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An evil known as The Corruption infects the land. Will the shinobi world overcome the corruption, or be consumed? 

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LordJaxTheSadistic

PostPosted: Wed Jun 21, 2017 2:28 pm


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═══════════ | Basic Information | ═══════════

Owner
LordJaxTheSadistic

Name
Makoto Fumihiko

Meaning of Name
If your name has some sort of meaning, explain.

Nicknames
Mako

Famous Shinobi Name:
Fox Sage Fumihiko

Theme:
[Fleeting Dream

Height
5'4 or 162.cm

Weight
Thin

Markings
None

Common Clothing
Makeup
Heeled Boots
Tshirt
Jeans


Job
Baker

Status
Alive





════════════ | Shinobi Data | ════════════

Clan Name
Fumihiko

Kekkei Genkai, Stage Obtained
N/A.

Known Chakra Elements
-Fire
-Water
-Earth


[bDistrict/Village:
Land of Fire

Rank, Title
A-Jonin Commander

Special Skills
Chakra Control
High Chakra Levels


Known Affiliations
Land of Fire

Dominant Jutsu Types
Summoning

Favored Jutsu
You cannot start with these, but when you gain them, list them here. see here for more info.

Intelligence
Has been known for his high intelligence since his ninja academy days

Fighting Tendencies
Kick Boxing for close quarters
Defensive/Acrobatic


Dreams
Creating a name for his family and becoming a Lord with land



══════════ | Personal Information | ══════════

Personality
Known for his quiet and gentle persona. Friendly and loving. Well mannered and often perceived as stuck up. Not easy to anger. But once anger; Makoto turns to a sadistic and merciless being. Makoto often uses his quiet and gentle personality to mislead enemies or people he is cautious about.

Likes
Tea
Coffee
Sweets
Speaking with the Fox King(summon)
Children


Dislikes
Rogue Ninjas
Liars
Being deceived
Dry pastries
When children are in danger


Archetype:
Neutral

Miscellaneous Skills
Can read lips
Skilled Diplomat
Makes excellent tea
Great at baking


Sexuality
Homosexual

Physical Conditions
Completely deaf in his left ear

Mental Conditions
N/A





══════════ | Techniques & Jutsu | ══════════

Total Jutsu Points:


Jutsu Points From Missions:
0


Ninjutsu

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu "Shadow Clone Technique- B rank

Kirigakure no Jutsu "Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Jutsu"- D rank

Kawarimi no Jutsu "Body Replacement Technique"- E rank

Shunshin no Jutsu "Body Flicker Technique" D-Rank



Elemental Ninjutsu
Katon: Gōka Mekkyak "Fire Style: Majestic Destroyer Flame"- B rank

Doton: Domu "Earth Release: Earth Spear"- B rank

Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu "Water Style: Water Dragon"- B rank

Katon:Endan "Fire Release: Flame Bullet"- C rank

Doton: Doryūheki "Earth Release: Earth Style Wall"- Brank

Suiton: Suiryūben "Water Style: Water Dragon Whip"- A rank

Suiton: Suijinheki "Water Release: Water Formation Wall" B-Rank

Doton: Doryūdan "Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet" B-Rank

Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu "Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique" C-ranked





Taijutsu


Genjutsu


Fuuinjutsu


Weapon Techniques



Juinjutsu

Seal of Logic
Rank: B
This is the cursed seal that goes on the eye. This cursed seal sends visual information directly to the user's mind, which bypasses the neural cord allowing him to process visual information faster, and increasing the user's reaction time. It also breaks down reality with stats and numbers, allowing the user to assess the different threats. E.g. the user can see the "ranks" of moves and characters. It can also give the user a chakra boost as most curse seals do, but does not go as far as the second stage that transforms the body


Summonings
Kuchiyose: Sanju Rashōmon "Triple Rashomon"- A rank

Summoning Scroll Name: Pups(names vary)
Summoning type:Fox/Kitsune
Summoning Rank:C
Picture/s: http://data.whicdn.com/images/32791361/superthumb.jpg
Special abilities: Once summoned; either a set of twin pups, triplet pups or quadruplet pups will appear. The more chakra poured into the summon ups the chance of getting the quadruplets. These pups have no offensive jutsu capabilities. They're great for teams on stealth missions to keep in contact without earpieces due to their telepathic connection. These pups have the ability to help cloak their summoner or carrier with a camouflage.
Personality: Most of the pups are very hyper and require a good scolding to gain their forever obedience. Some pups however are more docile. All pups have a tendency to "borrow" whatever shiny item they find. So keep your spare change close.

