"Nothing is true, everything is permitted." █*NAME ▬ Rain Murasaki █*AGE ▬ 18 █*FACTION ▬ ℣ale █*ROLE ▬ Student. █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Rain █OCCUPATION ▬ Assassin █Theme Songs ▬ Theme song Battle theme
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'8 █WEIGHT ▬ 125 lb
█HAIR ▬ Brown █CLOTHING ▬ Battle outfitAt home/ relax outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ N/A █EYES ▬ Brown, but blue when semblence is on █BUILD ▬ looks skinny but its built █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ N/A █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Assassination: Being trained as an assassin she is quite verse in using her weapon for close combat, memorizing specific pressure points, and areas of weakness so she can make the killing blow. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ The art of Stealth: Along with her Assassination skills shes been trained in the art of stealth, but the ones she excels in is hiding herself when shes being specifically being searched by someone else. If she knows someone is out to get her she can hide from them and slip by. █Other Talents ▬ - Calm and collected: Never freaks out even if pure chaos she is always calm and collected and thinks things through rather than going in without thinking. - Speedy: Moves faster than most people, able to go in fast and get out fast, as well as making her movements fast as well. Compared to the average human being, shes above average level compared to most in terms of speed. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Close quick combat █Weakest Skill ▬ Long Range combat █Other Skills ▬ Expert in making the best bento boxes, Seems to know every random fact out there, and Memorized all pressure points on any Human/Faunus.
█LIKES █ ▬ Making Bento boxes/cooking █ ▬ Nice Extroverts █ ▬ Ramen █ ▬ All types of Knives █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ Assholes █ ▬ Gelatin thats not used for dessert █ ▬ Strong Medicine █ ▬ Cats █ ▬ Losing her eyesight █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ At first glace Rain is a quiet, emotionless, keep to herself type of person, and has RBF, once you see more of her the first glance was correct. She doesn't like to stand out nor like to be the center of attention, much like an introvert she tends to keep many things to herself unless specifically asked for her opinion on one matter. Although shes quiet shes not shy at all in anything she is confident and forward with her thinking, she also enjoys the company of extroverts. Extroverts seem to bring out the best in her and makes her talk more and show more expressions, her usual RBF sometimes makes people steer away from her. █Vernacular ▬ Talks in a serious and professional like tone most of the time, rarely she will out of tone or break her RBF. Sample of how she talks █Positive Traits ▬ Shes always looking to share her bento box making skills with other people and enjoy making new friends, even though shes among the people who are introverts, she accepts extroverts with open arms. █Negative Traits ▬ Due to her emotionless and serious attitude and her random facts that sometimes come out of no where she scared people off. Rather than apologizing or making up for it, she sees people that do that and cut them off completely from her life. Those that walk away the first time from her she black lists them from her life.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Rain doesn't remember her parents much if anything all she has of them were just words given to her by her teacher, she was sold off to a master for money she was still a toddler when it happened. For all she knew her parents left her for dead not caring for her well being, fortunately the person she was sold to wasn't bad at all he owned a hotel and was looking for more workers. She was given free room and board and was treated pretty well by the others it ran more like an orphanage then anything. Growing up in the hotel she found that the people who stayed there were mostly important figures or mafia men but she had never seen them leave either which was quite odd since she worked the front desk. One night she went to go check on one of the people staying at the hotel, opening the door to see if he needed anything she witnessed the owner and another staff standing over the person who stayed in the room dead. From seeing a dead body for the first time she passed out right there, when she woke her master was there as well as the other workers. then they started to explain how they weren't just a hotel but they were a secret organization of Assassins that assassinated bad men that cause problems in the nice society. But instead of telling her she could leave he wanted to start teaching her to become an assassin herself but only if she was ok for it. Since this was the only family she had ever known so accepted the offer to become an Assassin with her family. Training was hard and brutal but she never gave up and continued to become one so she could help out her family, through this her semblence was found and it helped in the assassinations. When she became older the owner wanted to send her to school thinking that it would be a good chance for her to gain a better experience outside of just the hotel and maybe increase her skill as well. So he sent her to Beacon academy as a student, she was always welcome to come back to visit but he wanted her to become a huntress to aid them more.