█LIKES █ ▬ Unique Weaponry █ ▬ Stargazing █ ▬ Spicy Foods █ ▬ Hairstyling █ ▬ Stuffed Dolls █DISLIKES █ ▬ Blood █ ▬ Crowds █ ▬ Scent of Fish █ ▬ Being alone █ ▬ Fear of Being Touched █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Komaru is a timid soul by nature. He doesn't like conflict and will almost always take the side which he doesn't end up on a silver platter. Just a pure hearted boy that wants some friends, be a good hunter, maybe change how weapons can be used. Normal teenager stuff. █Vernacular ▬ He has a very slight french accent that only becomes more noticeable as he gets flustered. His voice is soft and is easy pushed out by almost everyone else █Positive Traits ▬ Maru is very detail oriented with his tasks and strives to do his best in whatever it may be. He's very easy to get along with and prides his ability to seemingly talk with anyone. █Negative Traits ▬ He tends to place most of the blame for any kind of mistake on himself. If somebody were to slip and fall, he'd apologize. Further compounding this is his ability to not really let go of his past mistakes and failures. He's also a fairly strong perfectionist, which can make him need constant work on his assignments
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Komaru grew up in a mostly female oriented household, with seven older sisters whose job it was to take care of him. The eldest sister, Kara, had been a fairly successful hunter within the family. Enough for the young Komaru to take notice of her many tales of adventure. Although somewhat weak and rather clumsy at times, Komaru found it within himself to try and live up to his sister after play fighting with her multiples times as a child. The lessons began rather awkwardly but he soon built up enough of a skin to withstand some blows. Soon came time for him to depart to an actual academy, where he currently resides now.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Aero Hyacintho █ ▬ Komaru's magnum opus! A pair of mechanic wings that can be slipped on and off like a backpack. While active, the wings can reach up to speeds of 20 mph, focusing on an agile riding style that sacrifices defense for pure speed and freedom of movement. Dust is used to power the weapons, consumed at a fairly medium rate which allow for 5 posts for normal flight, 3 posts for maneuvering around. When out of fuel, the wings can still be used to glide, though no speed boost or ascent will be possible with other means.
The wingspan is 5 feet each way, with the wing material somewhat flimsy, yet able to defend again 2 standard attacks before it breaks The wings are controlled via a small control pad on the hilt of both handguns that come built into the weapon. These can be reloaded in the air. █Melee Form ▬ The base of both wings can be used as a bat type melee weapon if needed █Ranged Form ▬ The default form. Two hand guns which can control the direction on the wings. Each holds twelve shots. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Physical/Dust █ ▬ Changes in wind brought on a significant scale such as semblances that effect the element can make flying around difficult or impossible in severe cases. Severe climates can also cause the engine overheat or freeze, causing an extra post of recovery to be required.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Reading Glasses █ ▬ Tinker Kit V.2 - A weapon kit perfect for a beginning weaponsmith. It contains the bare essentials needed for cleaning, repairing, and tuning weapons on the fly █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Doppelgänger █*AURA COLOR ▬ Deep Komaru █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Doppelgänger is not directly a combat oriented semblance by itself. This ability goes into effect when Komaru touches somebody. His aura extends passively and then begins to observe and copy a sliver of the person's soul. The person whom he touches during this process begins to feel a cold chill, as if a cold wind had brushed across their skin.
This trace of them contains their current mental state as well as previous ones within the short term as well as their current appearance including personality, clothes, strength and other miscellaneous things. The process begins as Komaru makes contact with another person. Once the process is complete, Komaru has stored the target's appearance and then activate his semblance to transform into them during a single post. If no appearance is stored, he can adjust small features of himself, such as hairstyle, hair color, color of skin/eyes, etc.
When his aura activates, it envelops him completely before altering his form to match the appearance of his choosing, making him a perfect copy of the person or animal that he made contact with. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 3 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 2 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, he can copy the appearance of a faunus but not their features. For example, he can copy an owl faunus's appearance but will not be able to copy their wings or feathers.
