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[Descriptive Writing] Lost in Paradise [Over!]

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xo maho
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Dainty Dreamer

PostPosted: Sat Jun 29, 2019 3:13 pm


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Blooming Ruins - Mutant Wind by Rueka

Opens: 7/16/19 @ 12:01 AM PT / 3:01 AM ET / 8:01 AM BST
Closes: 7/20/19 @ 12:01 AM PT / 3:01 AM ET / 8:01 AM BST


Deep in the dewy jungle, mist rises into the forest canopy. Golden beams of light streak through broadleafed foliage, warming the creatures who bask in their rays. Ancient and new, mysterious and brilliant, this rainforest is home to many forms of life. One such is the shy soquili above, who has found solitude among the ruins of a lost human settlement. None is sure how she found this place or how she came by her uncannily appropriate appearance; regardless, she has been here long enough to feel an occasional loneliness. She hails from another paradise, one where life was sweet and kind, as it is here. After you speak with her a while, she comes to the conclusion that the place where she is now has its similarities and differences from her old home.

"Where," she asks, "is your paradise? Where would you love to call home?"


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  1. Be polite and respectful.
  2. Show good sportsmanship. Let's spread some good vibes!
  3. Questions should be directed towards the host of the contest or sale you're participating in. In this case, it's Mahogany Sunset.
  4. Please be aware that those running the game might have to make a call on something they didn't go over in the rules. Please respect the host's ruling.
  5. Please do not use post styles when submitting contest entries.
  6. A user may not back out of a contest, prize, or sale once they've entered or added the pet to their preference list. However, we would appreciate it if you let hosts know when you are no longer eligible for a prize (e.g. when you've hit your cap from a separate contest).
  7. This soquili will count toward your cap of 1 freebie soquili.
  8. Plagiarism with result in immediate disqualification.


Guidelines

  • There is no word count cap, but do consider Gaia's maximum character count as a cap (50,000 characters in a post). However, length of entry will not necessarily help or hinder you, whether short or long.
  • This is a judged contest. Secret judges may be brought in if help is needed.
  • This is your chance to describe your paradise - your dream escape. Let whimsy whisk you away!
  • Please ensure your entry is as complete as possible before posting! If you need to make a major change, please quote me in your entry post so I am aware of it!
PostPosted: Sat Jun 29, 2019 3:25 pm


Prompt & Form


This mare is looking to let her imagination drift away into a paradise separate from the one in which she already exists. Describe to her a place of your wildest dreams - convey to her what makes this place special to you through your description. If you'd like, you can describe this place from the point of view of a soquili experiencing it. Please note that because this is descriptive writing, a story arc is not necessary. However, a feeling of a natural end to your entry should be present.

Please use the following form when you post. It is recommended that you type up your entry in a word processor, so you don't lose it if your web browser (or Gaia) crashes.


Username:
Brief description of your paradise: [Limited to three lines.]
Entry:
[spoiler]PASTE ENTRY HERE.[/spoiler]

xo maho
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Dainty Dreamer


xo maho
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Dainty Dreamer

PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2019 10:13 pm


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PostPosted: Mon Jul 15, 2019 10:28 pm


This will open in about an hour and a half! As I will be catching many zzz's at that time (one can hope), you are free to post once this contest is open!

As a note, there are no mystery prizes! Please only enter if you are interested in our lovely lady! Thank you!

xo maho
Crew

Dainty Dreamer


xo maho
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Dainty Dreamer

PostPosted: Mon Jul 15, 2019 10:38 pm


One last item before sleep: I have added another guideline.

Please ensure your entry is as complete as possible before posting! If you need to make a major change, please quote me in your entry post so I am aware of it!
PostPosted: Tue Jul 16, 2019 1:03 pm


Username: dawns_aura
Brief description of your paradise: A paradise that exists only in dreams. Perfect and pristine.
Entry:

Hiraeth. My soul longs for a place, a home, which I'm not sure even exists outside of my dreams.
A place where you can feel the weight of time, where the air is pregnant with possibility. Where the magic of creation permeates everything. A place where the air is pure, the weather is not too hot or too cold. Where the seasons blend gently into the next. Where the mountains meet the sea and sunlight dappled shade is found. Where there is lush greenery and vibrant colors galore. Where one can chase the sun and moon and wind in equal measure. The stars are bright and the storms are fierce.

dawns_aura

Peaceful Demigod


Whoan

Sparkly Waffles

PostPosted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 7:57 pm


Username: whoan
Brief description of your paradise: A quiet sunset desert covered in golden sand. An ancient land forgotten by time in the stillness of itself.
Entry:
Heat waves blur my vision as I take in the glinting gold of the sand around me. Hot, dry air toys with my hair and clothes as the dune I perch upon threatens to swallow me whole. The grains gathered by the winds flutter around me and the vast expanse of warmth as if beckoning me to dance with them. The wind will be our music in the quiet of the heat.

My feet move, slipping on the soft purchase of the earth below me. I dance with the ghosts hiding in the flurries. The sun begins to set, the gold melting to a rust. The desert becomes alive with sound. Foxes, birds, scrambling lizards, all wake with the approaching night. Falling into the earth's soft embrace I see the frist star peeking out in the sky. A glimmer of hope in a land seeming to be forgotten by time twinkling to life above me. The moon as well seems closer as it shows itself in its pursuit of the sun. This desert, this bridge between earth and sky, is a delicate balance I will take in my heart forever as I journey through my waking world.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 20, 2019 11:51 am


Good morning! Without further ado, I'd like to announce the winner of our lady who has been lost in paradise!

Whoan!

While I adored both entries, I was taken aback and intrigued with the concept of a desert as a paradise. The description was well-executed with striking imagery. Congratulations!

Whoan
Please take her to Rueka's Certing Thread!

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xo maho
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