[Inflamed_Fierro & Dante Ciarán Anam] █ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Dante C. Anam █*AGE ▬ 22 █*FACTION ▬ Hawks (Independent) █*ROLE ▬ Loner. █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Chausie cat faunus. (Don't tell him that.) █*CURRENT TEAM ▬ Hawks █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Hawks █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Leo █OCCUPATION ▬ Hawk
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5' 11 █WEIGHT ▬ 190lbs █HAIR ▬ Dark Mocha Brown █CLOTHING ▬ Mission attire █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Emerald █BUILD ▬ Athletic sprinter/Dancer muscle tone. █TATTOOS ▬ Tiny black Hawk on the lower back. █SCARS ▬ Cut over left eye. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Cat ears and tail.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Firearms Specialist: Dante has trained to master all types of gun based weapons. From their functions and design to their purpose and capabilities. Dante has learned them to the degree of utilizing them in every instance be it long, medium or close range combat as well as Melee/CQC combat. Does not include Grenade launchers and rpg. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Feline sensors: Dante having been born a cat has been blessed with super sensitive whiskers that reside near his ears. The whiskers detect changes in air currents, helping Dante detect approaching dangers or in some cases adjust his aim for long range combat. █Other Talents ▬ Expert Quick Draw, Hand eye coordination. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Expert Marksman █Weakest Skill ▬ Strength. █Other Skills ▬ Gunsmith: Dante holds extensive knowledge of guns (aside from grenade launchers and Rocket launchers.) giving the knowledge to make repairs, upkeep and modify them. Ammunition Engineer: Dante holds knowledge of different munitions and how they are made, this Allows Dante to create his own type if bullets for different functions and such. (Also does not apply to GL and Rpg.) Kinematics: Dante has a firm grasp in this study to the point where he can put its teachings into his gun craft but using trajectories and ricochets to "trick shot" hard to hit targets or those that are not in his direct line of sight. (Ie: man behind a wall.) Also does not apply to GL and Rpg.) █LIKES █ ▬ Sleeping, Eating, ear scratches and tail rubs among other cat things █ ▬ The Hawks, those with interesting...flaws. █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ glowing objects or lights, Fuzzy trinkes and soft materials. █ ▬ N/A █DISLIKES █ ▬ Yes men or the kind of people who act like then understand the trials of others. █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ Whips, collars. █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ Thunder Storms. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Dante has endured a harsh early life leaving him skeptical of many he comes into contact with that along with a deep craziness that is unique in how he engages things with his mind. All are enemies until proven allies. Dante gives off a rather friendly persona most of the time given his feline nature and a few tricks he picked up from his mother Anna but can come off as one that has a slight superiority complex at times. He likes to mess around and finds himself falling prey to alot of his feline tendencies though he can be extremely ruthless with his Alexithymia. Dante is simple in many regards either he likes you or hates you. Dante finds the flaws of others the most definable features and takes enjoyment in both learning and knowing them. He may come off as laxed and immature if he finds someone interesting "If this is as ugly as you live then I can't wait to see how beautifully you die." (Only one's he may truly trust is Hawks and Annamoretta as of now and yes the boy is a little broken upstairs. ^_^) █Vernacular ▬ (Vernacular) Dante talks in a slightly confusing manner at times not always wanting to admit certain things but for the most part he is more inquisitive, sly and slightly manipulative. Unless Irritated or he sees something he dislikes. Dante is very verbal about things he wants and often speaks with a smile to confuse most people about what he is thinking. https://youtu.be/IHaUHKhQ1v0 (The guy with the blue thing in his hair.) █Positive Traits ▬ Easily impressed by things he has never seen, Anything having to do with with the artistic nature of physical abilities make for good of entertainment as any flaw mortal beings carry. Very Patient and punctual. The type to always ask questions before engaging a person or their things at first. █Negative Traits ▬ Dante is quick to determine enemies as is the way of his deep untrusting nature. Dante will not think twice to engage a a person he dislikes to either get them angry or put them in their place. Wrong is wrong not doubt about it and unless told otherwise it will not stand. Assassin's Heart: Dante under his intense training has had bad case of Alexithymia whipped into him and when he gets into the mindset of "The Killer" he subconsciously subsides his emotions causing him to only operate methodically for the kill of his target no matter the situation or circumstances. Such a state of mind makes Dante see bystanders as objects and not living beings. (Those of who have no important connection to him in any way.) This was drilled into him so he is able to kill anyone without question and often conflicts him when he snaps from the mindset.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Dante was alone. From the time that he was born, nobody knew what to do with him; the father had not been present in the nine months since conception, his mother had passed out from the drugs. Dante would become quite used to the feeling of being alone; most of the time his mother would be too drunk to do anything for him, and his uncle would be too busy with his "work". When his uncle did have the time to spend with him however, it was almost always an educational experience for both of them as Dante surprised the male with his quick learning and lack or morality. Still, with nobody watching him most of the time, Dante developed a tendency to become devoid of emotions do to his disassociated life style, which would lead to the discovery of some of his less desirable impulses; from a very young age, Dante knew that he liked hurting things. When a rodent or others of the sort would wander into his yard, Dante would usually kill it immediately, as those things could be nutritious if cooked properly; however, there were a few occasions in which he took his time with this process, inflicting unnecessary pain to the poor animal in a manner that is best left to the imagination. When Uncle Thomas discovered this, he quickly realized that this boy could not be fixed… but he could be repurposed. Thus, Dante's uncle taught him early on that his wrath should only be unleashed upon the worst of creatures, such as murderers, rapists, and the soulless monsters that they call Grimm. It took some time for Dante to learn how to repurpose himself; he had immense amounts of brain training methods and separation from any civilization during the even only made things worse as it only resulted in mental regression in the