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Black Steel █ ▬ Rain's weapon which goes from Dagger form to Revolver █Melee Form ▬ Dagger █Ranged Form ▬ Revolver, 6 bullets █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Carries around at least 10 different knives on her █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Wallet with ID and some money █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Gravity Stampede █*AURA COLOR ▬ Purple █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ By creating a glyph under her making her the center point, anything that enters into the glyph will feel an intense pressure of gravity falling on top of them. With each level the glyph becomes bigger and the weight of the gravity becomes heavier, shes even able to slow down projectiles as well. The glyph moves with her instead of being placed in one area, shes the only one whos not affected by the gravity. Glyph takes one post (starting post) for it to form up fully, if the person doesn't leave it in their next post they will be affected by the semblence. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Glyph is 5 feet high and around, if someones in the glyph one would feel as if they have some weights all around their body weighing them down. But its not too much at all, it would feel a bit uncomfortable and movement will be awkward. Lasts for 5 posts, 5 post cooldown before using again. █*LEVEL 1▬ Glyph is increased to 10 feet high and around, from here the weight is increased a lot more it feels as if the person is tired, movement starts to begin sluggish and slow. Lasts for 4 posts, 5 post cooldown. █*LEVEL 2▬ Glyph is increased to 15 feet high and around, at this point the person will start to feel as if they're exhausted. Movements is sluggish and very slow, the body doesn't want to move anymore due to the sheer weight of the gravity falling on them. Its at this level that projectiles will start to fall down and not run its course making them easier to dodge. Lasts for 3 posts, 5 post cooldown █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Glyph increases to 20 feet high and around. From here the weight of the gravity is tremendous, the person would feel as if a house fell on top of them forcing them to the ground if their not ready. Movement becomes dull and almost immovable, the constant feeling of the heavy gravity wouldn't allow the body to move in their own terms. Projectiles will lose their speed and fall to the ground before it can make their destination. Lasts for 2 posts, 4 post cooldown. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ - Semblence is weak to any attacks that come from the ground up; if someone were to come up from the ground or the use of any traps. - Semblence is activated by the glyph that appears, people who pay attention will be able to notice it form up since they can see the glyph. - At early levels the semblence cannot stop projectiles or long range combat, only starting at level 3 it will start to affect it. Projectiles such as high velocity rounds will hit her from level 2 and below, while at level 3 it will start to slow down giving her a chance to dodge. - Due to her eyes glowing whenever her semblence is active if someone were to pick up on that they could exploit that as well. - A person has to have a primary talent for strength in order to not feel the effects of level 0 to 1, level 2 to 3 they will need a specific semblence that increases their strength to not be affected by it.
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xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
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Aeval_Silvertongue
Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2020 6:18 pm
N7-Rain
[N7-Rain, Rain Murasaki]
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
"Nothing is true, everything is permitted." █*NAME ▬ Rain Murasaki █*AGE ▬ 18 █*FACTION ▬ ℣ale █*ROLE ▬ Student. █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Rain █OCCUPATION ▬ Assassin █Theme Songs ▬ Theme song Battle theme
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'8 █WEIGHT ▬ 110 lb
█HAIR ▬ Brown █CLOTHING ▬ Battle outfitAt home/ relax outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ N/A █EYES ▬ Brown, but blue when semblence is on █BUILD ▬ looks skinny but its built █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ N/A █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Assassinations █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Enhanced Agility █Other Talents ▬ Enhanced Endurance and Enhanced Speed █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Close quick combat █Weakest Skill ▬ Long Range combat █Other Skills ▬ Expert in making the best bento boxes, Seems to know every random fact out there, and Memorized all pressure points on any body, human, fauna and grimms.
