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I made this tonight for a cause that's kinda close to me... my aunt died of lung cancer a couple years back... so yeah, don't really want to talk about that...

Eh-hem, I need you all to watch it, tell me if the timing is okay, if it makes sense, if there are gaping errors in grammar or spelling... that kind of stuff... I'll be putting it in my signature hopefully...

Oh, and if you are interested in the Daffodil Movement at all here is the link to it:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=12913926&
And for more information about VO's dad look at the last two entries in his Gaia Journal...

Note: This is NOT part of the war between Darko and I, this is a personal project

Grammatical errors! NEVER pluralize with apostrophes, 'kay? That goes for the word "daffodil's", which should be "daffodils". "However" takes a comma in its sentence. "Affected" is mising a "c". "Cancer", by itself in the middle of a sentence, should not be capitalized. "Gaia Towns" needs capitals and "bouquet" is misspelled. "Yellow Daffodils" is only capitalized if it's a formal item name, so it should be lowercase when referring to real life.

I can't read it fast enough for more corrections because it's moving. Uhhhh... I know there are more. I saw some other errors that are bothering me, but I'm too slow to catch them to be sure. And I'm very critical. If you had individual panels for me to see, I could bother you some more.