Summoning Scroll Name: Foothounds(Names of individual kitsune varies)
Summoning type:Fox/Kitsune
Summoning Rank:B
Picture/s: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/CXiJALtUQAAFr6m.jpg
Special abilities: Each individual kitsune has their own skillset. Either a medical specialist, taijutsu specialist; etc etc. Their effectiveness depends on the chakra levels of the summoner; as well as the relationship between the summoner and summon. With the right amount of chakra control and put into the summoning; several foothounds can be summoned at once.
Personalities: varies upon each kitsune; but once won over their loyalty is true. Known to be cunning, deceptive and seductive.

Summoning Scroll Name: Great Guardian
Summoning type:Fox/Kitsune
Summoning Rank:A
Picture/s: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/62/cf/7c/62cf7c5eaba1b861215d47bdf79c26ac.jpg
Special abilities: Perfect for larger scale battles; such as fighting other massive summon beast. Or for defending a village/town/city. The great guardian's size depends on the chakra levels of the summoner. His size ranges from 8ft(243cm) to 40ft(1219cm). The great guardian is skilled in fox elemental ninjutsus.

Personality/Bio: The guardian beast of the spirit fox watefalls. Extremely loyal to the fox king. Easily angered. Hates being summoned away from his land and people. When summoned if he senses your chakra levels are to weak or the summoner is lacking in will and ambition he will attempt to devour you. The great guardian will obey(barely) if you put him in his place, if you have the fox king's favor(a necklace) or promise him mass amounts of food when done summoning him.


Kekkei Genkai


Corruption Effects

Corruption Points: 0/8

You may not start with Corruption effects. These are usually gained in rp in events in which you are attacked by certain corruption creature attacks. They are usually bad.





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Relatives
Father-Deceased
Mother-Deceased
Grandather-Alive
Grandmother-Alive


Other Relationships
TBA

History
Makoto was born in the Fumihiko clan. His clan has no real fame or renown. Growing up; Makoto was known for being a very intelligent young boy even during his time in the ninja academy. Graduating when he was only 8 years old. Sadly, not soon after his graduating; the 5th shinobi war had started. At his young age he along with his team were assigned to protecting the village and to help the evacuation of the civilians. After the long and gruesome war had ended; Makoto learned from his grandparents that his parents did not survive. As the years gone by; Makoto and his team grew as ninjas. By the time Makoto turned 10 years old he ranked a chunin and by the time he was 12 he was ranked as Jonin. When Makoto turned 16 years old;
he and his time were sent on a corruption monster extermination mission. Sadly his team was overwhelmed. Barely escaping alive; Makoto found himself by a gorgeous waterfall. Resting by the water to patch himself up; he unknowingly discovered a clan of spirit foxes. The spirit fox king praised him for he watched how valiantly Makoto and his team fought for their lives. The spirit Fox king allowed Makoto to rest by the spirit waterfall and the fox clan healed his wounds. Before sending the recovered Makoto back to his village;
The spirit Fox King presented his clan's summoning scroll. Makoto accepted the offer; surprised to see as he opened the scroll he would be the first ever shinobi to sign the blood contract. As he is the first; he is the guardian of the scroll. Promising the Fox King to only allow the most cunning, ambitious and alluring to sign a pact in the scroll. Once back returning to Unity village; Makoto met with his hokage. Reporting all that has happened. Over the years Makoto trained hard; gaining a name for himself as a shinobi. Now at 22 years old; Makoto is known as the Fox Sage Fumihiko. Not only earning a title but ranking as a Jonin as well.


History (Continued)
This should be everything that happens during RP. Things you have actually done with your character. Feel free to mention anything you want, but I wouldn't give details about every single time you trained for a technique. Just include the major stuff.


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Basics
Kunai(s), shuriken(s), Dual battle fans

Special Objects
``Name: Erendel's Bow
Rank: B
Description: A unique Bow that lacks an actual String to it, instead, user infuses their chakra to generate not only the string but also the arrow itself. The projectile as fired through a small hole that is fashioned with an interchangeable colored mirror, the coloring of the mirror can be altered at will and comes in four diffferent colors.

Red: Fires Burning Arrows capable of igniting areas in flames.