In addition, he can change his gender at will, but without another person's copy from that gender, he simply turns into a female version of himself. █*LEVEL 1▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 2 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 4 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, Komaru gains the ability to copy other things, such as animals or weaponry and copy their qualities. He can perfectly copy faunus and faunus traits.
At this level, he can manipulate the appearance of other people, changing hair, eyes, body type, gender and more. His lack of control only grants them this for a limited time however. █*LEVEL 2▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 2 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 6 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, Komaru gains the ability to copy other things, such as animals or weaponry and copy their qualities. He can perfectly copy faunus and faunus traits and manipulate the appearance of other people, changing hair, eyes, body type, gender and more. His lack of control only grants them this for a limited time however.
At this level, Komaru can shift between appearances at will with virtually no downtime. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 2 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 8 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, Komaru gains the ability to copy other things, such as animals or weaponry and copy their qualities. He can perfectly copy faunus and faunus traits and manipulate the appearance of other people, changing hair, eyes, body type, gender and more, and shift between appearances at will with virtually no downtime.
At this level, Komaru has fully mastered his semblance, allowing him to access memories from the people he's copied. He's also able to combine appearances he's stored, such as a cat and a woman to create an appearance of a cat faunus. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ This semblance has very little useful applications in combat by itself. Additionally, the more Komaru continues copying people, the more he begins to become the selected thing. It begins with minor things such as personality traits or quirks, but can become radical, such as changes in hair color, build type, and gender in severe cases. This also places pressure on the user's mental state, as copying too many appearances and not returning to their original can cause them to develop psychological issues.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Youroka Kage
Xcon299
Alysian Virago
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2018 12:31 am
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today!
❖The first thing I noticed was the eye color is listed as Gray. I want to make sure that you know that you can not call the silver, as long as you understand that, then we can continue.
❖ I have looked at your Strongest Talent, and Engineering and weapon making are two separate things. You will need to pick one and put the other in your other talents.
❖ You will need to explain your fear on this character.
❖ We need a lot more information on this weapon, how fast can he fly? Are they agile or clunky? What is it made of? How big of a price of dust do you need to power it, and for how long does it last? Does it use more dust the more you maneuver with it?
❖ One thing that we noticed, was the fact that you say it can resist most attacks, how? How many attacks can they take before going down. With all the moving parts in this wweapon, it should be weaker than most, not stronger.
❖ Your weapon needs a real drawback. Not having dust is not a suitable drawback.
❖ I have thought on it, and your weapon's melee form is the wings, because looking at the the ends while weak would still be like hitting someone with a bat or club.
I will touch on the Semblence when these issues are fixed.
❖You will need to explain your fear on this character. There is no if ands or buts about this.
❖ When we asked how fast you could fly, we wanted an actual speed, not
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While active, the wings can reach fast speeds, focusing on an agile riding style that sacrifices defense for pure speed and freedom of movement.
❖ I need you to explain how the wings can be used as a melee weapon.
❖ One of the things that is concerning me is that you say that the guns hold 12 bullets, can you reload them while you fly?
❖ How are these wings powered?
❖ When I said that you needed to change the drawback of the weapon, I mean't remove the old one and make a new one.
❖ Ok, me and another judge are looking over this semblence, and I think for what you are trying to overachieve. We understand taking the appearance of a person, but we both are against taking the combat abilities of others. I also am not a fan of the time limits in your Semblence. I judge with post counts, not minutes, in semblences.
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Novasse
Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2018 5:31 pm
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖
❖ So what is in this Tinker Kit V.2?
❖ Ok, I have looked at your description. I'm ok with copying clothing in all, but personality, how are you getting that?
❖ As I stated before, I will not approve a profile that has time listed instead of posts. The reason that I don't approve of them is because you can time skip the entirety of a minute in a post, but you can't do that with a post count.
❖ For level 2, what do you mean by other organic things?
❖With level 3, I'm not ok with you getting non-semblence abilities automatically.
❖ So what is this sliver that you take out of people? Is it a part of their soul, what happens to the person that you take this from?
