█*NAME ▬ Oswald Star █*AGE ▬ 17 █*FACTION ▬ Vale █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 6.0" █WEIGHT ▬ 190 lbs
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Black leather . █ACCESSORIES ▬ Necklace of the cross █EYES ▬ Grey █BUILD ▬ Athletic build w/ Lean muscle █TATTOOS ▬ none █SCARS ▬ none █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ n/a
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Physical Strength; having striking power enough to punch through a solid wall and stones; especially causing some serious damage to his opponents. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ He is very agile; he is very swift and/or acrobatic (ex: holding his body with one hand upside down, performing wall runs, or even flips and spin attacks while in midair.) █Other Talents ▬ He is a gifted fighter; especially at Close Combat; even more hand to hand. He is an expert pianist He can cook really well
█LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ True Damage- He is always able to throw an attack at maximum power and receive little to no fatigue. █Weakest Skill ▬ He lacks range; relying on close combat █Other Skills ▬ Amazing Reaction Time - He is able to respond to attacks and counter the target(s).
One Inch Punch - He is an expert of the 'One inch punch' able to deliver enough force that is close enough with a full punch.
█LIKES █ ▬ Physical Activity/Martial arts █ ▬ People that can be depended on █ ▬ Cooking █ ▬ Strong People █ ▬ Piano █DISLIKES █ ▬ Nagging █ ▬ People invading his personal space █ ▬ Rude People █ ▬ Crowds █ ▬ Bullying █PERSONALITY TRAITS
█ ▬ Oswald is a rough delinquent, but he has a gentle heart, and is loyal to those he likes. █ ▬ Serious Business-Like/ No nonsense demeanor █ ▬ Though he might be a delinquent, he is only rash for a reason; if someone is being bullied, and it is someone that he knows, he is going to kick butt. But while not in any confrontation he speaks in a business like manner. █ ▬ Voice ▬ This is his voice. Oswald speaks in a serious manner.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
Oswald grew up in the slums of the city, Vale. Being in the slums were obviously eventful, his father being a criminal and mother that has depression and drug addict but loves him. At an early age, his father taught him combat and martial arts as soon as he learned to walk. His father's luck eventually ran out when some of his enemies shot him while he and his mother were hiding in a wall inside the house. He was 7 at the time. Now his father being dead, he had to protect his mother. He used all his skills to commit small crimes like theft and underground fights. Earning money to put some food on the table. One day some man came knocking on the door. This man was an associate of Oswald's father. And a will that is presented to him. A new house that is instructed with money that is hidden and an education for Oswald as well as training to be a huntsman. Everything was prepared for him; education, physical training, and combat training. For a while in his life, he wasn't well bonded with his father that died , but now he is having some doubts about him. Oswald earned an education and training to be a huntsman and on his 17th birthday he would start as a student to finish off his training in this new school, Beacon Academy. .
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Knuckle Busters █ ▬ An iron glove than covers his hand and forearm. █Melee Form ▬ Melee █Ranged Form ▬ n/a █Other Form(s) ▬ n/a █Ammo Type ▬ n/a █ ▬ No Range Function
█*NAME ▬ Combo Star █*AURA COLOR ▬ Sun Red █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Oswald is able to increase the damage of attacks after each attacks that land. Every attack that makes physical contact the stronger the next attack will be. Every direct physical hit (must be melee hits like punches, kicks, elbows etc) that lands on a foe will be added on top of the next hit with bonus effects. The first attack hits like normal, but the second hit will feel like two hits (aura injected into foe adds the damage), and the third hit will feel like one is getting punched three times. Note: Oswald can punch 1000lbs of force.
