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Lilith Valentine // Sailor Psyche, Senshi of Loneliness

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catmagick

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 28, 2021 11:28 pm


Name: Lilith Valentine
Nicknames:
Pronouns: She/Her
Age: 19
Birthday:November 13th

School: Mayet University

And

Occupation: Part-time baker at COTE

Hobbies:

  • Baking -- While Lilith can't cook to save her life she loves baking. Cookies, pies, cakes, as long as it's sweet she enjoys making it. She doesn't like making savory things am much but is capable of doing so.


Pros:

  • I Can Do It Myself Independent -- Orphaned at a young age Lilith had to grow up fast. Due to this she is a mature and independent person who doesn't mind being by herself. Not having very many people around her she's used to doing things alone. Living alone she has grown accustomed to handling the day to day necessities of paying bills and buying groceries.

  • Stay Behind Me Protective -- Protective of those close to her Lilith will do her best to protect her small circle of friends even if it means she gets hurt instead. After having lost so much Lilith is willing to go to great lengths to make sure it doesn't happen again.


Cons:

  • Wallflower Shy -- A soft spoken and quiet individual Lilith is quite happy to fade into the background and go unnoticed. She is nervous and awkward when meeting new people in a social setting. While still uncomfortable she is able to mask her shyness in a professional setting. Once she gets to know someone she stops being shy around them unless overly stressed. When stressed even those she's comfortable with will case her anxiety.

  • I Don't Want To Stubborn -- Lilith is used to doing things herself and has become accustomed to doing things a certain way. She can be pig headed when it comes to change. Having been shuffled around a few foster homes until finding one where she fit Lilith doesn't trust people to do what they say they're do and would rather do it herself and make sure it's done.


General Appearance


Average hight with tan skin and a heart shaped face. She has upturned violet eyes and waist length black hair usually worn down.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 28, 2021 11:29 pm


Sailor: Psyche, Senshi of Loneliness

Uniform Color: See official Art

Primary Color:
Secondary Color:


Uniform: See official Art

Collar --
Brooch --
Chest Bow --
Bodice --
Bottoms --
Tiara --
Butt Bow --

Accessories --



Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Lonely Day, Lonely Night
Psyche summons a bleak fog to cover the field for a 10ft radius infront of her. Any opponents within this range suddenly feel desperately alone, overcome with a wave of sadness as a result. The fog lasts for 1 post and can be cast 2x per day.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Lonely Dawn, Lonely Dusk
Psyche summons a bleak fog to cover the field for a 15ft radius infront of her. Any opponents within this range suddenly feel desperately alone, overcome with a wave of sadness as a result. The fog lasts for 2 posts and can be cast 3x per day.


Eternal Sailor Attack: Lonely Heartache
Psyche summons a fog that surrounds an opponent and causes an illusion. The illusion is dependent on the person but it always ends with them feeling entirely overcome by loneliness. This attack causes mental damage/distress and leaves her opponent open to physical attack.

Effects one target within 20ft of Psyche and can be used 1x per day. The illusion lasts 1 to 3 posts depending on opponents rank with higher ranks being more resistant to the illusion (Stage 3 = 1 post , Stage 2 = 2 posts, Stage 1 = 3 posts). The after effects can last longer if a player would like.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 31, 2021 12:34 pm


catmagick


Hello and congrats again on your raffle win! Let's get Lilith/Sailor Psyche approved for play!

On the civ side of things -- overall, her profile looks good! The only bit of feedback that we have is in regards to the foster system in our world state/the US/Mayet. Copying from a question asked in the Questions & Answer's thread:

Quote:
Foster Care is still a thing, but the system itself is entirely different than the stories that come out of present day, real world timelines. Foster parents are people who want to be, not just people who are looking for paychecks. They are provided with additional subsidies and social workers to ease transitions, providing whatever help they can...


If Lilith grew up in the States it's not likely that she would've been shuffled around. It is possible that she might have been emancipated at the age of 16, however, and as such is continually used to doing things on their own/taking care of things herself?