Blue: Fires Frost Arrows capable of encasing objects/targets in a ice.

Green: Fires Wind Arrows capable of detonating in a gust of intense wind.

Purple: Fires Shock Arrows capable of detonating in a bolt of lightning.

Each of these Elemental Arrows pales in comparison to a user of the respective element, as such, it is crucial to refrain from using elements that can be countered by the opposing target. If a user holds the appropriate element of the arrow they choose to fire, the overall strength can be increased from B to A. User can only interchange the elements [1]x ever [3] post.


Gear
His battle robes are lined with sheets of metal on the inside; to help guard and swat away kunai/shuriken/needles. Robe is filled with pockets for holding extra kunair and shuriken.

Miscellaneous
A metal fox tail necklace from the Fox King
Keeps the Spirit Fox clan contract scroll safe



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PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2017 6:54 am


LordJaxTheSadistic
please list the ranks of all your jutsu.

Water walking is considered s generic ninja skill and costs no pounts.

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LordJaxTheSadistic

PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2017 9:54 am


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LordJaxTheSadistic
please list the ranks of all your jutsu.

Water walking is considered s generic ninja skill and costs no pounts.


Done~
PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2017 11:43 am


LordJaxTheSadistic
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LordJaxTheSadistic
please list the ranks of all your jutsu.

Water walking is considered s generic ninja skill and costs no pounts.


Done~
summoning only takes the highest rank of summon for juts point cost. You could have 17 more points worth of j utsu in addition to 1 more point of academy jutsu... or I can approve it as is

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LordJaxTheSadistic

PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2017 1:23 pm


--R31gn-of-Ph3r--
LordJaxTheSadistic
--R31gn-of-Ph3r--
LordJaxTheSadistic
please list the ranks of all your jutsu.

Water walking is considered s generic ninja skill and costs no pounts.


Done~
summoning only takes the highest rank of summon for juts point cost. You could have 17 more points worth of j utsu in addition to 1 more point of academy jutsu... or I can approve it as is



Hmmmmm...what do you think I should do? Haha
PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2017 3:09 pm


LordJaxTheSadistic
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LordJaxTheSadistic
--R31gn-of-Ph3r--
LordJaxTheSadistic
please list the ranks of all your jutsu.

Water walking is considered s generic ninja skill and costs no pounts.


Done~
summoning only takes the highest rank of summon for juts point cost. You could have 17 more points worth of j utsu in addition to 1 more point of academy jutsu... or I can approve it as is



Hmmmmm...what do you think I should do? Haha
I'd add more jutsu.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2017 9:42 pm


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 26, 2017 8:47 pm


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LordJaxTheSadistic

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2017 12:37 pm


Known Foothound Summons


Name: Mema
Summoning Rank: A
Personality: Motherly, Calm, Collected
Bio: Mema is one of the most skilled sensory shinobi's from her spirit fox clan. She's also known to be the caretaker of the clan's prince Hiiragi and is married to the princes personal guard, Ganju. Typically seen with Ganju or the prince.
Jutsu:
Fox Art: Tobacco Cloud: a massive cloud of tobacco is spewed from Mema's mouth and lungs. The cloud is used to help mask and conceal allies and their chakra. Any sensory or shinobi lower then B rank cannot detect them. B rank sensory ninja or shinobi can detect but will have difficulty. A and higher rank sensory ninja or shinobi can detect them much easier. Great for assassination and team attacks. The tobacco cloud only reaches 10 yards and is 6ft tall.
Rank:A

Fox Art: Traveling cloud: Mema's body turns into a massive mobile cloud. Used to lift and carry around allies. The clouds density is very low. If the cloud takes damage; Mema will feel the pain and will be apparent when returning to her normal form. Great for supplying aerial attacks or traveling quickly. Traveling cloud can be disbursed from explosions. Which will greatly injure Mema.
Rank:B

Fox Art: Decaying Ash: Mema exhales a thick stream of ash from her mouth. The ash is highly combustable and has an average acidic level. If connected with fire it will explode. The stream of ash is strong enough to eat away most materials like stone and wood, poorly conditioned metals(rusted metals) and is also harmful to the skin. Has no effect on chakra enhanced metals or chakra barriers. The stream reaches 30 yards and is only 6ft tall.
Rank: A

