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 Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2019 10:00 am
 Name: Kakure Mae Jaimeson
Nickname: Souls, Soule, Dawn (Kakure is Egyptian name meaning “Souls Dawning”)
Age: 14 15
Birthday: September 30th
Sign: Libra
Gemstone: Sapphire
Blood Type: O-
Fav. Food: Seasoned Quail
Hated Food: Pork Grimes
School: St. Mags
Hobbies:
Self-Defense – Kakure enjoys practicing Self-Defense on a daily basis – it keeps her fit and healthy, and purges her of difficult emotions. Difficult emotions that would make her life unhealthy. Emotions like Anger, Rage, Abandonment. Self-Defense also protects her, as she's had to use it one or twice on guys who won't take no, or think no means yes. It also helps to socializes more; with girls and guys who are in the class.
Reading – Kakure makes frequent trips to the library, where it's quiet enough to do some thinking and reading. She loves to read, mainly historical fiction of ancient cultures. Her favorite is Ancient Egypt, but there's no chance she'd turn down Victorian England, or Incan Empire or Aboriginal Austrailan, as long as there is a good story involved. She can spend long hours holed up with a good book, and has often ended up forgetting to do her homework, or nearly getting trapped the library after hours, because she had her nose in a book.
Virtues:
Courage – Kakure Mae has many fears, and a lot of self-doubt due to being abandoned at the age of two, in the park. But everyday, she finds the courage to rise up and overcome those fears- by simply getting up in the morning and facing each new day. She finds and supports friends who also have self-doubts. Her courage helps her to simply push through the unknown each and everyday, not knowing who among her closest friends and foster family will betray and/or abandon her next. Yet, she has the courage to learn to trust once more.
Integrity – Kakure has a lot of integrity. She will not lie, cheat or steal. She will not stand by and let others lie, cheat or steal, not that she's a tattletale (she will only report if she believes there is danger to life, body, property, and/or serious injury to emotion). However, she will try her hardest to convince others not to lie, cheat or steal. This is not because some adult says it is bad; it is partially because of the guilt felt, and damage done after doing so; however, the main reason is that one small offense can have life-long consequences.
Flaws:
Blunt – Kakure isn't the easiest person to have around. She doesn't have a lot of politeness. Not that she's into insulting one right and left, but she says whats on her mind, and she tells you it straight without any cushioning. If you need a reality check, she's the one to go to. If you need someone to say “it's okay” and mushy stuff like that, she's not the one you are looking for. She'll tell you the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth, so help her, god.
Easily Distracted – Kakure has a short attention span (except when it comes to books). She'll been given a task and five minutes in, something will catch her eye. Her response is, “OO!” And she runs over to it. Especially, if it is a book. And if it is a book, she'll be distracted from the time for hours, until she finishes the book – kind of how she nearly got locked in the library overnight. In school, her concentration is awful – most of the time, she is staring out the window daydreaming, or looking at the “pretty birdie”.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Big Round, Light Green Eyes
Hair: Deep red, to shoulders, stylized
Face: Fair skin, Heart
Clothes: Student Uniform Dawn is an Official Character
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2019 10:28 am
 Senshi: Sailor Giclas, Senshi of JasmineChallenge: ??? Fuku Colour: Main and secondary. Give us a hex code if you'd like. The bodices of Order Senshi (including chibis) will always be white, and the bodices for Dark Mirror and Corrupted Senshi will always be black.
Main Color:
Secondary Color:
Fuku:
Reference pictures may be used in place of descriptions, but please be prepared to give extra detail if your artist requires it!
Collar -- Plain sailor collar? Does it have a white stripe at the end? All senshi must have a collar!
Bow -- You need some form of frontal decoration and all senshi must have some kind of back bow (female) or sash (male).
Bodice -- A swimsuit-type bodice? White will be the dominant color for your bodice, unless corrupt, when it will be black. Maybe like a crop top -- maybe a dress? A bikini top? You can have any top you like, pretty much.
Sleeves -- Got sleeves?
Brooch -- Round? Shaped like anything? Keep this plain for the first incarnation.
Bottoms -- Shorts? Capris? Miniskirt? Tea-length cocktail skirt? Your typical school girl skirt?
Tiara -- Every Order senshi is required to have some form of tiara. Beaded? Traditional? Woven fabric across your forehead? Corrupted Senshi do not need a tiara; instead they have a black star in their forehead.
Choker -- Choker is a classic, or a necklace? Or a scarf?
Shoes -- Go crazy?
Gloves -- Any gloves?
Accessories -- Any accessories? Earrings? Jewellry? Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming. Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word. Sailor Scout Attack: Fragrant Jasmine Restorative Giclas summons an energy Jasmine flower. By breathing in one whiff of its lovely fragrance, the target has a bruise healed or a cut stop bleeding. 3 uses per day. Target must be within 2 feet. Super Sailor Scout Attack: Fragrant Jasmine Combat Restorative Giclas summons an energy Jasmine flower. By breathing in one whiff of its lovely fragrance, the target has a sprain or large bruise healed. 2 uses per day. Target must be within 2 feet. Eternal Sailor Attack: Fragrant Jasmine Despair The fragrant odor of a funerary incense made from burnt Jasmine waifs about the target, and utter despair is felt. Lasts for 35 seconds. 1 use. 7 ft. in diameter range.
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2019 12:13 pm
Hello Hawk! I'll be taking a look at your quest thread today! Right off the bat, can you attach a link to the definition of the sphere you're going after? I need to confirm that it's valid. Once you do that, I can continue with the crit. For the most part, everything looks good!
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2019 2:08 pm
Done. Also; Melati is one of many names for it, and when you look up Melati, it goes to the page labeled with it's scientific name. Of all the names, I chose Melati, because it seemed the prettiest and easiest on the tongue. I can of course revert to something else, should it be required.
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2019 3:26 pm
Sailor Hawk Done. Also; Melati is one of many names for it, and when you look up Melati, it goes to the page labeled with it's scientific name. Of all the names, I chose Melati, because it seemed the prettiest and easiest on the tongue. I can of course revert to something else, should it be required. Oh, okay, thank you for the information. Unfortunately, Melati will not work, as it is a foreign name that has alternate names. The primary name would be the common name, which would be Jasmine. Would that work fo you, or would you like to look for a different sphere? If it works, then you will need to relink the new sphere.
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2019 5:11 pm
biggrin It works. Done. And thank you I was worried I'd have to use the scientific name - I don't even know how to pronounce it. Jasmine is a pretty name.
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Posted: Fri Oct 04, 2019 6:04 am
Excellent, Jasmine works! Now for your attack and attack names: While the powers work just fine, and fit our specifications, If you read them by themselves, it doesn't really say "Okay, her power is from Jasmines". You'll have to add more description to your power, both by adding Jasmine into the title of the attack, and adding Jasmine to what appears in her attacks as she uses them. For example, you could say she summons an energy Jasmine flower, and the scent comes from there, or jasmine petals appear around the person who she targets and the fragrance envelopes them. Those are just some suggestions! Just quote me once you make the changes, then you should be good for a stamp!
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Posted: Sat Oct 05, 2019 3:48 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 06, 2019 5:46 am
Looking good! Here's a trial stamp! A GM will be by shortly to give the final approval. 
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Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2019 5:56 am
Looks good to me, have fun!
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