department of emotions. When undesirables trying so hard to get a reaction out of him he got into a LOT of trouble in his younger years, and had to drop out of school because of it all. His mother had been on a losing streak, trying and failing to find a guy that would take her home; maybe it was how sick the alcohol was making her, or maybe her reputation had caught up to her, but regardless of reason, she was pent up. He still cannot explain how that could have led to her doing what she did, nor can he explain why he didn’t stop her. Everything about that night was horrible and irrational, and it almost wasn’t surprising when his mom disappeared the next day. She left no note, and she never came home. This was traumatic enough on its own, but to top it off, it was only a month later that Dante's ’s resilience was truly tested. A boy one day brought a weapon with intention to murder people in the school he used to go to but he never bothered to ask why the kid was gonna shoot up the school. To be honest, he didn’t really care about the reason. He just knew that he had to stop that kid at all cost. Dante received a multitude of bullet wounds for his trouble, but the would-be shooter suffered far worse. After being rushed to the hospital, it became apparent to Dante that his uncle couldn’t possible afford the hospital bill, nor did he have the desire to do so; It became apparent Thomas regretted his actions to teach Dante and things in the male felines life took a turn for the worse before he knew it. Dante sith the little semblance of true humanity he had left the feline began to question his life to this point. "What was he doing? And was it all worth it in the end." Using all of the strength he had, Dante forced his way off of the gurney, fought his way to the elevator, took said elevator to the hospital roof, and took to the edge looking down at the ground below. The fall was a long one, and Dante can not for the life of him remember what it was that broke him from the world the living in habited but all he knows is that he was dead. By all rights, he should have remained that way. But life doesn’t always turn out the way that it is expected to, and against all odds, Dante was said to make a full recover. At this time Uncle Thomas had been taken to a depression born crom what he felt was his biggest mistake. It was there the feline awakened the power he knew to be his semblance, Inner senses sprang to life allowing Dante to awakene to the barrel of a gun held by a hooded man. A scuffle ensued resulting in the reveal of the hooded figure being uncle Thomas and the loss of something in Dante. Dante from then on took to the streets making a name for himself doing the only thing he knew, The one thing Uncle Thomas gave him being his only solace as well as only downfall. It took some time but it wasn't to long before Dante met Annamoretta face to face and it went about as good as anyone would expect. The feline male found himself at the mercy of Annamoretta as he after a failed attempt at theft and escape. Annamoretta was a different breed of woman and wanted little time getting started trying for information, Annamoretta upon finding no information of worth took in the feline out of a whim and possibly a desire for a pet, Dante truly didn't mind either considering how well his accommodation were when Dante accepted to stay. Dante learned much from Anna, such as hiding intent behind a mask and the importance ear scratches and head rubs...(shut up don't judge him.) Dante found out later on that Anna was truly part of something shady but by then it didn't matter nor did he care she had become something important to him and that was all he needed, It was at a time where if Anna called on him he would do just about anything for her and Dante didn't see that changing any time soon. A good home was just what Dante needed to get his life in order as he was a purpose with no direction, It took the stability of an interesting Annamoretta to help him see that. Year have passed and
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Senhora Morte https://i.imgur.com/LpmPqtX.png █ ▬ Senhora Morte is a set of custom multifunctional revolver with both a 3 and a 7 round cylinder with 8in in length from handle to nose. Senhora Morte has the capability to both extend and expand the barrel. 4in would be added to length of barrel to raise its effective range. 3cm maximun would be added to the width to allow Senhira to take in a variety of sizes in terms of ammunition. Finally Senhora Morte is able to charge shots like a railgun and fire it increasing its range, velocity and penetration power. 3 post to full charge shot. (Note revolver cannot be shot during this time.) █Melee Form ▬ N/A █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol: Effective range of 325 meters without barrel extended. 900 meters with barrel extended. 1100 meters with fully charged. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Regular and Dust. Custom Ammunition Soul killer: Bullet is bigger than normal rifle Ammo and has a second fuse that goes off once the bullet makes impact. The bullet upon making impact would shed its secondary casing to drill into target and releasing element dust inside target. (Can only be fired from the 3 round chamber.) (Bullet does not automatically Pierce aura but instead just does a bit more damage to aura cloaked targets.) █ ▬
█*NAME ▬ Darkness █*AURA COLOR ▬ Emerald █*DESCRIPTION Dante is able to create beings of darkness/shadow or shape existing darkness/shadow into wanted shapes and purposes using aura as a battery source. They can grant the beings varying levels of independence (ie being able to think and adapt to various things in battle) and existence momentary and delete the creature once they are done with them. The Shadow manifestations are amorphous and can be any shape desired as well as change shape at will. Though they are shadows they are tangible. They can be hit with elements but are not effected by the status effects. Do to not having organic matter or being (defined alive) they cannot be set aflame or paralyzed do to fire and electricity/lightning. They cannot be suffocated or drowned either. (This does not apply to abilities that use special features like a flame that can burn anything or whatever.) They have no heat signature and not cold signature. Can re-summon shadows to reset their position beside Dante. (Creatures have 100 meter radius they can be away from Dante.) █ ▬ █*LEVEL 0 ▬ 10 post duration and can summon 2 shadows the size of a harpy eagle or 1 shadow the size of a Lion at a time. █*LEVEL 1▬ 2 lion sized Shadows and 1 bear sized shadow. █*LEVEL 2▬ 15 post duration. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Can Summon 2 Bear sized shadows and 1 African bush elephant. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Creatures have a 100 meter radius the can move away from Dante.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
1234boo75
Posted: Sat May 29, 2021 6:32 pm
Fierro_Fenrir
[Inflamed_Fierro & Dante Ciarán Anam]
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Dante C. Anam █*AGE ▬ 22 █*FACTION ▬ Hawks (Independent). █*ROLE ▬ Loner. █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Chausie cat faunus. (Don't tell him that.)
