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[Raffle-Q] Vivian O'Moore // Sailor Perdix of Partridges

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Leopleuradon

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2018 7:54 am


Name: Vivian O'Moore

Nickname: Vi

Age: 20

Birthday: March 26th

Sign: Aries

Gemstone: Aquamarine

Blood Type: B+

Fav. Food: Hearty stews!

Hated Food: Chocolate, she must be some sort of alien. Ha.

School: Destiny City University, Digital Media major

Hobbies:
Animation - Vi has loved drawing for as long as she can remember. She was that kid that hated when she colored outside of the lines and was generally a bit of a perfectionist with her pictures. It was a talent she grew up mastering. She still remembers the first time she got a tablet and could draw on the computer. It was so cool! Eventually she started fiddling with animation and found it was super fun!
Video Games - Video games are probably the reason she started to tinker with animation. Here she saw art and entertainment all mixed into one enjoyable source. She'll play just about anything, but action adventure or RPG games. The stories in the games she plays are really important. Also, Pokemon will always been her first true love when it comes to gaming!
Youtuber - It's not all that easy to become youtube famous as an Animator. It takes a lot of work just to make one video and mostly people are interested in daily posts from their favs. Still, she's trying to make it work. Making simple animations of her everyday encounters and making them as funny as possible. She has a little bit of a following and is quite proud of that. She also keeps up with the latest games on her channel.

Virtues:
Hardworking - Vi always seems to be working on something. Between her school work and youtube channel there always seems to be something to work on. She tries to do her best for both of them, but at times she does have to take a break from animating for fun to do it for a school project. This doesn't just apply to her projects though. She works hard to maintain her relationships, keep her apartment clean, and in general to be a good person.
Humorous - Vi knows exactly when to chime in for a witty joke, and she enjoys a good bit of comedy more than anyone. Of course, there is a time and place for everything and she definitely knows when to tamper it down a bit. Still, a good laugh is sometimes the best medicine a person needs.
Sociable - If Vi wasn't in love with making new connections, she would find it very hard to get along with her youtube channel and work at school. She often involved in a lot of group projects and it helps to not shy away when it comes to the people she is working with. While it is true that she spends a lot of her free time on her computer, she tries to make time to hang out with friends and keep in good terms with the people around her.

Flaws:
Arrogant - Sadly, years of being told 'You're the best' as a child has really pumped her ego up a bit. While she doesn't believe everything she makes is an absolute masterpiece, she does believe that through hard work she makes some pretty amazing stuff. She can be a bit cocky when it comes to her own work. In general she can come off as a bit strong from time to time. It's really hard to knock her down a peg.
Absent Minded - Vi has a bit of a tendency to get lost in her own thoughts from time to time. She tends to daydream in class, whether she's lost in her own thoughts about current projects or thinking about that funny ht the person is wearing in front of her is. While she makes up for this in her own study habits, it can come off badly while working in groups.
Critical - Vi believes she has an eye for talent, after all she is talented herself. Because of this, she can be hard to work with at times. If she doesn't feel you're pulling your weight or that your work is good enough, she will not hesitate to tell you exactly how she feels about it.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: A light pink, round in shape

Hair: A mahogany red in color, length past her shoulders. Usually in some sort of updo. Occasionally kept down.

Face: Round in shape, always seems to be smiling!

Clothes: Tends to wear more comfortable clothing. A fan of the usual t-shirt, jeans, and sneakers combo. Carries a little backpack over a purse. A fan of fun and cute accessories.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2018 7:55 am


Senshi: Sailor Perdix of Partridges

Challenge: "Careful not to fall!" "Beware of the fall!" "I'll push you over the edge!"

Fuku Colour: White
Main Color: Red
Secondary Color: Tan

Fuku:

Premade!

Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word.

Sailor Scout Attack: Perdix's Fall
Perdix calls out her attack and from her hand she summons a small ethereal Partridge that she sends at her opponent up to five feet away from her. If the Partridge makes contact with an enemy they suddenly have the feeling of being very high up, balancing precariously close to an edge. The sensation last for around 25 seconds. This ability can be used twice in battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Daedalus' Betrayal
Perdix calls out her attack and from her hand she summons a small ethereal Partridge that flies toward her opponent up to ten feet away. If the Partridge makes contact with an enemy they suddenly have the feeling of being very high up, balancing precariously close to an edge. They may feel as if someone if behind them, getting ready to push them over this edge. The attack can cause vertigo. The sensation last for around 35 seconds and can be used twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Partridge Nesting
Perdix calls out an attack and in a ten foot radius a highly shrubbed area aparea. Perdix and her allies are free to move around the area once it has be established. However, if an enemy enters the zone and gets too close to Perdix or an ally, they feel as though (no actual damage is done, it's more like a phantom pain) they're under attack from a Partridge that is defending their nest! Sharpe little beaks and talons poke and claw at their legs. Perdix's zone last for 40 seconds and can only be used once per battle!

* It is easy to see over the shrubbery, although Perdix or her allies could duck down for more cover. The main effect is a sort of defense mechanism against enemies that get too close! The Partridge will defend their 'nests' aka, Perdix and her allies!

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2018 11:59 pm


Leopleuradon


Congrats Leo on Perdix! However there's a few minor things I'd like to touch on before I approve her.

The first is Vivian's last name, Moore, we have four other characters with the last name Moore belonging to Tonberry Queen X, Orangeish Sherbert, kuropeco, and Beejoux. Could you please ask them if it's okay if you use Moore? Or perhaps change the last name to an alternate spelling of Moore I found a few different spellings Here; or you could find another last name that you like, whichever you prefer to do.

Now then for her attacks the first two seem a little under powered with the time limits that you have. I think you could safely bump up the sailor to 25 and the super to 35. I also think you could let her Eternal attack last for 40 seconds.

When you're ready or if you have any questions please quote me I'll come back asap.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:41 pm


LP


I have made all the necessary changes! <3

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 7:10 pm


Leopleuradon


Thank you a gm'll be around shortly!

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2018 1:02 pm


Leopleuradon


Hey, Leo!

This is a cute profile and I want to have her stamped so you can play her as soon as possible, but before I can do that there is one flaw that is going to need some revision! ‘Clumsy’ is a physical trait and not a personality trait ;;

A personality trait should be something that affects how the character thinks or acts rather than a physical limitation. The trait could be reworded to focus on an aspect of her personality (like absentminded, or something!) which could manifest in physical ways (like being clumsy). If this can be tweaked to expand on a personality trait, her civilian side will be good to go!

I have a really minor addition to her eternal magic, too! Since Senshi magic is not supposed to cause lethal (or lasting damage without permission), I would suggest adding that the attacks/injuries from the partridge is actually ‘the sensation of being attacked’, however players can choose to take as much lasting damage (if any) after the magic ends. This should give people more freedom to take damage and lasting injuries if they like!

If you have any questions or make any changes, please give me a quote and I’ll be back as soon as possible! I look forward to stamping her so we can get her in play!


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Leopleuradon

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2018 7:15 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari


Hi there! I switched out the clumsy flaw and I made it more clear that the eternal attack doesn't actually do damage. Actually, that's how it was always intended. I said ''it feels as though they're being attacked", not that they were actually causing any damage. But I made it more clear in the description of the ability! <3
PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2018 5:56 pm


Leopleuradon


Perfect, thank you so much! Have fun!

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