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 Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 2:26 pm
1. TOC
2. Storyline
3. Further Explanations
4. Characters (((Will be filled by chapter 4.)))
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 5:38 pm
Storyline
It is the year 2095 A.D. Just thought you should know. Several things have occurred since the year you're in right now, so I might as well post some events here.
Here's a quick recap for you readers. Mars has seized to exist, well, sort of. The asteroid belt has crashed due to a craze in gravity. It has struck Mars severely, reducing it to some more asteroids. Jupiter has also been struck, but not as severely.
The leftovers were headed to Earth at a great speed, giving the world just 573 days, 15 hours, 41 minutes, and 13 seconds ever since the time was estimated.
The thought of total destruction had triggered a feeling of unity and desperateness in the world. The nations have banded together in order to counter the strike, and it had worked to a certain measure.
The Earth has created several thousand machines, each called the Destructive Armor eXecutor (DAX).
The DAX suits each represent a human but in a metallic/robotic transformation. Wires run thick on the inside and the outside, connecting several features to the user, standing at 12 feet high.
The DAX are mobile suits were in the pilots (DAX Riders) control the suit from within, with their mind and thousand of buttons. Whatever damage is dealt to the DAX is dealt to the DAX Rider, but to a smaller extent.
The DAX suits were flown out to space in hopes of destroying the asteroids with an array of weapons equipped to them. But, there was one sever flaw to all of this. There weren't enough capable users in the world to "ride" the suits, so as a result, only 1263 suits of the 5,000 were put to use.
Once in space, the DAX riders experienced severe malfunctions within the systems. Not only were the weapons rendered almost completely useless against the asteroids, but the mental control section was more than a tad flawed.
As a result, the DAX riders were forced to fly kamikaze attacks into the numerous asteroids. The sacrifices did severe damage to the fleet of asteroids. Results show that only 104 minor asteroids and 4 major ones hit the Earth.
The major ones struck in Germany, Central Africa, the Middle East, and lastly, the shores of the Japanese waters, carving off a piece of Tokyo.
One thing that is not widely known that the asteroids carried several life forms preserved in the middle of the asteroids. The life forms first struck in Berlin, the capital of Germany. Followed closely by an attack on Chad, a part of the Central African Republic. Then, Saudi Arabia, a big part of the Middle of East. Finally, the attacks were capped off by the attack on Tokyo, Japan.
Many reports show that the attacks were composed of several surprise hits by the DAX suits themselves! It appeared that the lifeforms had taken control over stray suits and have build several and use them for their own purposes.
The life forms have been classified as Cranes. They are not actually cranes, but they can be if they want to. They carry many abilites that the humans don't posses, control over their own genes, atoms, and the sort. In other words, they can shapeshift. They take the appearance of humans, and live as them too. The only way you can distinguish a crane as its own is by the beads implanted in their back. They cannot hide the feature.
With the emerge of the new threat, the identity of a new hope is revealed. Constellus, an organization based on overcoming evil and anything that's not right in their eyes.
Constellus watch over the population through space, just for strategic reasons. They have made their own legions of DAX suits to play a threat to the Cranes. There is one but a very major problem for Constellus though. Every capable DAX rider has been wiped out during the kamikaze strike, and there are no known capable riders out there.
Now, the story begins, with the Constellus' main priority is finding DAX riders.
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:47 pm
Further Explanations
DAX: Mobile suits standing roughly at 12 feet high. These machines are of the highest technology, consisting of several wires, metals, etc. Higher technology has let the rider control the suit to an extent with his/her mind, this also has several disadvantages. Any damage dealt to the suit is reduced by a majority and dealt to the user. Nevertheless, it's still a masterpiece in technology.
DAX riders: The users of DAX suits. A highly skilled people who are in no way a select few. They are born as geniuses and are super-talented all around. Genius, atheletes, the whole package.
Day of Rememberance: The event which occurs every year, at July 26. It is a sad and mournful day, in which a minute of rememberance lasts.
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 9:22 am
Characters
Name: Xin Yamato
Age:16
Appearance: 
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 10:28 am
Episode 1
The episode begins in the bowls and obstructions of the hidden Crane camp, deep within the Earth, hidden from the world.
A dark aura settled in the air, matching the presence of the Crane supperiors. They sat quietly, huddled around a U-shaped table. The ones in the opening of the the table had a nervous look on their humane faces, reading for their trial.
