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✓ Angus Adharc ✥ Dyuubi ✥ Cloudridge City Gym applicat

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2020 3:07 pm


Gym Leader Application
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XX。。。FIGHTER'S NAME
XXXXXAngus Adharc

XX。。。DESIRED GYM
XXXXXCloudridge City

XX。。。POKEMON TYPE
XXXXXGrass

XX。。。GYM'S MAIN FOCUS
XXXXXA scavenger hunt to feed a picky pokemon. This is to help teach new trainers about how to take note of their pokemon's likes and dislikes with food being the main example here.

This of course what I hope to have as a role play element.

The actual focus when it comes to battles are status effects.


XX。。。GYM BADGE & Z MOVE REWARD
XXXXX The Herb Badge and the Z move Bloom Doom

Role-play Sample
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XX。。。TRAINER APPLICATION SAMPLE
XXXXX
Vincent continued to argue with what amounted to himself quietly, so much so that he nearly didn’t catch Max in his peripheral. However when he was located the murmurs stopped in an instant. Vincent tilted his head to this ever so slightly.

“I’m glad we can agree on something Iggy. Just help me focus on keeping the mud under control, I need it to look like good leather, alright.” The brunette patted at the arms of his current chair before propelling himself up as he continued to softly whisper. “Especially if we want to get outta of here unscathed… and perhaps a bit richer.”

Rejoining the crowd Vincent kept vigilant on the host but did swipe from a couple of people as he passed. Finding a new base of operations was gonna cost a pretty penny after all. That wasn’t to say there was no danger to this however. Thanks to Iggy he knew that one of the people did notice the attempted theft with a far off and taunting tone. However the Identity of the person was not provided, much to his chagrin. He give a mischievous grin as he looked behind. The best he could hope for was that the person thought he groped them flirtatiously.

Sadly he didn’t get to have much time to think about it as his main target spoke up.

( "Who wants to join in?" )

Coming from the poker table he saw the host again. Hesitating for just a second Vincent glanced around to see who else would join in. When the last call was announced he fingered his hair back, calming his already touched nerves, before sauntering up to the table with a practiced smile. He attempted to shake hands with the other players before sitting down.
Smiling as pleasantly as he could the thief then tried to flag down a server, sipping ever so gently as he stared at him, as he leaned back into the chair.

“It’s been too long Max,” Vincent said jubilantly, “Jus’ wished you gave me a bit more of a head’s up. Ah my apologies my name’s Micky, if you guys care abaaaaout a nobody like myself.” He laughed awkwardly. Pretending to fidget, he did his best to look like easy prey.

“... So, what’s the wager? Can’t imagine it being too fun without some stakes.”

PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2020 8:14 pm


C H A R A C T E R - PE N D I N G
Your character is somewhat well built, there are some notes that have been taken from your profile that is halting its approval. Please see the notes for the edits that need to happen before receiving another review.

xx[ Application Incomplete ] In your application, you did not provide the application sample. That is mandatory and must be added.

xx[ Gym Leader Focus ] This one is not exactly a crucial note but I have a bit of confusion based on your response. It seems more like a rule for trainers to be able to challenge the gym instead of an actual gym in-battle focus.

xx[ Wrong Location and Headline ] In the Application Guide, you are supposed to create your application in the Application Station, not in the trainer approval area. I will move it to the right place for you but you also have to change the headline to what the guide has told you to make it.


When your edits have been made and ready for another review. You may respond to this thread quoting me again or add in the note" "Ready for another review" in the original quote for me on your character's profile.

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Dyuubi

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2020 7:23 pm


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C H A R A C T E R - PE N D I N G
Your character is somewhat well built, there are some notes that have been taken from your profile that is halting its approval. Please see the notes for the edits that need to happen before receiving another review.

xx[ Application Incomplete ] In your application, you did not provide the application sample. That is mandatory and must be added.

xx[ Gym Leader Focus ] This one is not exactly a crucial note but I have a bit of confusion based on your response. It seems more like a rule for trainers to be able to challenge the gym instead of an actual gym in-battle focus.

xx[ Wrong Location and Headline ] In the Application Guide, you are supposed to create your application in the Application Station, not in the trainer approval area. I will move it to the right place for you but you also have to change the headline to what the guide has told you to make it.


When your edits have been made and ready for another review. You may respond to this thread quoting me again or add in the note" "Ready for another review" in the original quote for me on your character's profile.


Is what I got now a bit better?

Also funny story, when it was mentioned about the gym focuses my mind blanked for a second and I was thinking the guide meant the puzzles/challenges that're done before fighting the gym leader. I apologize about the confusion
PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2020 4:30 pm


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