█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Alternate Look █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Ghostly White █BUILD ▬ Muscular █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ Cuts and lacerations all over chest and back area. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS TRAITS ▬ (Horns They are a foot long and sometimes tend to be hard to spot thanks to his hair. █Demon Faunus (Cosmetic Effects) ▬ "Demon" faunas have strong emotions that cause certain effects. Choose at least three effects: ▬ Horns grow larger and smaller depending on emotion and how strong it is. Shy emotions induce smaller horns while angry and more malicious emotions make them bigger. ▬ When angry, his Aura starts to fluctuate. This doesn't cause aura to be wasted, but it causes a black outline glow around the body. The glow is significantly lighter than when he uses his semblance. ▬ Eyes Glow Bright White like flash light when curious, or interested in something. Especially when happy. When Angry, they become darker becoming Black in Left Eye and Red in Right eye when fully angered. ▬ He looks older than what his age entails. Thanks to being based off of the Kiko goats who produce fast growing kids, he looks more mature an adult like. At age of 16, he looks like he is 25-ish.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Stronk: Is super strong making his strikes being able to potentially push people back or even make them stumble.max lift is 1000lbs as per guidelines. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Raging Assualt: Rey has a strong power in his legs allowing him to leap high and far like a mountain goat. With this, he can leap a distance of 20 feet horizontally and diagonally and 10 feet vertically with ease. This is incorporated in his fighting style in which sometimes he leaps upon the opponent for surprise strikes instead of running towards them. █Other Talents ▬ Encumberance Training, Endurance █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Kenjutsu (Swordsmanship) █Weakest Skill ▬ Ranged Combat- He can not hit the broadside of a barn. Usually only uses projectiles as cover, or to gain time. The day he hits his mark is the day hell freezes over. █Other Skills ▬ , Hand to Hand Combat, Cooking, wrestling
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking Meals █ ▬ Faunus █ ▬ Steak █ ▬ Bladed Weapons █ ▬ Goats and Sheep █DISLIKES █ ▬ Bystanders █ ▬ Faunus Haters/ Slave Owners █ ▬ Dust Company Owners █ ▬ Grim █ ▬ Fear of being worthless, Fear of Being Loved, fear of being controlled, Loss of Autonomy (Claustrophobia) █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Pessimistic with a Prejudice that's subtle at times against humans. He tends to stay more to background and isn't one for fun and games. Only true time he cut loose from training and hardwork is when he is cooking. A little twisted in the head when comes to combat, not knowing when to yield thanks to his past. █Vernacular ▬ Deep voice with tone of Darkness and indeference. Voice Claim: Hiei from YYH █Positive Traits ▬ Unyielding, Protective, Dependable. █Negative Traits ▬ unRemorseful, Pessimistic. Prejudice.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ I lusted for death..
Ever since I was a kid, I have been dreaming of the day that I would be released. The day that this hell would end. The day that I can be released from the constraints that have been placed on me since birth. When I was born, I was automatically placed into bondage. For 7 long years, I watched my parents suffer as they worked in the mines of some dust company before disappearing at night. Each day, they had wounds. Wounds that seemed to be coming from a different source. However, I did not know what that source was at the time. I soon found out. One day my mother was sick and too injured to work her shift at the dust mines. They came for her, but I foolishly got in the way. They considered this was me volunteering for her shift and I was put to work. The mines were agonizing and draining but that wasn't the end. I was introduced to the coliseum. The underground fighting ring that faunus of my species were put under. I met fellow demon clan members who were put under extreme conditions. Forced to fight for entertainment, we went at each other like rabid dogs. My first taste of combat, my first experience losing blood, my first wounds were all in this coliseum. My first match was won based on endurance but I had no experience. I knew nothing of weaponry. I was just a boy.
This became my new life. For years, I became a gladiator of the underground fighting scene. Soon, I moved away from fists and moved onto the blade. I was given a transforming weapon, but I never used it. Instead, I used the Katanas that I have worked so well. Only in a dire emergency would I use my transformation weapon as I find it repulsive. It was a reward. A trophy for cutting down my own kind. Each use of that weapon is like a betrayal of myself. Only the risk of death is worth that betrayal to wield its steel. I have lived this life until I was 14. At the age of 14, it seemed like another day. All hope seemed lost. However, this was the beginning of a new life. A new motto. I was saved by my own kind. By being free, I didn't know what this meant for me. I was consumed by anger. Hatred lived in my heart. However, I met someone. Someone who taught me where to channel this anger. Now, I don't long for death. I don't lust for the end of my life. Instead. I lust for Blood. I lust for the blood of my enemies I lust for the blood of my masters. I lust for the blood of those who look down upon us. I lust for the blood of the elites.I lust for blood.. I wandered. I spent time either helping with the release of others. If not with that, I simply just was a waste of space trying to mentally stay together. At the age of 16 this changed.I was sent to some academy in Vale in order to learn how to be a huntsmen. I don't need to be taught how to kill. How to fight. I already learned that. I'm not sure what the future has in store for me. However, I do know one thing. I am not hiding who I am anymore. If someone wants to come for a member of the demon clan, then they are just going to give me what I lust for. Their blood~
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Serow █ ▬ was a trick weapon of brutal feats. Modeled after a Großes Messer, the one edged sword sports a powerful Dust Injection Engine which enables the blade to spew elemental attacks during the blade's swings. The Dust Injection Engine is built into the sword and acts similarly to a traditional combustion engine. It can be ignited by revving the handle of the sword similar in fashion to revving the handles of a motorcycle; this ignites the Dust within and ejects the energy towards the tip of the blade by several vents. The Dust is loaded into the weapon via a magazine. It´s blade is 33 inches long █Melee Form ▬ Can have blade infused with dust. It can also infuse semblance into the blade. The dust coating lasts for 3 posts. █Ranged Form ▬ The only range capabilities of the blade comes from when Dust is involved in which dust produce different effects depending on how it is used and which kind of dust is used. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬ N/A
█*NAME ▬ TRUE DAMAGE █*AURA COLOR ▬ Black █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Rey's semblance allows for his strikes to bypass aura while active. This means that a sword slash that normally would be blocked by aura and do no damage to a person, would bypass the aura and damage the person. This can be extended to his blades and even to projectiles as well. However, it has to come from the source of his hands has contact with. This means, if it has not been in contact with his hands then it will not work. A gun would not work since the bullet is not in contact with his hand but if he was to smack someone with the gun than it would bypass the aura. This makes the semblance only usable with bladed weapons, polearms, or projectiles that he has his hands on like shuriken and kunai. Though while possibilities, considering his aim was terrible, most likely projectiles weren't going to be used. Involved Others Mechanic: Rey has the option to use his semblance to boost others, giving them the ability to bypass aura. If he does this, he can only do it 1 time for fight and forgoes his semblance for rest of the fight. (Meaning if he uses it then he can't use his semblance again in the same fight even if for himself) While possible, 99.9% of the time he not going to use it to buff others. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Lasts for 2 post, has cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Lasts for 3 posts, has a cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 2▬ Lasts for 3 Posts. Has a cooldown of 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Lasts for 3 post. Has a cooldown of 2 posts. █*DRAWBACKS ▬Can only use it 2 times in a fight. Number of times increases by +1 for each additional enemy he faces. (ex. 2 times for fight for 1 enemy. 3 times for 2 enemies. 4 times for 3 enemies) . If uses the team option and gives the ability to his allies, no matter how many enemies there are, he still only can do it once.
