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[Acquired] Allegra Marchesa, Sailor Valetudo of Cheer

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Aria Starstone

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32,115 Points
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  • Wintersday Bard 50
  • Enemy of the Goat 25
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2018 10:50 pm


Name: Allegra Marchesa

Nickname: Ali

Age: 18

Birthday: 12/21/1999

Sign: Sagittarius

Gemstone: Tanzanite

Blood Type: AB+

Fav. Food: Fried Chicken

Hated Food: Pesto. No, it is NOT the best-o.

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies:
Knitting - She loves to knit, and has been doing it since she was eleven. Her grandmother taught her, and it was an activity that bonded them. After her grandmother's death when Ali was fourteen, she kept going as a way to memorialize her. She can make sweaters, hats, blankets... And loves doing so. A friend who gets a knitted blanket from her is someone she REALLY cares about.
Petting Cats - Yes, this is a hobby. She will spend one afternoon a WEEK going around, finding friendly kitties and petting them. Once she moves out of dorms, she'll get one of her own, but the weekly Petting Must Continue.
Collecting Old Naughty Postcards - When her grandma died, she inherited a bunch of boxes of things from her. When Ali was sorting through one of them, that she hadn't touched for years, she found a false bottom... And in it, a collection of Naughty Postcards her grandpa had apparently gathered. She became fascinated by them, and well...

Virtues:
Energetic -- She always has energy to spare... On the go, she's bouncing and eager, and moving. She never seems to need to nap, or have much downtime, and is almost always up for something fun to do, because she's just ready to go. If she could share, she would, because she would swear she has a spare battery.
Outgoing -- She loves to make friends, and is happy to reach out to people, and show them that fact. Shy kid at the back of the class? She'll walk up to them and start talking to them, quietly, and get to know them. Practical joker? She'll be up there, getting in on the joke. She only avoids the bullies, because ew no.
Sincere -- When she tells people she likes their jacket, she REALLY means it. If she says she's having a great time, she's not making it up. She won't lie to people, not if she can help it, and she loves making other people feel good with a heartfelt compliment.

Flaws:
Masked -- To a degree, her outgoing nature can be a sign of one of her flaws, too... She masks her unhappiness behind it. She will do everything she can to keep others from seeing that she is depressed, and all of her darker emotions. She only ever shows the cheerful face to the world.
Desperate For Attention -- Not an attention seeker, not in that sense of it... But in the sense of she can not cope with being alone, not for long. She desperately needs others around, who she can talk to and have time with, because if she's alone, she is afraid of what might come, what her head might turn towards.
Easily Distracted -- Because of her need to keep herself from thinking too hard, she is easily distracted by new things, especially new things to do. Studying one evening for that REALLY important test, but a friend texts, asking her to try out this new game with them? She is ON THE WAY, FRIEND woops to the studying!


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Blue, see art!
Hair: Pink to purple ombre with fancy braids, See Art (Coming Soon!)
Face: See Art

Clothes: No Civ at present
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2018 10:55 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Senshi: Sailor Valetudo, Senshi of Cheer

Challenge: "Cheer Up, Before I Make You!"

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Red
Secondary Color: Gold

Fuku:

Collar -- See Art!
Bow -- See Art!
Bodice -- See Art!
Sleeves -- See Art!
Brooch -- See Art!
Bottoms -- See Art!
Tiara -- See Art! (Coming Soon)
Shoes -- See Art!
Gloves -- See Art!
Accessories -- See Art!

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Bright Blast of Cheer
Vale's tiara shoots a very bright red bolt that gives people the powerful urge to laugh, distracting them for a few crucial moments. (Can use twice per battle, lasts for five seconds. Single Target.)

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Colorful Cheer Beam
Now, instead of a bolt, it's an arc of color, red and pink and gold, happy colors! The urge to laugh is even stronger, and lasts from about fifteen seconds. (Can use twice per battle. Single Target.)