Extra: Is known to be Makoto's personal summon and leader of Makoto's elite platoon. Mema's is an elite sensory ninja. Capable of sensing life and transmitting telepathic messages from miles away. Mema's maximum mile radius for telepathic communication is 10miles. Mema's maximum life force(chakra) sensory is also 10miles. Sensory skills are ranked at A. Is always smoking from a pipe(like gamabunta)

Name: Ganju
Summoning rank: A
Personality: Lazy, Laid back, absent minded
Bio: Ganju is another highly skilled and respected shinobi from his clan. Ganju is the husband of Mema and the personal guard of the clans prince; Hiiragi. Ganju is Makoto's platoons kenjutsu specialist. Is also apart of Makoto's elite platoon.

Jutsu List:
Fox Art: Raging Dragon: With sword in hand; Ganju knocks target into the sky; only to perform six aerial strikes in quick draw succesion.
Rank:B

Fox Art: Dragon's Maul: With sword in hand; Ganju laces his sword with chakra. Slashing the air sending sharp flying chakra waves towards a target(s). Capable of cutting through most materials. Takes more chakra and strength to slice through metals.
Rank:B

Fox Art: Twilight Draw: Only capable of using during the night. With sword in hand; Ganju must gather and harnesses the power of the moonlight for 7 minutes(5 posts). Once harnessed Ganju slashes through an enemy with great speed. Sensory skills beneath B can not detect his speed or presence once activated.
Rank: A
Extra: loves to nap and complain. Is always being scolded by Mema. Is known to be Makoto's personal summon. Wherever Mema or Hiiragi goes he goes. Samurai

Name: Xiba
Summoning rank: B
Personality: short tempered, rude, over protective
Bio: Xiba is his clans most skilled taijutsu specialist. Only second best to the clans king. Xiba is Hiiragi's sworn brother. Is older by 5 years of the prince. Xiba often competes with Hiiragi for Makoto's attention and love. Is apart of Makoto's elite platoon.

Jutsu List:
Fox Art: Taijutsu: Raging Hell; Xiba uses his chakra to harness the power of fire. Typically fire from a casted jutsu or any random fire. To dress his limbs to add fire damage to his punches and kicks.
Rank: B

Fox Art: Taijutsu: Rising Earth; Xiba slams his first into the ground. Bursting his chakra to shatter and shake the earth. Causing pillars of earth to rise. If connected from Raging Hell skill; pillars of fire rise from the cracking ground instead.
Rank: A

Chakra Enhanced Strength

Extra: Calls Makoto; "Master Fumihiko" or just "Mako". Has a deep love and respect for Makoto. Often declares his love for Makoto. Offers to help carrying on the Fumihiko clan name. Is always rejected though.

Name: Kane
Summoning rank: B
Personality: Attention seeking, bratty
Bio: Kane is Makoto's elite platoon's medical specialist. One of the strongest medical shinobi from his clan. Is often picked on by the entire platoon. Often argues with Xiba.

Jutsu List:

Mystic palm technique
Rank: A

Chakra transfer
Rank: B

Chakra scalpel
Rank: C

Fox Art: Fox Sedation: Xiba spews a cloud of medical grade narcotics to help hinder an enemy's speed and nervous system. It only lasts for five minutes(3 posts). As long as the enemy remains inside the cloud of narcotics the effects are instantaneous. If they leave the cloud; the effects slowly start to ware off. The cloud of narcotics reaches up to 15yards and is 10ft tall.(think football field).
Rank: B

Extra: Is the second youngest member of Makoto's elite platoon. Younger the Hiiragi. Is always picked on for his bratty behavior. Constantly bickers with Xiba.

Name:Hiiragi
Summoning rank: B
Personality: flirty, kind, gentle
Bio: Prince of the spirit fox clan; only child of the fox king.. Was amazed by Makoto the day his clan found him and treated the gravely wounded shinobi. Is actually in love with Makoto and fights for his love alongside Xiba. But is always rejected.