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Alternate Look █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Ghostly White █BUILD ▬ Muscular █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ Cuts and lacerations all over chest and back area. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS TRAITS ▬ (Horns They are a foot long and sometimes tend to be hard to spot thanks to his hair. █Demon Faunus (Cosmetic Effects) ▬ "Demon" faunas have strong emotions that cause certain effects. Choose at least three effects: ▬ Horns grow larger and smaller depending on emotion and how strong it is. Shy emotions induce smaller horns while angry and more malicious emotions make them bigger. ▬ When angry, his Aura starts to fluctuate. This doesn't cause aura to be wasted, but it causes a black outline glow around the body. The glow is significantly lighter than when he uses his semblance. ▬ Eyes Glow Bright White like flash light when curious, or interested in something. Especially when happy. When Angry, they become darker becoming Black in Left Eye and Red in Right eye when fully angered. ▬ He looks older than what his age entails. Thanks to being based off of the Kiko goats who produce fast growing kids, he looks more mature an adult like. At age of 16, he looks like he is 25-ish.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Striking Power: While others have physical strength based on lifting, Rey's strength comes from the power he can put behind his strikes. At max he is able to output 1000 PSI in his strikes making close combat, whether with his hands or blade, lethal. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Raging Assualt: Rey has a strong power in his legs allowing him to leap high and far like a mountain goat. With this, he can leap a distance of 12 feet with ease. This is incorporated in his fighting style in which sometimes he leaps upon the upponent for surprise strikes instead of running towards them. █Other Talents ▬ Encumberance Training, Endurance █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Kenjutsu (Swordsmanship) █Weakest Skill ▬ Ranged Combat- He can not hit the broadside of a barn. Usually only uses projectiles as cover, or to gain time. The day he hits his mark is the day hell freezes over. █Other Skills ▬ , Hand to Hand Combat, Cooking
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking Meals █ ▬ Faunus █ ▬ Steak █ ▬ Bladed Weapons █ ▬ Goats and Sheep █DISLIKES █ ▬ Bystanders █ ▬ Faunus Haters/ Slave Owners █ ▬ Dust Company Owners █ ▬ Grim █ ▬ (Fears) █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Pessimistic with a Prejudice that's subtle at times against humans. He tends to stay more to background and isn't one for fun and games. Only true time he cut loose from training and hardwork is when he is cooking. A little twisted in the head when comes to combat, not knowing when to yield thanks to his past. █Vernacular ▬ Deep voice with tone of Darkness and indeference. Voice Claim: Hiei from YYH █Positive Traits ▬ Unyielding, Protective, Dependable. █Negative Traits ▬ unRemorseful, Pessimistic. Prejudice.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ I lusted for death..
Ever since I was a kid, I have been dreaming of the day that I would be released. The day that this hell would end. The day that I can be released from the constraints that have been placed on me since birth. When I was born, I was automatically placed into bondage. For 7 long years, I watched my parents suffer as they worked in the mines of some dust company before disappearing at night. Each day, they had wounds. Wounds that seemed to be coming from a different source. However, I did not know what that source was at the time. I soon found out. One day my mother was sick and too injured to work her shift at the dust mines. They came for her, but I foolishly got in the way. They considered this was me volunteering for her shift and I was put to work. The mines were agonizing and draining but that wasn't the end. I was introduced to the coliseum. The underground fighting ring that faunus of my species were put under. I met fellow demon clan members who were put under extreme conditions. Forced to fight for entertainment, we went at each other like rabid dogs. My first taste of combat, my first experience losing blood, my first wounds were all in this coliseum. My first match was won based on endurance but I had no experience. I knew nothing of weaponry. I was just a boy.
This became my new life. For years, I became a gladiator of the underground fighting scene. Soon, I moved away from fists and moved onto the blade. I was given a transforming weapon, but I never used it. Instead, I used the Katanas that I have worked so well. Only in a dire emergency would I use my transformation weapon as I find it repulsive. It was a reward. A trophy for cutting down my own kind. Each use of that weapon is like a betrayal of myself. Only the risk of death is worth that betrayal to wield its steel. I have lived this life until I was 14. At the age of 14, it seemed like another day. All hope seemed lost. However, this was the beginning of a new life. A new motto. I was saved by my own kind. By being free, I didn't know what this meant for me. I was consumed by anger. Hatred lived in my heart. However, I met someone. Someone who taught me where to channel this anger. Now, I don't long for death. I don't lust for the end of my life. Instead. I lust for Blood. I lust for the blood of my enemies I lust for the blood of my masters. I lust for the blood of those who look down upon us. I lust for the blood of the elites.I lust for blood.. I wandered. I spent time either helping with the release of others. If not with that, I simply just was a waste of space trying to mentally stay together. At the age of 16 this changed.I was sent to some academy in Vale in order to learn how to be a huntsmen. I don't need to be taught how to kill. How to fight. I already learned that. I'm not sure what the future has in store for me. However, I do know one thing. I am not hiding who I am anymore. If someone wants to come for a member of the demon clan, then they are just going to give me what I lust for. Their blood~
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Serow █ ▬ was a trick weapon of brutal feats. Modeled after a Großes Messer, the one edged sword sports a powerful Dust Injection Engine which enables the blade to spew elemental attacks during the blade's swings. The Dust Injection Engine is built into the sword and acts similarly to a traditional combustion engine. It can be ignited by revving the handle of the sword similar in fashion to revving the handles of a motorcycle; this ignites the Dust within and ejects the energy towards the tip of the blade by several vents. The Dust is loaded into the weapon via a magazine. █Melee Form ▬ Can have blade infused with dust. It can also infuse semblance into the blade. █Ranged Form ▬ The only range capabilities of the blade comes from when Dust is involved in which dust produce different effects depending on how it is used and which kind of dust is used. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬ N/A
█*NAME ▬ TRUE DAMAGE █*AURA COLOR ▬ Black █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Rey's semblance allows for his strikes to bypass aura while active. This means that a sword slash that normally would be blocked by aura and do no damage to a person, would bypass the aura and damage the person. This can be extended to his blades and even to projectiles as well. However, it has to come from the source of his hands has contact with. This means, if it has not been in contact with his hands then it will not work. A gun would not work since the bullet is not in contact with his hand but if he was to smack someone with the gun than it would bypass the aura. This makes the semblance only usable with bladed weapons, polearms, or projectiles that he has his hands on like shuriken and kunai. Though while possibilities, considering his aim was terrible, most likely projectiles weren't going to be used. Involved Others Mechanic: Rey has the option to use his semblance to boost others, giving them the ability to bypass aura. If he does this, he can only do it 1 time for fight and forgoes his semblance for rest of the fight. (Meaning if he uses it then he can't use his semblance again in the same fight even if for himself) While possible, 99.9% of the time he not going to use it to buff others. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Lasts for 2 post, has cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Lasts for 3 posts, has a cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 2▬ Lasts for 3 Posts. Has a cooldown of 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Lasts for 3 post. Has a cooldown of 2 posts. █*DRAWBACKS ▬Can only use it 2 times in a fight. Number of times increases by +1 for each additional enemy he faces. (ex. 2 times for fight for 1 enemy. 3 times for 2 enemies. 4 times for 3 enemies) . If uses the team option and gives the ability to his allies, no matter how many enemies there are, he still only can do it once.