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ Hawks █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Hawks █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Leo █OCCUPATION ▬ Hawk
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5"11 █WEIGHT ▬ 190lbs
█HAIR ▬ Dark Mocha Brown █CLOTHING ▬ Mission attire █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Emerald █BUILD ▬ Athletic sprinter/Dancer muscle tone. █TATTOOS ▬ Tiny black Hawk on the lower back. █SCARS ▬ 10 lashes on his back. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Cat ears and tail.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Firearms Specialist: Dante has trained to master all types of gun based weapons. From their functions and design to their purpose and capabilities. Dante has learned them to the degree of utilizing them in every instance be it long, medium or close range combat as well as Melee/CQC combat. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Feline sensors: Dante having been born a cat has been blessed with super sensitive whiskers that reside near his ears. █Other Talents ▬ Target Acquisition, Hand eye coordination. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Expert Marksman █Weakest Skill ▬ Restless mind: Dante's mind almost never stops meaning his body is always on alert, While many may see that as a good thing in his line of work such makes him paranoid and quick to react on that paranoia sometimes even before a threat is established. Much like a constant form of PTSD (like Napoleon Bonaparte.) Assassin's Heart: Dante under his intense training has had bad case of Alexithymia whipped into him and when he gets into the mindset of "The Killer" he subconsciously subsides his emotions causing him to only operate methodically for the kill of his target no matter the situation or circumstances. Such a state of mind makes Dante see bystanders as objects and not living beings. (Those of who have no important connection to him in any way.) This was drilled into him so he is able to kill anyone without question and often conflicts him when he snaps from the mindset. █Other Skills ▬ Gunsmith, Ammunition Engineer and Physicist.
█LIKES █ ▬ Sleeping, Eating and other cat things. █ ▬ The Hawks █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ glowing objects or lights, Fuzzy trinkes and soft materials. █ ▬ N/A █DISLIKES █ ▬ "Dolls/Drone" █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ Whips, bombs and Thunder storms █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ Thunder Storms. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Dante has endured training that pushed his mind the brink of collapse in several ways leaving him skeptical of any and all he comes into contact with that along with a deep craziness that is unique in how he engages things with his mind. Dante will redirect many things with his remarks. Dante is a very cautious individual but can also a bit more serious than most given his Alexithymia. Dante has a hard time seeing thing as what they are in his mind things are always not normal. Dante finds the flaws of others the most definable features and takes enjoyment in both learning and knowing them. "Most everyone is mad..." █Vernacular ▬ (Vernacular) Dante talks in a slightly confusing manner at times not always wanting to admit certain things but for the most part he is more inquisitive, sly and slightly manipulative. Unless Irritated or he sees something he dislikes. Dante is very verbal about things he wants and often speaks with a smile to confuse most people about what he is thinking. █Positive Traits ▬ Easily impressed by things he has never seen, Anything having to do with with the artistic nature of physical abilities make for good of entertainment as any flaw mortal beings carry. Very Patient and punctual. The type to always ask questions before engaging a person or their things at first. █Negative Traits ▬ Dante is quick to determine enemies as is the way of his deep untrusting nature. Dante will not think twice to engage a a person he dislikes to either get them angry or put them in their place. Wrong is wrong not doubt about it and unless told otherwise it will not stand.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Dante was alone. From the time that he was born, nobody knew what to do with him; the father had not been present in the nine months since conception, his mother had passed out from the drugs. Dante would become quite used to the feeling of being alone; most of the time his mother would be too drunk to do anything for him, and his uncle would be too busy with his "work". When his uncle did have the time to spend with him however, it was almost always an educational experience for both of them as Dante surprised the male with his quick learning and lack or morality. Still, with nobody watching him most of the time, Dante developed a tendency to become devoid of emotions do to his disassociated life style, which would lead to the discovery of some of his less desirable impulses; from a very young age, Dante knew that he liked hurting things. When a rodent or others of the sort would wander into his yard, Dante would usually kill it immediately, as those things could be nutritious if cooked properly; however, there were a few occasions in which he took his time with this process, inflicting unnecessary pain to the poor animal in a manner that is best left to the imagination. When Uncle Thomas discovered this, he quickly realized that this boy could not be fixed… but he could be repurposed. Thus, Dante's uncle taught him early on that his wrath should only be unleashed upon the worst of creatures, such as murderers, rapists, and the soulless monsters that they call Grimm. It took some time for Dante to learn how to repurpose himself; he had immense amounts of brain training methods and separation from any civilization during the even only made things worse as it only resulted in mental regression in the department of emotions. When undesirables trying so hard to get a reaction out of him he got into a LOT of trouble in his younger years, and had to drop out of school because of it all. His mother had been on a losing streak, trying and failing to find a guy that would take her home; maybe it was how sick the alcohol was making her, or maybe her reputation had caught up to her, but regardless of reason, she was pent up. He still cannot explain how that could have led to her doing what she did, nor can he explain why he didn’t stop her. Everything about that night was horrible and irrational, and it almost wasn’t surprising when his mom disappeared the next day. She left no note, and she never came home. This was traumatic enough on its own, but to top it off, it was only a month later that Dante's ’s resilience was truly tested. A boy one day brought a weapon with intention to murder people in the school he used to go to but he never bothered to ask why the kid was gonna shoot up the school. To be honest, he didn’t really care about the reason. He just knew that he had to stop that kid at all cost. Dante received a multitude of bullet wounds for his trouble, but the would-be shooter suffered far worse. After being rushed to the hospital, it became apparent to Dante that his uncle couldn’t possible afford the hospital bill, nor did he have the desire to do so; It became apparent Thomas regretted his actions to teach Dante and things in the male felines life took a turn for the worse before he knew it. Dante sith the little semblance of true humanity he had left the feline began to question his life to this point. "What was he doing? And was it all worth it in the end." Using all of the strength he had, Dante forced his way off of the gurney, fought his way to the elevator, took said elevator to the hospital roof, and took to the edge looking down at the ground below. The fall was a long one, and Dante can not for the life of him remember what it was that broke him from the world the living in habited but all he knows is that he was dead. By all rights, he should have remained that way. But life doesn’t always turn out the way that it is expected to, and against all odds, Dante was said to make a full recover. At this time Uncle Thomas had been taken to a depression born crom what he felt was his biggest mistake. It was there the feline awakened the power he knew to be his semblance, Inner senses sprang to life allowing Dante to awakene to the barrel of a gun held by a hooded man. A scuffle ensued resulting in the reveal of the hooded figure being uncle Thomas and the loss of something in Dante. Dante from then on took to the streets making a name for himself doing the only thing he knew, The one thing Uncle Thomas gave him being his only solace as well as only downfall.