█LIKES █ ▬ Making Bento boxes/cooking █ ▬ Nice Extroverts █ ▬ Ramen █ ▬ All types of Knives █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ Assholes █ ▬ Gelatin thats not used for dessert █ ▬ Strong Medicine █ ▬ Cats █ ▬ Losing her eyesight █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ At first glace Rain is a quiet, emotionless, keep to herself type of person, and has RBF, once you see more of her the first glance was correct. She doesn't like to stand out nor like to be the center of attention, much like an introvert she tends to keep many things to herself unless specifically asked for her opinion on one matter. Although shes quiet shes not shy at all in anything she is confident and forward with her thinking, she also enjoys the company of extroverts. Extroverts seem to bring out the best in her and makes her talk more and show more expressions, her usual RBF sometimes makes people steer away from her. █Vernacular ▬ Talks in a serious and professional like tone most of the time, rarely she will out of tone or break her RBF. Sample of how she talks █Positive Traits ▬ Shes always looking to share her bento box making skills with other people and enjoy making new friends, even though shes among the people who are introverts, she accepts extroverts with open arms. █Negative Traits ▬ Due to her emotionless and serious attitude and her random facts that sometimes come out of no where she scared people off. Rather than apologizing or making up for it, she sees people that do that and cut them off completely from her life. Those that walk away the first time from her she black lists them from her life.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Rain doesn't remember her parents much if anything all she has of them were just words given to her by her teacher, she was sold off to a master for money she was still a toddler when it happened. For all she knew her parents left her for dead not caring for her well being, fortunately the person she was sold to wasn't bad at all he owned a hotel and was looking for more workers. She was given free room and board and was treated pretty well by the others it ran more like an orphanage then anything. Growing up in the hotel she found that the people who stayed there were mostly important figures or mafia men but she had never seen them leave either which was quite odd since she worked the front desk. One night she went to go check on one of the people staying at the hotel, opening the door to see if he needed anything she witnessed the owner and another staff standing over the person who stayed in the room dead. From seeing a dead body for the first time she passed out right there, when she woke her master was there as well as the other workers. then they started to explain how they weren't just a hotel but they were a secret organization of Assassins that assassinated bad men that cause problems in the nice society. But instead of telling her she could leave he wanted to start teaching her to become an assassin herself but only if she was ok for it. Since this was the only family she had ever known so accepted the offer to become an Assassin with her family. Training was hard and brutal but she never gave up and continued to become one so she could help out her family, through this her semblence was found and it helped in the assassinations. When she became older the owner wanted to send her to school thinking that it would be a good chance for her to gain a better experience outside of just the hotel and maybe increase her skill as well. So he sent her to Beacon academy as a student, she was always welcome to come back to visit but he wanted her to become a huntress to aid them more.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Black Steel █ ▬ Rain's weapon which goes from Dagger form to Revolver █Melee Form ▬ Dagger █Ranged Form ▬ Revolver █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Elemental Ammo █ ▬ Dust
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Carries around at least 10 different knives on her █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Wallet with ID and some money █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Gravity Stampede █*AURA COLOR ▬ Purple █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ By creating a glyph under her making her the center point, anything that enters into the glyph will feel an intense pressure of gravity falling ontop of them. With each level the glyph becomes bigger and the weight of the gravity becomes heavier, shes even able to slow down projectiles as well. The glyph moves with her instead of being placed in one area, shes the only one whos not affected by the gravity. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Glyph is 10 feet high and around, if someones in the glyph one would feel as if they have some weights all around their body weighing them down. But its not too much at all, it would feel a bit uncomfortable and movement will be awkward █*LEVEL 1▬ Glyph is increased to 20 feet high and around, from here the weight is increased a lot more it feels as if the person is tired, movement starts to begin sluggish and slow. █*LEVEL 2▬ Glyph is increased to 30 feet high and around, at this point the person will start to feel as if they're exhausted. Movements is sluggish and very slow, the body doesn't want to move anymore due to the sheer weight of the gravity falling on them. Its at this level that projectiles will start to fall down and not run its course making them easier to dodge. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Glyph increases to 40 feet high and around. From here the weight of the gravity is tremendous, the person would feel as if a house fell on top of them forcing them to the ground if their not ready. Movement becomes dull and almost immovable, the constant feeling of the heavy gravity wouldn't allow the body to move in their own terms. Projectiles will lose their speed and fall to the ground before it can make their destination. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Semblence is weak to any attacks that come from the ground up, traps and long range combat. At early levels the semblence cannot stop projectiles or long range combat, only starting at level 2 it will start to affect it.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
1234boo75
Eddy_Soul5
Aeval_Silvertongue
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ (As a heads up, I split my judging in two parts: an RP post where my character Ghost assesses the profile, then under the judgement section is the straight to the point what needs to be fixed. Just a heads up, as anything before judgement is flavor for the most part. Also I see you put an assassin's creed motto there, I approve. As Ghost, my character, is also an assassin).
P.S. Your battle theme video was taken down.
Greetings, it seems unfortunately for you I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill all depends on your cooperation. I shall review the file I have on you to ensure you have filled it out adequately; that you are neither underselling yourself nor over estimating your ability. Once I am satisfied, you may proceed on with your life. Until then, you are left under my rules and whims. And subject to any number of questionings for an undetermined amount of time. For your sake, I do hope you were accurate and of right state of mind when you filled out this form. If not, we may be here for quite a while. So without further ado, let us begin this assessment and see what you, Rain, are truly capable of...and who you truly are.