Jutsu List:

Fox Art: Mystic Wisp: Hurls an array of shurikan towards an enemy. Covering the ninja tools in a greenish fire. Once activating the second hand seal the fires split into more deadly wisps of fire.
Rank: B

Fox Art: Divine Flow: Hiiragi expends mass amounts of chakra to create a rushing wave of water to sweep an enemy(s) away. Often used in conjunction with other Jutsu.
Rank: B

Fox Art: Royal terrain: Hiiragi causes the earth to shake and crumble beneath the target threat(s) great for unbalancing. Often used in conjunction with other jutsu.
Rank: B

Fox Art: mystic song: Hiiragi lets out a melodic howl. Causing the wind to thrash around the area violently. The longer Hiiragi holds this jutsu the more vicious the winds become. Typically used to push enemies away or to hold them in one place from the pressure of the wind. Mystic song has a reach of 20yards. Hiiragii is able to hold this jutsu for up to 5minutes(3posts).
Rank: A

Extra: often competes with xiba to win Makoto's love. Begs Makoto for more baked treats. Loves cupcakes and cookies. Never takes Makoto's rejection seriously. Hiiragi has 4 tails while the fox king has 8 tails. A sign of his royal blood being he has more than one tail.




Name: Alkaid
Summoning Rank: S
Personality: Quiet, Sage like, Loyal
Bio: Alkaid is often known to be the spirit fox clans second guardian deity. Only the royal family and their retainers know and work along side of her. Alkaid is believed to be as old as the clan itself. Alkaid is the one who lead the injured Makoto to the sacred land of the spirit fox clan. If it was not for her; the Great Guardian would’ve devoured Makoto. Alkaid never made herself apparent to Makoto but she’s even the one who convinced the king to allow Makoto to heal within their land and even ally themselves with him. Alkaid is the clans only elder, even though most believe she is a goddess. A master in stealth, genjutsu, various forms of weaponry and Taijutsu. The Fox King asks her approval to be able to teach anyone the clans sage arts.

Extra: Alkaid has a total of 10 tails. No one knows her story. Only thing that is known is that she is extremely old and powerful. The king and his retainers often question why she does not rule as the monarch of the clan. She only wishes to be known as Mother Alkaid to the king and his retainers. Is actually the owner of the Great Guardian; who forcefully lends the guardians loyalty to the king.

Jutsu List:


Name: King Sakaki
Summoning Rank: S
Personality: Perverted, Controlling, Condisending

Bio: Sakaki; the




TO BE FINISHED




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PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 2:36 pm


LordJaxTheSadistic

Known Foothound Summons


Name: Mema
Summoning Rank: B
Personality: Motherly, Calm, Collected
Bio: Mema is one of the most skilled sensory shinobi's from her spirit fox clan. She's also known to be the caretaker of the clan's prince Hiiragi and is married to the princes personal guard, Ganju. Typically seen with Ganju or the prince.
Jutsu:
Fox Art: Tobacco Cloud: a massive cloud of tobacco is spewed from Mema's mouth and lungs. The cloud completely cloaks anyone. Hiding their presence. It takes kage level sensory to detect.

Fox Art: Traveling cloud: Mema's body turns into a massive protective cloud. Used to fly around and carry teammates.

Fox Art: Decaying Ash: Mema exhales a thick steam of ash from her mouth. The ash is highly flammable and also acidic. The ash can melt most materials. Takes longer for it to melt through metals.

Extra: Is known to be Makoto's personal summon and leader of Makoto's elite platoon. Mema's is an elite sensory ninja. Capable of sensing life and transmitting telepathic messages from miles away. Kage level sensory sometimes deemed stronger

Quote:
Fox Art: Tobacco Cloud will need some adjustments. Stating that it would take Kage level sensory would imply that it takes an S-rank ninja to be able to sense them. If that were the case then that alone warrants at least moving the summoning rank up.

For the traveling cloud I would like to know how protective and what the density of it is. It would appear dense enough to lift up allied ninjas, but is it dense enough to prevent an exploding tag from blowing it apart? Assuming the cloud can be damaged would Mema be affected by it when she revert back to her normal form?

I will admit a bit of confusion on the Decaying Ash, by flammable I assume you mean its hot enough to burn and not flammable as in combustible (by this I mean if someone were to hit with a Fire style attack would it explode into flames?) It would also appear to be similar to Mei's boil release and if that's the case to what extent? Is it capable of eating through chakra enhanced metal or chakra barriers?


Name: Ganju
Summoning rank: B
Personality: Lazy, Laid back, absent minded
Bio: Ganju is another highly skilled and respected shinobi from his clan. Ganju is the husband of Mema and the personal guard of the clans prince; Hiiragi. Ganju is Makoto's platoons kenjutsu specialist. Is also apart of Makoto's elite platoon.