█ ▬ Level 0 ▬ Oswald's attacks are multiplied by each hit is made. Combo Multiplier – 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 Combo Limit – 6
█ ▬ Level 1 ▬ Oswald's combo is enhanced. After the second attack, the third attack is multiplied by 2 from the previous attack Combo Multiplier – 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 12, 13, 14, 28 Combo Limit – 9
█ ▬ Level 2 ▬ On the 'Two' of a One-Two Combo is doubled from the Odd number. Combo Multiplier – 1, 2, 3, 6, 7, 14, 15, 30, 31, 62, 63, 126. Combo Limit – 12
█ ▬ Level 3 ▬ After the second punch is made, EVERY Punch is multiplied by 2 from the previous punch. Combo Multiplier – 1, 2, 4, 8, 16, 32, 64, 128, 256, 512, 1024, 2048,4096, 8192, 16384, 32,768 Combo Limit – 15
█ *DRAWBACKS ▬ Oswalds combo resets when he sustains damage; the damage must be effective; Must be a real attack like a punch to the face or body or a arrow/bullet that was shot to his shoulder, etc.
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[CEOxJOE & Oswald Star]
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Oswald Star █*AGE ▬ 16 █*FACTION ▬ Vale █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬Knuckles █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Physical Strength & Strikiking Power █Other Talents ▬ Stamina & Endurance █Strongest Skill ▬ Agility █Weakest Skill ▬ Long Range
█LIKES █ ▬ Physical Activity/Martialarts █ ▬ People that can be depended on █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Gloves, Sunglasses █ ▬ Likes the Flute █DISLIKES █ ▬ Nagging █ ▬ Bitter Food █ ▬ Banjo █ ▬ Cats █ ▬ Crowds █PERSONALITY TRAITS █ ▬ Oswald is a rough delinquent, but he has a gentle heart, and is loyal to those he likes. He is highly perceptive, no-nonsense demeanor. █ ▬ Serious Business-Like/ No nonsense demeanor █ ▬ Though he might be a delinquent, he is only rash for a reason; if someone is being bullied, and it is someone that he knows, he is going to kick butt. █ ▬ Regardless of motive, he always starts most of the trouble that the trouble following him.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ (Text)
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Pulverizer Gauntlets █ ▬ (Description) █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form: None █ ▬ Jet Mode: Within the back of his shoulders, there are prepulsers that allows him to rush in to his enemies with great speed, closing the distance between him and them. █ ▬ n/a █ ▬
█*NAME ▬ Combo Star █*AURA COLOR ▬ Sun Red █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ (General Description: In the 3 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels) █ ▬ Level 0 ▬ Every punch that lands, will be added(First punch is 1 punch, Second punch is 2 punches hitting you, Third punch is worth 3 hits ,4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, etc) █ ▬ Level 1 ▬ Every third strike, the punch is doubled from the previous punch (1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 12, 13, 14, 28, 29, 30, 60) █ ▬ Level 2 ▬ On the 'Two' of a One-Two Combo is doubled from the even number. (1, 2, 3, 6, 7, 14, 15, 30, 31, 62, 63, 126). Burst: a punch that blasts the opponent and knocks them back . [Range is Combo Strike=Feet] █ ▬ Level 3 ▬ After the second punch is made, EVERY Punch is multiplied by 2 from the previous punch (level 3: 1, 2, 4, 8, 16, 32, 64, 128, 256, 512, 1024). Gains a Second Burst attack
█*DRAWBACKS ▬ If he gets hit by an attack or strikes a new target, his combo resets ▬ If Burst(Energy Punch) is Activated the combo is reset. ▬ Knocked back unless a physical contact with a punch is made ▬ At level 3, Combo is reset after Second Burst
Hello i am boo i am your Judge today. As per my style ill qoute the parts then move on
█ Primary Talent ▬ Oswald has so much destructive power that he can be considered too strong with the power behind those fists. █ Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ With training over the years not only does he have incredible strength but his speed matches his power. Too attack someone and stop them in their tracks with fast attacks that they won't have time. He can move at incredible speeds that attacking or catching up to him is difficult.
How strong is strong. Also your bonus talent is … why can people who have semblances that boost speed have difficulty catching him? Or is this meant as a general statement of he is fast over land? Or is his hands fast in movement (one would be hand dexterity one would be actual physical speed)
This is more a query than anything. Why swordsmanship and not brawling? Brawling would suit your character more wouldn't it?
