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 Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:33 pm
Hi! My poems are REALLY bad but I still wanna hear what everybody thinks about them. The first one will be on the second post.
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:37 pm
Everytime
Everytime I fall, nobody is ever there to catch me.
Everytime I cry, nobody is ever there to dry my tears.
Everytime I laugh, nobody is ever there to laugh with me.
But everytime I see you, you smile at me and I smile back.
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Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2006 5:33 am
Not very original. Parelellism doesn't work very well nowadays. These words could go to the tune of that Evanessence song with the lyrics:
"When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears,
When you'd scream, I'd fight away all of your fear,
And I've held you hand through all of these years..."
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