█*NAME ▬ Annamoretta Elizabeth Dawn des Requestrian █*BASE LEVEL or COMPANION OF: ▬ Base Level 2 █AFFILIATION: ▬ (List any family relations or friends) █*AGE ▬ 46 █*FACTION ▬ Átlas █*ROLE & OCCUPATION ▬ Vale council member of culture █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Caracal faunus
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5"9 █WEIGHT ▬ 157lbs █SCARS/TATTOOS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Slightly sharpened nails, caracal tail, long elegant ears with tufts of long black hair. Her ears have 20 muscles that allow her hearing to be extraordinary.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Deception enhanced by acting █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Extra sensitive hearing. Annamoretta is able to hear four times greater than that of a normal human being. It is due to the muscles in her ears that she has a good control over this ability. █Other Talents ▬ enhance agility- Annamoretta has catlike reflexes ▬ bargaining █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Anna can pick up on movement better then the average person is able to, her eyes being sensitive to it. █Weakest Skill ▬ Her extra sensitive hearing. when it comes to overcrowded noises, high pitched noises, and particular annoying sounds. BEcause of this, she must wear a gold bangle that pins her ears down, in order to suppress the ability, and have her hearing at normal and average. █Other Skills ▬ laser pointing, dagger combat █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ In front of others, Annamoretta is of poise, grace, calmness, and a woman with a silver tongue. Truly though, Annamoretta is a spiteful, vain, and destructive hungry woman of chaos. Anything she does, she does for her own personal reasons. Everyone else to her, no matter the race, are nothing but worms. Her worldly wish is for the world to fall, and for her to be a leader of a new world. One of her favorite things to do ties with the council itself, relishing on any chaos she can manage between them, and the citizens of vale.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Annamoretta is a complete new blood in the world of nobility and money. Before she married into the Requestrian family, she was once part of a feline clan that had been taken down by the hands of the council for their black market dealings. A young woman back then, she was a part of the black market dealings as a ringleader, ever growing in finance even before she was betrothed. She had picked up these skills from her late mother, who had left her behind at the age of 14. Since that age, Annamoretta had made her own black-market, with her name known as Toriko the gold. Her clan was her life, and for the council to destroy it, as well as the faunus haters known as the tribe to send the council in secret their way, she has hated both sides since. This hatred of losing her life and pride, had lead her down a road of dark, hiring mercenaries to deal with those who wish to threaten the market she had rebuilt from scratch once alone in the world. With so much of her work behind the scenes she has had secret ties with the Band of the Hawk from time to time, leading to familiar faces in the oncoming future, She had met the Requestrian head by dinner at a ball, and it was love at first sight for the man. Using this love he has for her, she has been hiding for years behind their name, joining onto the council through approval rate. She had moved into Vale when she married at the age of 21, allowing her past shadows and trauma to follow with her. Bribery to the poor takes a person to many places. She now runs as a councilman member, while running her black market in secret behind the scene, Currently her market office is underground below her and her husbands mansion, with a secret entrance for smugglers to do their business, and all the while, increasing her profit in between.
█FUTURE PLANS ▬ -to see destruction of all that is worthless to her -to hopefully lead herself into a new world to where she is the goddess above all. █DESIGNATED CONTROLLERS ▬
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Annamoretta's weapon set is a garter holster of 6 daggers, that can be powered by a dust crystal for the tips to fire lasers. There are buttons under the handles of the daggers that allow the firing of the laser pointing. The diameter of the lasers are half an inch, and when either piercing through aura and making contact with someone, the lasers are strong enough to penetrate skin, but leaving enough damage just to burn someone. Those without aura would suffer greater than those with aura from this. █Melee Form ▬ Daggers █Ranged Form ▬ laser █Other Form(s) ▬ n/a █Ammo Type ▬ laser powered by dust crystal █ ▬ (Drawbacks) - These lasers takes one post of their trail, with a one post cool down, before a laser can be fired again. -Being hit by a laser can poke a tiny hole in aura, and for any actual laser damage to occur, they have to his the same spot twice. -Each dagger can fire lasers 3 times at a distance of 20 meters before they would need a new dust crystal." █OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Revolver that can hold up to 6 bullets at a time █ITEMS █ ▬ box of revolver bullets █ ▬ a makeup kit