It took some time but it wasn't to long before Dante met Annamoretta face to face and it went about as good as anyone would expect. The feline male found himself at the mercy of Annamoretta as he after a failed attempt at theft and escape. Annamoretta was a different breed of woman and wanted little time getting started trying for information, Annamoretta upon finding no information of worth took in the feline out of a whim and possibly a desire for a pet, Dante truly didn't mind either considering how well his accommodation were when Dante accepted to stay. Dante learned much from Anna, such as hiding intent behind a mask and the importance ear scratches and head rubs...shut up don't judge him. Dante found out later on that Anna was truly part of something shady but by then it didn't matter nor did he care she had become something important to him and that was all he needed, It was at a time where if Anna called on him he would do just about anything for her and Dante didn't see that changing any time soon. A good home was just what Dante needed to get his life in order as he was a purpose with no direction, It took the stability of an interesting Annamoretta to help him see that. It was one day Dante decided it was time to press on and for some reason Anna knew it, Dante awoke on the day of his departure only to find the beautiful Anna awaiting him at the door with a letter baring a symbol he didn't recognize and a smile.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Kings Pride https://i.imgur.com/PEInSEu.png █ ▬ Kings Pride is a set of custom multifunctional pistols that once combined become a custom high powered long range rifle. The liquid barrel along with the enhanced firing pin and magazine well, Make both the rifle for and pistol forms able to fire off a variety of different caliber of Ammunition of their respective types. (Rifle can fire different side rifle Ammo and the pistols can fire different size pistol ammo.) Rifle with barrel extended is 38in and A single pistol is 10in long 8in being the barrel. █Melee Form ▬ N/A █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol and Rifle █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Regular and Dust. Custom Ammunition Soul killer: Bullet is bigger than normal rifle Ammo and has a second fuse that goes off once the bullet makes impact. The bullet upon making impact would shed its secondary casing to drill into target and releasing element dust inside target. (Rifle only) █ ▬
█*NAME ▬ Hunter █*AURA COLOR ▬ Emerald █*DESCRIPTION The user chooses an enemy (in sight) as their mark (needs them to hit them at some point to put some of their aura on them). In doing so, the user knows exactly where the person is at all times the semblance is active, and on successive attacks/contact they can apply debilitating effects to them. █ ▬ (General Description: In the 3 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Marked Prey: Whenever the user attacked a marked opponent, the aura they implanted weakens the targets defenses; making hits more damaging and bypass more of their defense (natural armor or aura) █*LEVEL 1▬ Weaken: Once every 5 posts, when the user lands an attack on the limb of a marked opponent, his aura can weaken that limb for 3 posts. If its the legs, the leg moves 2x slower than normal. If its an arm, the arm has 2x less strength. If it is the torso, the user 2x less durable. If its the head, the user has 2x less reaction time. █*LEVEL 2▬ Debilitate: As an upgrade on weaken, when the user lands an attack on a limb of a marked opponent, his aura can disable that limb for 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Pierce: The user can, after 7 posts of keeping a mark on a target, have their projectiles bypass aura or natural armor to hit the opponent. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Through all levels, the benefits/exploits that can be used against a marked foe take a certain amount of posts of use to activate.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
1234boo75
Aeval_Silvertongue
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Archetype:
1. Feline sensors: So just to clarify, what attribute does it specifically improve for him? 2. Target acquisition: Can you explain what benefit this gives him? 3. Vernacular: Any particular accent or voice actor you have for him? Not required just curious.
Inventory:
4. Primary weapon: What is the effective range (accurate up to) for rifle and pistol? 5. Blade length of survival knife.
Semblance:
6. I would just add the drawback this is a per combat/day semblance. So that in other combat rounds, or days, he would need to re-hit them to implant aura for purposes of time on semblance.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
So...how am I looking now Mister Judge? Are my less...visible areas more to standard?
....I cannot wait to see how beautifully you die.
► F.N.A.O. 【 Mood ≡ Meh】 【 With ≡ N/A 】 【 Semblance - Inactive ≡ Mark of the Hunter 】 【 Gauntlet harpoon ≡ Right [10/10] | Left [10/10] 】 【 Level | Posts ≡ 0| 0 】 【 out. of. control. ≡.....】
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2021 7:49 pm
Fierro_Fenrir
[Inflamed_Fierro & Dante Ciarán Anam]
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Dante C. Anam █*AGE ▬ 22 █*FACTION ▬ Hawks (Independent). █*ROLE ▬ Loner. █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Chausie cat faunus. (Don't tell him that.)
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ Hawks █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Hawks █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Leo █OCCUPATION ▬ Hawk
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5"11 █WEIGHT ▬ 190lbs
█HAIR ▬ Dark Mocha Brown █CLOTHING ▬ Mission attire █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Emerald █BUILD ▬ Athletic sprinter/Dancer muscle tone. █TATTOOS ▬ Tiny black Hawk on the lower back. █SCARS ▬ 10 lashes on his back. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Cat ears and tail.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Firearms Specialist: Dante has trained to master all types of gun based weapons. From their functions and design to their purpose and capabilities. Dante has learned them to the degree of utilizing them in every instance be it long, medium or close range combat as well as Melee/CQC combat. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Feline sensors: Dante having been born a cat has been blessed with super sensitive whiskers that reside near his ears. The whiskers detect changes in air currents, helping Dante detect approaching dangers or in some cases adjust his aim for long range combat. █Other Talents ▬ Target Acquisition: is the detection and identification of the location of a target in sufficient detail to permit the effective employment of lethal and non-lethal means. (In other words if Dante walked into a room filled with enemies and hostages he would be quick in determining who is friend or foe so he wouldn't attack the wrong target.) , Hand eye coordination. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Expert Marksman █Weakest Skill ▬ Restless mind: Dante's mind almost never stops meaning his body is always on alert, While many may see that as a good thing in his line of work such makes him paranoid and quick to react on that paranoia sometimes even before a threat is established. Much like a constant form of PTSD (like Napoleon Bonaparte.) Assassin's Heart: Dante under his intense training has had bad case of Alexithymia whipped into him and when he gets into the mindset of "The Killer" he subconsciously subsides his emotions causing him to only operate methodically for the kill of his target no matter the situation or circumstances. Such a state of mind makes Dante see bystanders as objects and not living beings. (Those of who have no important connection to him in any way.) This was drilled into him so he is able to kill anyone without question and often conflicts him when he snaps from the mindset. █Other Skills ▬ Gunsmith, Ammunition Engineer and Physicist.