Jutsu List:
Fox Art: Raging Dragon: With sword in hand; Ganju knocks target into the sky; only to perform six aerial strikes in quick draw succcesion.

Fox Art: Dragon's Maul: With sword in hand; Ganju laces his sword with chakra. Slashing the Air sending sharp flying chakra waves towards a target(s). Capable of cutting through most materials. Takes me chakra and strength to slice through metals.

Fox Art: Twilight Draw: Only capable of using during the night. With sword in hand; Ganju harnesses the power of the moonlight and slahes through an enemy with great speed. Typically unseeable. Takes kage level sensory or skill to see his speed.

Extra: loves to nap and complain. Is always being scolded by Mema. Is known to be Makoto's personal summon. Wherever Mema or Hiiragi goes he goes

Quote:
Twilight Draw seems as if it would be considered an S-rank attack seeing as how it would take someone of Kage level sensory to detect such an attack, but its justifiable given that it requires it being done at night. However, that still garners a rank up for the summon, or a drawback on the summoned creature.


Name: Xiba
Summoning rank: B
Personality: short tempered, rude, over protective
Bio: Xiba is his clans most skilled taijutsu specialist. Only second best to the clans king. Xiba is Hiiragi's sworn brother. Is older by 5 years of the prince. Xiba often competes with Hiiragi for Makoto's attention and love. Is apart of Makoto's elite platoon.

Jutsu List:
Fox Art: Taijutsu: Raging Hell; Xiba uses his chakra to harness the power of fire. Typically Fire from a casted jutsu or any random fire. To dress his limbs to add fire damage to his punches and kicks.

Fox Art: Taijutsu: Rising Earth; Xiba slams his first into the ground. Bursting his chakra to shatter and shake the earth. Causing pillars of earth to rise. If connected from Raging Hell skill; pillars of fire rise from the cracking ground instead.

Chakra Enhanced Strength

Extra: Calls Makoto; "Master Fumihiko" or just "Mako". Has a deep love and respect for Makoto. Often declares his love for Makoto. Offers to help carrying on the Fumihiko clan name. Is always rejected though.

Quote:
Fox Art: Taijutsu: Raging Hell states that he harnesses fire, typically from a jutsu cast. Can he steal fire away from another person's jutsu or take control over fire someone else has created?


Name: Kane
Summoning rank: B
Personality: Attention seeking, bratty
Bio: Kane is Makoto's elite platoon's medical specialist. One of the strongest medical shinobi from his clan. Is often picked on by the entire platoon. Often argues with Xiba.

Jutsu List:

Mystic palm technique

Chakra transfer

Chakra scalpel

Fox Art: Fox Sedation: Xiba spews a cloud of medical grade narcotics to help hinder an enemy's speed nervous system. It only lasts for five minutes(3 posts)

Extra: Is the second youngest member of Makoto's elite platoon. Younger the Hiiragi. Is always picked on for his bratty behavior. Constantly bickers with Xiba.

Quote:
Is the Fox Sedation instantaneous or must the enemy remain in it for a certain amount of time? Also how large of an area does it cover?


Name:Hiiragi
Summoning rank: B
Personality: flirty, kind, gentle
Bio: Prince of the spirit fox clan; only child of the fox king.. Was amazed by Makoto the day his clan found him and treated the gravely wounded shinobi. Is actually in love with Makoto and fights for his love alongside Xiba. But is always rejected.

Jutsu List:

Fox Art: Mystic Wisp: Hurls an array of shurikan towards an enemy. Covering the ninja tools in a greenish fire. Once activating the second hand seal the fires split into more deadly wisps of fire

Fox Art: Divine Flow: Hiiragi expends mass amounts of chakra to create a rushing wave of water to sweep an enemy(s) away. Often used in conjunction with other jutsu.

Fox Art: Royal terrain: Hiiragi causes the earth to shake and crumble beneath the target threat(s) great for unbalancing. Often used in conjunction with other jutsu.

Fox Art: mystic song: Hiiragi lets out a melodic howl. Causing the wind to thrash around the area violently. The longer Hiiragi holds this jutsu the more vicious the winds become. Typically used to push enemies away or to hold them in one place from the pressure of the wind.

Extra: often competes with xiba to win Makoto's love. Begs Makoto for more baked treats. Loves cupcakes and cookies. Never takes Makoto's rejection seriously. Hiiragi has 4 tails while the fox king has 8 tails. A sign of his royal blood being he has more than one tail.

