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SSBrosB


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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2020 6:32 pm


Name: Kasem Jindachot

Nickname: Clue

Gender/Prounoun: Male

Age: 19

Birthday: January 21

Sign: Aquarius

Gemstone: (Optional; follows your zodiac sign)

Blood Type: (Optional)

Fav. Food: (Optional)

Hated Food: (Optional)

School/Occupation: Destiny City University

Hobbies:
Football/Soccer - Back in Thailand Clue played for his school’s team and continues to play as a hobby now that he’s in the U.S. He hasn’t found a team just yet, but he wants to try out for DCU’s and has been training for it in his off time.

Spray painting - Clue hasn’t been able to indulge in this hobby as much, but it’s always interested him. Back home he had a bit of a workshop set up at his house so that he could practice his spray painting. He doesn’t do it illegally, but does like to have fun with it. Whether he’s actually trying to create something or just spraying some colors on a canvas, a piece of metal, or whatever, it’s something that he finds calms him down and improves his concentration.

Virtues:
Modest – Clue rarely takes credit for anything and often would like to be left out or anonymous if he is to be recognized in some way. He knows that he needs the help of others quite a bit and is always appreciative when he gets it. He knows not to take all of the credit and knows that it takes a team to win and even if he were to score the winning goal, it wasn’t just he who helped the team to win. Everyone has their part to play and he would rather be seen as just a fellow player than the star of the show.

Versatile – very adaptable. He can usually adapt to things quite easily and if he’s new to them often learns them quickly. He may not be perfect at first, but he can switch from one thing to another easily enough that many people think that he’s knowledgeable in a lot of things. He isn’t necessarily, but he’s willing to educate himself and learn enough to at least do it on his own.

Flaws:
Non Confrontational – If there are enough people, he’ll often cave to peer pressure. He won’t do anything illegal, but he would rather stay quiet and not say anything rather than say anything that would go against the group. He’ll make a suggestion sure, but he certainly won’t fight for it if the rest of who he is with doesn’t want to hear it or he knows they will make fun for it.

Don’t want to face past mistakes – When he screws up, he would rather go and hide his head in the sand than actually face what he did. It’s not that he won’t apologize, but he will run away, literally sometimes, away from having to face any problems as he doesn’t like to be reminded of his mistakes. He won’t make excuses, but if he can literally jump out of a window to get away from it, he will.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


Eyes: brown, almond shaped

Hair: Dark brown and messy, see ref

Face: heart-shaped face

Skin Tone: #e2bf95

Body Type: Somewhat tall and muscular. Not crazy muscles, but enough to tell that he works out at least

Clothes: Hoodie with open middle and t-shirt underneath and jeans.

Reference but without the weird sideburn/goatee combination as a start. Hair style and color wise.
PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2020 6:33 pm


Powered side: TBD later


SSBrosB


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Epine de Rose

PostPosted: Sat May 30, 2020 2:01 pm


SSBrosB


Hiya Bros!

I've taken a look at your profile and overall the vast majority of the profile meets guidelines, there's just a couple of small queries I have for you as you had asked for some crit. Note that because your profile does meet guidelines you can choose to ignore the crit if you like.

Profile Tweaks/Feedback:
  • His ref link isn't there if you were intending to use that? This is a "just in case" and you were going to go back and search for it when you got a slot!
  • Your Fav/Hated Foods, are you intending to fill these out or like the Blood Types etc are you leaving these as optional? Either is fine, but at the moment it looks like that part of your profile is incomplete so if you can adjust that to either have something in it or return it to optional, that will make it more clear for us.
  • His skin tone isn't filled in, just a simple description is fine if you haven't settled on any hex codes etc.
  • You say in his Flaws that he "Caves in to Peer Pressure", reading that I would assume that he would committ illegal acts. Since you specified he doesn't do that I would suggest that 'Non Confrontational' would probably be a better one to use? Since he doesn't speak up when people are doing something bad etc and doesn't necessarily stop them this is still fine as a flaw! But since he's not completely caving in to peer pressure and committing any crimes himself I wouldn't say he's caving entirely! This is me being 'picky' in terms of word use so you can ignore this one if you would prefer to use your own, that's absolutely fine. n_n


Just let me know (quote me!) if you want to go ahead with what you have and would prefer a stamp so that I can get that done for you, but overall this is the only 'crit' I would have for your profile at the moment!


(Should you choose to go with a powered side for him later you'll need to create a new thread specifically for his powered side so that we can review that one for you too.)
PostPosted: Sun Jul 12, 2020 3:53 pm


Epine de Rose
Finally made the changes. Apologies for not having the refs there, it was made at a time I thought they were there and then they weren't and maybe I posted while I lacked sleep or something lol.

Changed foods to optional and added the BBcode for the skintone

And then changed the peer pressure to non-confrontational and I agree with you on that!

I'll work on his powered side later as it's going to take some time to get!

Please tell me if there's anything else I need to change for him!


SSBrosB


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Epine de Rose

PostPosted: Sun Jul 12, 2020 4:49 pm


SSBrosB

We'll just drop him a lovely lil stamp for his Civ side for now! You can work on his powered side whenever you're ready to pursue an upgrade for him. n_n
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2020 2:22 pm


SSBrosB


Looks good to me!

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