Hmmm...First glance you do not seem very lethal, but that is the name of the game in such a line of work after all. Make your opponent let their guard down, and then strike as they did not prepare adequately. I will say though...You look rather gaunt. I do hope this is a disguise of yours, or else you are going to have you body working against you from undernourishment. But how you treat yourself is your own concern, others will gladly take advantage of it in this world. I only hope one who hopes to aspire to be an assassin...shall be prepared for what is to come.
Which is a perfect way to lead into my first query here. You listed a natural aptitude for assassination; but what field and type of assassination? Are you the type to stalk the shadows to get close and kill...to poison from afar...to turn ally against ally? There are so many wonderful skills, talents, and tools for such a trade. With so much room to carve your own path...that just listing assassination tells me very little on your ability. Why don't you clarify what natural aptitude you have in regards for assassination? That would make things much clearer than one vague term to describe such a line of work. Also, with clarifications in mind, I see you've listed that you enhanced agility, endurance, and speed. How much better than the average would you say you are? Are you an Olympic sprinter level, or can you survive such wounds that would kill a lesser person?
Now onto my final points for the time; black steel. I am curious as I see you listed the ammo type as elemental...does it only work with dust rounds? If so that must make its use precious to you with the current dust shortage going on. Only eight shots...but for an assassin, eight shots should be more than enough for a target. One at most is ideal after all. Hmm...and I know the standard idea of a revolver is six rounds from all the western movies and depictions...but how much of a clip size can Black Steel carry before needing to be reloaded? I mostly ask since revolvers can have a little more or less than six rounds a time depending on the gun itself.
Judgement
∰- Affectation
∰- Height/ weight: Just to note, for her height the lowest healthy weight is 126lbs. So she is malnourished at her current weight/ underweight.
∰- Eyes: If you are mentioning here it changes color due to semblance, please mention it in the semblance as well.
∰- Archetype
∰- Assassinations: What specifically, as the term Assassination just means a surprise killing, is she naturally good at in regards to it? I do get a lot of skills/ talents are associated with it, but its too vague as it stands. Like my Assassin has stealth (talent), deception (skill), disguise (talent), sleight of hand (skill), etc.
∰- Enhanced (agility, speed, endurance): When you say enhanced, how much better are they than the average? Like, as an example, someone used primary talent as speed which let them run twice as fast as a normal person. Depending on what tier(primary and bonus are "stronger/ greater" than other) will determine how fast she can be. Also agility does overlap with speed a bit since agility is "the ability to move quickly and easily" with one definition....unless you mean it as "able to think and understand quickly"?
∰- Also more as a note: saw you didnt have a skill/talent for your weapons. So if you keep it as such, it means we treat you as being average with them.
∰- Close quick combat: Just for clarification, it means she is good fighting fast and up close essentially?
∰- Inventory
∰- For your primary weapon I see you have ammo as elemental with drawback of dust. So does this mean it can only fire dust rounds?
We usually just have someone list it as aura or physical rounds (regular rounds essentially) it can fire so they can have more ammo in general, since you only get 8 dust rounds per mission. That way you have 8 special rounds and a lot more regular so you don't run out. But it would be a good drawback if it can only fire dust rounds.
∰- Also what is the clip size of the revolver, since it does vary, before it needs to be reloaded?
∰- Semblance
∰- I shall get to the semblance on the next round of judging, as I need time to discuss that one/ think on it more.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will not take more than one or two more judgements, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
"Nothing is true, everything is permitted." █*NAME ▬ Rain Murasaki █*AGE ▬ 18 █*FACTION ▬ ℣ale █*ROLE ▬ Student. █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Rain █OCCUPATION ▬ Assassin █Theme Songs ▬ Theme song Battle theme
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'8 █WEIGHT ▬ 125 lb
█HAIR ▬ Brown █CLOTHING ▬ Battle outfitAt home/ relax outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ N/A █EYES ▬ Brown, but blue when semblence is on █BUILD ▬ looks skinny but its built █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ N/A █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Assassination: Being trained as an assassin she is quite verse in using her weapon for up close combat, memorizing different pressure points, tendon and areas of weakness that shes able to make quick cuts to make things immobile or go for the killing blow. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ The art of Stealth: Along with her Assassination skills shes been trained in the art of stealth, but the ones she excels in is hiding herself when shes being specifically being searched by someone else. If she knows someone is out to get her she can hide from them and slip by. █Other Talents ▬ - Calm and collected: Never freaks out even if pure chaos she is always calm and collected and thinks things through rather than going in without thinking. - Speedy: Very agile and fast, able to go in fast and get out fast, making her movements fast as well. compared to the average human being shes above average level compared to most in terms of speed/agility. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Close quick combat █Weakest Skill ▬ Long Range combat █Other Skills ▬ Expert in making the best bento boxes, Seems to know every random fact out there, and Memorized all pressure points on any body, human, fauna and grimms.