❖ So your post times are way too low. I suggest starting about about 5 and working your way down.
❖ When you say that this semblence is not a combat semblence, I believe you until about level 3, If you want an idea for what you can do at this level, I suggest maybe being able to combine appearances. For example, if you had the appearance of a cat, a man, and then another woman, you could make it look like you are a cat faunus that is someone's sister. Just an idea.
❖❖❖Status❖❖❖
Novasse
Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2018 1:10 am
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖
❖ Can we increase the time it takes to get appearances at level 2 to 2 posts instead of one. Also, do you start slowly shifting over that time, or do you have to store them, and then transform?
█HAIR ▬ Dark Blue, Kept in a long braid █CLOTHING ▬ Loose fitting clothing, easy to move around in █ACCESSORIES ▬ Hairbands for his hair, some reading glasses folded on his neckline █EYES ▬ Gray █BUILD ▬ Thin █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ N/A █MARKINGS ▬ N/A
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Weapon Making █Other Talents ▬ Mild engineer, flight enthusiast, Hairstylist, Mild experience in machines, Fashionista █Faunus Skill ▬ N/A █Strongest Skill ▬ Evasive combat maneuvers █Weakest Skill ▬ Taking a hit
█LIKES █ ▬ Unique Weaponry █ ▬ Stargazing █ ▬ Spicy Foods █ ▬ Hairstyling █ ▬ Stuffed Dolls █DISLIKES █ ▬ Blood █ ▬ Crowds █ ▬ Scent of Fish █ ▬ Being alone █ ▬ Fear of Being Touched █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Komaru is a timid soul by nature. He doesn't like conflict and will almost always take the side which he doesn't end up on a silver platter. Just a pure hearted boy that wants some friends, be a good hunter, maybe change how weapons can be used. Normal teenager stuff. █Vernacular ▬ He has a very slight french accent that only becomes more noticeable as he gets flustered. His voice is soft and is easy pushed out by almost everyone else █Positive Traits ▬ Maru is very detail oriented with his tasks and strives to do his best in whatever it may be. He's very easy to get along with and prides his ability to seemingly talk with anyone. █Negative Traits ▬ He tends to place most of the blame for any kind of mistake on himself. If somebody were to slip and fall, he'd apologize. Further compounding this is his ability to not really let go of his past mistakes and failures. He's also a fairly strong perfectionist, which can make him need constant work on his assignments
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Komaru grew up in a mostly female oriented household, with seven older sisters whose job it was to take care of him. The eldest sister, Kara, had been a fairly successful hunter within the family. Enough for the young Komaru to take notice of her many tales of adventure. Although somewhat weak and rather clumsy at times, Komaru found it within himself to try and live up to his sister after play fighting with her multiples times as a child. The lessons began rather awkwardly but he soon built up enough of a skin to withstand some blows. Soon came time for him to depart to an actual academy, where he currently resides now.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Aero Hyacintho █ ▬ Komaru's magnum opus! A pair of mechanic wings that can be slipped on and off like a backpack. While active, the wings can reach up to speeds of 20 mph, focusing on an agile riding style that sacrifices defense for pure speed and freedom of movement. Dust is used to power the weapons, consumed at a fairly medium rate which allow for 5 posts for normal flight, 3 posts for maneuvering around. When out of fuel, the wings can still be used to glide, though no speed boost or ascent will be possible with other means.
The wingspan is 5 feet each way, with the wing material somewhat flimsy, yet able to defend again 2 standard attacks before it breaks The wings are controlled via a small control pad on the hilt of both handguns that come built into the weapon. These can be reloaded in the air. █Melee Form ▬ The base of both wings can be used as a bat type melee weapon if needed █Ranged Form ▬ The default form. Two hand guns which can control the direction on the wings. Each holds twelve shots. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Physical/Dust █ ▬ Changes in wind brought on a significant scale such as semblances that effect the element can make flying around difficult or impossible in severe cases. Severe climates can also cause the engine overheat or freeze, causing an extra post of recovery to be required.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Reading Glasses █ ▬ Tinker Kit V.2 - A weapon kit perfect for a beginning weaponsmith. It contains the bare essentials needed for cleaning, repairing, and tuning weapons on the fly █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Doppelgänger █*AURA COLOR ▬ Deep Komaru █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Doppelgänger is not directly a combat oriented semblance by itself. This ability goes into effect when Komaru touches somebody. His aura extends passively and then begins to observe and copy a sliver of the person's soul. The person whom he touches during this process begins to feel a cold chill, as if a cold wind had brushed across their skin.
