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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2018 5:49 pm
Name: Seren Yong Nickname: Star (But not used at present) Age: 22 Birthday: 4/1/1996 Sign: Aries Gemstone: Diamond Blood Type: AB- Fav. Food: Pajeon Hated Food: Brussels Sprouts School: Destiny City University Hobbies: Reading: Seren loves to read. She'll read anything on Astronomy, and also loves Fantasy novels. She has several favorite authors, and can wax lyrical about how much she loves their books, and why they are so wonderful. She hopes to eventually have her own personal small library, in her future home. Stargazing: Seren loves to go out and stargaze. She's indulged herself in it since she was a young girl, and for her, it's an escape from life when the things she does not want to think about get to be too much for her. Baking: Seren is good at cooking, and is proud of her skill at it, but her favorite kind of cooking is baking. She loves making cookies and cakes, and seeing people smile when they eat the results of her efforts. She wants to share the sweets with many people, to try to make them happier in life. Virtues:Caring:Seren has a big heart and cares, deeply, for those she considers family or friends. This can lead to her to over committing when trying to help them, or even putting herself into difficult situations to protect them. Betrayal by those she loves is incredibly hard on her, something she has had to deal with several times. Determined:She didn't make it to where she is now without a good amount of will power. Her determination has caused others to call her iron willed in the past, and that hasn't changed. She had no family support, growing up, as her parents primarily rejected her, and it was her determination to find a way to make a good life despite this that got her a scholarship at Destiny City University. Flaws:Insecure:She has no faith in her own worth. She is convinced that everyone around her is far more valuable then she is, and expects everyone to see that fact eventually. After all, she sees it. It leads her to be somewhat reckless in the face of danger, because if she can save those of greater value, at least she's done something right. She can't see the good things inside of her, despite them being very much there. Hot Tempered:Seren is easy to piss off. She spent years holding her tongue at home, but now that she is no longer dependent on her parents' good will, she no longer feels the need to leash her temper. Except with her superiors, because she's not stupid. PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION Hair and eye colors cannot change from civilian to powered form, nor can tattoos or piercings. If your character has a tattoo as a civilian it will appear on the powered art, though will have a glamour to prevent people who have seen both from identifying civilian identities. Hairstyles can change between civilian and powered form; only Corrupted Senshi have vastly different hair between civilian and powered forms (their hair grows extensively in length!) Unnatural hair and eye color are perfectly fine, and there is no need to say they use dye or contacts - your character is free to have been born with blue hair if you want. Genetic heterochromia is not allowed, sorry!Eyes: Blue - Almond? See Ref, please Hair: Floor length-Long and straight, pulled into a ponytail that's tied midway, with several Star shaped hair pins. Color is Celestial (See ref!) Face: Heart shaped, I suppose? Buttonish nose, lips always have a pale purple lipstick on them. Normal sized, rounded ears. Clothes: Deep blue turtleneck with a starscape printed on it, a layered skirt in the same deep blue, with white frilly trim. Thigh high stockings, again in blue, with star patterns, and blue ribbons at the upper hem, with a silver star button. Calf length boots, again in deep blue. She has star earrings on, in silver on one ear and gold on the other. She wears a pair of blue cat's eye glasses. - Basically, base her off of this?
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2018 8:13 pm
Knight Title: Cheomseongdae, Page of Cosmos Challenge: "For the sky above, fight!" Uniform:Top -- Pale blue tunic, deep blue accents, with a high neck and full length sleeves that end in a arrow shape that has a loop for her middle finger. Mid thigh length, with stars picked out on it in silver and pale gold. Accents sort of placed like so (PLEASE IGNORE THE LEVEL OF CRAPPINESS)Bottoms -- Leggings, in a celestial print, starting at a deep blue at the top, going to a light early morning-sky pink at the calves. Gloves -- No Belt -- Silver belt, fastened at the waist with a star shape. Shoes -- Mid-calf high silver-colored bootsShoulders -- N/A Accessories -- Some star themed pendants, CC! <3 Weapon & MagicPage Weapon: A simple, silver colored star-wand of cheap metal. Magic: N/A, Page Squire: Longer wand, almost the length of her forearm, of silver metal, with a more ornate star point. Magic: She uses the wand to focus, and a stream of starry-like sparkles shoot out from her wand, giving a light amount of healing to the target. If she channels the magic for 15 seconds, her target can heal light cuts and bruises. 30 seconds can heal more serious cuts and bruises. Knight Weapon: The wand has gained ornate carvings to the handle, and there is a deep blue gem at the center of the star. It is as long as her arm, now. Magic: She uses the wand to focus, and a stream of starry-like sparkles shoot out from her wand, giving a light amount of healing to any ally within ten feet of her. If she channels the magic for 15 seconds, her target can heal light cuts and bruises. 30 seconds can increase healing for moderate cuts and bruises by up to 50% but will not heal them all the way. While it cannot fully heal life threatening injuries, 45 seconds of channeling can heal these injuries just enough to give the character a little longer to live and seek treatment. She can channel her magic for a total of forty five seconds. Summons -- Hapi, a haetae, who is black with white tiger stripes, and has silver scales. (Scales are purely decorative.) Ability - Roaring Charge. Hapi has a strong charge, allowing him slam into others. It can do some damage, but it's primary use is to attempt to separate a knot of enemies, allowing for escape at need.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2018 2:12 am