█LIKES █ ▬ Making Bento boxes/cooking █ ▬ Nice Extroverts █ ▬ Ramen █ ▬ All types of Knives █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ Assholes █ ▬ Gelatin thats not used for dessert █ ▬ Strong Medicine █ ▬ Cats █ ▬ Losing her eyesight █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ At first glace Rain is a quiet, emotionless, keep to herself type of person, and has RBF, once you see more of her the first glance was correct. She doesn't like to stand out nor like to be the center of attention, much like an introvert she tends to keep many things to herself unless specifically asked for her opinion on one matter. Although shes quiet shes not shy at all in anything she is confident and forward with her thinking, she also enjoys the company of extroverts. Extroverts seem to bring out the best in her and makes her talk more and show more expressions, her usual RBF sometimes makes people steer away from her. █Vernacular ▬ Talks in a serious and professional like tone most of the time, rarely she will out of tone or break her RBF. Sample of how she talks █Positive Traits ▬ Shes always looking to share her bento box making skills with other people and enjoy making new friends, even though shes among the people who are introverts, she accepts extroverts with open arms. █Negative Traits ▬ Due to her emotionless and serious attitude and her random facts that sometimes come out of no where she scared people off. Rather than apologizing or making up for it, she sees people that do that and cut them off completely from her life. Those that walk away the first time from her she black lists them from her life.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Rain doesn't remember her parents much if anything all she has of them were just words given to her by her teacher, she was sold off to a master for money she was still a toddler when it happened. For all she knew her parents left her for dead not caring for her well being, fortunately the person she was sold to wasn't bad at all he owned a hotel and was looking for more workers. She was given free room and board and was treated pretty well by the others it ran more like an orphanage then anything. Growing up in the hotel she found that the people who stayed there were mostly important figures or mafia men but she had never seen them leave either which was quite odd since she worked the front desk. One night she went to go check on one of the people staying at the hotel, opening the door to see if he needed anything she witnessed the owner and another staff standing over the person who stayed in the room dead. From seeing a dead body for the first time she passed out right there, when she woke her master was there as well as the other workers. then they started to explain how they weren't just a hotel but they were a secret organization of Assassins that assassinated bad men that cause problems in the nice society. But instead of telling her she could leave he wanted to start teaching her to become an assassin herself but only if she was ok for it. Since this was the only family she had ever known so accepted the offer to become an Assassin with her family. Training was hard and brutal but she never gave up and continued to become one so she could help out her family, through this her semblence was found and it helped in the assassinations. When she became older the owner wanted to send her to school thinking that it would be a good chance for her to gain a better experience outside of just the hotel and maybe increase her skill as well. So he sent her to Beacon academy as a student, she was always welcome to come back to visit but he wanted her to become a huntress to aid them more.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Black Steel █ ▬ Rain's weapon which goes from Dagger form to Revolver █Melee Form ▬ Dagger █Ranged Form ▬ Revolver, 6 bullets █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Elemental Ammo █ ▬ Dust
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Carries around at least 10 different knives on her █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Wallet with ID and some money █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Gravity Stampede █*AURA COLOR ▬ Purple █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ By creating a glyph under her making her the center point, anything that enters into the glyph will feel an intense pressure of gravity falling ontop of them. With each level the glyph becomes bigger and the weight of the gravity becomes heavier, shes even able to slow down projectiles as well. The glyph moves with her instead of being placed in one area, shes the only one whos not affected by the gravity. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Glyph is 10 feet high and around, if someones in the glyph one would feel as if they have some weights all around their body weighing them down. But its not too much at all, it would feel a bit uncomfortable and movement will be awkward █*LEVEL 1▬ Glyph is increased to 20 feet high and around, from here the weight is increased a lot more it feels as if the person is tired, movement starts to begin sluggish and slow. █*LEVEL 2▬ Glyph is increased to 30 feet high and around, at this point the person will start to feel as if they're exhausted. Movements is sluggish and very slow, the body doesn't want to move anymore due to the sheer weight of the gravity falling on them. Its at this level that projectiles will start to fall down and not run its course making them easier to dodge. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Glyph increases to 40 feet high and around. From here the weight of the gravity is tremendous, the person would feel as if a house fell on top of them forcing them to the ground if their not ready. Movement becomes dull and almost immovable, the constant feeling of the heavy gravity wouldn't allow the body to move in their own terms. Projectiles will lose their speed and fall to the ground before it can make their destination. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Semblence is weak to any attacks that come from the ground up, traps and long range combat. At early levels the semblence cannot stop projectiles or long range combat, only starting at level 2 it will start to affect it. Due to her eyes glowing whenever her semblence is active if someone were to pick up on that they could exploit that as well.
