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OrdinaryRose

PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2023 2:42 pm


upgrade for Zenner Artourion
PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2023 2:43 pm


Knight Title: Kronoberg, Page of Jupiter ; X

Uniform:

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Top -- Thigh-length traditional side-fastened coat? Shorter? Longer? Exposed undershirt? Cropped? Buttons? Toggles? Long sleeves, or short sleeves? Sleeves at all? What's the collar like? Is it a dress? You are generally as basic as it gets here and should be something you can be very active in.
Bottoms -- Skirt? Pants? Shorts? Culottes?
Gloves -- Got any?
Belt -- Belt? No belt?
Shoes -- What kind?
Shoulders -- Epaulettes? Shoulderpads?
Accessories -- What kind? Pages and Squires cannot have capes, so please keep this in mind!

Weapon & Magic

Page Weapon: Wooden Cat

Squire: Cat Slingshot: 10ft AOE Static-Based Dazed Effect

Kronoberg pulls back on the band of her slingshot as her magic gathers into a ball, ready to be shot. A storm gathers above her and thunder rumbles loudly. As the shot sails through the air, static gathers around it and, upon impact, it explodes and releases a static charge that affects anyone within a 15ft radius of the point of contact. This static charge doesn’t do physical damage to the targets, but it provides a small full body shock that leaves them dazed. Players can choose to have lasting damage or effects last after the magic. She can channel this magic for 30 seconds.


Knight Weapon: Cat Bow: 10ft AOE Struck by Lightning

Kronoberg removes the bow from her back and magic gathers as she lines up her shot. A storm gathers above her and thunder rumbles loudly while a chill wind whips around her. As she releases the bow string, a bolt of lightning shoots off, sailing through the air to strike her target. Upon impact, the air crackles with static and the smell of Ozone fills the area as the shot bounces between each valid target within a 20ft radius of the original point of contact. The ‘arrow’ will continue to bounce for as long as she is channeling magic and can cause the sensation of numbness or pain. Players can choose to have lasting damage or effects last after the magic. She can channel this magic for 60 seconds.

OrdinaryRose



Kyuseisha no Hikari

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Dragonslaying Dragon

PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2023 3:13 pm


OrdinaryRose

Hey, Rose!

I really like where you’re going with this and I think it’s a really unique approach to Jupiter magic! I want to get you a stamp as soon as possible so I have a few things to request so we can get there!

The weapons look great as is, so I just want to focus a bit on the magic to make sure you are getting the most use out of it as possible and to tie into the stormy weather themes of Jupiter!

For example, for the Squire magic I would suggest these tweaks:

Quote:
Kronoberg pulls back on the band of her slingshot as her magic gathers into a ball, ready to be shot. A storm gathers above her and thunder rumbles loudly. As the shot sails through the air, static gathers around it and, upon impact, it explodes and releases a static charge that affects anyone within a 15ft radius of the point of contact. This static charge doesn’t do physical damage to the targets, but it provides a small full body shock that leaves them dazed. Players can choose to have lasting damage or effects last after the magic. She can channel this magic for 30 seconds.

For her Knight magic:

Quote:
Kronoberg removes the bow from her back and magic gathers as she lines up her shot. A storm gathers above her and thunder rumbles loudly while a chill wind whips around her. As she releases the bow string, a bolt of lightning shoots off, sailing through the air to strike her target. Upon impact, the air crackles with static and the smell of Ozone fills the area as the shot bounces between each valid target within a 20ft radius of the original point of contact. The ‘arrow’ will continue to bounce for as long as she is channeling magic and can cause the sensation of numbness or pain. Players can choose to have lasting damage or effects last after the magic. She can channel this magic for 60 seconds.

If you have any questions, you can quote or PM me (or message me on Discord, I think I’m just ‘Xigglet’ now but I haven’t figured out how that works after its update oops) and I’ll get back to you as soon as possible! If you make any changes, please let me know and I’ll be back to stamp!
PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2023 10:41 am


Kyuseisha no Hikari
OrdinaryRose



I like those suggestions and I went ahead and made those changes!

OrdinaryRose



Kyuseisha no Hikari

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Dragonslaying Dragon

PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2023 5:48 pm


OrdinaryRose

Awesome! This looks ready to go, have fun!

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