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✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, it seems unfortunately for you I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill all depends on your cooperation. I shall review the file I have on you to ensure you have filled it out adequately; that you are neither underselling yourself nor over estimating your ability. Once I am satisfied, you may proceed on with your life. Until then, you are left under my rules and whims. And subject to any number of questionings for an undetermined amount of time. For your sake, I do hope you were accurate and of right state of mind when you filled out this form. If not, we may be here for quite a while. So without further ado, let us begin this assessment and see what you, Rey, are truly capable of...and who you truly are.
Hmm...Strange. Whether this is a sign of good fortune or a long torturous process, it seems all is in order...save parts of your archetype. To start, we have your faunus ability of jumping. We had a rabbit with one of the other judges not too long ago. And it would seem you have a similar ability, if at a very reduced range compared to the other. I am curious though...is your jumping height of 12 equal for all types of jumps? I mostly ask since the rabbit seems to have some differences in theirs. If yours is that is fine, this is more a curiosity to see how a goat compares to a rabbit in jumping. The next part I see an error with is a lack of a third other skill. Is this intentional, do you truly not know all you can do, or did you forget/ decide to hold something back? While it is not necessary to have something here if you are unaware, I do recommend it. It ensures...less meeting between us in future.
What else, what else...ahhh there we are. I see you have no listed fear in this section. A convenient thing to not have, in a world where fear feeds some of your enemies and threats to life. While it is nice to believe you oneself immune to fear of any type, that you truly fear nothing...that would be a lie. Deep down, all fear something even if they are unaware. And in this world where our fear feeds grimm, creates them...it is something that needs to be known, or at least listed, on this form.
The final point here, the best for last as they say, that I want to bring up is your primary talent. With an unarmed strike, that has the potential to shatter bones when you have your semblance active. And even without semblance active that is a significant amount of force. But with bladed weapons which have a much smaller point...that severely reduces how much a blade can do given it is at max 1000 both ways. I would recommend, rather than trying to go about this unique way which will be confusing to some, to do something more imaginable to the laymen.
Judgement
∰- Archetype
∰- A clarification for the faunus talent. So the 12 feet is in any direction? Meaning vertical, diagonal, horizontal. I mostly ask because we have a rabbit faunus who can go a bit further with their hops: █ Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ She does not share her brother's extra sense for danger, but, she has inherited the leg strength one might expect from a rabbit faunus. This means she can jump 15 feet vertically, 25 feet horizontally, 25 feet diagonally, and her kicks are brutal. She can jump such distances up to 8 times in a day before muscle fatigue sets in, reducing her jumping distance to 10/10/10.
I mention this mostly so you see the upper range of jumping we allow for, and to ensure the 12 feet is in the three aforementioned ways to jump. So if you want to change numbers for different types or jumps, or max distance based on this, you are free to.
∰- Noticed you are missing an other skill. While you don't have to have one, just wanted to make sure it is purposeful.
∰- I see you did not list a fear. We do require one, as fear is an important part to have with grimm in this world.
∰- For primary talent, I would recommend either leaving it as strength or giving an example of what his attacks can do rather than psi, as that is a bit hard to imagine for people. As I have been told at least that 1000 psi hand strike can shatter bones (so with aura significant knockback/force to anyone fighting you when you aren't aura piercing) per hit. Which may be a bit much.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Alternate Look █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Ghostly White █BUILD ▬ Muscular █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ Cuts and lacerations all over chest and back area. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS TRAITS ▬ (Horns They are a foot long and sometimes tend to be hard to spot thanks to his hair. █Demon Faunus (Cosmetic Effects) ▬ "Demon" faunas have strong emotions that cause certain effects. Choose at least three effects: ▬ Horns grow larger and smaller depending on emotion and how strong it is. Shy emotions induce smaller horns while angry and more malicious emotions make them bigger. ▬ When angry, his Aura starts to fluctuate. This doesn't cause aura to be wasted, but it causes a black outline glow around the body. The glow is significantly lighter than when he uses his semblance. ▬ Eyes Glow Bright White like flash light when curious, or interested in something. Especially when happy. When Angry, they become darker becoming Black in Left Eye and Red in Right eye when fully angered. ▬ He looks older than what his age entails. Thanks to being based off of the Kiko goats who produce fast growing kids, he looks more mature an adult like. At age of 16, he looks like he is 25-ish.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Striking Power: While others have physical strength based on lifting, Rey's strength comes from the power he can put behind his strikes. At max he is able to output 1000 PSI in his strikes making close combat, whether with his hands or blade, lethal. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Raging Assualt: Rey has a strong power in his legs allowing him to leap high and far like a mountain goat. With this, he can leap a distance of 12 feet with ease. This is incorporated in his fighting style in which sometimes he leaps upon the upponent for surprise strikes instead of running towards them. █Other Talents ▬ Encumberance Training, Endurance █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Kenjutsu (Swordsmanship) █Weakest Skill ▬ Ranged Combat- He can not hit the broadside of a barn. Usually only uses projectiles as cover, or to gain time. The day he hits his mark is the day hell freezes over. █Other Skills ▬ , Hand to Hand Combat, Cooking
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking Meals █ ▬ Faunus █ ▬ Steak █ ▬ Bladed Weapons █ ▬ Goats and Sheep █DISLIKES █ ▬ Bystanders █ ▬ Faunus Haters/ Slave Owners █ ▬ Dust Company Owners █ ▬ Grim █ ▬ (Fears) █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Pessimistic with a Prejudice that's subtle at times against humans. He tends to stay more to background and isn't one for fun and games. Only true time he cut loose from training and hardwork is when he is cooking. A little twisted in the head when comes to combat, not knowing when to yield thanks to his past. █Vernacular ▬ Deep voice with tone of Darkness and indeference. Voice Claim: Hiei from YYH █Positive Traits ▬ Unyielding, Protective, Dependable. █Negative Traits ▬ unRemorseful, Pessimistic. Prejudice.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ I lusted for death..
Ever since I was a kid, I have been dreaming of the day that I would be released. The day that this hell would end. The day that I can be released from the constraints that have been placed on me since birth. When I was born, I was automatically placed into bondage. For 7 long years, I watched my parents suffer as they worked in the mines of some dust company before disappearing at night. Each day, they had wounds. Wounds that seemed to be coming from a different source. However, I did not know what that source was at the time. I soon found out. One day my mother was sick and too injured to work her shift at the dust mines. They came for her, but I foolishly got in the way. They considered this was me volunteering for her shift and I was put to work. The mines were agonizing and draining but that wasn't the end. I was introduced to the coliseum. The underground fighting ring that faunus of my species were put under. I met fellow demon clan members who were put under extreme conditions. Forced to fight for entertainment, we went at each other like rabid dogs. My first taste of combat, my first experience losing blood, my first wounds were all in this coliseum. My first match was won based on endurance but I had no experience. I knew nothing of weaponry. I was just a boy.
