Here you can discuss the story, ask questions or just chat about random things! I'll put the occasional poll on here for future alterations to the story
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2020 3:46 pm
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Just putting my own note here , I'm in charge with making minor edits and co-helping with art direction on this project. If you've got any questions or overall ideas about how to improve the story , or any visual aspects that might improve my work... feel free to either tell me in this chat, or DM / PM me anytime! I take into consideration all feedback, and the worst-case from me you'll get is just a " no " . ^ _^
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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2020 2:45 pm
Okay Guys! So I read's the story up to the SECOND CHOICE so I got somethings to talk about. so Spoilers for up to the pick your angel thing.
Lets the obvious out of the way that YOU KNOW I would talk about.....WHY WAS KATTERLYN in the woods behind jack's bar in the first place chasing us and If he was there just to kill us. HOW DID HE KNOW SO FAST. our character was only in Lycida for 1 day and a half tops by this point in the story so what tipped the underworld off? Luckily the pink flamingo in thigh highs saved the day with holy light otherwise we would be deer carnage.( On a side note though, my theory crafting brain and my fangirling brain were fighting the Texas tussle for deciding whether to be happy we were saved or praise that stag for being soo menacing....and cool...and handsome..... .////////////. You get my point... )
Anyway, There is also the question surrounding the animal whail itself. WAS it Really from Katterlyn or was it from another being? Like I have so many things churning up in my brain.....I guess we will have to find out eventually. but what do you guys think?
Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2020 3:03 pm
Tanillia Lacrimosa
Okay Guys! So I read's the story up to the SECOND CHOICE so I got somethings to talk about. so Spoilers for up to the pick your angel thing.
Lets the obvious out of the way that YOU KNOW I would talk about.....WHY WAS KATTERLYN in the woods behind jack's bar in the first place chasing us and If he was there just to kill us. HOW DID HE KNOW SO FAST. our character was only in Lycida for 1 day and a half tops by this point in the story so what tipped the underworld off? Luckily the pink flamingo in thigh highs saved the day with holy light otherwise we would be deer carnage.( On a side note though, my theory crafting brain and my fangirling brain were fighting the Texas tussle for deciding whether to be happy we were saved or praise that stag for being soo menacing....and cool...and handsome..... .////////////. You get my point... )
Anyway, There is also the question surrounding the animal whail itself. WAS it Really from Katterlyn or was it from another being? Like I have so many things churning up in my brain.....I guess we will have to find out eventually. but what do you guys think?
Overall I am coming at all of this from the perspective of someone who knows little to no lore about the overall story and/or progression of how things work in this uni(multi)verse.
To me, this is somewhat normal, pacing-wise ... as the MEAT of the story is ahead of us, with the branching pathways, so establishing a quick mystery alongside a speed introduction to GET us to that meat is fine for me.
It'll be interesting how things go from here on , though .
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