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 Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 3:45 am
This is my first KakaIru fic, so let me know what you think please! Kakashi teases Iruka a little to much before going on a mission, and gets harsh words and a slap for it. A week later, and Kakashi was not returned from his A rank mission, Iruka is worried. Will their last meeting really end like that? http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2897024/1/ I suppose you can tell me what you thought here, but I would really like comments on ff.net as well! Honestly, should I give up on these two and keep to my OroKabu, or do these two need smutt as well??
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 6:27 pm
I love it! It's so amazing!
Not only was the plot and detail good, but your spelling and grammer were great as well. I could tell you put some thought into it. You should definetly keep writing KakaIru, I'll keep checking. I'd love to post a link to my KakaIru... alas, it is M rated and I'm not sure that I can do that. Keep up the good work! heart blaugh
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 6:30 pm
What a cute fanfic heart I love it 4laugh
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 7:47 am
Are you going to write more? You definetly should!!
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 5:14 pm
I think I will eventually XD They're not my favorite pairing but they were so fun to write~! Ruka's so stubborn, and Kakashi's so lazy! hehe heart And also, you're allowed to post links from what I know, as long as you say it's mature!
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 9:32 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 12:34 am
Thank you very much! redface heart
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 7:58 am
You're an excellent writer! 3nodding You're stories are great, especially the Loveless one! heart
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 8:58 am
Awww that was sweet! And very well written! I applaued your efforts ^-^
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:07 am
tsukiraven You're an excellent writer! 3nodding You're stories are great, especially the Loveless one! heart Thank you! I really do need to write more on 'Earless...?'. The fans scared me on that one! They kept saying 'Don't dissappoint me.' and stuff lol I was like 'I'm just a fanfic writer! Not the creator!' lol Is it wierd to say it makes me happy when people tell me something I wrote made them cry?
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 6:11 pm
Everyone has their own opinion sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 8:45 pm
x_LoveObject_x tsukiraven You're an excellent writer! 3nodding You're stories are great, especially the Loveless one! heart Thank you! I really do need to write more on 'Earless...?'. The fans scared me on that one! They kept saying 'Don't dissappoint me.' and stuff lol I was like 'I'm just a fanfic writer! Not the creator!' lol Is it wierd to say it makes me happy when people tell me something I wrote made them cry? Non non non, I feel really happy when a reader tells me I made them cry. It means that your story was emotional enough to touch their hearts. Yes, please add more to 'Earless...?'!!
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Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 8:39 pm
4laugh I luffle's it to pieces!!!
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 4:26 pm
Hai, hai so write more!! ^_^ heart
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 10:55 am
tsukiraven Hai, hai so write more!! ^_^ heart
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