Quote:
How large of an area does the Mystic song cover and how long can Hiiragi hold it for?



TO BE FINISHED

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At the moment these are my only grievances. Correlate with me and we should be able to get these summons approved in no time.

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LordJaxTheSadistic

PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 8:52 pm


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Known Foothound Summons


Name: Mema
Summoning Rank: B
Personality: Motherly, Calm, Collected
Bio: Mema is one of the most skilled sensory shinobi's from her spirit fox clan. She's also known to be the caretaker of the clan's prince Hiiragi and is married to the princes personal guard, Ganju. Typically seen with Ganju or the prince.
Jutsu:
Fox Art: Tobacco Cloud: a massive cloud of tobacco is spewed from Mema's mouth and lungs. The cloud completely cloaks anyone. Hiding their presence. It takes kage level sensory to detect.

Fox Art: Traveling cloud: Mema's body turns into a massive protective cloud. Used to fly around and carry teammates.

Fox Art: Decaying Ash: Mema exhales a thick steam of ash from her mouth. The ash is highly flammable and also acidic. The ash can melt most materials. Takes longer for it to melt through metals.

Extra: Is known to be Makoto's personal summon and leader of Makoto's elite platoon. Mema's is an elite sensory ninja. Capable of sensing life and transmitting telepathic messages from miles away. Kage level sensory sometimes deemed stronger

Quote:
Fox Art: Tobacco Cloud will need some adjustments. Stating that it would take Kage level sensory would imply that it takes an S-rank ninja to be able to sense them. If that were the case then that alone warrants at least moving the summoning rank up.

For the traveling cloud I would like to know how protective and what the density of it is. It would appear dense enough to lift up allied ninjas, but is it dense enough to prevent an exploding tag from blowing it apart? Assuming the cloud can be damaged would Mema be affected by it when she revert back to her normal form?

I will admit a bit of confusion on the Decaying Ash, by flammable I assume you mean its hot enough to burn and not flammable as in combustible (by this I mean if someone were to hit with a Fire style attack would it explode into flames?) It would also appear to be similar to Mei's boil release and if that's the case to what extent? Is it capable of eating through chakra enhanced metal or chakra barriers?


Name: Ganju
Summoning rank: B
Personality: Lazy, Laid back, absent minded
Bio: Ganju is another highly skilled and respected shinobi from his clan. Ganju is the husband of Mema and the personal guard of the clans prince; Hiiragi. Ganju is Makoto's platoons kenjutsu specialist. Is also apart of Makoto's elite platoon.

Jutsu List:
Fox Art: Raging Dragon: With sword in hand; Ganju knocks target into the sky; only to perform six aerial strikes in quick draw succcesion.

Fox Art: Dragon's Maul: With sword in hand; Ganju laces his sword with chakra. Slashing the Air sending sharp flying chakra waves towards a target(s). Capable of cutting through most materials. Takes me chakra and strength to slice through metals.

Fox Art: Twilight Draw: Only capable of using during the night. With sword in hand; Ganju harnesses the power of the moonlight and slahes through an enemy with great speed. Typically unseeable. Takes kage level sensory or skill to see his speed.

Extra: loves to nap and complain. Is always being scolded by Mema. Is known to be Makoto's personal summon. Wherever Mema or Hiiragi goes he goes

Quote:
Twilight Draw seems as if it would be considered an S-rank attack seeing as how it would take someone of Kage level sensory to detect such an attack, but its justifiable given that it requires it being done at night. However, that still garners a rank up for the summon, or a drawback on the summoned creature.


Name: Xiba
Summoning rank: B
Personality: short tempered, rude, over protective
Bio: Xiba is his clans most skilled taijutsu specialist. Only second best to the clans king. Xiba is Hiiragi's sworn brother. Is older by 5 years of the prince. Xiba often competes with Hiiragi for Makoto's attention and love. Is apart of Makoto's elite platoon.

Jutsu List:
Fox Art: Taijutsu: Raging Hell; Xiba uses his chakra to harness the power of fire. Typically Fire from a casted jutsu or any random fire. To dress his limbs to add fire damage to his punches and kicks.

Fox Art: Taijutsu: Rising Earth; Xiba slams his first into the ground. Bursting his chakra to shatter and shake the earth. Causing pillars of earth to rise. If connected from Raging Hell skill; pillars of fire rise from the cracking ground instead.

