Hello Brycia! I’m here to take a look at your quest and get you on your way to approval!
Name through School looks good!
When it comes to her hobbies, are video games and Card Games listed as the same hobby, or separate ones? They both read well, but I’m not sure if they are meant to be one. Also, when she does Gymnastics, does she compete, or go out to watch other competitions or practices out in the park? Hobbies are meant to be activities that allow you to go out and meet people, and to give players a starting point for interactions. You’ll want to make that clear, just like you have in the Video Games/Card Games hobbies.
Her virtues look great, and she reads as a very determined young lady!
For her flaws, I would suggest changing the wording just a little bit. From No Filter to Blunt/Candid, from ‘Hard time letting go’ to Bitter, though Overly Dramatic could drop the overly emotional part, as they combine well. Other than that, they read just fine.
Power-side wise, I know you worked hard on making sure it was approvable, and it’s within our parameters, so the sphere is good to go! Could you add a link to the definition of Puerility, so we can have a quick link to it?
Also, our standard range for powered attacks for Basic stage is 15-25 seconds, so that will need to be reduced to fit. The Sailor attack’s range and length are fine, but as it is the second stage, it can be powered up with an additional ability, if you’d like that attack to be stronger. It is not necessary, but it is an option.
Please let me know once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll look again! Thank you!
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