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An evil known as The Corruption infects the land. Will the shinobi world overcome the corruption, or be consumed? 

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2018 1:02 am


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Clan Name: Doreddonōto Clan (Dreadnought Clan)
Village of Origin: N/A

Kekkei Genkai: Batoruāmā (Battle Armor): The Kekkei Genkai that the Doreddonōto Clan possesses is known as Battle Armor. This allows all members of the clan to release, bend, and harden their chakra into a solid armor that surrounds their body and enhances their physical capabilities and durability while active. Each clan member's armor looks different as their armor is much like a representation of themselves. A weapon is also often created in addition to the armor upon activation of their armor, however this is not always the case. They also do not experience the sensation of fear while in their armor form, which is both a good and a bad thing.

Bloodline Techniques:

Expanding Armor - D-Rank: The user while in armor form expands their armor to extend the reach of their attacks by up to 10 feet.

Projecting Armor - C-Rank: The user while in armor form expands and projects their armor into a chakra barrier that surrounds them and anyone else within 30 feet of them.

Monstrous Form - A-Rank: The user while in armor form will create an extra layer of armor surrounding the already present armor. Their armors will tighten around them causing them to feel even more like their armor is a part of them. The second layer of armor takes on a more monstrous form of their normal armor. Their physical capabilities increase more than normal in this form.

Secret Techniques:

N/A

Physical Characteristics: Members of the clan will typically have naturally white, gray, or silver hair.

History: The Doreddonōto Clan is a clan that has been hidden from the world for a long time. Most members of it up until very recently have lived their lives as normal citizens as they did not wish to become a part of the larger picture of things. Many members of the clan still do not wish this. However there are few clan members that have decided to take part in the world and not remain hidden and act as a normal citizen. As such few have become shinobi.

Summary: The Doreddonōto Clan is a clan that uses their chakra in a unique way to create a solid armor that surrounds them and enhances their physical capabilities. They will sometimes create weapons from chakra in addition to the armor, and do combat through the usage of this armor.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2018 10:51 pm


Avedis Angelus


I believe you need to add a bit more detail to your clan abilities. I enjoyed the idea but there needs to be a few fixes to clarity in my opinion.

1) How much does the armor enhance their physical capabilities and durability? Are there different levels of activation?

2) Would summoning a weapon in addition to the armor be a separate technique or just add to the appearance of the initial armor? I am not completely understanding it.

3) How strong is the projecting armor technique? List the strengths and weaknesses of the technique.

4) How much does the monstrous armor differ from the regular armor? List the strength enhancements to it compared to the regular form.

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