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 Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 5:28 pm
howdy. This is, on Gaia, where I shall post poems unless of course I change my mind. I'm hoping for some reviews. fell free to tell me I suck If that's what you realy think. Post a few of your own if you like and I and/or possibly someone else will critique them.
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Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 5:58 pm
hears a starter this has already been posted on postpoems.com but I need a starter.
Every Moment
Started December 21, 2005
Finished January 2, 2006
I stare.
A point grows nearer.
I feel.
One Moment I embrace.
I watch.
Time slips from my grasp.
I recall.
For that moment
I was...
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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 6:52 pm
Dispite being the only one to post here I trudge forth.
Unsatisfied
Started Winter 2005
Finished January 2, 2006
I'm tired.
Can't sleep
I'm starved.
Nothing fills.
The pain no longer hurts.
The pleasure no longer pleases.
I've felt it all before.
None of it appeases.
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Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 9:25 pm
it's not bad but....it's not a great one either.
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 5:40 pm
bunny586 it's not bad but....it's not a great one either. I figured as much. I haven't been writing more than six months.
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 1:48 pm
biggrin i started writting i think seriously about 3 months ago.but i just really needed to say how i felt a while after i was going through a tough time really i still am going through a tough time.it's hard living with your dad,not seeing your 3 sisters,having 3 dead brothers,and...well....i don't really want to put you in a bad mood so i won't say anything else.
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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 6:38 pm
It takes much to put me in a bad mood, unless of course I was already in a bad mood.
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 7:48 pm
Well time for another one.
This one's for you grandpa.
Forfather
December 10, 2005
January 11, 2006
Why did you leave?
Why before I arrived?
I miss you-
Though we never met.
You are the one
Who would have understood me,
Who could have saved me-
From the fate you sufferd.
Now it's too late.
Now I follow-
In your footsteps.
Allen Peter Meyer
Born January 16, 1941
Died May 8, 1981
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Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 6:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 7:52 pm
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Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 7:35 pm
sweatdrop i really didn't know what 2 say so i pick a random line
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Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 4:20 pm
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 6:20 pm
Mei cuo le or not bad in English
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:04 pm
Quen estas or who are you? (I'm not sure if that's right. It's been a while)
I should post another. I'll wait until tommoro.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 3:58 pm
Searching for a Dream
March 2, 2006
May 16, 2006
I am searching for some one,
Whom I do not know the name.
I would ask for aid from you,
But I can hardly place a face.
Its hard to live without her,
Though I've done so all along.
To lead a life without her
Is hard to carry on.
We have met just once,
On a hill bold and green.
Every night therafter,
I'd seek her in my dreams.
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