Anyway
In your bio you say his mother death then at “his father estate with his widow” The mother came back from the dead to and killed the father? A father's widow would be the mother? Or is it Oswald widow? And he's a zombie? As a widow is the partner of the one who died… but a father's widow would mean the fathers dead and the mother is alive?????? can this be reworded to be a little more clear
[4:50 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: Alright so he has four parents [4:50 AM] The BOO of Christmas Past: i understood that [4:50 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: Step Dad x Real Mother - Real dad x step mom [4:50 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: Real mom and real dad die [4:51 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: Step mom raises him [4:51 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: That's who he means by fahters widow [4:51 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: And I guess both sets of parents were rich? [4:51 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: But the money would go to the spouses. Step dad and Step mom would also have to die for him to inherit all their money [4:52 AM] The BOO of Christmas Past: but.. his bio doesnt say .. [4:53 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: But then the dad comes back to life? [4:54 AM] The BOO of Christmas Past: im tempted ot change that part jsut to say can you please just reword it to make a little bit more sense [4:54 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: Seeing how his father’s widow was still enamored with him after all he had done to her made him want above all else absolute power and become a hunter. His stepmother had eventually passed and his father became even more fierce. [4:54 AM] The BOO of Christmas Past: But .. [4:55 AM] The BOO of Christmas Past: You cant have a fathers widow ... and the father .. both be alive! [4:55 AM] The BOO of Christmas Past: The fathers alive then there not widowed! [4:55 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: Exactly [4:55 AM] The BOO of Christmas Past: ZOMBIES! [4:55 AM] Off Season Spooky DeadlyTiger: ZOMBIES! [4:55 AM] The BOO of Christmas Past: Totaly qouting this in the profile judge under a spoiler
Right and now onto something completely different. Your weapon.
█ ▬ His body is covered in this metal armor that is light and durable. Increasing his power and physical abilities. He can punch harder, move faster, take punishment. This would most likely me his main or melee.
How much of a impact can it take? Does it use dust to increase its functions (so dust becomes a limiting factor ) How much harder or faster cna he move and why can it increase his movement (is it powered as power armour implies if so is it dust or electricity) Especially for flight mode? Also how far can he fly before it fails or runs out?
And another observation. No scroll? (phone)
And finally onto semblance.
Please add a general descriptor … even if its just. This semblance increases the strength of punches does each level stack or replace it Your level 1 is doubled on the odds not the evens on your example. It would be going 1 2 3 8 9 20 ? Honestly i kinda don't like the doubling it from a linear line at level 0 to a exponential. It is also broken rather quickly. Can the numbers be changed to a more linear pattern (for the more number dumb) On reading your old semblance you have changed level 1-3 to be more powerful. This new level of power is not actually okay sadly as it very quickly spirals out. Especially as they are exponential numbers Your drawback is also no longer a drawback as it does not reset at level 3. And for the first five hits at level 2. That brings you up to 32 impacts in once go without any fear of losing the combo or impact. It also refreshes on a single hit? So this five hits and the combo is lost is actually infinite hits and the combo is lost. This is a No.
█*NAME ▬ Oswald Star █*AGE ▬ 17 █*FACTION ▬ Vale █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 6.0" █WEIGHT ▬ 190 lbs
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Black leather . █ACCESSORIES ▬ Necklace of the cross █EYES ▬ Grey █BUILD ▬ Athletic build w/ Lean muscle █TATTOOS ▬ none █SCARS ▬ none █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ n/a
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Physical Strength; having striking power enough to punch through a solid wall and stones; especially causing some serious damage to his opponents. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ He is very agile; he is very swift and/or acrobatic (ex: holding his body with one hand upside down, performing wall runs, or even flips and spin attacks while in midair.) █Other Talents ▬ He is a gifted fighter; especially at Close Combat; even more hand to hand. He is an expert pianist He can cook really well
█LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ True Damage- He is always able to throw an attack at maximum power and receive little to no fatigue. █Weakest Skill ▬ He lacks range; relying on close combat █Other Skills ▬ Amazing Reaction Time - He is able to respond to attacks and counter the target(s).
