█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team JLRX, [Jolt Remix] █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Joji, Lavender and Rori █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Xan █OCCUPATION ▬ Student, and waiter
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'6 █WEIGHT ▬ 135 lb
█HAIR ▬ Blonde █CLOTHING ▬ (See pictures, changes style every now and then.) █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Cyan █BUILD ▬ thin █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ N/A █MARKINGS ▬ N/A
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Long Range combat █Other Talents ▬ Very skilled cook, stealth combat, support fire. █Faunus Skill ▬ Being a Chameleon faunus her tongue is longer and sticky at the end of it and she can change colors with her emotions, depending on her emotion she can change colors to hide herself, but if she can't focus then she has no control over it. Her cloths are special as well, since all of her cloths work with her faunus ability to go into camo. █Strongest Skill ▬ Long range combat, shooting from afar with her sniper, with her semblence she can lay down suppressive fire so her teammates can get in close to attack. Able to make an accurate shot at her enemies and before they could follow after her she will shoot them down. █Weakest Skill ▬ Melee combat, although her weapon can turn into a melee form her weak point is close combat since shes not used to fighting up close, if someone is an up close specialist she will always lose to them.
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking █ ▬ Her team █ ▬ Ramen █ ▬ Her scarf (mom made it for her) █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ bullies █ ▬ mushroom █ ▬ the ocean █ ▬ grimms █ ▬ Losing her eyesight █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Very nice, kind, gentle but she can be very shy and timid at times. But once she gets to know someone better she will be a bit more open with them. █Vernacular ▬ Basic █Positive Traits ▬ Very kind and gentle, she has an aura of good around her, meaning anyone who sees her will always see and treat her as a good person. She has a very trustworthy and dependable trait. █Negative Traits ▬ Very shy and timid around people she doesn't know she she will start off very distant with them, have to be patient around her and always try to associate themselves with her.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Xandria was born in Vale along with her family, she was an only child so she grew up with her family lovingly. Both of her parents were very skilled hunters and had a bit of a reputation on themselves. It was only a matter of time before Xandria was taken up to be taught how to become a huntress herself, since it was in the family line after all. But during her younger days being a hunter wasn't her main focus, as a child and growing up she was treated more like a daughter as she had a very good and close relationship with her parents, they taught her how to cook, clean, and be a good person. While she was still young her mother knitted her a blue scarf on her fifth birthday, she took it as one of her most prized processions and never left home without it. As she grew older, thats when they started to teach her how to be a hunter at first her parents taught her in all different types of weapons to see which she liked the best, she eventually ended up with the sniper rifle, she had a nack of hitting targets from afar. As she grew older with her parents she took on small time grimms for training so she had experience of killing grimms. When she got old enough she was sent to Beacon Academy by her parent's recommendation, since both of her parents graduated from there, she wanted to be just like them a great huntress. So when she was old enough she enrolled for Beacon Academy and couldn't wait for first day of school.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Dark Shot █ ▬ A weapon that comes in a easy carry mode looks like a thermos bottle, when activated it turns into a sniper rifle that can also turn into a halberd. The weapon can takes any and all dust rounds, as well as the melee form doing dust round damage as well. █Melee Form ▬ Halberd █Ranged Form ▬ Sniper rifle █Other Form(s) ▬ Carry on form looks like a water bottle. █Ammo Type ▬ Dust rounds █ ▬ melee is her weak point, she doesn't like to go into her melee form often.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Blue Scarf, works with her faunus ability to camo █ ▬ cloths, all of her cloths are special in a way where they can camo along with her skin as to her faunus ability. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Knight's Order █*AURA COLOR ▬ dark blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ A semblence that matches her fighting style perfectly of fighting from afar and never having to fight up close, making her opponents at a range shes comfortable with, shes able to do this by making 3 robot nodes that hover around Xandria to act as sensory nodes to keep her safe, shoot at anyone who doesn't permit as friendly, and act as her eyes and ears in battle. Each robot node will automatically lock onto any opponent she doesn't find a friendly and will fire beams at them, anything foreign within her field will be prioritized by the nodes, anything not pre-established on her list will be shot at. Each node can make a small shield together as well, to block incoming attacks to keep Xandria safe. Each robot node can only withstand [3] hits from the same rank before it is destroyed. Every rank will give them an additional point but that number is reduced by 1 if struck by a higher ranked attack. Starting base field is 20 feet, each rank will increase it by 5. Whatever dust rounds she put in her main weapon, the robot nodes will mimic that dust ability and will fire laser beams made up of whatever dust ability she put into her original gun. █ ▬ Level 0: She robot nodes are basically just turrets who fire on her opponents as she sees them. 20 feet is their range vision and attack range. █ ▬ Level 1: Her robot nodes can each hear for her, whatever they hear she can as well. 25 feet is their range vision and attack range. █ ▬ Level 2: At this level her robots can start seeing her targets, each of her nodes are its own separate robot so they can see separately. 30 feet is their range vision and attack range. █ ▬ Level 3: Robots can start becoming their own separate being, so when they need to defend Xandria while shes attacking they will without her consent switching from defending and attacking by themselves together. 40 feet is their range of vision and attack range. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ - If an opponent leaves the field the robots will no long aim for them, until they reenter it. - people have to be pre-established with Xandira that they're allies, anyone else she doesn't know about will get shot at, friend or foe alike. - Her robot nodes can only do one or the other, if their attacking they can't defend me, if their defending me they can't attack. All three have to be doing the same thing in order for it to work.
Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2018 4:43 am
N7-Ame
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ (Text)
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Dark Shot █ ▬ A weapon that comes in a easy carry mode looks like a water bottle but then it extends to a pistol, then into a sniper rifle that turns into a halberd. The weapon can takes any and all dust rounds, as well as the melee form doing dust round damage as well. █Melee Form ▬ Halberd █Ranged Form ▬ Sniper rifle █Other Form(s) ▬ Carry on form looks like a water bottle, and turns into a pistol as well. █Ammo Type ▬ Dust rounds █ ▬ melee is her weak point, she doesn't like to go into her melee form often.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬
I'm sorry but I can't allow a weapon to be this multi functional. Well not really functional but, there's no way a halberd/sniper can condense to a water bottle or a pistol.
█*NAME ▬ Aystolis Justice █*AURA COLOR ▬ dark blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ A semblence that matches her fighting style perfectly of fighting from afar and never having to fight up close, making her opponents at a range shes comfortable with, shes able to do this by making 3 robot nodes that hover around Xandria to act as sensory nodes to keep her safe, shoot at anyone who doesn't permit as friendly, and act as her eyes and ears in battle. Each robot node will automatically lock onto any opponent she doesn't find a friendly and will fire beams at them, anything foreign within her field will be prioritized by the nodes, anything not pre-established on her list will be shot at. Each node can make a small shield together as well, to block incoming attacks to keep Xandria safe. Each robot node can only withstand [3] hits from the same rank before it is destroyed, as each robot is destroyed the power of their attack and shield are weakened. Every rank will give them an additional point but that number is reduced by 1 if struct by a higher ranked attack. Starting base field is 20 feet, each rank will increase it by 5. Whatever dust rounds she put in her main weapon, the robot nodes will mimic that dust ability and will fire laser beams made up of whatever dust ability she put into her original gun. █ ▬ (Level 0//0-99 posts) █ ▬ (Level 1//100-199 posts) █ ▬ (Level 2//200-299 posts) █ ▬ (Level 3//300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ - If an opponent leaves the field the robots will no long aim for them, until they reenter it. - people have to be pre-established with Xandira that they're allies, anyone else she doesn't know about will get shot at, friend or foe alike. - Her robot nodes can only do one or the other, if their attacking they can't defend me, if their defending me they can't attack. All three have to be doing the same thing in order for it to work.
Personally, it'd be really helpful If you filled out the levels. Now for what I'm going to say about it. 1. For this I'm going to need to say that you have to be aware of anything foreign within her field for the robots to shoot at it. So sneak attacks will walk right on by your robots.
2. Also in order for them to block an attack you must command them to do so, which means you can't be focused on something like shooting at distance. (you can be running and stuff, but basically it's a full defense mode)
3. With that said, the power of their attacks doesn't need to be weakened as each robot is destroyed (they're seperate entities) but it's up to you if you wanna keep that. (the shield they make together will as it requires all of them)
Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2018 2:41 pm
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖
Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I have heard from Eddy_Soul5 that you would like a second, or third opinion on your profile. In this judgement, I'll be stating things that both myself and xLulie have said on Discord, when Eddy_Soul5 requested for us to look at it.