Hey, Aria! I know you posted for just a civilian stamp but I can go over the powered side too! As it is, her civilian side seems really cute and looks like she'll be fun to play so she is good to go (but I had one small note just in case it mattered to you! Her profile was set up in January with a birthday in April, so since that date has passed she could either be 23, or you could have her born a year later than what is written in her profile so she is still 22 when she comes into play—it is completely up to you because her age doesn’t matter for the faction she is powering up into but I just wanted to let you know!) For her powered side, there are a few things I want to go over! This is a wall of text, but please don’t be intimidated! I just wanted to include a lot of information/things to consider during the stamping process so you didn’t have to go dig for it in information threads! I also tried to include some suggestions to give a better idea of what I was talking about! For her uniform, because she is a Cosmos Knight, she is allowed to have rainbow pastels or a starry sky styled uniform, but make sure the outfit is not saturated with dark colors! Cosmos knights can have the starry night sky typically for accent colors more so than a dominant color but I just wanted to let you know just in case that might affect the design you had in mind! For her weapon, Knight weapons shouldn’t be sharp enough to cut or stab so while she can have a star at the top of her staff, it should be blunted so it cannot do cutting or slicing damage, sorry! It could do blunt damage, if she hit someone, but otherwise bladed/sharp objects are not permitted for the faction. For her magic, I will need just a little more information before I can stamp! Knights draw their magic from an energy pool that they can channel at will, so you will need to include how long her total channeling time could be. It is typically around 30 seconds for squire and 45 for knight, so if you like those limits you can just plug those in! It would help also to specify a few things—for example, can she heal only one target at a time at squire stage, and maybe heal all people within a ten foot radius of her at knight stage? Clarifying how much healing can be done is also helpful! For squire stage, you could say that 15 seconds of channeling on a person is enough to heal light bruising and scrapes and that 30 seconds of channeling could somewhat heal heavier scrapes and bruising (not enough to heal all the way, but enough to start the healing process/heal them up to 50%). At squire stage, it would be reasonable to say that this magic had no effect on severe or life threatening injuries! For her Knight stage, you could say that 15 seconds of channeling her magic could heal light bruising and scrapes for every ally within a ten foot radius, 30 seconds could heal some moderate injuries (like heavier bruising or cuts/deeper scrapes) or at least improve healing significantly [and be capped at healing these at 30 seconds, so using all 45 seconds would not improve healing of moderate injuries/that is simply the least amount of time you would need to ‘max heal’ injuries of that severity]. You could say that 45 seconds could slightly heal severe/life threatening injuries; the rule in the shop is that these injuries cannot be healed by a single attack but healing magic can be used to heal just enough to buy a character enough time to get to a hospital to get proper treatment! We suggest that major injuries broken bones never be healed with magic [because if the bone is fractured or dislocated, healing it without getting it set or performing surgery to correct the injury could result in long term damage]. For her summons, she will need to complete a ritual to earn this (typically done at the end of squire stage or, more commonly, once a character is a knight) so you do not need to include this just yet (you can instead save it for when you are ready for her to undergo the quest needed to earn the summons) but if you would like to continue working on it to get the summons approved now, we can! Before I could stamp this, I would need to know what its ability is! Summons are channeled using the Knight’s magic pool and typically have some ability or use approved along with the description. These creatures can do offensive damage but to stay in line with the Knight guidelines, they are usually not lethal. Sometimes they have magical abilities (if they do not use their body to physically attack), sometimes they have physical abilities (Such as size to headbutt or trample an opponent), or sometimes they do not have offensive abilities but are designed for a specific function (Such as carrying someone away from a battle rapidly). If you are using haetae, it has the potential to be any of those (But you should only choose one when writing the intended ability!) I would also suggest clarifying if the silver scales are decorative or defensive since that can impact what is approved and is something we would take into consideration when approving abilities! I apologize for the huge wall of text, but if you have any questions or make any changes you can quote me and I’ll be back as soon as possible! IF you’d like, we can also talk over PMs or you can discord me at Xigglet#7845!
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2018 8:21 pm
Took your advice from Discord, and updated her. Thank you again for helping me/explaining what I was confused about more thoroughly! I really appreciate it.
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2018 5:19 pm
Looks good to me, have fun!
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