On the powered side of things -- Psyche is available as a powered name and Loneliness is A+ as your sphere!

You've got a good start with the powers in focusing on the isolation/making Psyche's opponent feel like they're alone but for the emotional side of it we'd recommend narrowing in on what can be drawn from the definition of lonelines itself -- sadness due to being alone.

As an example, for starters, we would recommend taking what you have for the Basic Sailor attack and reworking it into something such as:

Psyche calls on her attack, summoning a bleak fog that fills a 10ft radius around her. Any opponents within this range suddenly feel desperately alone, overcome with a wave of sadness as a result. This attack can last for 15 seconds/1 post and can be cast 3x per day.

The Super attack would then build off of that -- potentially covering a larger radius/lasting for a little bit longer (15ft radius, up to 20 seconds for the duration?)?


With the Eternal attack -- again, you've got a pretty good start! We just need to expand on it a little bit and add on a duration alone with an area of effect. Does it have an effect on just one target or multiple? How long does the illusion last? Does the duration depend on what rank the character it's being used against is?


Let me know if you have any questions and quote me when you're ready to move on!
PostPosted: Tue Aug 31, 2021 1:40 pm


Skye Starrfyre


Her being shuffled is more not fitting with that home then because of not being wanted. I've changed the wording to to try to better reflect that. If you still need me to change/remove that part I will.

I've changed up the attacks, removed time and changed to post amount for better rp ability.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 03, 2021 6:57 am


catmagick


Civ changes are good!

On the powered side: we're looking good! One more small adjustment and we should be ready to go!

Eternal Attack:

Currently you have:

Quote:
Psyche summons a fog that surrounds the opponent and causes an illusion. The illusion is dependent on the person but it always ends with them filling entirely alone causing mental damage and leaving them open to physical attack. Effects one target per attack and can be used 3x per day. The illusion lasts 1 to 3 posts depending on opponents rank with higher ranks being more resistant to the illusion. (Stage 3 = 1 post , Stage 2 = 2 posts, Stage 1 = 3 posts)


Eternal attacks can typically only be used 1x per day, due to the powerful effects they bring with them. We would suggest updating the attack to something like:

Quote:
Psyche summons a fog that surrounds an opponent and causes an illusion. The illusion is dependent on the person but it always ends with them feeling entirely overcome by loneliness. This attack causes mental damage/distress and leaves her opponent open to physical attack.

Effects one target within 20ft of Psyche and can be used 1x per day. The illusion lasts 1 to 3 posts depending on opponents rank with higher ranks being more resistant to the illusion (Stage 3 = 1 post , Stage 2 = 2 posts, Stage 1 = 3 posts). The after effects can last longer if a player would like!


This gives a clear outline for what the attack does, the range it has, how many times it can be used and what kind of effects it has! I've also tucked on an extra note that if a player would like the effects can last longer because that might be something you and another player decide would work best for an RP scenario!

Whenever you've made the updates and you're ready to move on let me know!
PostPosted: Fri Sep 03, 2021 7:06 am


Skye Starrfyre


Made the changes

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 03, 2021 7:11 am


catmagick
[size=11][b]Name:[/b] Lilith Valentine
[b]Nicknames:[/b]
[b]Pronouns:[/b] She/Her
[b]Age:[/b] 19
[b]Birthday:[/b]November 13th

[b]School:[/b] Mayet University

And

[b]Occupation:[/b] Part-time baker at COTE

[b]Hobbies:[/b]

[list] [*] [i]Baking --[/i] While Lilith can't cook to save her life she loves baking. Cookies, pies, cakes, as long as it's sweet she enjoys making it. She doesn't like making savory things am much but is capable of doing so. [/list]

[b]Pros:[/b]

[list][*] [b]I Can Do It Myself[/b] [i]Independent --[/i] Orphaned at a young age Lilith had to grow up fast. Due to this she is a mature and independent person who doesn't mind being by herself. Not having very many people around her she's used to doing things alone. Living alone she has grown accustomed to handling the day to day necessities of paying bills and buying groceries.