There were 3 altogether, in the cavity of the table. The supperiors looked down on them with piercing eyes, as if waiting to see which one would crack under the silence first.
A silent minute passed, and the Cranes under trial still showed no throbbing emotions. Beads of sweat trickled down their faces, their teeth grinded uncontrolably, but that was as nervous as they got.
Finally, the supperiors felt restless and began to speak. "You three are accused of attempting to fly your DAX's into the asteroids which have brought us here. Due to the swiftness of the general, we've managed to stop your DAX's and collect them as our own. Nevertheless, the accusations of you three attempting to fly the DAX's into our asteroids stand. How do you plead?"
It appeared that the Cranes on trial weren't Cranes after all, they were just the three DAX riders who didn't manage to complete the suicide mission.
The DAX riders remained silence, their faces barely visible in the darkness. One coughed silently, but that was all the Crane's could get.
The one which had spoke earlier spoke in a disgruntled voice, "I repeat, how do you plead?" The jury appeared dormant as they waited for the asnwer.
Another minute passed, and yet no answer was given by the DAX riders. They sat very still, holding back their feelings of rage, pride, and fear back with hatred. They had no respect for these monsters, and therefore, wouldn't speak to them.
"Very well." Said the voice again. He snapped his fingers and 6 Cranes appeared at the sides of the DAX riders, 2 two each respective riders. "Take them to the dungeons, we'll interogate them again later." The Crane said with a distinct feeling of evil in his voice.
The guards bowed and dragged the riders away into the darkness. With a sudden glimpse of light radiating from the jury's candles, one of the riders faces' became apparent.
They had an equivalent look of supperiority to match the looks on the juries faces. Even with the upcoming torture, their spirits were untouched. This surprised the jury to a small extent.
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Xin woke up to the howling and repetitive sounds of sirens and alarms. The sounds barely reached his ears, but he was a silent sleeper, so the faint noises woke him up easily.
Everything was dark, at least he thought. He remembered walking the streets of Tokyo to his university, when suddenly an all out attack ripped the streets to pieces. The last thing he remembered was some robots shooting at buildings with their guns, then something heavy fell on him and he fell asleep or something.
It all seemed like a dream, and he was pretty sure it was until he couldn't move. He shifted his weight around and managed to throw off small pieces of the rubbel off.
Rays of light shined for a split second, before the rays turned into a full confrontation. He shielded his eyes with his bruised hands, trying to avoid damage to his eyes.
"Hey kid! Are you alright?" Xin heard a voice.
"Y-yeah." He began to get up, but quickly fell down into his place. Every part of Xin's body ached, and it was getting hard to breath, let alone move.
"Come on, you'll be alright." The man speaking to him pulled him up by the arms.
Xin was now standing. For a moment, all he could see was spots. They dotted everything, but a minute later, he could see once again. He turned to face the man that had helped him, and wasn't shocked to see that he was wearing a complete yellow fire suit.
"T-thank you." Xin managed to compose the sentence.
"It's what I do." The man said with glee. "Listen kid, there's am emergency supplies truck over there." He pointed to a truck in the rubble. It was the only thing still solid after Xin's "dream". "You want me to walk you there?" The fireperson asked.
Xin turned his head slowly, staring at what had become of his city. Almost no building stood, at least no complete building. All around him were scraps of what used to be. It was a horrifying site.
He finally remembered the man's question, and replied to it with some thought. "No, im strong enough to do it myself. Thank you sir."
The fireperson nodded his camp and scurried off to help others in need, which was just about everyone.
Xin began to walk with some discomfort. The joints in his knee's ached, and so did every bone in his leg. The rubble crucnhed under his feet as he made his way towards the surrounded emergeny truck.
"What a day." He said to himself.
Xin finally reached the truck after taking in the sights. The truck was less crowded, and there was only about 3 people left now. They were huddled together, leaning against the side of the truck.
By the look on their dirty faces, they were probably homeless now. Xin kept walking, he didn't stop to pity them, since he was probably now homeless as well.
Just as Xin was about to take the blankets and coffee from the Red Cross worker, something was brought to his attention.
A terrifying noise, something that sounded metal grinding against medal. He turned his head and noticed something charging through the rubble again.
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Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 4:59 pm
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