This trace of them contains their current mental state as well as previous ones within the short term as well as their current appearance including personality, clothes, strength and other miscellaneous things. The process begins as Komaru makes contact with another person. Once the process is complete, Komaru has stored the target's appearance and then activate his semblance to transform into them during a single post.
When his aura activates, it envelops him completely before altering his form to match the appearance of his choosing, making him a perfect copy of the person or animal that he made contact with. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 5 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 2 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. █*LEVEL 1▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 3 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 4 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, Komaru gains the ability to copy other things, such as animals or weaponry and copy their qualities. He can only copy one weapon at a time, unable to split into more than a single one. █*LEVEL 2▬ Komaru must touch another person or animal for at least 2 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 6 appearances at a time, able to choose which to dispose of one if he wants another one. At this level, Komaru can shift between the copies he's stored at will. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Komaru must touch another person or animal for at least 1 post before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 8 appearances at a time, able to choose which to dispose of if he wants another one. At this level, Komaru is able to access memories from the process of his aura taking from another person's. He may also combine stored appearances, such as a cat and a woman to take on the appearance of a cat faunus. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ This semblance has very little useful applications in combat by itself. Additionally, the more Komaru continues copying people, the more he begins to become the selected thing. It begins with minor things such as personality traits or quirks, but can become radical, such as changes in hair color, build type, and gender in severe cases. This also places pressure on the user's mental state, as copying too many appearances and not returning to their original can cause them to develop psychological issues.
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[q.uote="xLulie"] [q.uote="Deadly_Tiger"]
Youroka Kage
[q.uote="Xcon299"] [qu.ote="Alysian Virago"]
Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2018 2:27 pm
Novasse
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2018 3:20 pm
Novasse
[Novasse & Komaru Estelle]
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Komaru Estelle █*AGE ▬ 17 █*FACTION ▬ ℣ale █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█LIKES █ ▬ Unique Weaponry █ ▬ Stargazing █ ▬ Spicy Foods █ ▬ Hairstyling █ ▬ Stuffed Dolls █DISLIKES █ ▬ Blood █ ▬ Crowds █ ▬ Scent of Fish █ ▬ Being alone █ ▬ Fear of Being Touched █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Komaru is a timid soul by nature. He doesn't like conflict and will almost always take the side which he doesn't end up on a silver platter. Just a pure hearted boy that wants some friends, be a good hunter, maybe change how weapons can be used. Normal teenager stuff. █Vernacular ▬ He has a very slight french accent that only becomes more noticeable as he gets flustered. His voice is soft and is easy pushed out by almost everyone else █Positive Traits ▬ Maru is very detail oriented with his tasks and strives to do his best in whatever it may be. He's very easy to get along with and prides his ability to seemingly talk with anyone. █Negative Traits ▬ He tends to place most of the blame for any kind of mistake on himself. If somebody were to slip and fall, he'd apologize. Further compounding this is his ability to not really let go of his past mistakes and failures. He's also a fairly strong perfectionist, which can make him need constant work on his assignments
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Komaru grew up in a mostly female oriented household, with seven older sisters whose job it was to take care of him. The eldest sister, Kara, had been a fairly successful hunter within the family. Enough for the young Komaru to take notice of her many tales of adventure. Although somewhat weak and rather clumsy at times, Komaru found it within himself to try and live up to his sister after play fighting with her multiples times as a child. The lessons began rather awkwardly but he soon built up enough of a skin to withstand some blows. Soon came time for him to depart to an actual academy, where he currently resides now.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Aero Hyacintho █ ▬ Komaru's magnum opus! A pair of mechanic wings that can be slipped on and off like a backpack. While active, the wings can reach up to speeds of 20 mph, focusing on an agile riding style that sacrifices defense for pure speed and freedom of movement. Dust is used to power the weapons, consumed at a fairly medium rate which allow for 5 posts for normal flight, 3 posts for maneuvering around. When out of fuel, the wings can still be used to glide, though no speed boost or ascent will be possible with other means.