This became my new life. For years, I became a gladiator of the underground fighting scene. Soon, I moved away from fists and moved onto the blade. I was given a transforming weapon, but I never used it. Instead, I used the Katanas that I have worked so well. Only in a dire emergency would I use my transformation weapon as I find it repulsive. It was a reward. A trophy for cutting down my own kind. Each use of that weapon is like a betrayal of myself. Only the risk of death is worth that betrayal to wield its steel. I have lived this life until I was 14. At the age of 14, it seemed like another day. All hope seemed lost. However, this was the beginning of a new life. A new motto. I was saved by my own kind. By being free, I didn't know what this meant for me. I was consumed by anger. Hatred lived in my heart. However, I met someone. Someone who taught me where to channel this anger. Now, I don't long for death. I don't lust for the end of my life. Instead. I lust for Blood. I lust for the blood of my enemies I lust for the blood of my masters. I lust for the blood of those who look down upon us. I lust for the blood of the elites.I lust for blood.. I wandered. I spent time either helping with the release of others. If not with that, I simply just was a waste of space trying to mentally stay together. At the age of 16 this changed.I was sent to some academy in Vale in order to learn how to be a huntsmen. I don't need to be taught how to kill. How to fight. I already learned that. I'm not sure what the future has in store for me. However, I do know one thing. I am not hiding who I am anymore. If someone wants to come for a member of the demon clan, then they are just going to give me what I lust for. Their blood~
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Serow █ ▬ was a trick weapon of brutal feats. Modeled after a Großes Messer, the one edged sword sports a powerful Dust Injection Engine which enables the blade to spew elemental attacks during the blade's swings. The Dust Injection Engine is built into the sword and acts similarly to a traditional combustion engine. It can be ignited by revving the handle of the sword similar in fashion to revving the handles of a motorcycle; this ignites the Dust within and ejects the energy towards the tip of the blade by several vents. The Dust is loaded into the weapon via a magazine. █Melee Form ▬ Can have blade infused with dust. It can also infuse semblance into the blade. █Ranged Form ▬ The only range capabilities of the blade comes from when Dust is involved in which dust produce different effects depending on how it is used and which kind of dust is used. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬ N/A
█*NAME ▬ TRUE DAMAGE █*AURA COLOR ▬ Black █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Rey's semblance allows for his strikes to bypass aura while active. This means that a sword slash that normally would be blocked by aura and do no damage to a person, would bypass the aura and damage the person. This can be extended to his blades and even to projectiles as well. However, it has to come from the source of his hands has contact with. This means, if it has not been in contact with his hands then it will not work. A gun would not work since the bullet is not in contact with his hand but if he was to smack someone with the gun than it would bypass the aura. This makes the semblance only usable with bladed weapons, polearms, or projectiles that he has his hands on like shuriken and kunai. Though while possibilities, considering his aim was terrible, most likely projectiles weren't going to be used. Involved Others Mechanic: Rey has the option to use his semblance to boost others, giving them the ability to bypass aura. If he does this, he can only do it 1 time for fight and forgoes his semblance for rest of the fight. (Meaning if he uses it then he can't use his semblance again in the same fight even if for himself) While possible, 99.9% of the time he not going to use it to buff others. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Lasts for 2 post, has cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Lasts for 3 posts, has a cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 2▬ Lasts for 3 Posts. Has a cooldown of 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Lasts for 3 post. Has a cooldown of 2 posts. █*DRAWBACKS ▬Can only use it 2 times in a fight. Number of times increases by +1 for each additional enemy he faces. (ex. 2 times for fight for 1 enemy. 3 times for 2 enemies. 4 times for 3 enemies) . If uses the team option and gives the ability to his allies, no matter how many enemies there are, he still only can do it once.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
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1234boo75
Apathetic Writer
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, it seems unfortunately for you I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill all depends on your cooperation. I shall review the file I have on you to ensure you have filled it out adequately; that you are neither underselling yourself nor over estimating your ability. Once I am satisfied, you may proceed on with your life. Until then, you are left under my rules and whims. And subject to any number of questionings for an undetermined amount of time. For your sake, I do hope you were accurate and of right state of mind when you filled out this form. If not, we may be here for quite a while. So without further ado, let us begin this assessment and see what you, Rey, are truly capable of...and who you truly are.
Hmm...Strange. Whether this is a sign of good fortune or a long torturous process, it seems all is in order...save parts of your archetype. To start, we have your faunus ability of jumping. We had a rabbit with one of the other judges not too long ago. And it would seem you have a similar ability, if at a very reduced range compared to the other. I am curious though...is your jumping height of 12 equal for all types of jumps? I mostly ask since the rabbit seems to have some differences in theirs. If yours is that is fine, this is more a curiosity to see how a goat compares to a rabbit in jumping. The next part I see an error with is a lack of a third other skill. Is this intentional, do you truly not know all you can do, or did you forget/ decide to hold something back? While it is not necessary to have something here if you are unaware, I do recommend it. It ensures...less meeting between us in future.
What else, what else...ahhh there we are. I see you have no listed fear in this section. A convenient thing to not have, in a world where fear feeds some of your enemies and threats to life. While it is nice to believe you oneself immune to fear of any type, that you truly fear nothing...that would be a lie. Deep down, all fear something even if they are unaware. And in this world where our fear feeds grimm, creates them...it is something that needs to be known, or at least listed, on this form.
The final point here, the best for last as they say, that I want to bring up is your primary talent. With an unarmed strike, that has the potential to shatter bones when you have your semblance active. And even without semblance active that is a significant amount of force. But with bladed weapons which have a much smaller point...that severely reduces how much a blade can do given it is at max 1000 both ways. I would recommend, rather than trying to go about this unique way which will be confusing to some, to do something more imaginable to the laymen.
Judgement
∰- Archetype
∰- A clarification for the faunus talent. So the 12 feet is in any direction? Meaning vertical, diagonal, horizontal. I mostly ask because we have a rabbit faunus who can go a bit further with their hops: █ Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ She does not share her brother's extra sense for danger, but, she has inherited the leg strength one might expect from a rabbit faunus. This means she can jump 15 feet vertically, 25 feet horizontally, 25 feet diagonally, and her kicks are brutal. She can jump such distances up to 8 times in a day before muscle fatigue sets in, reducing her jumping distance to 10/10/10.
I mention this mostly so you see the upper range of jumping we allow for, and to ensure the 12 feet is in the three aforementioned ways to jump. So if you want to change numbers for different types or jumps, or max distance based on this, you are free to.
∰- Noticed you are missing an other skill. While you don't have to have one, just wanted to make sure it is purposeful.
∰- I see you did not list a fear. We do require one, as fear is an important part to have with grimm in this world.
