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Senshi: Senshi Actaea of the Harvest

Challenge: You Reap what you sow!

Fuku Colour: Gold
Main Color: Orange
Secondary Color: Brown

Fuku: Gold

Collar -- Fall shaw
Bow -- Waist bow
Bodice -- Dress
Sleeves -- Sleeveless
Brooch -- Acorn and wheat
Bottoms -- Dress
Tiara -- Hat
Choker -- Choker
Shoes -- Boots
Gloves -- No gloves
Accessories -- CC

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack:

Wheat Reaping

Actaea summons a spectral, semi-transparent circle of wheat around one target of her choice, and a spectral scythe begins to slash at the wheat--and the target. The scythe cannot be controlled or wielded and will appear as though it is just trying to reap the wheat. The wheat field has a five foot diameter around the target and will follow them even if they run. target will feel the sensation of being slashed at while the harvest is occuring; the pain will end when the magic fades, though players can choose to take physical damage at their discretion. The target must be within her line of sight, and the magic will last for 30 seconds and can be used 3 times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack:

Reap what you sow.

Actaea summons a spectral, semi-transparent circle of wheat around up to two targets of her choice, and a spectral scythe for each field and begins to slash at the wheat--and the target(s). The scythe cannot be controlled or wielded and will appear as though it is just trying to reap the wheat. The wheat field has a five foot diameter around the target(s) and will follow them even if they run. The target(s) will feel the sensation of being slashed at while the harvest is occuring; the pain will end when the magic fades, though players can choose to take physical damage at their discretion. This magic is stronger than her basic stage, and slashes may feel more constant or deeper than before. The target must be within her line of sight, and the magic will last for 30 seconds and can be used 2 times per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Cornacopia Horn

Actaea summons a spectral cornucopia shaped horn which she blows through to activate the magic; as soon as she finishes blowing, the horn disappears. Any ally within her line of sight is granted a moderate boost to speed, strength, and endurance. This is comparable to an adrenaline boost and is not outside of their natural physical ability and is equal in strength to a focused adrenaline rush. This magic lasts for 45 seconds and can be used once per battle.

(Saving for later spell)

Bounty of the Harvest

Spectral fruits and vegetables appear around her in a 5ft radius bestowing a small power boost to her allies to aid them in battle giving them a moderate endurance boost. (5 targets) (20 sec.) (2 times per battle)

Hi Middy!

So before we can stamp your new girl we're going to have to run through a couple of fixes for her as she isn't quite ready yet.

The first thing you'll need to do is change her last name (Bauer) as another character already uses this name and unless you have permission from this player, we can't allow anyone else to use it.

The last few things you'll need to do before we can look at everything properly is fix the powers you've given her; to make it easier I've broken down the things that you 100% have to put in/change, and then you can make your decision from there!

• +1 to Attack won't make any sense to the player base, you'll need to be explicit about what this is. Is it a Mild/Moderate boost to strength, does it increase speed, or does it increase endurance. I read it as strength, but this is where you will need to reword that bit to avoid any confusion.
  
• You need to add duration in to all three abilities, basic is normally around 30 secs, super is about 20 seconds and an eternal attack can only be 45 seconds maximum.
  
• Minimum usage for spells! Basic are allowed three uses, super are two uses and eternal is normally one use (so don't nerf yourself like you have in your super attack!).
  
• She can only have one type of attack, so you'll need to decide which of the two spells you have listed in your Basic/Super you want. Remember that the Super Spell is an upgrade to the basic one, so they have to do the same thing (the super one is just stronger). She needs to have either the Grace of Grain ability, or Wheat Reaping, she won't be able to have them both.
  
• If you decide to take the Wheat Reaping one, you'll need to clarify how much damage the player will take as standard e.g. they'll feel mild/moderate pain, it will feel like they've taken severe damage and so on.
  
• Remember that White Moon senshi can't leave lasting damage or wounds with their magic, so the sensation is very important for them. If you can make this clearer people will have an easier time responding when she hits them!
  
• Her Eternal Attack just needs the improvements above, duration and effect are missing from this as the +2 attack doesn't work here.

Once those little bits are cleaned up I'll come right back and check through everything else, but I wanted to give you some time to adjust the 'big' stumbling blocks so that the rest of the process would be quick. n_n

Super needs to be the same as her Basic, it's the same spell just stronger so if you've picked the Scythe for her, then you will need to use that one for your super as well (just make it a little stronger e.g. Can now hit more than one target)

If you really like your Bounty spell you can keep this to one side and apply for it as her enhancement spell later! n_n (The spell itself is absolutely fine, you just can't use it for your upgrade to your basic spell on this occasion, it would be okay as a second spell for her later <3)

It can take a little more effort to use the support based ones early on but that isn't always a bad thing! She looks good now so I'll drop your Trial Stamp.

Remember when you unlock her enhancement you'll need to send through her second spell again (the Bounty One!), just to make sure you get formal permission for that one as well. <3