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Ah, welcome back and thank you for doing as requested for the most part. This process always goes much smoother when with a willing participant. Hopefully, after this examination, there shall be no more to follow. For both our sakes, as I am sure with our professions…we have much more concerning and pressing things to do with our time. Today the focus shall be on your semblance, though there are a few loose ends I would like tied up as well outside of that. Now, rather than waste more of either of our times, let this judgement session begin.
I would like to shift my focus to your semblance, the ability unique to your soul and a reflection of you. Gravity control is a very powerful ability indeed, especially for an assassin. And especially since you are entirely unaffected by it. To leave one’s opponents unable to move, to be left to your mercy…and for it to be able to deal with more than one opponent, in cases that numbers seem to overwhelm…A very powerful and useful ability indeed. However, it almost seems too good to be true with the ability. To be able to activate it on a whim, use for however long you desire, and have it mobile with you…There must be a cause to such ability. Your drawbacks to it though seem a bit…lacking. Long range combat, to a point as later levels render it mute. Traps I can agree with, depending on type. But attacks from below…while initially unaffected, they would be hampered soon after depending. My associates and I do not believe this to be adequate in comparison to the power of the semblance.
I do wonder how someone who is very strong would fare against gravity weighing down on them? Obviously, past a certain point, little can resist against you by natural means. But till that point…since it is force against force, something weighing down against you that you can fight against, I believe that with sufficient strength can resist its effect…albeit with strain, difficulty, exertion, in order to still be effective in combat and not slowed as much as the average. Another thing I am curious on, in that vein, is that since a glyph forms and someone notices it…would they be able to react to try to get away? It would be hard with your speed and all, but not impossible. And, at the very least if used more than once, it is an indicator to them of what is to come to prepare themselves.
Another aspect I find intriguing is the final level of your semblance. To make any projectile just fall as it travels through, regardless of type, with gravity along is curious. Since there are some types of projectiles that far exceed the speed of others, and in the radius, shot still move through if not as accurately. Like a snipers bullet for instance. Far off, sometimes unheard, and lethally quick.
Now onto the main balance issues I find in believing your semblance is as powerful as it is. First, in its effective radius (except beneath her). Forty feet at max level is very large distance in terms of how many enemies and opponent’s ca be affected. I do wonder if that is an over exaggeration to the actual ability, as it would make you nigh on unstoppable to many you face. The second point to be discussed would be how long it can be used. To use such a powerful ability at will and for as long as you desire, to at later levels leave an opponent powerless against you till you are done toying with them or kill them, seems like a perfect ability for an assassin. A dream ability. And I do feel such power may be just that, a dream. If it were true, no one would dare get near you after all. And, with the gravity slowing down projectiles as is…almost no one could touch you.
Judgement
∰- Archetype
∰- Speedy: Technically, as was pointed out to me, agility and speed are two different things. But you can have the two together if you desire since they are closely related, it just means it won’t be as strong as someone who had one alone for an other talent. Still faster than average person though. This was the definition shown of how they are different but still related:
"Speed is defined as the ability to move the body in one direction as fast as possible. Agility is the ability to accelerate, decelerate, stabilize, and quickly change directions with proper posture.”
∰- Inventory
∰- It was brought to my attention that wording on the primary weapon is confusing for what I had asked on (regarding type of ammo). And it was generally agreed that it would be confusing for other members who would read the profile. Can you please change the Ammo part to “Dust” instead of “Elemental ammo”, and the drawback part from “Dust” to “Because it relies on dust bullets to function, she is limited in how much ammo she can have on her own.”
∰- Semblance
∰- Since it is a glyph, would a person see the glyph form beneath her and thus maybe have a few seconds to try and get away? As even if they have no clue what it means or does exactly, a glyph appearing under someone is an indication something is about to happen. If so, that would be an appropriate drawback to be added to the semblance (as they may not realize it the first time, but after experiencing the effects once, seeing the glyph form will be an indication to the person that it is about to happen again).