█LIKES █ ▬ Sleeping, Eating and other cat things. █ ▬ The Hawks █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ glowing objects or lights, Fuzzy trinkes and soft materials. █ ▬ N/A █DISLIKES █ ▬ "Dolls/Drone" █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ Whips, bombs and Thunder storms █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ Thunder Storms. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Dante has endured training that pushed his mind the brink of collapse in several ways leaving him skeptical of any and all he comes into contact with that along with a deep craziness that is unique in how he engages things with his mind. Dante will redirect many things with his remarks. Dante He is rather friendly most of the time given his feline nature, but can be extremely ruthless with his Alexithymia but can't help his desire to coy or use sarcasm with his smug expression. Dante has a hard time seeing thing as what they are in his mind things are always not normal. Dante finds the flaws of others the most definable features and takes enjoyment in both learning and knowing them. "If this is as ugly as you live then I can't wait to see how beautiful you die." █Vernacular ▬ (Vernacular) Dante talks in a slightly confusing manner at times not always wanting to admit certain things but for the most part he is more inquisitive, sly and slightly manipulative. Unless Irritated or he sees something he dislikes. Dante is very verbal about things he wants and often speaks with a smile to confuse most people about what he is thinking. https://youtu.be/ymEXyqBqaV8 (The guy with the blue thing in his hair.) █Positive Traits ▬ Easily impressed by things he has never seen, Anything having to do with with the artistic nature of physical abilities make for good of entertainment as any flaw mortal beings carry. Very Patient and punctual. The type to always ask questions before engaging a person or their things at first. █Negative Traits ▬ Dante is quick to determine enemies as is the way of his deep untrusting nature. Dante will not think twice to engage a a person he dislikes to either get them angry or put them in their place. Wrong is wrong not doubt about it and unless told otherwise it will not stand.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Dante was alone. From the time that he was born, nobody knew what to do with him; the father had not been present in the nine months since conception, his mother had passed out from the drugs. Dante would become quite used to the feeling of being alone; most of the time his mother would be too drunk to do anything for him, and his uncle would be too busy with his "work". When his uncle did have the time to spend with him however, it was almost always an educational experience for both of them as Dante surprised the male with his quick learning and lack or morality. Still, with nobody watching him most of the time, Dante developed a tendency to become devoid of emotions do to his disassociated life style, which would lead to the discovery of some of his less desirable impulses; from a very young age, Dante knew that he liked hurting things. When a rodent or others of the sort would wander into his yard, Dante would usually kill it immediately, as those things could be nutritious if cooked properly; however, there were a few occasions in which he took his time with this process, inflicting unnecessary pain to the poor animal in a manner that is best left to the imagination. When Uncle Thomas discovered this, he quickly realized that this boy could not be fixed… but he could be repurposed. Thus, Dante's uncle taught him early on that his wrath should only be unleashed upon the worst of creatures, such as murderers, rapists, and the soulless monsters that they call Grimm. It took some time for Dante to learn how to repurpose himself; he had immense amounts of brain training methods and separation from any civilization during the even only made things worse as it only resulted in mental regression in the department of emotions. When undesirables trying so hard to get a reaction out of him he got into a LOT of trouble in his younger years, and had to drop out of school because of it all. His mother had been on a losing streak, trying and failing to find a guy that would take her home; maybe it was how sick the alcohol was making her, or maybe her reputation had caught up to her, but regardless of reason, she was pent up. He still cannot explain how that could have led to her doing what she did, nor can he explain why he didn’t stop her. Everything about that night was horrible and irrational, and it almost wasn’t surprising when his mom disappeared the next day. She left no note, and she never came home. This was traumatic enough on its own, but to top it off, it was only a month later that Dante's ’s resilience was truly tested. A boy one day brought a weapon with intention to murder people in the school he used to go to but he never bothered to ask why the kid was gonna shoot up the school. To be honest, he didn’t really care about the reason. He just knew that he had to stop that kid at all cost. Dante received a multitude of bullet wounds for his trouble, but the would-be shooter suffered far worse. After being rushed to the hospital, it became apparent to Dante that his uncle couldn’t possible afford the hospital bill, nor did he have the desire to do so; It became apparent Thomas regretted his actions to teach Dante and things in the male felines life took a turn for the worse before he knew it. Dante sith the little semblance of true humanity he had left the feline began to question his life to this point. "What was he doing? And was it all worth it in the end." Using all of the strength he had, Dante forced his way off of the gurney, fought his way to the elevator, took said elevator to the hospital roof, and took to the edge looking down at the ground below. The fall was a long one, and Dante can not for the life of him remember what it was that broke him from the world the living in habited but all he knows is that he was dead. By all rights, he should have remained that way. But life doesn’t always turn out the way that it is expected to, and against all odds, Dante was said to make a full recover. At this time Uncle Thomas had been taken to a depression born crom what he felt was his biggest mistake. It was there the feline awakened the power he knew to be his semblance, Inner senses sprang to life allowing Dante to awakene to the barrel of a gun held by a hooded man. A scuffle ensued resulting in the reveal of the hooded figure being uncle Thomas and the loss of something in Dante. Dante from then on took to the streets making a name for himself doing the only thing he knew, The one thing Uncle Thomas gave him being his only solace as well as only downfall.
