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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2018 12:14 pm
- Deleted by creator - Since I feel i am not wanted here, I will take my leave.
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2018 9:19 pm
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage and I will be judging your profile today.
❖Hi, so I apologize we already have a History teacher, however, you are more than welcome to just teach Aura Studies. ❖ Ok, Most people don't know this, however, Close Quarter combat range is 100 meters (300ft). I believe you meant more hand to hand combat ^.^; ❖ How much damage can you convert in your Semblance? I know it says a portion, but do you mean 10%, 20%, ect... ❖ How far can Thunderbird discharge to?
Please make the above changes while I talk to the crew more about your power. ^.^;
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2018 10:28 pm
Thank you for getting back to me! I have made the edits you requested. - I'm okay with Roc just teaching the Aura Studies. I just thought the professors could teach more than one class since that's generally what I'm used to gonk
- I did not know that actually! Thank you for the correction. I've changed the ranges to CQC-to-H2H for her strongest skill. Since if she's good with her bow-axe-glaive then I'm sure she can throw a punch just fine.
- I added that the damage conversion is 20% and the discharge range is 5-feet in her immediate area.
Hopefully these edits are all okay. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 11:43 am
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ We don't require you to teach more than one class, however, we do ask that sometimes you Substitute for classes that are missing teachers. ^.^
❖Ok, after talking with the crew about your RPC, (Because we do group judgings a lot), we noticed that you have a lot of talents under Primary Talent. We understand that there are some things that you are good at, but that is the one that you are the best at. ❖ For your Arrows, we want to make sure that they are Physical arrows with no dust on them. (Dust is very limited in this guild at the moment.) ❖ ❖
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 2:23 pm
- I listed a lot? Could you please explain further question I have reread what I wrote and I only stated that she has a deft control over her Aura, which would logically mean she also has stamina to match and the natural defense/offense that would come from having such a control. I did not think my phrasing was any more extensive than some of the students I saw that were accepted with "good fighter" and explaining what that means.
- I stated the Arrows are physical and that the Dust is only administered via cores that are inserted into a slot found in Glaive and Bow mode; earlier in the section sweatdrop
Quote: Physical arrows but Aura can also be used to launch slashes made in glaive and axe-mode at the cost of draining the Dust-cores.
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 5:07 pm
Jazz Lounge-Overdrive - I listed a lot? Could you please explain further question I have reread what I wrote and I only stated that she has a deft control over her Aura, which would logically mean she also has stamina to match and the natural defense/offense that would come from having such a control. I did not think my phrasing was any more extensive than some of the students I saw that were accepted with "good fighter" and explaining what that means.
- I stated the Arrows are physical and that the Dust is only administered via cores that are inserted into a slot found in Glaive and Bow mode; earlier in the section sweatdrop
Quote: Physical arrows but Aura can also be used to launch slashes made in glaive and axe-mode at the cost of draining the Dust-cores.
I'm going to quote my good friend Eddy who helped on the judgement. Quote: I'm saying it sounds like more than 1 talent: Roc is sturdy and enduring; possessing an extensive control over her Aura for both defensive and offensive purposes. Coupled with her Aura a strong supply of stamina is always present. sturdy and enduring is cool extensive control over her Aura is cool (as a seperate thing)(edited) a strong supply of stamina is cool (as a seperate thing) looks like 3 things but that might be me misunderstanding it We just wanted to make sure since Dust is rare in this guild, to the point that you could only have about 8 arrows with dust. ^.^
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 5:31 pm
Alright, I can see where you're decision regarding Roc's Primary Talent is coming from. HOWEVER, I will still point you to the accepted characters with "Good fighter", which some then go on to list 3 or 4 traits that are universally assumed about being a "good fighter". Someone with proficient Aura Control should logically have decent stamina to coincide with their ability to control the energy. This compounds into also having a good defense and Aura-related offense by proxy, because it is Aura and we all know Aura is a shield and also a universal force that can harm. This is no different than a "good fighter" logically being fast, strong, and-or capable with their weapon because that's what "good fighters" sound like.
I also understand your lore-stances on the arrows but I stated clearly already, twice, the arrows do not have Dust. They can be charged with dust via a secondary apparatus found in the bow's drawn form. This means the ammo is directly correlated to the dust-Core in the bow, not the arrow. Again, I have clearly stated this already.
I will be leaving the guild now, since it feels that I am not wanted here. I hope you all have a good day xp
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