
you need to work on other parts of speech such as pronouns and work a bit on your detail and imagery. Not the worst piece of work but I enjoyed what i read o.o; Are we allowed to post our stories? even if they're not complete?
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Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 8:24 pm
sure u can do it here, ive been doing it for a while now, but no one sees em or says anything about it
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Bobby-RainbowsandGasoline Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 11:43 am
Dude That was a kickass story.
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Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 9:06 pm
First chapter of The Relics of Divination (Divine Relic)by myself hope you guys like it, if you do i will post a new chapter each weeksinc ei've finally started writing on it again. It gets more in depth around the 3rd chapter so bare with me on this one the first few are just background
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Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 9:22 pm
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Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 3:18 pm
nah nvm just talking out of my a** nvm i read some of ur story it looks awsome
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 5:21 pm
The zombie creek story, well im fixing some of the stuff up so its not really done. some of my friends wanted me to change some stuff. so im gonna change that i get some guns from my house, im gonna delete the whole part about going to save Drew, and the Round table part will be cut as well. im gonna add a part were Brian, Dan and Kevin have to beat the s**t out of some zombies with like shoves and axes.
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 5:15 am
J-Blade The zombie creek story, well im fixing some of the stuff up so its not really done. some of my friends wanted me to change some stuff. so im gonna change that i get some guns from my house, im gonna delete the whole part about going to save Drew, and the Round table part will be cut as well. im gonna add a part were Brian, Dan and Kevin have to beat the s**t out of some zombies with like shoves and axes. that would be awesome oni, liked your story too im a sucker for good stories
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Bobby-RainbowsandGasoline Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 11:56 pm
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Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 2:31 am
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