Chakra Enhanced Strength

Extra: Calls Makoto; "Master Fumihiko" or just "Mako". Has a deep love and respect for Makoto. Often declares his love for Makoto. Offers to help carrying on the Fumihiko clan name. Is always rejected though.

Quote:
Fox Art: Taijutsu: Raging Hell states that he harnesses fire, typically from a jutsu cast. Can he steal fire away from another person's jutsu or take control over fire someone else has created?


Name: Kane
Summoning rank: B
Personality: Attention seeking, bratty
Bio: Kane is Makoto's elite platoon's medical specialist. One of the strongest medical shinobi from his clan. Is often picked on by the entire platoon. Often argues with Xiba.

Jutsu List:

Mystic palm technique

Chakra transfer

Chakra scalpel

Fox Art: Fox Sedation: Xiba spews a cloud of medical grade narcotics to help hinder an enemy's speed nervous system. It only lasts for five minutes(3 posts)

Extra: Is the second youngest member of Makoto's elite platoon. Younger the Hiiragi. Is always picked on for his bratty behavior. Constantly bickers with Xiba.

Quote:
Is the Fox Sedation instantaneous or must the enemy remain in it for a certain amount of time? Also how large of an area does it cover?


Name:Hiiragi
Summoning rank: B
Personality: flirty, kind, gentle
Bio: Prince of the spirit fox clan; only child of the fox king.. Was amazed by Makoto the day his clan found him and treated the gravely wounded shinobi. Is actually in love with Makoto and fights for his love alongside Xiba. But is always rejected.

Jutsu List:

Fox Art: Mystic Wisp: Hurls an array of shurikan towards an enemy. Covering the ninja tools in a greenish fire. Once activating the second hand seal the fires split into more deadly wisps of fire

Fox Art: Divine Flow: Hiiragi expends mass amounts of chakra to create a rushing wave of water to sweep an enemy(s) away. Often used in conjunction with other jutsu.

Fox Art: Royal terrain: Hiiragi causes the earth to shake and crumble beneath the target threat(s) great for unbalancing. Often used in conjunction with other jutsu.

Fox Art: mystic song: Hiiragi lets out a melodic howl. Causing the wind to thrash around the area violently. The longer Hiiragi holds this jutsu the more vicious the winds become. Typically used to push enemies away or to hold them in one place from the pressure of the wind.

Extra: often competes with xiba to win Makoto's love. Begs Makoto for more baked treats. Loves cupcakes and cookies. Never takes Makoto's rejection seriously. Hiiragi has 4 tails while the fox king has 8 tails. A sign of his royal blood being he has more than one tail.

Quote:
How large of an area does the Mystic song cover and how long can Hiiragi hold it for?



TO BE FINISHED

Quote:
At the moment these are my only grievances. Correlate with me and we should be able to get these summons approved in no time.




Haha yeah these were only rough drafts sweatdrop I got really bad writers block in the middle of it so that's why I put the "To be finished" I was gonna come back and add specifics and do more tweaking! I'll finish sooooon I promise biggrin
PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 8:58 pm


LordJaxTheSadistic

Haha yeah these were only rough drafts sweatdrop I got really bad writers block in the middle of it so that's why I put the "To be finished" I was gonna come back and add specifics and do more tweaking! I'll finish sooooon I promise biggrin


No problem, just letting you know where I stand on the current state of these. Take all the time you need and contact me when you're ready.

Cpt Muffin


LordJaxTheSadistic

PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 10:05 pm


Vaserios
LordJaxTheSadistic

Haha yeah these were only rough drafts sweatdrop I got really bad writers block in the middle of it so that's why I put the "To be finished" I was gonna come back and add specifics and do more tweaking! I'll finish sooooon I promise biggrin


No problem, just letting you know where I stand on the current state of these. Take all the time you need and contact me when you're ready.



Oookayyyyyy; how about now?? c:
PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:24 am


LordJaxTheSadistic


So far so good, the only other thing I would like you to do is add a rank to each of the Fox Arts so people can have an understanding of the strength of the techniques.

Cpt Muffin


LordJaxTheSadistic

PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 11:43 am


Vaserios
LordJaxTheSadistic


So far so good, the only other thing I would like you to do is add a rank to each of the Fox Arts so people can have an understanding of the strength of the techniques.



Done!
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