∰- For primary talent, I would recommend either leaving it as strength or giving an example of what his attacks can do rather than psi, as that is a bit hard to imagine for people. As I have been told at least that 1000 psi hand strike can shatter bones (so with aura significant knockback/force to anyone fighting you when you aren't aura piercing) per hit. Which may be a bit much.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
Changes Made
~Updated Faunus Trait for upper numbers of jump ~ Added Skill wrestling. (i legit just forgot) ~Fears listed. but load of them actually .owo ~Edited primary talent. Took away the PSI and added better explanation. Gif included for reference. While true that psi hand strike can shatter bones but it ironically below exceptional. For reference, Mike Tyson's punch been clocked in at 1,800. But understandable in combination with semblance it can be overwhelming. Reference if curious but not necessary due to change. ~
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Alternate Look █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Ghostly White █BUILD ▬ Muscular █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ Cuts and lacerations all over chest and back area. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS TRAITS ▬ (Horns They are a foot long and sometimes tend to be hard to spot thanks to his hair. █Demon Faunus (Cosmetic Effects) ▬ "Demon" faunas have strong emotions that cause certain effects. Choose at least three effects: ▬ Horns grow larger and smaller depending on emotion and how strong it is. Shy emotions induce smaller horns while angry and more malicious emotions make them bigger. ▬ When angry, his Aura starts to fluctuate. This doesn't cause aura to be wasted, but it causes a black outline glow around the body. The glow is significantly lighter than when he uses his semblance. ▬ Eyes Glow Bright White like flash light when curious, or interested in something. Especially when happy. When Angry, they become darker becoming Black in Left Eye and Red in Right eye when fully angered. ▬ He looks older than what his age entails. Thanks to being based off of the Kiko goats who produce fast growing kids, he looks more mature an adult like. At age of 16, he looks like he is 25-ish.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Stronk: Is super strong making his strikes being able to potentially push people back or even make them stumble.max lift is 1000lbs as per guidelines. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Raging Assualt: Rey has a strong power in his legs allowing him to leap high and far like a mountain goat. With this, he can leap a distance of 20 feet horizontally and diagonally and 10 feet vertically with ease. This is incorporated in his fighting style in which sometimes he leaps upon the opponent for surprise strikes instead of running towards them. █Other Talents ▬ Encumberance Training, Endurance █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Kenjutsu (Swordsmanship) █Weakest Skill ▬ Ranged Combat- He can not hit the broadside of a barn. Usually only uses projectiles as cover, or to gain time. The day he hits his mark is the day hell freezes over. █Other Skills ▬ , Hand to Hand Combat, Cooking, wrestling
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking Meals █ ▬ Faunus █ ▬ Steak █ ▬ Bladed Weapons █ ▬ Goats and Sheep █DISLIKES █ ▬ Bystanders █ ▬ Faunus Haters/ Slave Owners █ ▬ Dust Company Owners █ ▬ Grim █ ▬ Fear of being worthless, Fear of Being Loved, fear of being controlled, Loss of Autonomy (Claustrophobia) █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Pessimistic with a Prejudice that's subtle at times against humans. He tends to stay more to background and isn't one for fun and games. Only true time he cut loose from training and hardwork is when he is cooking. A little twisted in the head when comes to combat, not knowing when to yield thanks to his past. █Vernacular ▬ Deep voice with tone of Darkness and indeference. Voice Claim: Hiei from YYH █Positive Traits ▬ Unyielding, Protective, Dependable. █Negative Traits ▬ unRemorseful, Pessimistic. Prejudice.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ I lusted for death..
Ever since I was a kid, I have been dreaming of the day that I would be released. The day that this hell would end. The day that I can be released from the constraints that have been placed on me since birth. When I was born, I was automatically placed into bondage. For 7 long years, I watched my parents suffer as they worked in the mines of some dust company before disappearing at night. Each day, they had wounds. Wounds that seemed to be coming from a different source. However, I did not know what that source was at the time. I soon found out. One day my mother was sick and too injured to work her shift at the dust mines. They came for her, but I foolishly got in the way. They considered this was me volunteering for her shift and I was put to work. The mines were agonizing and draining but that wasn't the end. I was introduced to the coliseum. The underground fighting ring that faunus of my species were put under. I met fellow demon clan members who were put under extreme conditions. Forced to fight for entertainment, we went at each other like rabid dogs. My first taste of combat, my first experience losing blood, my first wounds were all in this coliseum. My first match was won based on endurance but I had no experience. I knew nothing of weaponry. I was just a boy.
This became my new life. For years, I became a gladiator of the underground fighting scene. Soon, I moved away from fists and moved onto the blade. I was given a transforming weapon, but I never used it. Instead, I used the Katanas that I have worked so well. Only in a dire emergency would I use my transformation weapon as I find it repulsive. It was a reward. A trophy for cutting down my own kind. Each use of that weapon is like a betrayal of myself. Only the risk of death is worth that betrayal to wield its steel. I have lived this life until I was 14. At the age of 14, it seemed like another day. All hope seemed lost. However, this was the beginning of a new life. A new motto. I was saved by my own kind. By being free, I didn't know what this meant for me. I was consumed by anger. Hatred lived in my heart. However, I met someone. Someone who taught me where to channel this anger. Now, I don't long for death. I don't lust for the end of my life. Instead. I lust for Blood. I lust for the blood of my enemies I lust for the blood of my masters. I lust for the blood of those who look down upon us. I lust for the blood of the elites.I lust for blood.. I wandered. I spent time either helping with the release of others. If not with that, I simply just was a waste of space trying to mentally stay together. At the age of 16 this changed.I was sent to some academy in Vale in order to learn how to be a huntsmen. I don't need to be taught how to kill. How to fight. I already learned that. I'm not sure what the future has in store for me. However, I do know one thing. I am not hiding who I am anymore. If someone wants to come for a member of the demon clan, then they are just going to give me what I lust for. Their blood~
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Serow █ ▬ was a trick weapon of brutal feats. Modeled after a Großes Messer, the one edged sword sports a powerful Dust Injection Engine which enables the blade to spew elemental attacks during the blade's swings. The Dust Injection Engine is built into the sword and acts similarly to a traditional combustion engine. It can be ignited by revving the handle of the sword similar in fashion to revving the handles of a motorcycle; this ignites the Dust within and ejects the energy towards the tip of the blade by several vents. The Dust is loaded into the weapon via a magazine. █Melee Form ▬ Can have blade infused with dust. It can also infuse semblance into the blade. The dust coating lasts for 3 posts. █Ranged Form ▬ The only range capabilities of the blade comes from when Dust is involved in which dust produce different effects depending on how it is used and which kind of dust is used. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬ N/A
█*NAME ▬ TRUE DAMAGE █*AURA COLOR ▬ Black █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Rey's semblance allows for his strikes to bypass aura while active. This means that a sword slash that normally would be blocked by aura and do no damage to a person, would bypass the aura and damage the person. This can be extended to his blades and even to projectiles as well. However, it has to come from the source of his hands has contact with. This means, if it has not been in contact with his hands then it will not work. A gun would not work since the bullet is not in contact with his hand but if he was to smack someone with the gun than it would bypass the aura. This makes the semblance only usable with bladed weapons, polearms, or projectiles that he has his hands on like shuriken and kunai. Though while possibilities, considering his aim was terrible, most likely projectiles weren't going to be used. Involved Others Mechanic: Rey has the option to use his semblance to boost others, giving them the ability to bypass aura. If he does this, he can only do it 1 time for fight and forgoes his semblance for rest of the fight. (Meaning if he uses it then he can't use his semblance again in the same fight even if for himself) While possible, 99.9% of the time he not going to use it to buff others. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Lasts for 2 post, has cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Lasts for 3 posts, has a cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 2▬ Lasts for 3 Posts. Has a cooldown of 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Lasts for 3 post. Has a cooldown of 2 posts. █*DRAWBACKS ▬Can only use it 2 times in a fight. Number of times increases by +1 for each additional enemy he faces. (ex. 2 times for fight for 1 enemy. 3 times for 2 enemies. 4 times for 3 enemies) . If uses the team option and gives the ability to his allies, no matter how many enemies there are, he still only can do it once.
