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Sami-Fire

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 24, 2020 6:15 pm


Name: Mia Themelis

Nickname: Mimi, Mii, and... that's kind of it.

Gender/Pronoun: Female, She/Her

Age: 18

Birthday: November 22

Sign: Sagittarius

Gemstone: [Nah.]

Blood Type: O

Fav. Food: Spicy soups with lots of meat and noodles. The more burning, the better!

Hated Food: Mushrooms. They're disappointing, somehow.

School/Occupation: Destiny City University

Hobbies: What does your character do outside of schoo/workl during their civilian life? Note that this is an activity that they do on a regular basis, and reflects their personality. How often do they do this activity? Why? Note that if it's a once-in-a-blue-moon activity, then it's most likely not a hobby. List at least two, just try not to go overboard.

Working Out - Mia is kind of a lady musclehead. She's very physically active, whether it's pumping iron or running. Mostly running these days. Given how energetic she is and her need to be moving something at most times, it's not surprising that she has a lot of energy to burn for her workouts.

(Trivia: She has worked out to this before.)

Anime - Tales of heroic men and women who call their attacks and and declare their intentions in dramatic speeches captivate Mia's heart. The louder they shout, the more hot blooded they get, the higher the stakes, the more into it she is. Some sillier slice of life entries get on her watch list too, but boy howdy does she love her over the top action animes.

Virtues: These are positive aspects about your character's personality that affects them on a daily basis. Specifically, these are non-physical traits (such as 'generous', 'kind' and 'outgoing') that other people will look up to your character for having. All profiles have a minimum of two virtues (and a maximum of four).

Eager - Mia is borderline zealous in all things. She's brimming with energy and vigor and good cheer. She jumps into her tasks and interactions with gusto, and there's a sense that she's always having a good time with whatever she's doing.

Disciplined - Not all of Mia's energy flies off into the ether. When she receives an important task or needs to do something difficult, she throws all her concentration at the matter at hand. She sees what she starts through to the end, and won't stop till the process is complete.

Compassionate - Mia has strong senses of justice and empathy, which combine to make her a good listener who does her best to understand and feel for those around her. She wants to hear out her troubled friends and help them the best she can, and she knows that the little gestures can help lift someone's mood.

Flaws: Second verse, same as the first. Things that are not flaws: 'clumsy', 'hates seeing people hurt their friends', phobias, mental illnesses, diseases, being 'too nice' (unless they are SO NICE that it is an ACTUAL FLAW), etc. Like the virtues, these are non-physical traits about your character that affects them daily, however these are attributes about your character that give other people reason to look DOWN on your character. Your profile must have a minimum of two flaws, and a maximum of four.

Dramatic - Mia has a ridiculous flair for the dramatic that makes you wonder what planet she's really on. She gives full on speeches with alarming regularity, complete with exaggerated gestures. If she wants to pose and shout and over-deliver her messages, she absolutely will. There's a worrying sense of detachment from reality when she gets into these modes, because she prizes the "impact" of what she's doing over the consequences or other obstacles. She's in the wrong anime... well, actually, she's not in an anime at all, and sometimes she doesn't get that.

Impatient - Mia has no chill. She fidgets, she taps on surfaces, she does little steppy dances. Waiting for anything, especially when she has other things to do, utterly throws her off, and she acts up when she thinks something is taking too long. That can be anything as simple as her order at a restaurant to as complex as not reaching some standard she has set for herself "fast enough."

Impulsive - Mia acts quickly, but it's always on her first judgment. Even if time is of the essence, her being too quick to act always causes her to miss an important detail, and that often leads to her downfall one way or another.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Teal eyes? Wide and expressive. (red if we go with mint hair)

Hair: I know she has an undercut. Arguing over whether red hair or
light green hair though. (or both?!) (Could try a minty color?)

Face: Oval face, clear complexion.

Skin Tone: Tanned. Best off eyedropping from my reference.

Body Type: She's tallish at 5'8", with a very athletic build. Girl works out.

Clothes: She's the queen of sports bras and shorts. She doesn't like clothes that much, apparently.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 24, 2020 6:24 pm


Senshi: Makhaon, Senshi of Firewalking

Challenge: Trails of fire, you always knew...

Fuku Colour: Main and secondary. Give us a hex code if you'd like. The bodices of Order Senshi (including chibis) will always be white, and the bodices for Dark Mirror and Corrupted Senshi will always be black.
Main Color: Red
Secondary Color: Yellow? Teal? TBD.

Fuku:

Reference pictures may be used in place of descriptions, but please be prepared to give extra detail if your artist requires it!