❖One of the first things that I noticed when I looked at your profile is that under strongest skill, it seems to trail off. Extrapolating information would say that is shooting at a distance, however, I need you to finish that wording as it is important information. ❖ When looking at the archetype section, I noticed that you are missing the weakest skill. We need that to assess things, and to help you develop your character in the future, and then, you can always make sure that if you work on it, that it can be changed later. However, everyone has a weakness. ❖The next part that I see is that the personality section is completely empty. I can understand not having some kind of mental illness, however, the personality section of the profiles help us pair you with people that are very much like yourself. That is if you can not form a team on your own. ❖I apologize, however, I do not allow RPC's to be passed unless you have some form of a biography. I don't care if it is only one paragraph, you came from somewhere. It would also explain why you like the scarf that your mother gave you. ❖I have to agree with Eddy here. I don't believe that your weapon should be this multi-functional. I know it's convenient to have it be in a small thermos, however, it would take a long time for it to unravel from there, and a long time to get it to go back as well. I also can't see it becoming a pistol as well. There are just far too many moving parts on this weapon for it to be functional. Also, I'd like to see the picture of the Halberd that it turns into. There is also a weakness to this weapon, that I don't think you are aware of. Dust in Vale is very rare at the moment, therefore you may not be able to get ammo for your sniper rifle. ❖Ok, reading your semblance, I see that you have for the levels that the distance they are from you and their HP increases. However, being able to do everything that they can do at level 0 is too much. I agree with Eddy and xLulie on this matter. We need to space out everything that you are able to do with these robots. At this point, you can block 9 hits at a time, and without information about when you can resummon them, there isn't a way for you to ever be hit. We suggest that you space it out as such
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level 0: You have to know something's there for them to do anything level 1 they can hear things for you level 2 they can see things for you level 3 you can attack while they do their thing
We are perfectly fine with the distance getting longer and the HP going up as you progress in levels.
If you have any issues with what I have said, feel free to pm me, or to dm me on Discord. I am here almost all day.
█BACKGROUND ▬ Xandria was born in Vale along with her family, she was an only child so she grew up with her family lovingly. Both of her parents were very skilled hunters and had a bit of a reputation on themselves. It was only a matter of time before Xandria was taken up to be taught how to become a huntress herself, since it was in the family line after all. But during her younger days being a hunter wasn't her main focus, as a child and growing up she was treated more like a daughter as she had a very good and close relationship with her parents, they taught her how to cook, clean, and be a good person. While she was still young her mother knitted her a blue scarf on her fifth birthday, she took it as one of her most prized processions and never left home without it. As she grew older, thats when they started to teach her how to be a hunter at first her parents taught her in all different types of weapons to see which she liked the best, she eventually ended up with the sniper rifle, she had a nack of hitting targets from afar. As she grew older with her parents she took on small time grimms for training so she had experience of killing grimms. When she got old enough she was sent to Beacon Academy by her parent's recommendation, since both of her parents graduated from there, she wanted to be just like them a great huntress. So when she was old enough she enrolled for Beacon Academy and couldn't wait for first day of school.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Dark Shot █ ▬ A weapon that comes in a easy carry mode looks like a thermos bottle, when activated it turns into a sniper rifle that can also turn into a halberd. The weapon can takes any and all dust rounds, as well as the melee form doing dust round damage as well. █Melee Form ▬ Halberd █Ranged Form ▬ Sniper rifle █Other Form(s) ▬ Carry on form looks like a water bottle, and turns into a pistol as well. █Ammo Type ▬ Dust rounds █ ▬ melee is her weak point, she doesn't like to go into her melee form often.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Blue Scarf, works with her faunus ability to camo █ ▬ cloths, all of her cloths are special in a way where they can camo along with her skin as to her faunus ability. █ ▬
Everything looks good. Only thing is the large weapon becoming very small. We don't mind if it becomes smaller (nothing more than 20% smaller), but a weapon of that size would never fit in one hand.
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team JLRX, [Jolt Remix] █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Joji, Lavender and Rori █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Xan █OCCUPATION ▬ Student, and waiter
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'6 █WEIGHT ▬ 135 lb
█HAIR ▬ Blonde █CLOTHING ▬ (See pictures, changes style every now and then.) █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Cyan █BUILD ▬ thin █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ N/A █MARKINGS ▬ N/A
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Long Range combat █Other Talents ▬ Very skilled cook, stealth combat, support fire. █Faunus Skill ▬ Being a Chameleon faunus her tongue is longer and sticky at the end of it and she can change colors with her emotions, depending on her emotion she can change colors to hide herself, but if she can't focus then she has no control over it. Her cloths are special as well, since all of her cloths work with her faunus ability to go into camo. █Strongest Skill ▬ Long range combat, shooting from afar with her sniper, with her semblence she can lay down suppressive fire so her teammates can get in close to attack. Able to make an accurate shot at her enemies and before they could follow after her she will shoot them down. █Weakest Skill ▬ Melee combat, although her weapon can turn into a melee form her weak point is close combat since shes not used to fighting up close, if someone is an up close specialist she will always lose to them.