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Laser manipulation █*AURA COLOR ▬ dark blue and purple cascading between the two like a wave of water for flavor purposes. █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Annamoretta has a masterful control of her aura by changing trajectory and directions of lasers. This is most efficiently used with her weapon, as she can add unpredictable turns with the laser pointing. She is also able to use this ability with interjecting with lasers fired her way. She cannot however, directly have the laser point back at the target, nor have control of the laser once she has made it change its course. Her semblance works based on her eye catching the lasers in the lie of sight. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ (0-99 posts) Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 5 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 5 lasers for every 2nd post, being vulnerable to damage inbetween. "Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 5 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 5 lasers for every 2nd post, as she cannot alter their trajectory during her cooldown." █*LEVEL 1▬ (100-199 posts) Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 10 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 10 lasers for every 3rd post, being vulnerable to damage in between for 3 posts. (ex: 1st: semblance, 2nd: semblance, 3rd:cooldown, 4th:cooldown, 5th: cooldown, 6th: Semblance) █*LEVEL 2▬ (200-299 posts)Anna Moretta is able to add 2 turn direction to up to 10 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 10 lasers for every 3rd post, being vulnerable to damage in between for 3 posts. (ex: 1st: semblance, 2nd: semblance, 3rd:cooldown, 4th:cooldown, 5th: cooldown, 6th: Semblance) █*LEVEL 3▬ (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬
-She cannot directly have the laser point back at the target, nor have control of the laser once she has made it change its course. -
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Eddy_Soul5
Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2020 10:26 am
eijiberry
[eiji and Annamoretta]
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Annamoretta Elizabeth Dawn des Requestrian █*BASE LEVEL or COMPANION OF: ▬ Base Level 2 █AFFILIATION: ▬ (List any family relations or friends) █*AGE ▬ 46 █*FACTION ▬ Átlas █*ROLE & OCCUPATION ▬ Vale council member of culture █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Caracal faunus
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5"9 █WEIGHT ▬ 157lbs █SCARS/TATTOOS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Sharp cat claws, caracal tail, long elegant ears with tufts of long black hair. Her ears have 20 muscles that allow her hearing to be extraordinary.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Deception enhanced by acting █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Extra sensitive hearing. Annamoretta is able to hear up to 50 meters away from her, due to the 20 muscles in her ears. █Other Talents ▬ enhance agility- Annamoretta has catlike reflexes ▬ bargaining █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ conversational skills █Weakest Skill ▬ Her extra sensitive hearing. when it comes to overcrowded noises, high pitched noises, and particular annoying sounds. BEcause of this, she must wear a gold bangle that pins her ears down, in order to suppress the ability, and have her hearing at normal and average. █Other Skills ▬ laser pointing, dagger combat █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ In front of others, Annamoretta is of poise, grace, calmness, and a woman with a silver tongue. Truly though, Annamoretta is a spiteful, vain, and destructive hungry woman of chaos. Anything she does, she does for her own personal reasons. Everyone else to her, no matter the race, are nothing but worms. Her worldly wish is for the world to fall, and for her to be a leader of a new world. One of her favorite things to do ties with the council itself, relishing on any chaos she can manage between them, and the citizens of vale.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Annamoretta is a complete newblood in the world of nobility and money. Before she married into the Requestrian family, she was once part of a feline clan that had been taken down by the hands of the council for their black market dealings. A young woman back then, she was a part of the black market dealings as a ringleader, ever growing in finance even before she was betrothed. She had picked up these skills from her late mother, who had left her behind at the age of 14. Since that age, Annamoretta had made her own black-market, with her name known as Toriko the gold. Her clan was her life, and for the council to destroy it, as well as the faunus haters known as the tribe to send the council in secret their way, she has hated both sides since. This hatred of losing her life and pride, had lead her down a road of dark, hiring mercenaries to deal with those who wish to threaten the market she had rebuilt from scratch once alone in the world. With so much of her work behind the scenes she has had secret ties with the Band of the Hawk from time to time, leading to familiar faces in the oncoming future, She had met the Requestrian head by dinner at a ball, and it was love at first sight for the man. Using this love he has for her, she has been hiding for years behind their name, joining onto the council through approval rate. Bribery to the poor takes a person to many places. She now runs as a councilman member, while running her black market in secret behind the scene, Currently her market office is underground below her and her husbands mansion, with a secret entrance for smugglers to do their business, and all the while, increasing her profit in between.
