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demon_pachabel

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2019 12:43 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Name: Asche Zell

Nickname: IDK, probably gets called 'a**' cause it's so close

Age: 24

Birthday: May 17th

Sign: Taurus

Gemstone: Emerald

Blood Type: O -

Fav. Food: Mapo Tofu, Black Bean and Cheese Burritos

Hated Food: Anything that's just...steamed or boiled. Do you...not like flavor in your food?

School: Graduated - Works as a Swordsmanship and Fencing Instructor

Hobbies:
Renaissance Faire - Asche's father, bless his heart, liked to go 'play war' with the boys and over time his son and daughter were dragged into it. Atolea loved it and often recruits her brother into coming to stage battles against combatants when such festivities are about while she does...whatever it is a girl does at these sorts of events....? He has a fondness of Ye Olde Blacksmiths tho, so it isn't entirely bad, he guesses. As it is family tradition, a good portion of his year outside of such events is still dedicated to planning, fixing any of their equipment, and he even is in the group chat on Telegram with other organizers.

Horseback Riding - This plays kind of into the above, but unlike playing war games or whatever, Asche finds Horses to be entirely pleasant creatures and while they are actual anxious couches, he has yet to meet one he doesn't get along with.

The Great Outdoors - Plants are better than people, TBH. Asche is fond of camping and hiking. Less crowded and the air doesn't smell bad.

Virtues:
Nothing Lawful About What's Right (Just) - While not exactly on the side of the law in all matters (and in fact, he definitely thinks it is wrong on many fronts), Asche has a very strong sense of fair play - not so much in handouts and handing everybody what they want, but the even starting point is something he will always try to make a reality. This means everybody starts in the same place with him - good or bad and no preconceptions come with who you are or where you have come from. This means he will do right by you - but also heaven help you if you do wrong by him.

Ain't Nothing Holding Me Back (Bold) - If something needs to happen - a conversation, a call to action, a thrown fist - Asche will be the first to rise to it. There is next to nothing that daunts the man and he is, and will never be, a shrinking violet.

Flaws:
An Immovable Object (Stubborn) - Once Asche has set his mind to something, good luck stopping him. The law won't stop him, and to a degree his stupid mortal flesh will only hold him back so much. And if he decides he doesn't want to do something? Expect more of the same.

Everything at Arm's Length (Standoffish) - Asche does not form close bonds easily. In fact, one could say he doesn't even form tentative bonds easily - too distant in mannerism and mood to be willing to let anybody else in. He is entirely self sufficient - and paired with his stubborn ways mean he can and will hide things he needs help with if he so chooses. Like that time he didn't tell his dad his gut hurt until his appendix burst 2 days later.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


Eyes: Hooded and almost sleepy looking. He has a look of resting b***h face because of how his brows naturally sit with them. Molten reddish-yellow color.

Hair: Pale - Not quite white, not quite blonde.

Face: If he was blessed with sharper feature, perhaps he wouldn't look like such a kid. He has a scar from his upper lip that goes up over his nose and barely misses the opposite eye.

Clothes: I'll cover his body so it isn't naked since I'm doing the art.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2019 12:44 pm


Knight Title: Black Tusk, Page of Earth

Challenge: Be Crushed to Dust

Uniform: Hello yes, I will figure this out when I draw him (:


Weapon & Magic
Page Weapon: A flat, amorphous stone. It is cracked.
Squire: A flat, less amorphous, stone on a rope. The crack is gone and you're pretty sure if you squinted it would look like....some sort of something? It is also distinctly shinier, like obsidian.
Magic: Bite the Unjust
Magic Pool: 45 Seconds
Black Tusk's magic will latch to any target within 7 feet of him, judging their virtue and causing pain accordingly - those who are less virtuous will find it a much more painful experience than those who are more so. It leaves no physical marks unless the target's player so chooses. 'Virtue' is judged at target player's discretion.


Knight Weapon: The stone is clearly much more than that now - an effigy of a bird carved into obsidian which is attached to one of Black Tusk's gauntlets by a chain.
Magic: Devour the Unjust
Magic Pool: 1 minute
Black Tusk's magic will latch to any target within 10 feet of him, judging their virtue and causing pain accordingly - it is much less kind in it's doling of pain now and one may get spotty vision for a few seconds at player's discretion. It leaves no physical marks unless the target's player chooses. 'Virtue' is judged at target player's discretion.


Summons
Thunderbird
A raven-like bird made of lightning. When summoned it adds a 5 second paralyzing effect to Black Tusk's magic.

demon_pachabel

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2019 1:29 pm


demon_pachabel


Good afternoon, Pach! Here’s a crit for you!

Everything from his name down to his Hobbies looks good! I did have a question about Horseback riding, though. Horse back riding is a bit of a singular activity, so I wanted to ask, how does he use this to interact with other people? Does he perhaps help newbies or show off how proud he is of his horse to people (thought that’s assuming he has his own horse!).

For his Personality, Bold looks great, and Just needs just a little elaboration. Does his Justness mean he is actively trying to achieve what he feels is just, or is he more about just having everything be in balance? I find it just a little confusing in the explanation as to how just plays into his personality. I think it may be clearer if the description is broken apart some as right now it is a single sentence and meaning gets lost about halfway through. Everything about the Flaws look A+ to me!

Black Tusk is Valid and hella intense sounding! I love it!

Powers wise, There needs to be a clarification of how virtuousness is determined. I’m assuming it’s going to be based on the player’s discretion? If so, that needs to be added. Distance looks good, as does it’s length so other than that little bit, all set.

I do need some clarification for the Thunderbird. How long would it be able to stun someone? Please remember that summons share the same magic pool as knight magic, so summoning it will drain Tusk’s magic pool twice as fast.
Quote me when you’re ready for me to look again, but he’s so very close!

Thank you,
Poods
PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2019 3:17 pm


Okay, in order of feedback!

Horseback Riding: Given that several characters have approved solo hobbies such as 'Reading' (which is in the form itself as an example of a hobby), I have been under the impression that a 'do it by yourself' hobby is still valid - as he enjoys it *because* it is a solo activity.

Clarifying Just: I have added some clarification in that 'Just' is in how he handles other people.

Power: I have added a note about player discretion to his power

Thunderbird: I have added a time to the bonus effect to his Summons.

Kapoodles

demon_pachabel

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Kapoodles

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2019 4:13 pm


demon_pachabel


Looking good, and thank you for the clarification!

Here, have a trial stamp! A GM will be by shortly to give a final stamp

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2019 8:50 am


demon_pachabel


Looks good to me, have fun!

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