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Alternate Look █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Ghostly White █BUILD ▬ Muscular █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ Cuts and lacerations all over chest and back area. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS TRAITS ▬ (Horns They are a foot long and sometimes tend to be hard to spot thanks to his hair. █Demon Faunus (Cosmetic Effects) ▬ "Demon" faunas have strong emotions that cause certain effects. Choose at least three effects: ▬ Horns grow larger and smaller depending on emotion and how strong it is. Shy emotions induce smaller horns while angry and more malicious emotions make them bigger. ▬ When angry, his Aura starts to fluctuate. This doesn't cause aura to be wasted, but it causes a black outline glow around the body. The glow is significantly lighter than when he uses his semblance. ▬ Eyes Glow Bright White like flash light when curious, or interested in something. Especially when happy. When Angry, they become darker becoming Black in Left Eye and Red in Right eye when fully angered. ▬ He looks older than what his age entails. Thanks to being based off of the Kiko goats who produce fast growing kids, he looks more mature an adult like. At age of 16, he looks like he is 25-ish.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Stronk: Is super strong making his strikes being able to potentially push people back or even make them stumble.max lift is 1000lbs as per guidelines. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Raging Assualt: Rey has a strong power in his legs allowing him to leap high and far like a mountain goat. With this, he can leap a distance of 20 feet horizontally and diagonally and 10 feet vertically with ease. This is incorporated in his fighting style in which sometimes he leaps upon the opponent for surprise strikes instead of running towards them. █Other Talents ▬ Encumberance Training, Endurance █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Kenjutsu (Swordsmanship) █Weakest Skill ▬ Ranged Combat- He can not hit the broadside of a barn. Usually only uses projectiles as cover, or to gain time. The day he hits his mark is the day hell freezes over. █Other Skills ▬ , Hand to Hand Combat, Cooking, wrestling
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking Meals █ ▬ Faunus █ ▬ Steak █ ▬ Bladed Weapons █ ▬ Goats and Sheep █DISLIKES █ ▬ Bystanders █ ▬ Faunus Haters/ Slave Owners █ ▬ Dust Company Owners █ ▬ Grim █ ▬ Fear of being worthless, Fear of Being Loved, fear of being controlled, Loss of Autonomy (Claustrophobia) █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Pessimistic with a Prejudice that's subtle at times against humans. He tends to stay more to background and isn't one for fun and games. Only true time he cut loose from training and hardwork is when he is cooking. A little twisted in the head when comes to combat, not knowing when to yield thanks to his past. █Vernacular ▬ Deep voice with tone of Darkness and indeference. Voice Claim: Hiei from YYH █Positive Traits ▬ Unyielding, Protective, Dependable. █Negative Traits ▬ unRemorseful, Pessimistic. Prejudice.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ I lusted for death..
Ever since I was a kid, I have been dreaming of the day that I would be released. The day that this hell would end. The day that I can be released from the constraints that have been placed on me since birth. When I was born, I was automatically placed into bondage. For 7 long years, I watched my parents suffer as they worked in the mines of some dust company before disappearing at night. Each day, they had wounds. Wounds that seemed to be coming from a different source. However, I did not know what that source was at the time. I soon found out. One day my mother was sick and too injured to work her shift at the dust mines. They came for her, but I foolishly got in the way. They considered this was me volunteering for her shift and I was put to work. The mines were agonizing and draining but that wasn't the end. I was introduced to the coliseum. The underground fighting ring that faunus of my species were put under. I met fellow demon clan members who were put under extreme conditions. Forced to fight for entertainment, we went at each other like rabid dogs. My first taste of combat, my first experience losing blood, my first wounds were all in this coliseum. My first match was won based on endurance but I had no experience. I knew nothing of weaponry. I was just a boy.
This became my new life. For years, I became a gladiator of the underground fighting scene. Soon, I moved away from fists and moved onto the blade. I was given a transforming weapon, but I never used it. Instead, I used the Katanas that I have worked so well. Only in a dire emergency would I use my transformation weapon as I find it repulsive. It was a reward. A trophy for cutting down my own kind. Each use of that weapon is like a betrayal of myself. Only the risk of death is worth that betrayal to wield its steel. I have lived this life until I was 14. At the age of 14, it seemed like another day. All hope seemed lost. However, this was the beginning of a new life. A new motto. I was saved by my own kind. By being free, I didn't know what this meant for me. I was consumed by anger. Hatred lived in my heart. However, I met someone. Someone who taught me where to channel this anger. Now, I don't long for death. I don't lust for the end of my life. Instead. I lust for Blood. I lust for the blood of my enemies I lust for the blood of my masters. I lust for the blood of those who look down upon us. I lust for the blood of the elites.I lust for blood.. I wandered. I spent time either helping with the release of others. If not with that, I simply just was a waste of space trying to mentally stay together. At the age of 16 this changed.I was sent to some academy in Vale in order to learn how to be a huntsmen. I don't need to be taught how to kill. How to fight. I already learned that. I'm not sure what the future has in store for me. However, I do know one thing. I am not hiding who I am anymore. If someone wants to come for a member of the demon clan, then they are just going to give me what I lust for. Their blood~
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Serow █ ▬ was a trick weapon of brutal feats. Modeled after a Großes Messer, the one edged sword sports a powerful Dust Injection Engine which enables the blade to spew elemental attacks during the blade's swings. The Dust Injection Engine is built into the sword and acts similarly to a traditional combustion engine. It can be ignited by revving the handle of the sword similar in fashion to revving the handles of a motorcycle; this ignites the Dust within and ejects the energy towards the tip of the blade by several vents. The Dust is loaded into the weapon via a magazine. █Melee Form ▬ Can have blade infused with dust. It can also infuse semblance into the blade. The dust coating lasts for 3 posts. █Ranged Form ▬ The only range capabilities of the blade comes from when Dust is involved in which dust produce different effects depending on how it is used and which kind of dust is used. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬ N/A
█*NAME ▬ TRUE DAMAGE █*AURA COLOR ▬ Black █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Rey's semblance allows for his strikes to bypass aura while active. This means that a sword slash that normally would be blocked by aura and do no damage to a person, would bypass the aura and damage the person. This can be extended to his blades and even to projectiles as well. However, it has to come from the source of his hands has contact with. This means, if it has not been in contact with his hands then it will not work. A gun would not work since the bullet is not in contact with his hand but if he was to smack someone with the gun than it would bypass the aura. This makes the semblance only usable with bladed weapons, polearms, or projectiles that he has his hands on like shuriken and kunai. Though while possibilities, considering his aim was terrible, most likely projectiles weren't going to be used. Involved Others Mechanic: Rey has the option to use his semblance to boost others, giving them the ability to bypass aura. If he does this, he can only do it 1 time for fight and forgoes his semblance for rest of the fight. (Meaning if he uses it then he can't use his semblance again in the same fight even if for himself) While possible, 99.9% of the time he not going to use it to buff others. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Lasts for 2 post, has cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Lasts for 3 posts, has a cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 2▬ Lasts for 3 Posts. Has a cooldown of 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Lasts for 3 post. Has a cooldown of 2 posts. █*DRAWBACKS ▬Can only use it 2 times in a fight. Number of times increases by +1 for each additional enemy he faces. (ex. 2 times for fight for 1 enemy. 3 times for 2 enemies. 4 times for 3 enemies) . If uses the team option and gives the ability to his allies, no matter how many enemies there are, he still only can do it once.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
1234boo75
Apathetic Writer
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Weapon:
1) What is the blade length of Serow?
2) What is the blade length of the katana blades?