█FUTURE PLANS ▬ -to see destruction of all that is worthless to her -to hopefully lead herself into a new world to where she is the goddess above all. █DESIGNATED CONTROLLERS ▬
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Annamoretta's weapon set is a garter holster of 6 daggers, that can be powered by a dust crystal for the tips to fire lasers. Each dagger can fire lasers 3 times at a distance of 20 meters, before they overheat. There are buttons under the handles of the daggers that allow the firing of the laser pointing. █Melee Form ▬ Daggers █Ranged Form ▬ laser █Other Form(s) ▬ n/a █Ammo Type ▬ laser powered by dust crystal █ ▬ (Drawbacks) - These lasers takes one post of their trail, with a two post cooldown, before a laser can be fired again. -Being hit by a laser can poke a tiny hole in aura, and for any actual laser damage to occur, they have to his the same spot twice.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Revolver that can hold up to 6 bullets at a time █ITEMS █ ▬ box of revolver bullets █ ▬ a makeup kit
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Laser manipulation █*AURA COLOR ▬ dark blue and purple cascading between the two like a wave of water for flavor purposes. █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Annamoretta has a masterful control of her aura by changing trajectory and directions of lasers. This is most efficiently used with her weapon, as she can add unpredictable turns with the laser pointing. She is also able to use this ability with interjecting with lasers fired her way. She cannot however, directly have the laser point back at the target, nor have control of the laser once she has made it change its course. The semblance only can be activated, once a laser is in range of her defensive aura, and it activates when it is 2 meters in her range. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ (0-99 posts) Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 5 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 5 lasers for every 2nd post, being vulnerable to damage inbetween. (ex: 1st: semblance 2nd: cooldown: 3rd:semblance, 4th: cooldown.) █*LEVEL 1▬ (100-199 posts) Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 10 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 10 lasers for every 3rd post, being vulnerable to damage in between for 3 posts. (ex: 1st: semblance, 2nd: semblance, 3rd:cooldown, 4th:cooldown, 5th: cooldown, 6th: Semblance) █*LEVEL 2▬ (200-299 posts)Anna Moretta is able to add 2 turn direction to up to 10 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 10 lasers for every 3rd post, being vulnerable to damage in between for 3 posts. (ex: 1st: semblance, 2nd: semblance, 3rd:cooldown, 4th:cooldown, 5th: cooldown, 6th: Semblance) █*LEVEL 3▬ (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ -The semblance only can be activated, once a laser is in range of her defensive aura, and it activates when it is 2 meters in her range. -She cannot directly have the laser point back at the target, nor have control of the laser once she has made it change its course. -
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Honestly, this is mostly just buffs and re-wording/clarifications on some things.
Affectation:
- Markings/ Faunus feature: Would word it as slightly sharpened nails here cause cat claws is a faunus trait
Archetype:
- Primary talent: So we don't really do exact distances for hearing (as far as I can tell, I may've missed something; if so please show me and we can discuss it). We usually say it like "can smell and hear three times that of a normal human" for example. But since this is only hearing, I would say you can say she can hear four times that of a normal human.
History:
- Would just mention age she went to vale/ married and if she continued business in atlas while in Vale just for timeline clarifications here.
Primary weapon:
- "These lasers takes one post of their trail, with a two post cooldown, before a laser can be fired again." If you wanted, as I can see how its timing works with 6 daggers, you could buff this slightly to a one post cooldown instead of two posts.
- "Each dagger can fire lasers 3 times at a distance of 20 meters, before they overheat." Should probably be in drawbacks section; though after it overheats (dust being used up entirely) can she add a new dust in/ how long does she need for it to cooldown before she can perhaps replace the dust (1 post would be fine)? Or to avoid having more cooldown to keep track of, you could word it as "Each dagger can fire lasers 3 times at a distance of 20 meters before they would need a new dust crystal."
- Also what is the diameter of the laser beams (would recommend, since its meant to be pretty small, half an inch diameter)? And, if say someone had no aura or two did pierce the same spot, how much damage would it do (hole clean through them, just burn and penetrate skin a bit but not fully, etc)?
Semblance:
- Description/drawback: "The semblance only can be activated, once a laser is in range of her defensive aura, and it activates when it is 2 meters in her range." I would like to buff this part a little bit if you desire. To say instead "The semblance can be activated whenever she sees a laser, as its range is sight based."
- When it says being vulnerable to damage in between (during her cooldown), is her aura still up or does that mean its down? As if its merely that she cannot control the lasers it may be better to word it something like this (using level 0 as an example): "Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 5 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 5 lasers for every 2nd post, as she cannot alter their trajectory during her cooldown."