The wingspan is 5 feet each way, with the wing material somewhat flimsy, yet able to defend again 2 standard attacks before it breaks The wings are controlled via a small control pad on the hilt of both handguns that come built into the weapon. These can be reloaded in the air. █Melee Form ▬ The base of both wings can be used as a bat type melee weapon if needed █Ranged Form ▬ The default form. Two hand guns which can control the direction on the wings. Each holds twelve shots. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Physical/Dust █ ▬ Changes in wind brought on a significant scale such as semblances that effect the element can make flying around difficult or impossible in severe cases. Severe climates can also cause the engine overheat or freeze, causing an extra post of recovery to be required.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Reading Glasses █ ▬ Tinker Kit V.2 - A weapon kit perfect for a beginning weaponsmith. It contains the bare essentials needed for cleaning, repairing, and tuning weapons on the fly █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Doppelgänger █*AURA COLOR ▬ Deep Komaru █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Doppelgänger is not directly a combat oriented semblance by itself. This ability goes into effect when Komaru touches somebody. His aura extends passively and then begins to observe and copy a sliver of the person's soul. The person whom he touches during this process begins to feel a cold chill, as if a cold wind had brushed across their skin.
This trace of them contains their current mental state as well as previous ones within the short term as well as their current appearance including personality, clothes, strength and other miscellaneous things. The process begins as Komaru makes contact with another person. Once the process is complete, Komaru has stored the target's appearance and then activate his semblance to transform into them during a single post. If no appearance is stored, he can adjust small features of himself, such as hairstyle, hair color, color of skin/eyes, etc.
When his aura activates, it envelops him completely before altering his form to match the appearance of his choosing, making him a perfect copy of the person or animal that he made contact with. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 3 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 2 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, he can copy the appearance of a faunus but not their features. For example, he can copy an owl faunus's appearance but will not be able to copy their wings or feathers.
In addition, he can change his gender at will, but without another person's copy from that gender, he simply turns into a female version of himself. █*LEVEL 1▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 2 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 4 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, Komaru gains the ability to copy other things, such as animals or weaponry and copy their qualities. He can perfectly copy faunus and faunus traits.
At this level, he can manipulate the appearance of other people, changing hair, eyes, body type, gender and more. His lack of control only grants them this for a limited time however. █*LEVEL 2▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 2 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 6 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, Komaru gains the ability to copy other things, such as animals or weaponry and copy their qualities. He can perfectly copy faunus and faunus traits and manipulate the appearance of other people, changing hair, eyes, body type, gender and more. His lack of control only grants them this for a limited time however.
At this level, Komaru can shift between appearances at will with virtually no downtime. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Komaru must touch another person for at least 2 posts before he is able to copy their appearance. He's able to store 8 appearances at a time, another one automatically disposing of the 1st. At this level, Komaru gains the ability to copy other things, such as animals or weaponry and copy their qualities. He can perfectly copy faunus and faunus traits and manipulate the appearance of other people, changing hair, eyes, body type, gender and more, and shift between appearances at will with virtually no downtime.
At this level, Komaru has fully mastered his semblance, allowing him to access memories from the people he's copied. He's also able to combine appearances he's stored, such as a cat and a woman to create an appearance of a cat faunus. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ This semblance has very little useful applications in combat by itself. Additionally, the more Komaru continues copying people, the more he begins to become the selected thing. It begins with minor things such as personality traits or quirks, but can become radical, such as changes in hair color, build type, and gender in severe cases. This also places pressure on the user's mental state, as copying too many appearances and not returning to their original can cause them to develop psychological issues.