[*] [b]Stay Behind Me[/b] [i]Protective --[/i] Protective of those close to her Lilith will do her best to protect her small circle of friends even if it means she gets hurt instead. After having lost so much Lilith is willing to go to great lengths to make sure it doesn't happen again.
[/list]

[b]Cons:[/b]

[list] [*] [b]Wallflower[/b] [i]Shy --[/i] A soft spoken and quiet individual Lilith is quite happy to fade into the background and go unnoticed. She is nervous and awkward when meeting new people in a social setting. While still uncomfortable she is able to mask her shyness in a professional setting. Once she gets to know someone she stops being shy around them unless overly stressed. When stressed even those she's comfortable with will case her anxiety.

[*] [b]I Don't Want To[/b] [i]Stubborn --[/i] Lilith is used to doing things herself and has become accustomed to doing things a certain way. She can be pig headed when it comes to change. Having been shuffled around a few foster homes until finding one where she fit Lilith doesn't trust people to do what they say they're do and would rather do it herself and make sure it's done.
[/list] [/size]

[align=center][b]General Appearance[/b][/align]

Average hight with tan skin and a heart shaped face. She has upturned violet eyes and waist length black hair usually worn down.

[b]Sailor:[/b] [url=https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/16_Psyche]Psyche[/url], Senshi of Loneliness

[b]Uniform Color:[/b] See official Art

[strike][i]Primary Color:[/i]
[i]Secondary Color:[/i][/strike]

[b]Uniform:[/b] See official Art

[strike][i]Collar[/i] --
[i]Brooch[/i] --
[i]Chest Bow[/i] --
[i]Bodice[/i] --
[i]Bottoms[/i] --
[i]Tiara[/i] --
[i]Butt Bow[/i] --

[i]Accessories[/i] -- [/strike]


[b]Attacks:[/b]

[b]Sailor Scout Attack:[/b] Lonely Day, Lonely Night
Psyche summons a bleak fog to cover the field for a 10ft radius infront of her. Any opponents within this range suddenly feel desperately alone, overcome with a wave of sadness as a result. The fog lasts for 1 post and can be cast 2x per day.

[b]Super Sailor Scout Attack:[/b] Lonely Dawn, Lonely Dusk
Psyche summons a bleak fog to cover the field for a 15ft radius infront of her. Any opponents within this range suddenly feel desperately alone, overcome with a wave of sadness as a result. The fog lasts for 2 posts and can be cast 3x per day.


[b]Eternal Sailor Attack:[/b] Lonely Heartache
Psyche summons a fog that surrounds an opponent and causes an illusion. The illusion is dependent on the person but it always ends with them feeling entirely overcome by loneliness. This attack causes mental damage/distress and leaves her opponent open to physical attack.

Effects one target within 20ft of Psyche and can be used 1x per day. The illusion lasts 1 to 3 posts depending on opponents rank with higher ranks being more resistant to the illusion (Stage 3 = 1 post , Stage 2 = 2 posts, Stage 1 = 3 posts). The after effects can last longer if a player would like.


CONGRATULATIONS SAILOR SOLDIER! Your character has been approved!

In order to unlock Powered Role Play you will need an awakening RP with a Guardian Cat. The Watchful Guardian [shop cat] is available for this and can be requested at any time OR you may choose a player character's Mauvian instead! More information on this will be available soon as we're excited to be kicking off powered Role Play sometime this month.

In the meantime, feel free to get settled in with civilian life! We would highly recommend setting up a [Powered Journal] to keep track of your role plays! Once Lilith is awakened to Sailor Psyche completed role plays will count towards growth requirements.

We look forward to seeing you around Mayet!


**Please note, powered Role Play is unavailable at this time. It will be coming soon! Stay tuned!**
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