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PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2017 8:55 pm


Name: Jennih
Age: 20
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weyr: High Reaches Weyr
Rider Rank: Wingrider
Previous Rank/Craft: Kitchen worker
Physical Description: At 4'11'' inches Jennih's not exactly the tallest. Her hair is straight black and usually pulled back into a ponytail. Her skin is a bit on the light tan side, and free of freckles. She has scars from fighting Thread littered where she's been in the wrong place at the wrong time.
Personality:
Positive Trait List
L e v e l H e a d e d :
She's not quick to anger. She takes everything with a grain of salt and with lots of patience. There's no reason for her to get angry at her situation. If her cousins come to her with whines about their day, she'll listen and offer advice. If her uncle is contacted by the teachers because of a fight, she shows up to sort things right. She's mainly dealing with little kids, so she had to teach herself to take it in stride.

M o t h e r l y :
Jennih has always been extremely motherly. Since she was little and her first sibling was born. She took care of him when both of her parents were gone fighting. She thinks of her siblings as her children, and will actually say she they are hers and no one else's. That's not to say she doesn't love her parents, she just wishes they were around more.

S h a r p :
Sharp tongue, eyes, and mind, Jennih doesn't miss much around her home. She can cut you down with her words. It's how she raised the kids, with sharp words instead of actions like spanking. Sharp minded enough to be able to help her kids with their work and always looks into the real answers to the questions they asked if she doesn't know it. She's always willing to learn.
Negative Trait List
S a r c a s t i c :
With her sharp tongue comes biting sarcasm that has hurt people. She takes it a step too far more often than not. She jabs and jabs and someone usually has to blow up at her before she realizes what she's done.

R e a l i s t :
There is no 'what if's with her. She looks at the big picture as well as the fine details. She always thinks of the worst case scenarios and thinks the worst of people so she won't be disappointed. No sense in building up expectations in anyone.

U n t r u s t i n g :
Jennih doesn't expect much of anyone and doesn't let people get to close. It's hard to prove yourself to her. She has a certain life style and it makes it really hard to open herself up to anyone outside of her neighbors and really close friends. Sure, she'll make friends, but she'll keep them at an arms length with vague answers.
History: In a cothold a few weeks ride from High Reaches Weyr, Jennih's mother killed herself when she found out her husband had been cheating on her. Shortly after her funeral, her father was found in a tavern, dead in a mug. She was ten years old when this happened. With no one to take care of her in her small cothold, she was sent to live with her mother's brother, her uncle, Shriva, who lived in High Reaches. Shriva has five kids that Jennih was now in charge of because he was a busy man who was always on the road. She asked why he was always gone once, and he said he was looking to make a name for himself since he wasn't a Rider.

Jennih takes care of her cousins. She cooks, cleans, helps them with Candidate problems because they were all candidates. None of them have impressed yet, but she doesn't let them get discouraged. Her cousins range from 19-14.

Jennih wasn't actually a candidate when Brilith called to her. No, she was in the stands, just watching her little cousins try to impress a hatchling. Her little blue had struggled to get out of his shell, but he managed it. It was a surprise for the whole family when the blue one who shimmered like water called out to her by name. She was fifteen when she became a Weyrling.

As a Weyrling she finally picked herself a craft. It came about in an odd way, but she was trying out different ones and realized that she just sort of fell in love with tannercrafting. Something about stretching, stitching, cutting, and just designing beautiful leather pieces soothed something in her she didn't know needed soothing. She has a keen eye for burning designs into the leather.

Right now she's sort of testing out what she can do, but is leaning more and more towards just General Apparel crafting. Something about making a really good bag is very satisfying to her.

Since the thread returning, Jennih and Brilith have both been a bit anxious. Thread terrifies her, and rightly so. She's seen some of the wounds it can inflict on human and dragons from her time in the cothold before going to High Reaches. Brilith is more anxious to get out into it. To do his part to fight it. He may also try to do more turns and twists than she wants, but so far has managed to not get himself injured.
Other: Anything else you want to add?

DRAGON
Name: Brilith
Age: 5 turns
Color: Blue
Size: 31'
Physical Description: Somewhat on the bulky, but still agile.
Personality: Brilith is a fun loving individual. It doesn't necessarily mean he's on the go all the time. He has fun with crooning out songs and playing word games. Anything to relax and enjoy yourself. He really likes to stop and smell flowers if he's walking with his rider instead of flying. Going into battle isn't anywhere near the top of his favorite thing to do list, nor is anything where Jennih can get hurt. He likes to try to rope her into just going on aimless flight. He thinks she's too serious most of the time. Slowly he's trying to get her to become a not calloused individual who'll give people an actual chance.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 29, 2017 9:24 am


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 07, 2017 2:35 pm


Hey Coffee--

So a few things.

1. Is there any way to tweak her name into a more Pernese sounding one? I see you have it as Jenni, but you also refer to her as Jennifer in your profile. Even adding a couple extra letters would work, like Jehnni or Genni or Jennih suddenly makes it much more Pern.

2. Pern doesn't really have bars? Drinking is definitely something that happens, but with how Holds, Halls, and Weyrs are setup, there are less shops and parlors and inns and more kitchens and lower caverns and communal areas to eat and drink. Gathers, which can be big and small, are local get togethers where people from all over tend to trade goods, dance, drink, and feast; so it's possible he went to one and drank his woes. Or he was just discovered in the kitchen, or some place like that.

3. Villages also aren't a thing on Pern. They live in places called Holds. Cotholds are usually small and are run anywhere from one to ten families, maybe. Minor Holds are a little larger and run anywhere from 10+ families to maybe 100 or so. Think of them as smaller towns. Major Holds tend to house hundreds and thousands of people depending how large they are. Major Holds tend to rule most of the land, including that of Minor Holds and Cotholds that are settled on their land. It's fine for her to be from some made-up minor hold or cothold, but knowing where on Pern it's located on (and it's land) is important.

4. Where was Cleet living? Is he at the Weyr? Is he at a Hold? If so where? Also, Candidacy starts at 14 Turns. If she Impressed when she was 15, then how were her younger cousins already Candidates? You're either going to have to make them older than she, or arond her same age if you want that to work. :3

5. What has she done since being a weyrling? That was five Turns ago. Is she still at the Weyr? Did she pick up a craft? Did she just go back to working in the kitchens? (Thread only came back last year so she had at least 3-4 years to have to come up with some way to make marks/money.) How has she felt since Thread has returned? That's a pretty big event in Pern, and if she's still at the Weyr she'd be actively fighting it now.


PostPosted: Sun Aug 27, 2017 9:55 pm


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Okay I think I answered everything?

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2017 4:11 pm


Approved! They'll fight in Harbinger's Wing!

Just one minor thing mostly as an FYI:

"she's seen some of the wounds it can inflict on human and dragons from her time in the cothold before going to High Reaches"

Thread only returned a turn and a half ago. :3 I'm not sure if she's been at the Weyr all 5 Turns, or if she went back to a cothold after she graduated Weyrling Training. If it's the former I'd just adjust that to saying "from her time fighting it a the Weyr". If it's the latter and she's only just returned to High Reaches Weyr to fight Thread, then you can keep it as is.

I wasn't sure if she stayed at the Weyr the whole time or just recently returned.
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