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Prairie_Fire

PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 9:43 pm


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PostPosted: Fri May 05, 2006 5:26 pm


I'm really digging this story, Prairie.


A couple of typos, like "rubber" instead of "rubbed" and "latter" (I would assume a mistake) instead of "later," but these are clearly menial and do nothing to dim the radiance of your narrative skill.

I look forward to an update. wink

Scarlet Jile

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