It took some time but it wasn't to long before Dante met Annamoretta face to face and it went about as good as anyone would expect. The feline male found himself at the mercy of Annamoretta as he after a failed attempt at theft and escape. Annamoretta was a different breed of woman and wanted little time getting started trying for information, Annamoretta upon finding no information of worth took in the feline out of a whim and possibly a desire for a pet, Dante truly didn't mind either considering how well his accommodation were when Dante accepted to stay. Dante learned much from Anna, such as hiding intent behind a mask and the importance ear scratches and head rubs...shut up don't judge him. Dante found out later on that Anna was truly part of something shady but by then it didn't matter nor did he care she had become something important to him and that was all he needed, It was at a time where if Anna called on him he would do just about anything for her and Dante didn't see that changing any time soon. A good home was just what Dante needed to get his life in order as he was a purpose with no direction, It took the stability of an interesting Annamoretta to help him see that. It was one day Dante decided it was time to press on and for some reason Anna knew it, Dante awoke on the day of his departure only to find the beautiful Anna awaiting him at the door with a letter baring a symbol he didn't recognize and a smile.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Kings Pride https://i.imgur.com/PEInSEu.png █ ▬ Kings Pride is a set of custom multifunctional pistols that once combined become a custom high powered long range rifle. The liquid barrel along with the enhanced firing pin and magazine well, Make both the rifle for and pistol forms able to fire off a variety of different caliber of Ammunition of their respective types. (Rifle can fire different side rifle Ammo and the pistols can fire different size pistol ammo.) Rifle with barrel extended is 38in and A single pistol is 10in long 8in being the barrel. █Melee Form ▬ N/A █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol: Effective range 310 meters Rifle: effective range of 2200 meters █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Regular and Dust. Custom Ammunition Soul killer: Bullet is bigger than normal rifle Ammo and has a second fuse that goes off once the bullet makes impact. The bullet upon making impact would shed its secondary casing to drill into target and releasing element dust inside target. (Rifle only) █ ▬
█*NAME ▬ Hunter █*AURA COLOR ▬ Emerald █*DESCRIPTION The user chooses an enemy (in sight) as their mark (needs them to hit them at some point to put some of their aura on them). In doing so, the user knows exactly where the person is at all times the semblance is active, and on successive attacks/contact they can apply debilitating effects to them. █ ▬ (General Description: In the 3 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Marked Prey: Whenever the user attacked a marked opponent, the aura they implanted weakens the targets defenses; making hits more damaging and bypass more of their defense (natural armor or aura) █*LEVEL 1▬ Weaken: Once every 5 posts, when the user lands an attack on the limb of a marked opponent, his aura can weaken that limb for 3 posts. If its the legs, the leg moves 2x slower than normal. If its an arm, the arm has 2x less strength. If it is the torso, the user 2x less durable. If its the head, the user has 2x less reaction time. █*LEVEL 2▬ Debilitate: As an upgrade on weaken, when the user lands an attack on a limb of a marked opponent, his aura can disable that limb for 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Pierce: The user can, after 7 posts of keeping a mark on a target, have their projectiles bypass aura or natural armor to hit the opponent. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Through all levels, the benefits/exploits that can be used against a marked foe take a certain amount of posts of use to activate. Use of the semblance is a combat round basis so each time semblance is off and turned on again/changes targets targets have to be hit again in order to activate abilities.
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xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
1234boo75
Aeval_Silvertongue
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Archetype:
1. Would change target acquisition to be more of insight (able to read people and ascertain if lying or not) than how it currently is. Since it can come off as auto knowing if someone bad or not even when in disguise. 2. Would need a more combat exploitable weakness than restless mind/ assassin's heart. 3. For other skills: can you add a sentence explaining what benefits/what it lets him do with them?
Inventory:
4. Primary weapon, soul killer: Would just specify this does not pierce aura.
Semblance:
5. Semblance may be a bit too varied in effect, once reviewed. Since its essentially aura pierce, weakening, tracking, and paralyzing limbs. I would recommend reducing it to weakening effects (level 1 stuff) that get stronger and have longer durations as the levels increase. At level 3 could even be, rather than weakening, if he lands 2 shots on same limb he weakens it to point of being unusable for the duration. 6. I would also change wording on your second sentence in drawbacks. Since newer version wouldn't really have passive effects. To make it more of an activated semblance and have a duration/cooldown with it. Would also add if he wants to change targets, he has to go through cooldown first. 7. With this version of it, you also would not need to hit the target and implant aura on them. Just when you activate semblance and hit someone, that is the effect it has on your marked target. If you'd want to keep effect of hitting them to implant aura, would say to maybe make it a talent/skill to do so. 8. Would also add clarification that if it hit any part of a limb (foot to thigh in example of leg) that whole limb is affected. 9. I would also say to make it so at level 0, only 1 limb can be effected (though if you hit the same limb twice while effects active, you could have the effect be the next level of semblance on that limb). At level 2, 2 limbs can be affected at once. For now I would leave it at that so you don't fully paralyze someone.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
[Inflamed_Fierro & Dante Ciarán Anam] █ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Dante C. Anam █*AGE ▬ 22 █*FACTION ▬ Hawks (Independent) █*ROLE ▬ Loner. █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Chausie cat faunus. (Don't tell him that.) █*CURRENT TEAM ▬ Hawks █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Hawks █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Leo █OCCUPATION ▬ Hawk
