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demon_pachabel

Beloved Werewolf

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2018 3:59 pm


[Civilian is Fawn Hatathli who is accepted and in play!]

Knight Title: Askja, Page of Jupiter

Challenge: I'll knock you flat!

Uniform: -- I'm making it, I got it!

Weapon & Magic

Page Weapon: The Pancake - While affectionately called 'The Pancake', it is an extremely beat up old shield, made of a circle of wood with leather pulled over it. It's only a bit bigger than a dinner plate. It is the color of a pancake, hence the name.

Squire: MEGA PANCAKE - Twice as large as previous, it still isn't all that fancy. It's a larger, more upkept version of it's previous self. The Pancake is still pancake colored.
Magic

Distance: 10 Feet
Magic Pool: 30 Seconds

Banging on her shield, Askja creates a thunderous wave that moves forward in 1 direction about 3 feet wide. Anybody caught in it has a personal internal conflict heightened.

Knight Weapon: ULTIMATE PANCAKE - Still Pancake colored. Its edges are metal reinforced and a green Viking-shield-dragon adorns the front of it. It is now a wooden back, with a metal cover, with leather pulled over the top.
Magic

Distance: 15 Feet
Magic Pool: 40 Seconds

Banging on her shield, Askja creates a thunderous wave that moves forward in 1 direction about 3 feet wide. Anybody caught in it has a personal internal conflict heightened. It now has a 1-foot 'splash' damage radius to each side that increases existing conflict for 3 seconds.


Summons -- Drasil, a Viking dragon. When summoned he can divide Askja's wave in 2 directions at the cost of halving her effective radius.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2018 6:20 pm


demon_pachabel


Hey Pach!!!

Askja's name is good to go, I know you know uniform guidelines so the only questions I have are about the magic portion of her weapon!

I love the name, first and foremost, even if it isn't a waffle. wink

For the Squire's magic, I think you mean 3 seconds per foot? Or did you mean for the pool to be 20 seconds? You don't have to put a second-per-foot indication there, having 30 seconds for Squire magic and 45 seconds for Knight magic works, unless you had different times you wanted to use for her pool of magic.

When you state that anyone caught in Mega Pancake's wave will be conflicted, do you mean they'll experience personal conflict? Would it be in reference to anything in particular -- maybe conflicted about the fight, about a choice they've made in the past, the faction they're fighting for?

I know Jupiter's theme is conflict, I'm just unsure of what sense you mean, since that term can be pretty broad. Narrowing down by explaining what you want them to experience or giving examples of what they could be conflicted with will help those she's fighting against have an idea of what you mean and can respond accordingly in any battles or spars she's involved in.

Likewise with Ultimate Pancake - I just need a little more clarification on what you mean by conflict, as well as if you meant 30 seconds for a pool time or if you'd like to extend the magic pool to 40 seconds, since the math is a little off with the per foot equation. 45 seconds would even work too!

(I also think it may just be a word discrepancy, but did you mean bang on her shield like a drum?)


But, yes!!! I just need that little bit of clarifying, so I can understand better. If you have any questions, feel free to ping me here or in DMs or PMs. Otherwise, just quote me when you're ready for me to swoop back around!

Thank you! <3333




Ghouliboo


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demon_pachabel

Beloved Werewolf

PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2018 7:11 pm


Ghouliboo


The magic per foot was more of a record put into place so if someone was standing, say, 4 feet away instead it wouldn't consume as much as a 10 foot travel would. If that's too complex and I'm overthinking, I'll nix it.


Verbage has been clarified.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2018 9:59 am


demon_pachabel


Perfect! Thank you so much!

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Ghouliboo


Sugary Romantic



Kyuseisha no Hikari

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2018 2:39 am


demon_pachabel


Looks good to me, have fun!

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