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█*NAME ▬ Annamoretta Elizabeth Dawn des Requestrian █*BASE LEVEL or COMPANION OF: ▬ Base Level 2 █AFFILIATION: ▬ (List any family relations or friends) █*AGE ▬ 46 █*FACTION ▬ Átlas █*ROLE & OCCUPATION ▬ Vale council member of culture █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Caracal faunus
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5"9 █WEIGHT ▬ 157lbs █SCARS/TATTOOS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Slightly sharpened nails, caracal tail, long elegant ears with tufts of long black hair. Her ears have 20 muscles that allow her hearing to be extraordinary.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Deception enhanced by acting █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Extra sensitive hearing. Annamoretta is able to hear four times greater than that of a normal human being. It is due to the muscles in her ears that she has a good control over this ability. █Other Talents ▬ enhance agility- Annamoretta has catlike reflexes ▬ bargaining █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Anna can pick up on movement better then the average person is able to, her eyes being sensitive to it. █Weakest Skill ▬ Her extra sensitive hearing. when it comes to overcrowded noises, high pitched noises, and particular annoying sounds. BEcause of this, she must wear a gold bangle that pins her ears down, in order to suppress the ability, and have her hearing at normal and average. █Other Skills ▬ laser pointing, dagger combat █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ In front of others, Annamoretta is of poise, grace, calmness, and a woman with a silver tongue. Truly though, Annamoretta is a spiteful, vain, and destructive hungry woman of chaos. Anything she does, she does for her own personal reasons. Everyone else to her, no matter the race, are nothing but worms. Her worldly wish is for the world to fall, and for her to be a leader of a new world. One of her favorite things to do ties with the council itself, relishing on any chaos she can manage between them, and the citizens of vale.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Annamoretta is a complete new blood in the world of nobility and money. Before she married into the Requestrian family, she was once part of a feline clan that had been taken down by the hands of the council for their black market dealings. A young woman back then, she was a part of the black market dealings as a ringleader, ever growing in finance even before she was betrothed. She had picked up these skills from her late mother, who had left her behind at the age of 14. Since that age, Annamoretta had made her own black-market, with her name known as Toriko the gold. Her clan was her life, and for the council to destroy it, as well as the faunus haters known as the tribe to send the council in secret their way, she has hated both sides since. This hatred of losing her life and pride, had lead her down a road of dark, hiring mercenaries to deal with those who wish to threaten the market she had rebuilt from scratch once alone in the world. With so much of her work behind the scenes she has had secret ties with the Band of the Hawk from time to time, leading to familiar faces in the oncoming future, She had met the Requestrian head by dinner at a ball, and it was love at first sight for the man. Using this love he has for her, she has been hiding for years behind their name, joining onto the council through approval rate. She had moved into Vale when she married at the age of 21, allowing her past shadows and trauma to follow with her. Bribery to the poor takes a person to many places. She now runs as a councilman member, while running her black market in secret behind the scene, Currently her market office is underground below her and her husbands mansion, with a secret entrance for smugglers to do their business, and all the while, increasing her profit in between.
█FUTURE PLANS ▬ -to see destruction of all that is worthless to her -to hopefully lead herself into a new world to where she is the goddess above all. █DESIGNATED CONTROLLERS ▬
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Annamoretta's weapon set is a garter holster of 6 daggers, that can be powered by a dust crystal for the tips to fire lasers. There are buttons under the handles of the daggers that allow the firing of the laser pointing. The diameter of the lasers are half an inch, and when either piercing through aura and making contact with someone, the lasers are strong enough to penetrate skin, but leaving enough damage just to burn someone. Those without aura would suffer greater than those with aura from this. █Melee Form ▬ Daggers █Ranged Form ▬ laser █Other Form(s) ▬ n/a █Ammo Type ▬ laser powered by dust crystal █ ▬ (Drawbacks) - These lasers takes one post of their trail, with a one post cool down, before a laser can be fired again. -Being hit by a laser can poke a tiny hole in aura, and for any actual laser damage to occur, they have to his the same spot twice. -Each dagger can fire lasers 3 times at a distance of 20 meters before they would need a new dust crystal." █OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Revolver that can hold up to 6 bullets at a time █ITEMS █ ▬ box of revolver bullets █ ▬ a makeup kit
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Laser manipulation █*AURA COLOR ▬ dark blue and purple cascading between the two like a wave of water for flavor purposes. █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Annamoretta has a masterful control of her aura by changing trajectory and directions of lasers. This is most efficiently used with her weapon, as she can add unpredictable turns with the laser pointing. She is also able to use this ability with interjecting with lasers fired her way. She cannot however, directly have the laser point back at the target, nor have control of the laser once she has made it change its course. Her semblance works based on her eye catching the lasers in the lie of sight. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ (0-99 posts) Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 5 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 5 lasers for every 2nd post, being vulnerable to damage inbetween. "Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 5 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 5 lasers for every 2nd post, as she cannot alter their trajectory during her cooldown." █*LEVEL 1▬ (100-199 posts) Anna Moretta is able to add 1 turn direction to up to 10 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 10 lasers for every 3rd post, being vulnerable to damage in between for 3 posts. (ex: 1st: semblance, 2nd: semblance, 3rd:cooldown, 4th:cooldown, 5th: cooldown, 6th: Semblance) █*LEVEL 2▬ (200-299 posts)Anna Moretta is able to add 2 turn direction to up to 10 lasers at a time. She is not able to control past 10 lasers for every 3rd post, being vulnerable to damage in between for 3 posts. (ex: 1st: semblance, 2nd: semblance, 3rd:cooldown, 4th:cooldown, 5th: cooldown, 6th: Semblance) █*LEVEL 3▬ (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬
-She cannot directly have the laser point back at the target, nor have control of the laser once she has made it change its course. -