3) For smoke bombs, put either 10ft diameter or 5ft radius.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Alternate Look █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Ghostly White █BUILD ▬ Muscular █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ Cuts and lacerations all over chest and back area. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS TRAITS ▬ (Horns They are a foot long and sometimes tend to be hard to spot thanks to his hair. █Demon Faunus (Cosmetic Effects) ▬ "Demon" faunas have strong emotions that cause certain effects. Choose at least three effects: ▬ Horns grow larger and smaller depending on emotion and how strong it is. Shy emotions induce smaller horns while angry and more malicious emotions make them bigger. ▬ When angry, his Aura starts to fluctuate. This doesn't cause aura to be wasted, but it causes a black outline glow around the body. The glow is significantly lighter than when he uses his semblance. ▬ Eyes Glow Bright White like flash light when curious, or interested in something. Especially when happy. When Angry, they become darker becoming Black in Left Eye and Red in Right eye when fully angered. ▬ He looks older than what his age entails. Thanks to being based off of the Kiko goats who produce fast growing kids, he looks more mature an adult like. At age of 16, he looks like he is 25-ish.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Stronk: Is super strong making his strikes being able to potentially push people back or even make them stumble.max lift is 1000lbs as per guidelines. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Raging Assualt: Rey has a strong power in his legs allowing him to leap high and far like a mountain goat. With this, he can leap a distance of 20 feet horizontally and diagonally and 10 feet vertically with ease. This is incorporated in his fighting style in which sometimes he leaps upon the opponent for surprise strikes instead of running towards them. █Other Talents ▬ Encumberance Training, Endurance █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Kenjutsu (Swordsmanship) █Weakest Skill ▬ Ranged Combat- He can not hit the broadside of a barn. Usually only uses projectiles as cover, or to gain time. The day he hits his mark is the day hell freezes over. █Other Skills ▬ , Hand to Hand Combat, Cooking, wrestling
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking Meals █ ▬ Faunus █ ▬ Steak █ ▬ Bladed Weapons █ ▬ Goats and Sheep █DISLIKES █ ▬ Bystanders █ ▬ Faunus Haters/ Slave Owners █ ▬ Dust Company Owners █ ▬ Grim █ ▬ Fear of being worthless, Fear of Being Loved, fear of being controlled, Loss of Autonomy (Claustrophobia) █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Pessimistic with a Prejudice that's subtle at times against humans. He tends to stay more to background and isn't one for fun and games. Only true time he cut loose from training and hardwork is when he is cooking. A little twisted in the head when comes to combat, not knowing when to yield thanks to his past. █Vernacular ▬ Deep voice with tone of Darkness and indeference. Voice Claim: Hiei from YYH █Positive Traits ▬ Unyielding, Protective, Dependable. █Negative Traits ▬ unRemorseful, Pessimistic. Prejudice.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ I lusted for death..
Ever since I was a kid, I have been dreaming of the day that I would be released. The day that this hell would end. The day that I can be released from the constraints that have been placed on me since birth. When I was born, I was automatically placed into bondage. For 7 long years, I watched my parents suffer as they worked in the mines of some dust company before disappearing at night. Each day, they had wounds. Wounds that seemed to be coming from a different source. However, I did not know what that source was at the time. I soon found out. One day my mother was sick and too injured to work her shift at the dust mines. They came for her, but I foolishly got in the way. They considered this was me volunteering for her shift and I was put to work. The mines were agonizing and draining but that wasn't the end. I was introduced to the coliseum. The underground fighting ring that faunus of my species were put under. I met fellow demon clan members who were put under extreme conditions. Forced to fight for entertainment, we went at each other like rabid dogs. My first taste of combat, my first experience losing blood, my first wounds were all in this coliseum. My first match was won based on endurance but I had no experience. I knew nothing of weaponry. I was just a boy.
This became my new life. For years, I became a gladiator of the underground fighting scene. Soon, I moved away from fists and moved onto the blade. I was given a transforming weapon, but I never used it. Instead, I used the Katanas that I have worked so well. Only in a dire emergency would I use my transformation weapon as I find it repulsive. It was a reward. A trophy for cutting down my own kind. Each use of that weapon is like a betrayal of myself. Only the risk of death is worth that betrayal to wield its steel. I have lived this life until I was 14. At the age of 14, it seemed like another day. All hope seemed lost. However, this was the beginning of a new life. A new motto. I was saved by my own kind. By being free, I didn't know what this meant for me. I was consumed by anger. Hatred lived in my heart. However, I met someone. Someone who taught me where to channel this anger. Now, I don't long for death. I don't lust for the end of my life. Instead. I lust for Blood. I lust for the blood of my enemies I lust for the blood of my masters. I lust for the blood of those who look down upon us. I lust for the blood of the elites.I lust for blood.. I wandered. I spent time either helping with the release of others. If not with that, I simply just was a waste of space trying to mentally stay together. At the age of 16 this changed.I was sent to some academy in Vale in order to learn how to be a huntsmen. I don't need to be taught how to kill. How to fight. I already learned that. I'm not sure what the future has in store for me. However, I do know one thing. I am not hiding who I am anymore. If someone wants to come for a member of the demon clan, then they are just going to give me what I lust for. Their blood~
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Serow █ ▬ was a trick weapon of brutal feats. Modeled after a Großes Messer, the one edged sword sports a powerful Dust Injection Engine which enables the blade to spew elemental attacks during the blade's swings. The Dust Injection Engine is built into the sword and acts similarly to a traditional combustion engine. It can be ignited by revving the handle of the sword similar in fashion to revving the handles of a motorcycle; this ignites the Dust within and ejects the energy towards the tip of the blade by several vents. The Dust is loaded into the weapon via a magazine. █Melee Form ▬ Can have blade infused with dust. It can also infuse semblance into the blade. The dust coating lasts for 3 posts. █Ranged Form ▬ The only range capabilities of the blade comes from when Dust is involved in which dust produce different effects depending on how it is used and which kind of dust is used. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬ N/A
█*NAME ▬ TRUE DAMAGE █*AURA COLOR ▬ Black █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Rey's semblance allows for his strikes to bypass aura while active. This means that a sword slash that normally would be blocked by aura and do no damage to a person, would bypass the aura and damage the person. This can be extended to his blades and even to projectiles as well. However, it has to come from the source of his hands has contact with. This means, if it has not been in contact with his hands then it will not work. A gun would not work since the bullet is not in contact with his hand but if he was to smack someone with the gun than it would bypass the aura. This makes the semblance only usable with bladed weapons, polearms, or projectiles that he has his hands on like shuriken and kunai. Though while possibilities, considering his aim was terrible, most likely projectiles weren't going to be used. Involved Others Mechanic: Rey has the option to use his semblance to boost others, giving them the ability to bypass aura. If he does this, he can only do it 1 time for fight and forgoes his semblance for rest of the fight. (Meaning if he uses it then he can't use his semblance again in the same fight even if for himself) While possible, 99.9% of the time he not going to use it to buff others. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Lasts for 2 post, has cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Lasts for 3 posts, has a cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 2▬ Lasts for 3 Posts. Has a cooldown of 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Lasts for 3 post. Has a cooldown of 2 posts. █*DRAWBACKS ▬Can only use it 2 times in a fight. Number of times increases by +1 for each additional enemy he faces. (ex. 2 times for fight for 1 enemy. 3 times for 2 enemies. 4 times for 3 enemies) . If uses the team option and gives the ability to his allies, no matter how many enemies there are, he still only can do it once.
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✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Weapon:
1) What is the blade length of Serow?
2) What is the blade length of the katana blades?
