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 Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 8:47 pm
I don't belive we have one of these so I'll start one, Post and give friendly criticizum of poetry. Here is mine: Hear Them
Hear them come for me as I lay in my bed.
I lay in my bed wishing that I were dead.
For I am not human,
I am a demonic beast called a Reaper.
Feel my fire burn your flesh as I stare and listen to you moan in pain.
I watch your blood fall like rain.
Hear them come for me as I hide in the darkness,
so as they don't find me.
For if they do I will be forced to kill once more.
Alls I'll hear after that is a cell door.
I will try to calm myself so I don't hurt you.
But I can not promis that I can.
For I am a beast not a man.
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 3:24 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 4:18 pm
If you don't have anything nice to say about my poem keep it to your self I can care less if you could write better, that is my creativity you are putting don't, I diden't put it up there to get put down by any one, its is there for all to read and leave nice comments. God, Is nothing safe from ******** negitive criticizum(sp).
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 5:28 pm
pyroknight37 If you don't have anything nice to say about my poem keep it to your self I can care less if you could write better, that is my creativity you are putting don't, I diden't put it up there to get put down by any one, its is there for all to read and leave nice comments. God, Is nothing safe from ******** negitive criticizum(sp).
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 5:30 pm
We of Heaven's Bane.
Dreams are the pillars
Nightmares the trebuchets
Fantasy called Wizards
To entomb the word of hell in a frozen serenade
And extinguish all thats fire
Forge me thy image
Twist me in pain
Words are meaningless
When blood starts to rain
Drain my blood, mortal crimson
Ive no use for it or human reason
This world is no longer under His Grace
He has abandoned his child
Now sinned and defiled
To wander the forever vast universe's face
Thus they became a people worth destroying
Dreams are pillars
Nightmares are trebuchets
Time for the killers
And the dogs of God to stay away
Lest their will to live's expired
Our swords cut deeper
Flesh is hollow
The scythes of the reaper
Are what we follow
I gave myself to thee
I know what is expected of me
Silhouettes rise to defy the light
Racing now infernally
Reaching for eternity
And clasp the world in night
And raged to extinguish candles outstanding
Stars
Embrace the darkness
Hold within the thought to kill
Bars
Surround the sharpest
Keep them stripped of thought and will
Swords of Heaven, hear my call
By the will of fire you shall fall
The time you wasted
The sins you tasted
Shall by my cry ascend to Heaven and incinerate all
Heaven's pillars
Demon's trebuchets
Ascend the sinners
Slaughter the light of day
Let her scream rise ever higher
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 6:16 pm
Show me again
Show me again...
Show me again...
What its like to live without you
Standing pale on the greyscale dawn
Looking into the flowers that I'm holding for you
Before I said the things I said
before I walked into your head
before I smeared your passionate red...... Across my Heart.....
Show me again
of our time apart
So I found you torn and broken
From the cruel words they had spoken
Your tears fell silent in the crimson shade
And we watched these dreams fade away
And now I pick you off the ground.
And I knew it was you that I had found...
Again
But now I can see through you, I can feel your pain
Because we are one person... We are the same.
Before I said the things I said
before I walked inside your head
before I smeared your passionate red...... Across my heart.....
Show me again,
how it was at the start
Show me again...
Of our time apart
Show me again as you held me in your arms
Where we were sheltered from the bitter world's charms
Show me again
The night I spent next to you
as you walked into my heart
Show me again...
Before you said the things you said
before you lived inside my head
before you smeared my passionate red...... Across your heart.....
Show me again
Of our time apart
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Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 3:45 pm
I don't find that as nice, I find it rude! evil
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:00 pm
pyroknight37 I don't find that as nice, I find it rude! evil
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Zachary Plagues Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 8:37 am
I can't write worth s**t.
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 6:28 pm
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Zachary Plagues Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 7:07 am
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