∰- Since this is gravity as the effect, it was brought to my attention that projectiles just falling flat at the level 3 may not be realistic for all types of rounds. Like a high velocity round from a sniper, while it can be slowed and offset perhaps, should not be negated entirely once it falls in her range of semblance. Please list this as a drawback.
∰- Another weakness that was found appropriate for the semblance was that if someone had strength as a primary talent, they should be able to resist the effects of the gravity for level 0 and 1. Not fully, they obviously feel the pressure on them and have to exert themselves more than usual, but they would not be effected to the full impact of those levels. Anything above those levels though would requires a strength boosting semblance to try to resist. Please list this as a drawback.
∰- It was found the semblance has no cooldowns or length of use, being able to act instantly and with no set limit. For the gravity effect as strong as this is, and for all semblances for the most part, it does need those to help balance it. We have two suggestions for the semblance to be balanced in terms of length of use. Regardless of the below suggestion you choose, this semblance should have a 5-post cooldown (time spent before you can use it again) at all levels of it.
level 0- Last for 5 posts level 1- Lasts for 4 posts level 2- Lasts for 3 posts level 3- Lasts for 2 posts Or Level 0-3: Last for 2 posts
∰- Another aspect we agreed needs restricting is the radius it has from Rain. As it stands, it caps out at 40 feet from her in all directions (except under her). We believe at most it should be 20 feet due to the power of the semblance that at later levels leave people at your mercy. You can choose how the length increase scales per level (or have it set from the start where it doesn’t grow), but it should not exceed a radius of 20 feet from her as the center.
∰- Optional
∰- A member offered to help with the spelling and grammar of the profile, if you so desire it.
∰- Assassinations: Some people found it slightly confusing to have so much here, even though most of it is just referencing other skills you have. So, if you’d like to make it clear and concise for others, maybe simplify it down to just the weapon proficiency? Completely optional though, as you can keep as is.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some things if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will not take any further judgments, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2020 6:05 pm
N7-Rain
[N7-Rain, Rain Murasaki]
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
"Nothing is true, everything is permitted." █*NAME ▬ Rain Murasaki █*AGE ▬ 18 █*FACTION ▬ ℣ale █*ROLE ▬ Student. █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Rain █OCCUPATION ▬ Assassin █Theme Songs ▬ Theme song Battle theme
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'8 █WEIGHT ▬ 125 lb
█HAIR ▬ Brown █CLOTHING ▬ Battle outfitAt home/ relax outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ N/A █EYES ▬ Brown, but blue when semblence is on █BUILD ▬ looks skinny but its built █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ N/A █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Assassination: Being trained as an assassin she is quite verse in using her weapon for close combat, memorizing specific pressure points, and areas of weakness so she can make the killing blow. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ The art of Stealth: Along with her Assassination skills shes been trained in the art of stealth, but the ones she excels in is hiding herself when shes being specifically being searched by someone else. If she knows someone is out to get her she can hide from them and slip by. █Other Talents ▬ - Calm and collected: Never freaks out even if pure chaos she is always calm and collected and thinks things through rather than going in without thinking. - Speedy: Moves faster than most people, able to go in fast and get out fast, as well as making her movements fast as well. Compared to the average human being, shes above average level compared to most in terms of speed. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Close quick combat █Weakest Skill ▬ Long Range combat █Other Skills ▬ Expert in making the best bento boxes, Seems to know every random fact out there, and Memorized all pressure points on any Human/Faunus.