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5' 11 █WEIGHT ▬ 190lbs █HAIR ▬ Dark Mocha Brown █CLOTHING ▬ Mission attire █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Emerald █BUILD ▬ Athletic sprinter/Dancer muscle tone. █TATTOOS ▬ Tiny black Hawk on the lower back. █SCARS ▬ Cut over left eye. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Cat ears and tail.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Firearms Specialist: Dante has trained to master all types of gun based weapons. From their functions and design to their purpose and capabilities. Dante has learned them to the degree of utilizing them in every instance be it long, medium or close range combat as well as Melee/CQC combat. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Feline sensors: Dante having been born a cat has been blessed with super sensitive whiskers that reside near his ears. The whiskers detect changes in air currents, helping Dante detect approaching dangers or in some cases adjust his aim for long range combat. █Other Talents ▬ Target Acquisition: is the detection and identification of the location of a target in sufficient detail to permit the effective employment of lethal and non-lethal means. (In other words if Dante walked into a room filled with enemies and hostages he would be quick in determining who is friend or foe so he wouldn't attack the wrong target.) (Ex: When the time of draw happens in old time cowboy duels the gunmen at that point effectively use Target Acquisition. By taking their sidearms in hand efficiently matching the point of aim for the sidearm where he desires to shoot. He is processing or identifying the right place to shoot.) Hand eye coordination. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Expert Marksman █Weakest Skill ▬ Strength. █Other Skills ▬ Gunsmith: Dante holds extensive knowledge of guns of all types giving the knowledge to make repairs, upkeep and modify them. Ammunition Engineer: Dante holds knowledge of different munitions and how they are made, this Allows Dante to create his own type if bullets for different functions and such. Kinematics: Dante has a firm grasp in this study to the point where he can put 8ts teachings into his gun craft but using trajectories and ricochets to "trick shot" hard to hit targets or those that are not in his direct line of sight. (Ie: man behind a wall.) █LIKES █ ▬ Sleeping, Eating, ear scratches and tail rubs among other cat things █ ▬ The Hawks, those with interesting flaws. █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ glowing objects or lights, Fuzzy trinkes and soft materials. █ ▬ N/A █DISLIKES █ ▬ Yes men or the kind of people who act like then understand the trials of others. █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ Whips, collars. █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ Thunder Storms. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Dante has endured training that pushed his mind the brink of collapse in several ways leaving him skeptical of any and all he comes into contact with that along with a deep craziness that is unique in how he engages things with his mind. Dante will redirect many things with his remarks. Dante He is rather friendly most of the time given his feline nature, but can be extremely ruthless with his Alexithymia but can't help his desire to coy or use sarcasm with his smug expression. Dante has a hard time seeing thing as what they are in his mind things are always not normal. Dante finds the flaws of others the most definable features and takes enjoyment in both learning and knowing them. "If this is as ugly as you live then I can't wait to see how beautiful you die." █Vernacular ▬ (Vernacular) Dante talks in a slightly confusing manner at times not always wanting to admit certain things but for the most part he is more inquisitive, sly and slightly manipulative. Unless Irritated or he sees something he dislikes. Dante is very verbal about things he wants and often speaks with a smile to confuse most people about what he is thinking. https://youtu.be/IHaUHKhQ1v0 (The guy with the blue thing in his hair.) █Positive Traits ▬ Easily impressed by things he has never seen, Anything having to do with with the artistic nature of physical abilities make for good of entertainment as any flaw mortal beings carry. Very Patient and punctual. The type to always ask questions before engaging a person or their things at first. █Negative Traits ▬ Dante is quick to determine enemies as is the way of his deep untrusting nature. Dante will not think twice to engage a a person he dislikes to either get them angry or put them in their place. Wrong is wrong not doubt about it and unless told otherwise it will not stand. Assassin's Heart: Dante under his intense training has had bad case of Alexithymia whipped into him and when he gets into the mindset of "The Killer" he subconsciously subsides his emotions causing him to only operate methodically for the kill of his target no matter the situation or circumstances. Such a state of mind makes Dante see bystanders as objects and not living beings. (Those of who have no important connection to him in any way.) This was drilled into him so he is able to kill anyone without question and often conflicts him when he snaps from the mindset.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Dante was alone. From the time that he was born, nobody knew what to do with him; the father had not been present in the nine months since conception, his mother had passed out from the drugs. Dante would become quite used to the feeling of being alone; most of the time his mother would be too drunk to do anything for him, and his uncle would be too busy with his "work". When his uncle did have the time to spend with him however, it was almost always an educational experience for both of them as Dante surprised the male with his quick learning and lack or morality. Still, with nobody watching him most of the time, Dante developed a tendency to become devoid of emotions do to his disassociated life style, which would lead to the discovery of some of his less desirable impulses; from a very young age, Dante knew that he liked hurting things. When a rodent or others of the sort would wander into his yard, Dante would usually kill it immediately, as those things could be nutritious if cooked properly; however, there were a few occasions in which he took his time with this process, inflicting unnecessary pain to the poor animal in a manner that is best left to the imagination. When Uncle Thomas discovered this, he quickly realized that this boy could not be fixed… but he could be repurposed. Thus, Dante's uncle taught him early on that his wrath should only be unleashed upon the worst of creatures, such as murderers, rapists, and the soulless monsters that they call Grimm. It took some time for Dante to learn how to repurpose himself; he had immense amounts of brain training methods and separation from any civilization during the even only made things worse as it only resulted in mental regression in the department of emotions. When undesirables trying so hard to get a reaction out of him he got into a LOT of trouble in his younger years, and had to drop out of school because of it all. His mother had been on a losing streak, trying and failing to find a guy that would take her home; maybe it was how sick the alcohol was making her, or maybe her reputation had caught up to her, but regardless of reason, she was pent up. He still cannot explain how that could have led to her doing what she did, nor can he explain why he didn’t stop her. Everything about that night was horrible and irrational, and it almost wasn’t surprising when his mom disappeared the next day. She left no note, and she never came home. This was traumatic enough on its own, but to top it off, it was only a month later that Dante's ’s resilience was truly tested. A boy one day brought a weapon with intention to murder people in the school he used to go to but he never bothered to ask why the kid was gonna shoot up the school. To be honest, he didn’t really care about the reason. He just knew that he had to stop that kid at all cost. Dante received a multitude of bullet wounds for his trouble, but the would-be shooter suffered far worse. After being rushed to the hospital, it became apparent to Dante that his uncle couldn’t possible afford the hospital bill, nor did he have the desire to do so; It became apparent Thomas regretted his actions to teach Dante and things in the male felines life took a turn for the worse before he knew it. Dante sith the little semblance of true humanity he had left the feline began to question his life to this point. "What was he doing? And was it all worth it in the end." Using all of the strength he had, Dante forced his way off of the gurney, fought his way to the elevator, took said elevator to the hospital roof, and took to the edge looking down at the ground below. The fall was