One Inch Punch - He is an expert of the 'One inch punch' able to deliver enough force that is close enough with a full punch.
█LIKES █ ▬ Physical Activity/Martial arts █ ▬ People that can be depended on █ ▬ Cooking █ ▬ Strong People █ ▬ Piano █DISLIKES █ ▬ Nagging █ ▬ People invading his personal space █ ▬ Rude People █ ▬ Crowds █ ▬ Bullying █PERSONALITY TRAITS
█ ▬ Oswald is a rough delinquent, but he has a gentle heart, and is loyal to those he likes. █ ▬ Serious Business-Like/ No nonsense demeanor █ ▬ Though he might be a delinquent, he is only rash for a reason; if someone is being bullied, and it is someone that he knows, he is going to kick butt. But while not in any confrontation he speaks in a business like manner. █ ▬ Voice ▬ This is his voice. Oswald speaks in a serious manner.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
Oswald grew up in the slums of the city, Vale. Being in the slums were obviously eventful, his father being a criminal and mother that has depression and drug addict but loves him. At an early age, his father taught him combat and martial arts as soon as he learned to walk. His father's luck eventually ran out when some of his enemies shot him while he and his mother were hiding in a wall inside the house. He was 7 at the time. Now his father being dead, he had to protect his mother. He used all his skills to commit small crimes like theft and underground fights. Earning money to put some food on the table. One day some man came knocking on the door. This man was an associate of Oswald's father. And a will that is presented to him. A new house that is instructed with money that is hidden and an education for Oswald as well as training to be a huntsman. Everything was prepared for him; education, physical training, and combat training. For a while in his life, he wasn't well bonded with his father that died , but now he is having some doubts about him. Oswald earned an education and training to be a huntsman and on his 17th birthday he would start as a student to finish off his training in this new school, Beacon Academy. .
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Knuckle Busters █ ▬ An iron glove than covers his hand and forearm. █Melee Form ▬ Melee █Ranged Form ▬ n/a █Other Form(s) ▬ n/a █Ammo Type ▬ n/a █ ▬ No Range Function
█*NAME ▬ Combo Star █*AURA COLOR ▬ Sun Red █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Oswald is able to increase the damage of attacks after each attacks that land. Every attack that makes physical contact the stronger the next attack will be. Every direct physical hit (must be melee hits like punches, kicks, elbows etc) that lands on a foe will be added on top of the next hit with bonus effects. The first attack hits like normal, but the second hit will feel like two hits (aura injected into foe adds the damage), and the third hit will feel like one is getting punched three times. Note: Oswald can punch 1000lbs of force.
█ ▬ Level 0 ▬ Oswald's attacks are multiplied by each hit is made. Combo Multiplier – 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 Combo Limit – 6
█ ▬ Level 1 ▬ Oswald's combo is enhanced. After the second attack, the third attack is multiplied by 2 from the previous attack Combo Multiplier – 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 12, 13, 14, 28 Combo Limit – 9
█ ▬ Level 2 ▬ On the 'Two' of a One-Two Combo is doubled from the Odd number. Combo Multiplier – 1, 2, 3, 6, 7, 14, 15, 30, 31, 62, 63, 126. Combo Limit – 12
█ ▬ Level 3 ▬ After the second punch is made, EVERY Punch is multiplied by 2 from the previous punch. Combo Multiplier – 1, 2, 4, 8, 16, 32, 64, 128, 256, 512, 1024, 2048,4096, 8192, 16384, 32,768 Combo Limit – 15
█ *DRAWBACKS ▬ Oswalds combo resets when he sustains damage; the damage must be effective; Must be a real attack like a punch to the face or body or a arrow/bullet that was shot to his shoulder, etc.