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking █ ▬ Her team █ ▬ Ramen █ ▬ Her scarf (mom made it for her) █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ bullies █ ▬ mushroom █ ▬ the ocean █ ▬ grimms █ ▬ Losing her eyesight █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Very nice, kind, gentle but she can be very shy and timid at times. But once she gets to know someone better she will be a bit more open with them. █Vernacular ▬ Basic █Positive Traits ▬ Very kind and gentle, she has an aura of good around her, meaning anyone who sees her will always see and treat her as a good person. She has a very trustworthy and dependable trait. █Negative Traits ▬ Very shy and timid around people she doesn't know she she will start off very distant with them, have to be patient around her and always try to associate themselves with her.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Xandria was born in Vale along with her family, she was an only child so she grew up with her family lovingly. Both of her parents were very skilled hunters and had a bit of a reputation on themselves. It was only a matter of time before Xandria was taken up to be taught how to become a huntress herself, since it was in the family line after all. But during her younger days being a hunter wasn't her main focus, as a child and growing up she was treated more like a daughter as she had a very good and close relationship with her parents, they taught her how to cook, clean, and be a good person. While she was still young her mother knitted her a blue scarf on her fifth birthday, she took it as one of her most prized processions and never left home without it. As she grew older, thats when they started to teach her how to be a hunter at first her parents taught her in all different types of weapons to see which she liked the best, she eventually ended up with the sniper rifle, she had a nack of hitting targets from afar. As she grew older with her parents she took on small time grimms for training so she had experience of killing grimms. When she got old enough she was sent to Beacon Academy by her parent's recommendation, since both of her parents graduated from there, she wanted to be just like them a great huntress. So when she was old enough she enrolled for Beacon Academy and couldn't wait for first day of school.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Dark Shot █ ▬ A weapon that comes in a easy carry mode looks like a thermos bottle, when activated it turns into a sniper rifle that can also turn into a halberd. The weapon can takes any and all dust rounds, as well as the melee form doing dust round damage as well. █Melee Form ▬ Halberd █Ranged Form ▬ Sniper rifle █Other Form(s) ▬ Carry on form looks like a water bottle. █Ammo Type ▬ Dust rounds █ ▬ melee is her weak point, she doesn't like to go into her melee form often.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Blue Scarf, works with her faunus ability to camo █ ▬ cloths, all of her cloths are special in a way where they can camo along with her skin as to her faunus ability. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Knight's Order █*AURA COLOR ▬ dark blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ A semblence that matches her fighting style perfectly of fighting from afar and never having to fight up close, making her opponents at a range shes comfortable with, shes able to do this by making 3 robot nodes that hover around Xandria to act as sensory nodes to keep her safe, shoot at anyone who doesn't permit as friendly, and act as her eyes and ears in battle. Each robot node will automatically lock onto any opponent she doesn't find a friendly and will fire beams at them, anything foreign within her field will be prioritized by the nodes, anything not pre-established on her list will be shot at. Each node can make a small shield together as well, to block incoming attacks to keep Xandria safe. Each robot node can only withstand [3] hits from the same rank before it is destroyed. Every rank will give them an additional point but that number is reduced by 1 if struck by a higher ranked attack. Starting base field is 20 feet, each rank will increase it by 5. Whatever dust rounds she put in her main weapon, the robot nodes will mimic that dust ability and will fire laser beams made up of whatever dust ability she put into her original gun. █ ▬ Level 0: She robot nodes are basically just turrets who fire on her opponents as she sees them. 20 feet is their range vision and attack range. █ ▬ Level 1: Her robot nodes can each hear for her, whatever they hear she can as well. 25 feet is their range vision and attack range. █ ▬ Level 2: At this level her robots can start seeing her targets, each of her nodes are its own separate robot so they can see separately. 30 feet is their range vision and attack range. █ ▬ Level 3: Robots can start becoming their own separate being, so when they need to defend Xandria while shes attacking they will without her consent switching from defending and attacking by themselves together. 40 feet is their range of vision and attack range. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ - If an opponent leaves the field the robots will no long aim for them, until they reenter it. - people have to be pre-established with Xandira that they're allies, anyone else she doesn't know about will get shot at, friend or foe alike. - Her robot nodes can only do one or the other, if their attacking they can't defend me, if their defending me they can't attack. All three have to be doing the same thing in order for it to work.
