Thank you for adding that information onto his basic and super.
However, his Eternal attack needs some tweaking still though. It doesn't have to be post, by post but if you want to keep that style it's fine. He really need a concrete end time though for this. 45 seconds should be as long as the slime and all lasts, unless the players opt for the effects to linger longer on their character.
Also, I've some concern that when re-reading the attack that the figure absorbing an attack or attacking an opponent needs to be one or the other option, not both. There maybe a way to write this so you can have both - but it maybe best to stick with the figure lingering around Lumen for a set duration or until its hit once, which ever comes first and have it explode. If you want a set duration, maybe use 40 seconds and the slime sticks around for the last 5 seconds? That way you still utilize the full 45 seconds, and the ectoplasm can linger longer on a players character if they want it. Also, make sure to leave an area of effect in this one as well, how far away does the slime blast make it?
I want to apologize for not catching this on my first round of crits.
Let me know if you have any questions or need any help with a quote!
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