█LIKES █ ▬ Making Bento boxes/cooking █ ▬ Nice Extroverts █ ▬ Ramen █ ▬ All types of Knives █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ Assholes █ ▬ Gelatin thats not used for dessert █ ▬ Strong Medicine █ ▬ Cats █ ▬ Losing her eyesight █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ At first glace Rain is a quiet, emotionless, keep to herself type of person, and has RBF, once you see more of her the first glance was correct. She doesn't like to stand out nor like to be the center of attention, much like an introvert she tends to keep many things to herself unless specifically asked for her opinion on one matter. Although shes quiet shes not shy at all in anything she is confident and forward with her thinking, she also enjoys the company of extroverts. Extroverts seem to bring out the best in her and makes her talk more and show more expressions, her usual RBF sometimes makes people steer away from her. █Vernacular ▬ Talks in a serious and professional like tone most of the time, rarely she will out of tone or break her RBF. Sample of how she talks █Positive Traits ▬ Shes always looking to share her bento box making skills with other people and enjoy making new friends, even though shes among the people who are introverts, she accepts extroverts with open arms. █Negative Traits ▬ Due to her emotionless and serious attitude and her random facts that sometimes come out of no where she scared people off. Rather than apologizing or making up for it, she sees people that do that and cut them off completely from her life. Those that walk away the first time from her she black lists them from her life.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Rain doesn't remember her parents much if anything all she has of them were just words given to her by her teacher, she was sold off to a master for money she was still a toddler when it happened. For all she knew her parents left her for dead not caring for her well being, fortunately the person she was sold to wasn't bad at all he owned a hotel and was looking for more workers. She was given free room and board and was treated pretty well by the others it ran more like an orphanage then anything. Growing up in the hotel she found that the people who stayed there were mostly important figures or mafia men but she had never seen them leave either which was quite odd since she worked the front desk. One night she went to go check on one of the people staying at the hotel, opening the door to see if he needed anything she witnessed the owner and another staff standing over the person who stayed in the room dead. From seeing a dead body for the first time she passed out right there, when she woke her master was there as well as the other workers. then they started to explain how they weren't just a hotel but they were a secret organization of Assassins that assassinated bad men that cause problems in the nice society. But instead of telling her she could leave he wanted to start teaching her to become an assassin herself but only if she was ok for it. Since this was the only family she had ever known so accepted the offer to become an Assassin with her family. Training was hard and brutal but she never gave up and continued to become one so she could help out her family, through this her semblence was found and it helped in the assassinations. When she became older the owner wanted to send her to school thinking that it would be a good chance for her to gain a better experience outside of just the hotel and maybe increase her skill as well. So he sent her to Beacon academy as a student, she was always welcome to come back to visit but he wanted her to become a huntress to aid them more.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Black Steel █ ▬ Rain's weapon which goes from Dagger form to Revolver █Melee Form ▬ Dagger █Ranged Form ▬ Revolver, 6 bullets █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Carries around at least 10 different knives on her █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Wallet with ID and some money █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Gravity Stampede █*AURA COLOR ▬ Purple █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ By creating a glyph under her making her the center point, anything that enters into the glyph will feel an intense pressure of gravity falling on top of them. With each level the glyph becomes bigger and the weight of the gravity becomes heavier, shes even able to slow down projectiles as well. The glyph moves with her instead of being placed in one area, shes the only one whos not affected by the gravity. Glyph takes one post (starting post) for it to form up fully, if the person doesn't leave it in their next post they will be affected by the semblence. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Glyph is 5 feet high and around, if someones in the glyph one would feel as if they have some weights all around their body weighing them down. But its not too much at all, it would feel a bit uncomfortable and movement will be awkward. Lasts for 5 posts, 5 post cooldown before using again. █*LEVEL 1▬ Glyph is increased to 10 feet high and around, from here the weight is increased a lot more it feels as if the person is tired, movement starts to begin sluggish and slow. Lasts for 4 posts, 5 post cooldown. █*LEVEL 2▬ Glyph is increased to 15 feet high and around, at this point the person will start to feel as if they're exhausted. Movements is sluggish and very slow, the body doesn't want to move anymore due to the sheer weight of the gravity falling on them. Its at this level that projectiles will start to fall down and not run its course making them easier to dodge. Lasts for 3 posts, 5 post cooldown █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Glyph increases to 20 feet high and around. From here the weight of the gravity is tremendous, the person would feel as if a house fell on top of them forcing them to the ground if their not ready. Movement becomes dull and almost immovable, the constant feeling of the heavy gravity wouldn't allow the body to move in their own terms. Projectiles will lose their speed and fall to the ground before it can make their destination. Lasts for 2 posts, 4 post cooldown. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ - Semblence is weak to any attacks that come from the ground up; if someone were to come up from the ground or the use of any traps. - Semblence is activated by the glyph that appears, people who pay attention will be able to notice it form up since they can see the glyph. - At early levels the semblence cannot stop projectiles or long range combat, only starting at level 3 it will start to affect it. Projectiles such as high velocity rounds will hit her from level 2 and below, while at level 3 it will start to slow down giving her a chance to dodge. - Due to her eyes glowing whenever her semblence is active if someone were to pick up on that they could exploit that as well. - A person has to have a primary talent for strength in order to not feel the effects of level 0 to 1, level 2 to 3 they will need a specific semblence that increases their strength to not be affected by it.
