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This is an upgrade for Damien Vetrov


Knight Title: Halicarnassus, Page of Castor

Challenge:
“Really?”
“You Ready?”
“Hell yeah!”

Uniform: Basically this for his first stage. I'm not usually good with costumes so if the artist has any cool suggestions, I'm down.

Weapon & Magic


Page Weapon: Just some plain leather gauntlet. Looks like this he can use them to block some minimal attacks?

Squire: Something a bit more fancy like this. While channeling his magic, Halicarnassus can focus on a single target within fifteen feet and a sudden, heavy force will be pushed down on them. They will feel as though they are suddenly very heavy and it may become incredibly difficult to move, up to immobilization. It will feel as though an opponent is forcing them to stay in place by applying force on all sides. Targets below his rank will be more affected by this force, however no target can be held frozen in place completely for more than fifteen seconds at a time. Stronger opponents may still be able to move but they will feel heavily slowed, as if trudging through water. The force can be so crushing that characters may feel as though they cannot breathe, are bruised, or have broken bones depending on what the player chooses; the player can also choose to take lasting physical damage. His magic can be channeled for 35 seconds.

Knight Weapon: I was thinking he could have a nice gauntlet in the design of the sphinx gauntlet from God of War [it's the one located second on the bottom right.]. While channeling his magic, Halicarnassus can focus on up to two targets within fifteen feet and a sudden, heavy force will be pushed down on them. They will feel as though they are suddenly very heavy and it may become incredibly difficult to move, up to immobilization. It will feel as though an opponent is forcing them to stay in place by applying force on all sides. Targets below his rank will be more affected by this force, however no target can be held frozen in place completely for more than fifteen seconds at a time. Stronger opponents may still be able to move but they will feel heavily slowed, as if trudging through water. The force can be so crushing that characters may feel as though they cannot breathe, are bruised, or have broken bones depending on what the player chooses; the player can also choose to take lasting physical damage. His magic can be channeled for 50 seconds.

Also:

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Hey, Viva!

Overall the parameters of this look like they could work, but I can’t stamp just yet! Knights get their power from the planet or homeworld they are affiliated with, and so each type of Knight has a different power theme; in the case of Castor Knights, their magic should be based on ‘brotherhood, devotion, or force’. Before I can give crit or suggestions, I was wondering if you were incorporating any of these power themes into the magic? I didn’t really see any of those three in the magic, but if you had something you were going with, I’m willing to consider! (It would help if you include at least one power theme in the magic, so you might have to do some minor tweaks to incorporate them somehow before I can stamp, but if you’d like ideas, I can come up with a few!)

Castor is ready for this boy

Looks good to me, have fun!