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PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2018 1:53 pm


Name: Hinata Himura

Nickname:

Age: 7

Birthday: 08/15

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Periodot

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Wagashi

Hated Food: Tofu

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:

Outdoors - Hinata loves the outdoor, she is happiest when she is playing in the sun. She loves running around playing games with other kids or just going on an adventure by herself. She even loves napping outside in the sun. As long as she has fresh air and sunlight she's at peace.

Anime - Hinata loves anime be it magical girl shows or shonen shows. However she often has to share the tv with her older sisters Hikari and Hikaru so she doesn't usually get to decide what she watches.

Art - Hinata has a naturally creative mind. Her favorite artistic activity is painting but she also enjoys other arts like flower arrangement or sewing. She usually does it with her mother or her older brother Taiki.

Karate - Hinata began studying karate because her oldest sister, Megumi, does it and she wanted to be like her. She enjoys the exercise and learning how to beat up bad guys.

Virtues:

Independent -- Hinata was raised in a very big family and because of that she has learned how to take care of herself. She's not afraid of being by herself. She can cook simple things and knows how to survive on her own at least for short periods.

Cheerful -- Hinata is bright as the sun most days. She is a ball of happy energy. It would take alot to actually make her despair as it isn't in her nature. Even when bad things happen around her she can always find the bright side of things and give people a smile to try and brighten their day as well.

Flaws:

Naive -- It is a good thing that Hinata is not old enough to manage money because she would happily buy any bridges or magic beans anyone was selling. She will take anyone at face value because she believes people are
generally good and honest.

Nosy -- Boundaries are a foreign concept for Hinata, growing up as the youngest of 5 siblings she has become an expert of butting into other people's business. She can often annoys people because of her nosiness even though she doesn't mean any harm.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Gold and Red, Round.

Hair: White with a sunrise colored ombre, I would like hair style 7 from this, I would like her to have star and flower hair pins in the side of her hair that is pulled back.

Face: Round, a mole under each of her eyes

Clothes: I would like her to be wearing this kimono with this necklace and bracelet
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2018 2:25 pm


Senshi: Chibi-Sailor Amaterasu; senshi of sunrises

Challenge: "In the Name of the Sunrise, I'll punish You!"

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Red
Secondary Color: Gold/Orange/Purple

Fuku:

I would like the uniform to be based on this design

Collar -- A sailor collar on the coat with a red stripe
Bow -- I would like the black bow to be red
Bodice --
Sleeves --
Brooch --
Bottoms -- I would like the red skirt to be sparkly gold with a purple/orange gradient at the hem like a sun rise
Tiara -- A gold tiara with a vergina sun shape in the center with a red diamond in the center
Choker -- A red choker with a gold vergina sun
Shoes -- I would like these zori sandals with these tabi socks
Gloves -- no gloves
Accessories -- Gold stud earrings in the shape of a vergina sun with a red diamond in the center

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Rising Sun Infirmary
Amaterasu holds her hands together in front of her. As she raises her hands towards the sky a shining ball 3/4 the size of a basketball appears, the action mimicking a sunrise. Those within range of the light feel refreshed and rejuvenated as though just waking to the sunrise after a night's rest, they feel energy returning to them and minor wounds such as scrapes and bruises and small cuts are healed.
Uses: 3
Duration: 15 seconds
Reach: 5 feet

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Sparkling Solar Dream Aegis
Amaterasu holds her hands together in front of her. As she raises her hands towards the sky a shining ball the size of a basketball appears, the action mimicking a sunrise. Those within range of the light feel refreshed and rejuvenated as though just waking to the sunrise after a night's rest, they feel energy returning to them and minor wounds such as scrapes and bruises and small cuts are healed. Those inside the light may also lose the will to fight or cause harm, at player discretion this can also work on enemy characters.
Uses: 3
Duration: 20 seconds
Reach: 7 feet

Eternal Sailor Attack: Amaterasu Heavenly Solar Arc
Amaterasu holds her hands together in front of her. As she raises her hands towards the sky a shining ball of light just a little taller than her rises from behind her, mimicing a sunrise. All enemies are compelled to look into the light, where they will then be temporarily blinded and disoriented. Characters who look into the sun for longer will suffer more severe blindness, though others may simply have large spots affecting their vision or be unable to open their eyes to see what is going on because of the brightness. At player discretion, close proximity to the rising sun can leave burns or welts, however as a chibi these will always be minor.
Time (blinded): 35 seconds
Uses: 1
Range: up to 10 feet (chibi)

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2018 9:23 am


Aurelius0815


Hello Aure!

It looks like you've got a great start for Hinata -- Well rounded kid with a large family and a great personality to go along with it. I do have a few things to note about her civ side of things before moving on to her powered side.

For the blood type, we do need to know whether it's O+ or O- -- a little thing, but if you could please specify which of the two that would be wonderful!

When it comes to Hinata's bravery, what makes it a virtue? The way you have it worded currently makes it seem a bit more like the bravery that would send her into 'scary places' or try 'fighting off monsters' could be more dangerous, which would lend better towards being a flaw. I would recommend either tweaking it to other forms of bravery or consider changing the virtue to independent and possibly noting that despite being from such a large family she's not afraid of doing things/being alone.

I would like to pose the same question when it comes to Hinata's cheerfulness. The energy is great and staying positive is wonderful, but what are some examples of how she uses that cheerfulness to her advantage when it comes to interacting with others?

Her flaws look great and I love her style! It's always lovely to see what characters look like in their civilian styles as opposed to their school uniforms.

For Chibi Sailor Amaterasu -- Design-wise, she checks out, especially with the addition of a sailor-collar on her coat.

As for the attacks that you have laid out for her, I'm afraid that they don't really read as sunrise, and instead give off much more of a Sun or Holy Light feel with a side of Hope where both 'Sun' and 'Holy' are restricted spheres, as is 'Hope'.

I would recommend taking a look at Super Sailor Adria, the Senshi of Sunsets. While I am in no way suggesting copying the attacks that Kyu laid out for Sailor Adria, they are a very good example of how the imagery of a sunset (sunrise, in your case) can be used to inspire attacks without using the sun, or anything aligned too closely with it, itself.

There is also a Senshi of Dawn that has been approved previously, and while I am aware that sunrise and dawn are two different things, we'll have to make sure that we aren't stepping on any toes in that aspect as well.

If you have any questions or would like to toss around ideas for attacks, please let me know. Otherwise, I'll be back around the next time you quote me!
PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2019 9:48 am


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Sorry its been so long I sorta lost track of this quest but I believe I've fixed the issues discussed.

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PostPosted: Wed May 29, 2019 5:07 am


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Looks good to me, have fun!

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