a long one, and Dante can not for the life of him remember what it was that broke him from the world the living in habited but all he knows is that he was dead. By all rights, he should have remained that way. But life doesn’t always turn out the way that it is expected to, and against all odds, Dante was said to make a full recover. At this time Uncle Thomas had been taken to a depression born crom what he felt was his biggest mistake. It was there the feline awakened the power he knew to be his semblance, Inner senses sprang to life allowing Dante to awakene to the barrel of a gun held by a hooded man. A scuffle ensued resulting in the reveal of the hooded figure being uncle Thomas and the loss of something in Dante. Dante from then on took to the streets making a name for himself doing the only thing he knew, The one thing Uncle Thomas gave him being his only solace as well as only downfall. It took some time but it wasn't to long before Dante met Annamoretta face to face and it went about as good as anyone would expect. The feline male found himself at the mercy of Annamoretta as he after a failed attempt at theft and escape. Annamoretta was a different breed of woman and wanted little time getting started trying for information, Annamoretta upon finding no information of worth took in the feline out of a whim and possibly a desire for a pet, Dante truly didn't mind either considering how well his accommodation were when Dante accepted to stay. Dante learned much from Anna, such as hiding intent behind a mask and the importance ear scratches and head rubs...(shut up don't judge him.) Dante found out later on that Anna was truly part of something shady but by then it didn't matter nor did he care she had become something important to him and that was all he needed, It was at a time where if Anna called on him he would do just about anything for her and Dante didn't see that changing any time soon. A good home was just what Dante needed to get his life in order as he was a purpose with no direction, It took the stability of an interesting Annamoretta to help him see that. Year have passed and
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Senhora Morte https://i.imgur.com/LpmPqtX.png █ ▬ Senhora Morte is a set of custom multifunctional revolver with both a 3 and a 7 round cylinder with 8in in length from handle to nose. Senhora Morte has the capability to both extend and expand the barrel. 4in would be added to length of barrel to raise its effective range. 3cm maximun would be added to the width to allow Senhira to take in a variety of sizes in terms of ammunition. Finally Senhora Morte is able to charge shots like a railgun and fire it increasing its range, velocity and penetration power. █Melee Form ▬ N/A █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol: Effective range of 325 meters without barrel extended. 900 meters with barrel extended. 1100 meters with fully charged. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Regular and Dust. Custom Ammunition Soul killer: Bullet is bigger than normal rifle Ammo and has a second fuse that goes off once the bullet makes impact. The bullet upon making impact would shed its secondary casing to drill into target and releasing element dust inside target. (Can only be fired from the 3 round chamber.) (Bullet does not automatically Pierce aura but instead just does a bit more damage to aura cloaked targets.) █ ▬
█*NAME ▬ Spectre █*AURA COLOR ▬ Emerald █*DESCRIPTION The user takes on the characteristics of a Ghost-like entity and applies it to himself. Ghostly spirits have been known for disappearing from sight when they felt danger, moving through solid objects and moving through the air as normal being do walking the ground and all of such Traits have taken to Dante. █ ▬ (General Description: In the 3 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Intangibility: Dante becomes like a phantom able to move about untouched with by matter. █*LEVEL 1▬ Danger Sense: Dante gets the sense of danger that alerts him to any harm that may befall him both indirectly or directly. █*LEVEL 2▬ Invisibility/Intangibility upgrade: Dante will gain the ability to become invisible and as well as being able to make others invisible or Intangible. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Spectral Walking: Dante gains the ability to walk on air. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Intangibility: When active air passes through Dante so it is as if he is holding his breath when he becomes so effectively making it to where he cannot hold this for long. The more people he has in tow the more aura used.
Danger Sense: Does not tell Dante what will happen on that something will happen and the general area it will harm him. This ability is passive so it will happen on its own until Dante is out of Aura whether he wants it to or not.
Invisibility: Can only be be done for 4 posts at a time and has a cooldown of 3 posts. The more people in two the more aura used
Spectral Walking: Can be done for 5 posts at a time and has a cooldown of 3 posts.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
1234boo75
Aeval_Silvertongue
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Allo there! My name is KnightsRoyal, and I'll be judging your awesome profile tonight!
After discussing things with the elder gods, we have all come to the conclusion. This is your First Judgement Via the entity: Dane. Inquisitive Asks/Statements: ❖ Other Skills [Gunsmith] : Be aware that this only covers firearms and regular guns, artillery-based weapons like a Grenade Launcher or an RPG will not be covered by gunsmith. ❖ Weapon [Charge Shot Mechanic] How many posts does he need to charge up his gun for this Charge Shot? ❖ Semblance [Danger Sense] Considering his already powerful cat ears alerting him to disturbances in the air, would this danger sense help include ethereal or aura presence? ❖ Semblance [Overall] I have noticed that it seems his semblance is supposed to include others, but it does not state how it can work to include other people or extend from himself. Is it because of Danger Sense that it consumes more aura? ❖ Semblance [Duration] I have talked with you slightly, but I do have to ask since this semblance is supposed to be dependant on how long he holds his breath, which begs the question. What is the MAX amount of posts he can hold his breath in while maintaining this ghostly state and does he improve at each level or is it a static duration?
Changes Needed: ❖ Other Talent: [Target Acquisition] : I get the gist of this talent, it's worded very weirdly to sound as if he has 3 talents in one on this, the talents being [Insight/Reading the Room, Quick Draw, and Accuracy]. The accuracy one is redundant considering the strongest skill is Expert Marksman. So we suggest to either empty out Other Talents and put Insight and Quickdraw, or keep Target Acquisition a Compound skill but be warned that it will be notably weaker compared to someone who has the talents separated so you could keep the Hand-Eye Coordination Talent there. ❖ Semblance [Intangibility] After discussing with both you and the Elder Gods, it has been determined that you will need to list that as a weakness, you're still affected by both Gravity and Aura-effects. You will also need to put in the bullet of this skill that you are unable to phase through people and Aura-based techniques. ❖ For the general sake of convenience in regards to your intangibility and so it does not come into question when others ask about it, please state in your Level 0: is able to phase through all types of Matter created by a semblance as long as it's not held.
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2021 9:08 pm
Dante C. Anam Leo of the Hawks
This is as ugly as you live....
Scared the other guy off did I? No matter, it's not my problem if he was afraid. So how am I looking now Mister Judge #2?