3) For smoke bombs, put either 10ft diameter or 5ft radius.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Alternate Look █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Ghostly White █BUILD ▬ Muscular █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ Cuts and lacerations all over chest and back area. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS TRAITS ▬ (Horns They are a foot long and sometimes tend to be hard to spot thanks to his hair. █Demon Faunus (Cosmetic Effects) ▬ "Demon" faunas have strong emotions that cause certain effects. Choose at least three effects: ▬ Horns grow larger and smaller depending on emotion and how strong it is. Shy emotions induce smaller horns while angry and more malicious emotions make them bigger. ▬ When angry, his Aura starts to fluctuate. This doesn't cause aura to be wasted, but it causes a black outline glow around the body. The glow is significantly lighter than when he uses his semblance. ▬ Eyes Glow Bright White like flash light when curious, or interested in something. Especially when happy. When Angry, they become darker becoming Black in Left Eye and Red in Right eye when fully angered. ▬ He looks older than what his age entails. Thanks to being based off of the Kiko goats who produce fast growing kids, he looks more mature an adult like. At age of 16, he looks like he is 25-ish.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Stronk: Is super strong making his strikes being able to potentially push people back or even make them stumble.max lift is 1000lbs as per guidelines. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Raging Assualt: Rey has a strong power in his legs allowing him to leap high and far like a mountain goat. With this, he can leap a distance of 20 feet horizontally and diagonally and 10 feet vertically with ease. This is incorporated in his fighting style in which sometimes he leaps upon the opponent for surprise strikes instead of running towards them. █Other Talents ▬ Encumberance Training, Endurance █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Kenjutsu (Swordsmanship) █Weakest Skill ▬ Ranged Combat- He can not hit the broadside of a barn. Usually only uses projectiles as cover, or to gain time. The day he hits his mark is the day hell freezes over. █Other Skills ▬ , Hand to Hand Combat, Cooking, wrestling
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking Meals █ ▬ Faunus █ ▬ Steak █ ▬ Bladed Weapons █ ▬ Goats and Sheep █DISLIKES █ ▬ Bystanders █ ▬ Faunus Haters/ Slave Owners █ ▬ Dust Company Owners █ ▬ Grim █ ▬ Fear of being worthless, Fear of Being Loved, fear of being controlled, Loss of Autonomy (Claustrophobia) █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Pessimistic with a Prejudice that's subtle at times against humans. He tends to stay more to background and isn't one for fun and games. Only true time he cut loose from training and hardwork is when he is cooking. A little twisted in the head when comes to combat, not knowing when to yield thanks to his past. █Vernacular ▬ Deep voice with tone of Darkness and indeference. Voice Claim: Hiei from YYH █Positive Traits ▬ Unyielding, Protective, Dependable. █Negative Traits ▬ unRemorseful, Pessimistic. Prejudice.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ I lusted for death..
Ever since I was a kid, I have been dreaming of the day that I would be released. The day that this hell would end. The day that I can be released from the constraints that have been placed on me since birth. When I was born, I was automatically placed into bondage. For 7 long years, I watched my parents suffer as they worked in the mines of some dust company before disappearing at night. Each day, they had wounds. Wounds that seemed to be coming from a different source. However, I did not know what that source was at the time. I soon found out. One day my mother was sick and too injured to work her shift at the dust mines. They came for her, but I foolishly got in the way. They considered this was me volunteering for her shift and I was put to work. The mines were agonizing and draining but that wasn't the end. I was introduced to the coliseum. The underground fighting ring that faunus of my species were put under. I met fellow demon clan members who were put under extreme conditions. Forced to fight for entertainment, we went at each other like rabid dogs. My first taste of combat, my first experience losing blood, my first wounds were all in this coliseum. My first match was won based on endurance but I had no experience. I knew nothing of weaponry. I was just a boy.
This became my new life. For years, I became a gladiator of the underground fighting scene. Soon, I moved away from fists and moved onto the blade. I was given a transforming weapon, but I never used it. Instead, I used the Katanas that I have worked so well. Only in a dire emergency would I use my transformation weapon as I find it repulsive. It was a reward. A trophy for cutting down my own kind. Each use of that weapon is like a betrayal of myself. Only the risk of death is worth that betrayal to wield its steel. I have lived this life until I was 14. At the age of 14, it seemed like another day. All hope seemed lost. However, this was the beginning of a new life. A new motto. I was saved by my own kind. By being free, I didn't know what this meant for me. I was consumed by anger. Hatred lived in my heart. However, I met someone. Someone who taught me where to channel this anger. Now, I don't long for death. I don't lust for the end of my life. Instead. I lust for Blood. I lust for the blood of my enemies I lust for the blood of my masters. I lust for the blood of those who look down upon us. I lust for the blood of the elites.I lust for blood.. I wandered. I spent time either helping with the release of others. If not with that, I simply just was a waste of space trying to mentally stay together. At the age of 16 this changed.I was sent to some academy in Vale in order to learn how to be a huntsmen. I don't need to be taught how to kill. How to fight. I already learned that. I'm not sure what the future has in store for me. However, I do know one thing. I am not hiding who I am anymore. If someone wants to come for a member of the demon clan, then they are just going to give me what I lust for. Their blood~
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Serow █ ▬ was a trick weapon of brutal feats. Modeled after a Großes Messer, the one edged sword sports a powerful Dust Injection Engine which enables the blade to spew elemental attacks during the blade's swings. The Dust Injection Engine is built into the sword and acts similarly to a traditional combustion engine. It can be ignited by revving the handle of the sword similar in fashion to revving the handles of a motorcycle; this ignites the Dust within and ejects the energy towards the tip of the blade by several vents. The Dust is loaded into the weapon via a magazine. It´s blade is 33 inches long █Melee Form ▬ Can have blade infused with dust. It can also infuse semblance into the blade. The dust coating lasts for 3 posts. █Ranged Form ▬ The only range capabilities of the blade comes from when Dust is involved in which dust produce different effects depending on how it is used and which kind of dust is used. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Dust █ ▬ N/A
█*NAME ▬ TRUE DAMAGE █*AURA COLOR ▬ Black █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Rey's semblance allows for his strikes to bypass aura while active. This means that a sword slash that normally would be blocked by aura and do no damage to a person, would bypass the aura and damage the person. This can be extended to his blades and even to projectiles as well. However, it has to come from the source of his hands has contact with. This means, if it has not been in contact with his hands then it will not work. A gun would not work since the bullet is not in contact with his hand but if he was to smack someone with the gun than it would bypass the aura. This makes the semblance only usable with bladed weapons, polearms, or projectiles that he has his hands on like shuriken and kunai. Though while possibilities, considering his aim was terrible, most likely projectiles weren't going to be used. Involved Others Mechanic: Rey has the option to use his semblance to boost others, giving them the ability to bypass aura. If he does this, he can only do it 1 time for fight and forgoes his semblance for rest of the fight. (Meaning if he uses it then he can't use his semblance again in the same fight even if for himself) While possible, 99.9% of the time he not going to use it to buff others. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Lasts for 2 post, has cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Lasts for 3 posts, has a cooldown of 5 posts. █*LEVEL 2▬ Lasts for 3 Posts. Has a cooldown of 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Lasts for 3 post. Has a cooldown of 2 posts. █*DRAWBACKS ▬Can only use it 2 times in a fight. Number of times increases by +1 for each additional enemy he faces. (ex. 2 times for fight for 1 enemy. 3 times for 2 enemies. 4 times for 3 enemies) . If uses the team option and gives the ability to his allies, no matter how many enemies there are, he still only can do it once.