Collar -- Probably a plain sailor collar with a white line on it.
Bow -- I want to make the bow fancy but let's just make it a regular bow...
Bodice -- SPORTS BRA AHOY (thanks Aina)
Sleeves -- I don't think so.
Brooch -- Shaped like a flame!
Bottoms -- Puff shorts (thanks Galo).
Tiara -- Every Order senshi is required to have some form of tiara. Beaded? Traditional? Woven fabric across your forehead? Corrupted Senshi do not need a tiara; instead they have a black star in their forehead. - I DON'T KNOOOOOOOW SOB
Choker -- I DON'T KNOW.
Shoes -- Longish boots with belts on them? (thanks Lio? jerk)
Gloves -- Probably. I'll work it out when I get there.
Accessories -- Earrings maybe?

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word.

[I need help with these in terms of variation, scope, and sphere applicability, please and thank you dear mods]

Sailor Scout Attack: Trails of Fire
Makhaon takes one step forward and calls the attack name. A blazing mound about 3 feet in area forms under her or one target. The mound will invigorate and energize allies and heal superficial scrapes and cuts. Enemies receive no benefit from the fire and may find it uncomfortably hot. The blazes last for 30 seconds before disappearing. This attack can be used up to 3 times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Trails of Inferno
Makhaon steps forward and back and calls the attack name. A blazing mound about 6 feet in area forms under her or one target, with the ability to target up to three targets total. Mounds that are close together may merge to create a defensive area that allies can stand on (the mounds are low to the ground). The fires will invigorate and energize allies, and heal deeper cuts and bruises. Enemies will receive no benefit from the fire and will find it uncomfortably hot. The blazes last for 35 seconds before disappearing. This attack can be used up to 2 times per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Complete Underfoot Combustion

Makhaon raises her hands to the sky and calls the attack name. Blue flames shoot out of the ground under her and up to three other targets. The affected targets will find they leave a trail of blue flames wherever they move. Walking into the trails will have no effect on allies (aside from feeling a bit warm) but will feel very hot to enemies (burns may form at player discretion; the heat is uniform regardless of the affected character's rank). If the trails merge or loop on themselves at all, a burst of fire will form that acts as a small (3 foot area) AoE area of offense to enemies.The attack lasts for 45 seconds and can only be used once.

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PostPosted: Sun May 24, 2020 7:37 pm


Sami-Fire

It's me! *Wave*

Firstly, I think I know someone who will bond with her over her hatred of Mushrooms. Secondly, she's going to be a firecracker that'll be hard to tame, we'll have to make sure someone keeps her in check! =P

In regards to her attacks there are some bits that probably need some clarity at this stage:
  • Overall, the attacks themselves sound fine. She sounds like she's designed to be the buff/debuffer type of combat style.

    Power Durations
  • The duration of her first attack seems too high, can it be lowered a bit? Bringing this one down to around 25-30secs will bring it in to line with other senshi of her level.
  • The duration of her second attack seems a little too high, can you lower it? Closer to the 30s is probably more in line with other senshi at the super level.
  • No changes needed in regards to duration for the third attack, this actually aligns to the expected Eternal power levels!

    Additional Detail in Powers
  • For Trails of Fire/Trails of Inferno - What do you mean by 'healing' and 'defence' boosts, can you be slightly more specific in terms of affects e.g. does it heal wounds, does it invigorate, what sort of endurance does it give. In some cases, depending on the rank of the opponent, would they have an easier time breaking through any of the defensive aspects of these two skills etc?

  • Underfoot Combustion - This visually stunning attack looks amazing in my head but the feedback for this one is similar. The offensive strength is somewhat vague, is there a way to go into detail for it in some way such as increased vigor, what kind of strength they might get e.g. Move Faster/Hit Harder/Magic Boost etc.

  • Overall Burn Details on all three attacks - Do they have varying degrees of "Oh my god it's hot!" sensations or does it stay static across all three? Do stronger power leveled characters e.g if she fought an Eternal while she was newly awakened, have the ability to shrug off these sensations or be less affected by them?


Overall the attacks are in a good shape, they're just missing some of the more specific elements needed to make it clear to both friend and foe as to what they do for RP purposes. If we can get that clarified then it'll be easier for people to RP what's happening to them. n_n
PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2020 7:59 pm


Epine de Rose


Heyo! I... think I fixed it. Basic and Super are now defensive affecting allies only, and Eternal is offensive affecting enemies only. Let me know what you think (or if I missed something)!

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 09, 2020 9:33 am


Sami-Fire
My final, final stupid question of the day (promise)!

By defensive area in her Trails of Inferno are you talking about convenient things to hide behind on occasions or something else (legit I think she's pretty much good to go this is the last thing I just need to confirm haha)?
PostPosted: Tue Jun 09, 2020 4:42 pm


Epine de Rose


No worries! The mounds aren't very tall, so it's just an area you can stand in to receive the benefits. I updated info to reflect that.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 09, 2020 5:54 pm


Sami-Fire


Gotcha, I think that covers off the curiosity I had. The powers look good now from what I can see.

Here's a stamp for you and we'll get our lovely GMs to make sure I'm not missing anything. n_n
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2020 7:06 am


Sami-Fire


Have fun!

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