Eternal Sailor Attack: Valetudo Cheer Explosion
Vale throws her hand out and a huge blast of light and sound explodes from her palm. The sound is an extremely high powered sound wave which causes pain to enemies in range while sounding more like a rallying cheer to allies, encouraging them to fight on. The light is bright, but the only effect would be temporary bedazzlement. (Can use once per battle. Actual sound blast lasts for 5 seconds while the after effects [pain, dazzle, encouragement] can linger up to 30 seconds)

Aria Starstone

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Skye Starrfyre

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  • Magical Girl 50
  • Brandisher 100
PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2018 7:38 pm


Hello and congrats on your raffle win!

Civ side looks great! She's got some great hobbies and I know there's got to be a Mau or two out there who'd be only too happy to find themselves added to her weekly cat petting routine. Virtues and flaws are good too, which leaves her last name as the only thing I have to comment on. Marchesi is already in play as a character's last name so due to the shop's naming rules, you'll either have to select another last name, an alternate spelling or you can contact the player for permission to use it, if you've not done so already.

For the powered side of things, Valetudo is available! Her basic and super attacks look great and I think they'll work really well for you. As for her eternal attack, currently the way you've got it worded is that it will effect everyone within range, which could mean friendly fire as well-- which is fine, but had you considered having it only effect her enemies negatively while her allies hear an encouraging cheer instead? Something like:

Vale throws her hand out and a huge blast of light and sound explodes from her palm. The sound is an extremely high powered sound wave which causes pain to enemies in range while sounding more like a rallying cheer to allies, encouraging them to fight on. The light is bright, but the only effect would be temporary bedazzlement. (Can use once per battle. Actual sound blast lasts for 5 seconds while the after effects [pain, dazzle, encouragement] can linger up to 30 seconds)


Mind you, this is just a suggestion and you don't have to take it! I just want to make sure you're getting the most out of your sphere!

Feel free to hit me up here or via PMs if you have any questions! Quote me whenever you're ready to proceed.


Aria Starstone
PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2018 8:36 pm


Skye Starrfyre

AH! That makes a lot of sense, actually! Thank you. I modified it, and I think it's good?

Aria Starstone

Sexy Goat

32,115 Points
  • Friend of the Goat 100
  • Wintersday Bard 50
  • Enemy of the Goat 25

Skye Starrfyre

20,775 Points
  • Tipsy 100
  • Magical Girl 50
  • Brandisher 100
PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2018 8:59 pm


You're welcome! And looks good to me!

I'll be able to drop a trial stamp for you once we've got the civi last name bit sorted out! (If you're looking for something similar without changing things entirely, Marchesa is close and available)

Just let me know what you decide and we'll drop that trial stamp off!

Aria Starstone
PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2018 9:05 pm


Skye Starrfyre

OH Derp I missed that bit, got focused on the stuff with her Powers and brain went "IMPORTANT." I'll change it to Marchesa, yes! Didn't think to check for another Marchesi on the list, like a derp.

Aria Starstone

Sexy Goat

32,115 Points
  • Friend of the Goat 100
  • Wintersday Bard 50
  • Enemy of the Goat 25

Skye Starrfyre

20,775 Points
  • Tipsy 100
  • Magical Girl 50
  • Brandisher 100
PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2018 9:13 pm


You're good! Just making sure we're paying attention. >.> <3

Here's a trial stamp! One of the GMs will be by to confirm!

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( Unrelated to mod-stuff... Should Ali want to meet a cat who'd be up for some weekly pettings, hit me up once she's here. XD )

Aria Starstone
PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2018 8:58 am


Hey, Aria! This all looks good to me, and I can drop a stamp with things as they are written but I think the durations on her magic could be a little longer if you wanted! For example, for her first stage, instead of five seconds it could be twenty seconds, for her second stage, instead of fifteen seconds it could be twenty five, and for eternal, this could have effects linger for up to 45 seconds instead of just 30? This is entirely up to you, but if you wanted to swap those numbers when you set up her profile, that would be fine! Otherwise, you can keep the numbers you have already written.

Have fun!

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